//My Saviour// Zayn Malik #FF - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi Zaynster! 🤗
u back wid another update? so soon? 😲
well..uhm check my PM abt it..
and now coming to the update..it was quite good.. u showed that Ella is both beauty wid brains..
hehe the whole class is shocked of her intelligence.. haye Zayn sitting next to her! i so wish i was Ella! 😳😆
and yeah the chapter dint have much stuffs but hope to see them in the next chapter..
and one more thing i wanna say..plz take it as an advice.. just be a little sure when u post the chapter..cuz i sometimes dont understand some lines.. check on ur words' tenses.. i'm sorry if u felt bad..but as a reader i comment both on positivity and negativity.. but ur usage of words are truly standard.. 👍🏼 u just gotta put them all right.. 😊
Gud one as a beginner.. hope to read something extremely gud in the future.. 😊

-Zaynie Lover!
Edited by ..Sugary_Pie.. - 10 years ago

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