TaaRey FF Taal se Taal mila

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Posted: 10 years ago
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heya guys i have already started this FF previously but now i have re-written it with many changes as the previous one had many mistakes

Teaser
Taani:- common guys 5,6,7,8

Here u go


Shoulder loose ... right hand slowly up and back in same position along with left leg side ways now change

Bring it on...


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Taani:- ohhh god its the hundred time am telling u rey

Keep u body loose


Rey:- yeah...okay

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Rey:-sir everything is according to my plan. ..things are falling in their place


Person:- I know that you ll succeed



Rey:- Thank you sir...and plzz dont let anybody even from our department get to know about this operation


Person:- yeah sure...but u need any help just inform


Rey:- yes but according to the sources they r few officer's from our department helping them


Person:- yes but I even know that ACP Reyaansh Singhaniya is not going to leave them


Rey:- yes sir...this time am not going to let them escape


Commissioner of police "- all the best my child


Rey:- thank you sir

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Character Sketch
Reyaansh Singhaniya :

28 years ols
UnderCover cop
a very strict officer
Never leave any criminal
For the world He is a very
Famous Architect
Fun Loving guy...!
hot hunk
Only his parents know about him
being A cop

Tanya Raizada :

25 year old
owner of India's
best Dancing Academy
" STARS"
bold
diva
hot
Down to Earth
dance-Addict


Swayam Kapoor :
UnderCover Cop
28 years old
chocolate boy
married to his lady love
owns a Library
calm and loving

Sharon Swayam Kapoor :
A Famous Designer
the hot headed

Mr. and Mrs Swayam Kapoor


new characters will unfold as the story moves
Edited by creativestar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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CHAPTER -1
Hez presnet in his cabin...the luxurious one


this position and this job is his everything...from childhood he always wanted to be an police officer


No criminal can escape from him...!!!!


he was checking d previous case file...


his phone starts buzzing


rey:Good Morning sir


Commisioner of police :good morning Rey

and i have a case for u


rey:yeah sir


CP : actually i sent a file to your office...just go through it and let me know


Rey: ok sir sure


just then a person enters


person:may i come in sir


rey: yesss


rey: hey swayam how r u man??


swayam:am fine rey wat about u?


rey: am good...am yeah glad to meet you


swayam: yeah...n don't worry...this time we r gonna work together in this case


rey:wat case?


swayam: arrey u just spoke to sir na


rey: soo u r here with a case that's it...but not to meet me


swayam:rey...u very well know about our work and we r under cover...n atleast u r parents know that u r a cop...but me...parents toh dur ki baat hain...meri better half ko bhi nahi pata that am a cop


rey: Ooo...yeah can understand


swayam: yeah...according to the source "D" is planning for blasts in mumbai in biggest dance festival which after 6 months


rey:6 months main dance festival and "D" is plannig from now?


swayam:yeah...because its biggest dance festival of mumbai and its for a cause...soo many MPs,NGO organizations...and big shots are going to be present with all d youth and lakhs of people


rey: okay...!!!

so any guesses of his plan



swayam:yes...the people who are interested should enroll by the end of this week

and they will be trained for 5 months and the hand pics will be able to perform in the festival

and already few people of "D" gang have enrolled


rey:okk...so now we should also go as a students there


swayam:yes...we should


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Taani:sab perfect chal raha hai...hopefully bohut saare funds raise ho


TaaniDad:dont worry beta everything will go fine


Taani:yeah dad...


REY POV

Tanya Raizada
25 years old
5 times national championship winner
international dance championship 2nd Runner up
NGO , Grace Orphanage Owner
India's one of the best dance school owner
wow...that impressive
really man...dats great


rey : I don't care how much ever it costs but I need to be trained under Tanya only

person : kaam hojayega Sir... don't worry

rey : not me you need to worry if its not done

well and good now...!
but why this dance man...Rey beta before you enroll just check few videos

his phone start buzzing
Swayam : Rey everything done you will be trained under Tanya and Even me but we can't act as strangers because Sharon Tanya ki friend hai and Sharon know that we both are friends

Rey: Kay...done
and howz Sharon by the Way

Swayam : How do you think She will be..?
shez superb dude

Rey : OK that's good

Swayam : rest for this four days next break after 7 or 8 months may be

Rey : True dude

Swayam : better do one thing come over for dinner and like that we can start a convoy about dance and even Sharon won't have any doubt in future..!

Rey : yaar plzz sirf 4 din ka break hai and agar Sharon ka haath ka khaana khaya toh pakka mereko 10 days ka break lena padega

Swayam : common yaar shez ain't that bad cook...it OK today I'll prepare
come home

Rey : Okay well and fine :)

TaaniStart
Taani : Sharon Pata hai finally my dream is coming true
ek baar funds raise ho jaye many little people can get education

Sharon : I know babez...Don't worry everything will go well
Waise when are you starting

Taani : From this Monday classes Are going to Start

Sharon : That's Great baby
why don't you come over...its been ages we met..?

Taani: Yea sure but only if you won't cook...Hahaaa

Sharon : Dats rude..! well don't worry will order

Taani: dats fine :)

Sharon : Come to my store will leave home together

Taani : Cool Babes waise I need few out fits too...!

Sharon : Okay See ya

PreCap : there is something soo sparkling in her eyes...it ain't any simple attraction...I feel to just be in her Arms

...

He is way different... I never had this shivers with anyone by just a mere handshake

...

I have seen him some where
...

OMG where have I kept This Sketch
this is surely him...it can be only him
...

I would love to go on a date :)


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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
wonderful cs😊
rey n swayam undercop that is interesting
sharon should have knwn abt it
well let it be
i loved the update
keep writing
thanx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#5
Prologue superb...
CS fantastic...
CH 1 is awsome...
Wow... its interesting...
TaaRey meet in next part...
eager to read...
continue soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice prologue. Chap 1 was awsm. Cs too gud. So interesting concept. Taarey meet on nxt part. Damn excited!! Thnx 4 pm. Updt nxt part asap
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7
Diii🤗
Kya update tha..
Really diff concept..
excited to see what will happen next..
Jaldi jaldi update next part..
Can't wait after reading the Precap..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
Nice concept, prologue and CS
I like that Reyam are undercover cops
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Posted: 10 years ago
#9
Hey...interesting chap...update soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
awesome concept, CS and 1st chapter
loved it
cant wait for taarey meet
thanx for pm
update soon

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