MG FF - Tum Mille #2 updt last pt on pg 35 june 16 - Page 9

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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Geet telling lies to veer
Maan is not liking it
Though its a part of truth
Geet want maan to confess first
N maan wants geet to say
He is taking out for dinner
Geet eagerly getting ready
Waiting to hear his confession
Nice part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#82
Fabulous Update

Geet already sees herself as a Khurana and wants to be
Mrs Geet Maan Singh Khurana as she wants another marriage as her first one was just for her safety and she was under age

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Posted: 10 years ago
#83
Nice update. Waiting for next update to hear Maan confession.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#84
part 78 - geet waiting for him to say three magical words and here maan doesn't want to say first as he thinks he already conveyed with his action...lagta hai ye dono ki gadi aage nahi jayegi...waiting for their dinner date...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#85


Wow lovely update..te way my maaneet ki guilty to lie to tejji was lovely..opps both are drowning in they own pov thing abt others..geet was waiting for my maan ki confession and te way her restless and other side my maan want to confess but not to take in hurry as he have whole life for her was lovely..now my maan wants to talk with his geet and geet too getting ready..my maan was fuse with sir, geet calling him dd was lovely.. i love te update
Edited by Desigirls12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#86
wonderful update.. full of maneet..
the final one was too good.. maan said to call him as she likes him.. n geet asud "DD" ..lol😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#87

Part - 79

Geet gest ready and looks at herself in the mirror for one last time...

She is looking dashing indeed in that black suit...

Maan knows what suits her better...haina?

Geet too loved that dress so much, that's why she has saved it for the special occasion...

Maan is waiting for Geet at his farm ...

He has turned the garden into a temporary camping sight, the bast way he knows for the moonlight dinner cum date...

As Geet enters she finds the place scary with very little illumination...

She just follows the light...

Geet: Maaan sir, Maaan sir, aap kahn ho?

Geet finds her way to the garden and she is puzzled what they are doing here?

Ye kaise jagah hai?

Geet: ye driver mujhe kahan lekhe aagaya?

Suddenly the lights go off and Geet is frightened...

Geet looks around for Maan...

Maan appears from the darkness...

Geet sighs seeing him...

Geet: Maan sir

Maan closes her mouth with his fingers...

Maan: sir nahi Geet

Geet blushes...

Maan leads her in ...

Geet wants to thank him again...

Geet: aap bahut achche ho, aaj mein bahut kush hoon, thank you sir, thank you for everything. Aap nahi hothe toh patha nahi mera kya hotha

Maan: chup bilkul chup

Geet feesl shy and is unable to face him eye to eye...

Maan: mujhse nazar mat churao Geet

Maan lifts her chin and makes eyecontact with her...

Maneet eyelock...mahiii...

A cold breeze blows and Geet starts to shiver...

Maan offers her his waist coat...

He takes off his waist coat and makes her wear it bringing her into an almost hug...

Geet's fragile body trembles bit b'coz of the cold this time but b'coz of his closeness...

Maan makes her sit comfortably and lights a fire to keep her warm...

Geet just wanted him to stay close and the warmth of his body was more than enough for her...

Maan keeps admiring her in the light of the fire and couldn't stop himself from gazing her feminine gifts...

He slowly inches closer making her nervous but she manages to control herself pretty well ...

Maan observes her closely...

Maan: toh Geet, aaj tu badhi ho hi gayi

Geet is a little afraid what he meant by that...

They are all alone, with the cold wind teasing their senses, the moon playing the spectator and the stars winking at them ,it can't get more romantic...

Maan: I mean, it's your 18th b'day, haina?

Geet: ji

Geet takes a step backward unconsciously...

Maan realizes that he is crossing the limits and trying to take advantage of her weakness, he doesn't want to mislead her or influence her anyway in making her choices...it's her life and it's her decision...

Geet should not make any decision b'coz Maan wants it that way or Maan likes it...

He doesn't want to put her under any pressure, even though he is not here to woo her he is cautious that he stays away as much as possible, it's also equally hard for him to stay aloof and pretend as if he is not affected by her...

He knows that Geet knows him better and she'll get him if he tries to act smart...

Maan moves to make enough room for them to breathe comfortably...this is not the time for emotions...he has to let her mind speak for her and not her heart...

MSK haina? Aaisa hi sochega? That's why he wants Geet also to think with her mind...kyunki dil toh pagal haina ji...

Maan also avoids meeting her eyes...

He doesn't want to cast his magical spell and let her think on her own...

Maan: toh Geet, ab tum apne zindagi ke barein mein soch samjke koi bhi faisla le sakthi ho

Geet: toh?

Maan: toh tum ab apne zindagi apni tareeke se jee sakthi

Geet: haan,ab mein kuch bhi kar sakthi

Geet is excited...

Geet self talk...jaldhi sir, poocho kya poochna...Geet, kya tum apni zindagi bar mera saath de sakthi ho? kya tum mujhe apni zindagi bana sakthi ho? yahi haina sir? Mein toh kab ka aapki ban chuki hoon, ab toh meri zindagi meri nahi, aapki hai, aur mujhe aapki saath ki sakt zaroorat hai sir, kal bhi, aaj bhi aur aane wale sare umar ki, agle saath janam ki

Geet would pour her heart out even if Maan doesn't ask her...she is very anxious...

Maan: jaise tum chahathi thi waise ab tum azad ho gayi ho, ab tummare zindagi ka haq ab sirf tummari hai, tum jaise jeena chahathi ho waise jee sakthi, ab tummari life mein interfere karne ka haq kissi ko bhi nahi hai, na hi tummare na layak baap ki aur na hi iss MSK ki, haina?

Geet goes speechless hearing that...aapko toh pura haq hai...

Geet just nods her head as if to acknowledge what Maan said...

Maan: bolo Geet, tum kya chahathi ho?

Geet: mein?

Geet self talk...hare babaji, ye Maan sir bhi kya kya batein kar rahe hai? seedhe seedhe kyun nahi bol sakthe ki ab hum donno ko ek hone se koi nahi rokh saktha...

Maan: haan, ye tummari life hai, ab tumme hi decide karna hoga ki aage tum kya karna chahathi ho, kyunki abhi tum bachi nahi, ab tumme kissi ka bhi madat ki zaroorat nahi

Geet: achcha hua ki ab aap bhi manthe ki mein bachi nahi badi ho gayi hoon

Maan: toh bathao Geet, tumne kya socha hai apni future ke barein mein

Actually Geet is in no mood to think about anything but Maan Maan Maan, haina?

Geet: meri future toh aapke haath mein hai

Maan thinks that she is still confused that she is indebted to Maan for all the help she received...

Maan: aaisa kuch nahi hai, meinne jo bhi kiya Dadi ke liye kiya, tumme usski chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi, I didn't do this with any expectations, I mean, meinne koi ehsaan nahi kiya, samjhi tum?

Geet is all the more confused...Maan is talking as if he has nothing to do with her now and she is on her own now...so he did all this for Dadi, so just like the last time it's all dadi's wish, her b'day celebrations and all...

Geet knew that Dadi loves her so much and Geet was wrong to expect anything from the MSK...

She feels let down and unwanted...

Maan finds Geet thinking deep...

Maan: kya hua Geet? kya soch rahi ho?

He thinks that she is feeling nervous to confess her love...after all she is a girl, from Hoshiarpur...

But still Maan can't confess first for that would be like compelling her to accept him b'coz he loves her and he needs her...

He wants her to feel the same, he wants to know that she also needs him as badly as he needs her...

The only thing he wants to hear from her is "I need you, and my life is with you, I'm here to stay with you forever, I'm here for you, I won't leave you, ab meri zindagi yahi hai, aap chaho toh bhi mein aapko akhele chodke nahi jaane wali, Geet Maan ki hai, sirf Maan ki, Maan ki Geet"

Maan: bolo Geet

Geet keeps staring him...

Maan tries to help her...

Maan: lagtha hai ki tumme meri baat samajh mein nahi aayi, ab baat ye hai ki ab tum chaho toh kissi ko bhi apna saathi chun sakthi, jho bhi hua ussko bhool jao

Maan wants her to know that she is not bound by any thing, her marriage was an accident, though Maan later realized that they are destined to be together he believes that their love doesn't need a licence such as marriage, marriage is for those who don't believe in their love for each other and so need to secure their relationship with the vows, btu Maneet don't need any such vows, they know their love is more than enough to sustain their relationship beyond their entire life ime...

Geet is heart broken...bhool jaon? Sabko bhol jaoon? Aapko bhi?

Maan: ab samjho ki ye tummari life ki nayi shuruwaad hai, tum chaho toh tum kissi ko bhi pyaar kar sakthi, ab tum kissi ko pyaar karthi toh ussiko tum shadhi bhi kar sakthi ho, tum chaho toh mein tummare pariwaar walon se baat kar saktha hoon Geet'

Maan ka matlab hai ki Maan Geet ke maabaap se Geet ka haath mangne ke liye tayaar hai, ussko bas Geet ki haan ka intrezaar hai...

Geet self talk... Aap kehthe ho ki meri shadhi ki umar ho gayi aur mein ab shadhi karke yahan se chale jaoon, aap se dhoor, Dadi se dhoor, aur sabs edhoor, haina?

toh aap ka matlab hai ki mein ab badhi ho gayi, issiliye mein sabse parayi ho gayi, aapse bhi, haina?

Maan wants her to know that she need not be afraid of anyone, she doesn't need any body's permission to love, ab toh hum khulke pyaar kar sakthe hai Geet...no one can stop you from loving MSK...not even Maan...

Maan finds Geet very confused and she can't come running to him shouting "ILU" all of a sudden, it took so much time even for Maan to make a move, she also needs some time...

Maan: Geet, ab tumme pareshaan hone ki koi zaroorat nahi, abhi tumme kuch nahi kehna hai hai, take your own time, jaise meinne pehle hi kaha tummare paas pure raat hai, tum raat bar aaram se soch ke kal subha bathathena, teek hai

Geet accepts reluctantly...

She returns home with a heavy heart still puzzled what should she do now?

She feels as if she is all alone, deserted, and she can't imagine what she'll do without Maan...

She had never thought of a life without Maan...all her dreams are shattered...but she has no other choice,if that's what Maan wants, she is happy to go on her way...


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Edited by ghsp2fan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#88
Nice update. Maan will not change. Geet is so much confused with Maan words. Maan wants Geet to confess. Please don't separate them n let them confess their love.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow lovely emotional update..te way geet ki excitement and my maan ki nervous was lovely..opps my maaneet want to talk abt they feelings and confession but all went upside down, geet mistook my maan ki words and ,my maan too thought she is confused and asking her to take time..i love te update yar
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice update. again misunderstanding between geet and maan.

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