samrat-gunjan fanfiction (cs posted)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello all! I was watching mjht today. It brought all my memories back. I was very crazy about it when it aired. Every day I used to wait for the clock to struck 9. How I wanted to watch mjht all the day. Miss those days. Sorry, I got out of topic. As I was saying, I used to have a story idea on sajan when the show was on air in the initial episodes. Today when I was watching the epis. I remembered that story line. Now I want to share it with u all and write a ff on them to keep them alive on the forum. But if u guys don't like it. I won't post. So, here is the basic plot and cs.

Intro

A guy sorry, "a Playboy" for whom girls are just like "use n throw". He doesn't have any goals or ambitions in life! Why would he, when his dad is so rich and there is money in every nook n corner of his house. He doesn't felt the need for it. But he does have a lot of potential to do anything. He is smart and intelligent. He doesn't care about girls' feelings because he doesn't have any feelings and moral values or can't understand him due to his troubled childhood. He doesn't believe in love because he hadn't seen true love! Life for him is just fun. Now, what happens if this guy target a girl. Not a regular girl. A girl, Who can teach him to respect girls and their feelings. A girl, Who can give meaning and goal to his life. A girl who will make him believe in love. Not just that she is the girl who can trap this boy who traps everyone in her love. Does her love really have the ability to change him? And what will happen "the girl leaves him" when he starts to change and understand love. Does the story ends there? How will he react? What will he do? Will he be the changed man or go "back to his usual self"? And "does the boy love the girl" truly or it's something else? And what about the girl? If she loved him why did she left him? Will they ever meet? Even if they meet, will their love story get happy ending? Or the girl just has the role "only to change him" in destiny's play. What had destiny stored for them?

What do you guys, think? How is it? What's ur opinion about the boy and his (love)story?


So, here is the intro. I'll post the cs and prologue if u guys want me to continue. Please tell me whether u want the cs first or the prologue. And please feel free to express ur views. Be honest and tell me should I continue or not. Criticism is most welcomed.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ok, 60+ views and no likes or comments! Is it that bad? I don't know why i'm even back when i didn't got a single like or comment.😕 But i thought to post the cs and here it is.

Character Sketch

Samrat Shergill: 28 yrs old. CEO of Vadera group of industries and also owns 30% shares of company. A very nice guy. Any girl can fall for his charm. But he always stays in his limits. Never misuse his charm on girls. Always respects girls. He is the backbone of the company. Everyone loves him. Infact, the owner of the company treats him as his son. Even though girls fall for his looks and attitude he hasn't given any serious attention to girls. Just behaves professionally with them. He is happy -go-lucky guy for all. No one knows his inner wounds and hurt he has except Mr. Vadera. He is repenting for his past deeds.

Mr.Dayal Vadera: A kind person. Owner of Vadera group of industries. He and samrat's dad were close friends from their college days. Treats samrat as his own son. Only he knows about samrat's wounds everything about his past life. Want him to have happy life.

Mrs. Anupama Vadera: A perfect home-maker. She too loves samrat and treats him as her son. Samrat too respects her as his mother. Want him to get married and have a happy life. Doesn't know much about samrat's past life.

Riya Vadera: 19 yrs old. One and only daughter of Mr&Mrs. Vadera. Very innocent and bubbly girl. Everyone, especially samrat takes special care of her and is also a lil possessive about her. Samrat is like own elder brother and also a good friend to her. Love him a lot.

Gunjan bhushan: 25 yrs. A lovely girl. Had a bad past and due to it she doesn't trust anyone easily now. But still believes in love in her corner of heart. Her family is trying to get her married but she doesn't want to. Hate liers. Doesn't had any friends. Always stays serious. Her mother died when she was a toddler. Her family had always protected from the cruelity of the world. That's why she got very hurt in the past as she wasn't used to see the ugly side of people. Though she always pretends to be happy in front her family for their happiness, all know that how much she is suffering inside. Her bui died 2 yrs back because of heart-attack. Her last wish was to see her happy. That's when she realized because of her bad past she is even hurting her family and wants to stay happy and forget her past for her family's sake. She is now slowly getting out of her past now. She wants to be independent and looking for job.


Will introduce other characters as the story progress. The story will be told in present. It will shift from present to past. The characters are introduced as per present. So, don't get confused between the intro n cs. Everything will be cleared once the story starts. And please feel free to express ur views. Be honest and tell me should I continue or not. I'll start the story only if i get the good response. I'm not asking u guys to praise me. Criticism is most welcomed. While I say good response I meant good amount of readers. With all ur feed back I'll try to improve my writing style. But if u guys felt that this is so bad then please tell me honestly I'll stop posting. It feels so bad when there is no one to read ur post. It hurts. But if there is someone to read please make ur presence felt. Say something even if it is for criticizing me.

Edited by abhi_arshilover - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hiii
Sajan very cute couple

"chashmish" the way smrat used to call her I still remember
Really Awesome intro

Really liked the way you have explained
Superb..

It feels nice to read on old and gold couples
CS interesting..
What had happened with them is suspense

Do continue ha..

Tc
Edited by mishti_forever - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishti_forever

Hiii

Sajan very cute couple

"chashmish" the way smrat used to call her I still remember
Really Awesome intro

Really liked the way you have explained
Superb..

It feels nice to read on old and gold couples
CS interesting..
What had happened with them is suspense

Do continue ha..

Tc

hi, thank u for commenting. I'm so glad that u liked it😊. Sajan are my first favourite couple. I'm happy that someone read and liked my work. But u do understand na, that i can't write for just 1 reader. I'm sorry, if i hurt you but i can continue the story only when there will be more readers.😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi don't be sorry dear. I can understand.
I wish someone will be here and I'll get to read 😊

All the best tc.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishti_forever

Hi don't be sorry dear. I can understand.

I wish someone will be here and I'll get to read 😊

All the best tc.

oh, so sweet of u. Thank u.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey yaa great ff pls do continue

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