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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aparnalokam



U wil try 😲 cheater 😕
U tld u wil gve in two days 😭


I know 😆 I got busy with the real world work 😉 Ok, i will give today as soon as i finish up!! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: skinnypal



I know😆I got busy with the real world work😉Ok, i will give today as soon as i finish up!!😳



Real world wrk 😲
Acha k dne 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Part 24

There she was standing at a distance, his angel in white. The moonlight fell on her, glimmering the saree she wore. She had curled up her hair and kept it on one side of her shoulder. Wearing long earrings which touched her collar bone, and the perfect make up which was a little smudged because of her tears she approached him hurriedly. She embraces him as tightly as possible; Siddharth engulfs in her aroma and closes his eyes. He wraps his hands around her and pulls her closer to him as he sighs in relief.

"I'm so sorry, Siddharth!! I don't know what came over me; I got angry without any reason! I'm sorry for fighting with you in the morning, I am sorry for running away and not coming on time!! I am so sorry, Please forgive me!!" she said.

He smiles and then immediately loosens the hug which takes her by surprise. He fakes an angry look to her which makes her pout and say,

"Baby, Please forgive me?" while holding her ears.

He sees the waiter, and says -totally ignoring her,

"Bhaiyya, aap sab khana waana pack kardo!!"(Please pack up everything)

Roshni comes near him and grabs his collar,

"Siddhaarth!! Please don't do this!! I am sorry na, baby!! I know mereko aise gussa nahi hona chaiye tha!! Please?"(I know I shouldn't have been angry)

He slowly removes her hand and looks at her angrily,

"Please stop it, Roshni.. I can't believe that you spoiled this day for me.. for us... because of your illogical thinking!! After all that we have been through how could you even think that I like her?"

"I know that, Siddharth.. but-"

"No, Now I am in no mood to listen!!" he steps backward and turns.

Roshni feels devastated; tears welled up in her eyes she hugs him from back. Siddharth was now beaming with happiness with all the attention that Roshni was giving him, but he wanted to tease her more.

"Roshni please!! Just go from here.." he smirked as she couldn't see him.

"No, I won't!! You can't make me leave!" she said innocently and hugs him tighter than before.

Siddharth was enjoying the closeness and he escaped a laugh; which he tried to cover up with a cough but it was too late because Roshni understood his plan. She wanted to hit him, but she thought of taking revenge. She signals the waiter to leave.

"Siddharth you will not even look at me?" she said in an innocent tone.

"No! Please go!" he replied.

"Main itna tayyar hokar aayi.. n tum aise.. fine.. I will leave!"(I dressed up for you and you won't even..) she said in a hurt voice and slowly unties the dori of her blouse with a playful smile on her face.

"Dekhte hai bachu tum kaise mere paas nahi aate" - she thought and turned to leave.(Let's see whether you will come to me or not!)

Siddharth eyes widen up when he feels her loosening the hug and leaving.

"I thought yeh mujhe manaegi, par yeh toh aiwai nikal pari!! Shit, what should I do now?"- he thought and turned to look at her.(I thought she will console me but she is going away)

He scratches his head as he sees her retreating figure, but then notices that her dori had opened. He looks all around and sees that they were alone now, he runs towards her shouting,

"Roshnii..wait!!"

Roshni grins broadly and starts walking a little faster than before. Siddharth catches up to her and turns her by her hand.

"Now what?" she snapped.

"Woh..actually.. Your saree.." he fumbled.

"You have already spoiled my excitement regarding the saree. Leave it now." she retorted.

"Arre sunno toh-" he started but she turns to leave, his foot was on top of her saree which makes her fall down taking Siddharth with her.

"What have you done!! Meri Saree!" she shrieked as she had worn it with great difficulty.

Siddharth did not listen to her; his attention was elsewhere - admiring her. A mesmerized smile played on his lips as he raised his hands to tuck her hair behind her ears. Roshni too stopped shouting and looked at him intently.

"You look so pretty... so hot!! I feel like.. " he said.

"Siddharth, we are not at home-" she replied shyly looking around.

"Really? But no one is here.." he whispered in her ears.

"Siddharth!!! Get up, meri saree kharab ho jaegi!!" she replied.

"You will look gorgeous no matter what.. but first..." he rolls her over so that she could be on top of her.

She looks at him questiongly, as he embraces her and slowly takes the dori in his hands. She smirks as she had won. Siddharth slowly ties the dori, as he kept staring at her. Roshni closes her eyes as he traced her hands along the back to her waist. He comes closer to her ears and says,

"You did this purposely na?"

"What?" she looked at him.

"Yeh dori... you did it na?" he teased as he pulled her closer. Her reddened cheeks gave away her answer and he chuckles.

"Ahh.. Roshni..I'm sorry too! I love you.." he said genuinely making her blush more. She indicates him to come closer and he does. She screams in his ears,

"Siddharth, I AM HUNGRYY!! I haven't eaten anything since morning!"

"Baapre!! Kar dia na romance ka kachra! You are hungry?" he asks her. She nods a yes.

"Me too.. but for.." he winks at her. She smacks his chest and tries to get off his hold. Slowly while tripping here n there they both get up wiping off the sand from their body.

"Come let's go" he takes her hands and walks towards the dock which was at a distance.

As soon as she takes a first step on the dock, it lits up. The entire dock was decorated with white lilies and blue lights. At the end of the dock was a small cruise which too was lavishly decorated. As they started walking on the deck together, the band of musicians at the end of the dock had started playing a rhythmic tune. Roshni was enthralled looking at the extent Siddharth had gone to make their date memorable. She holds his hands tightly in excitement. Siddharth was glad that she liked his arrangement. Finally they enter the cruise; Siddharth turns to the waiter and says,

"You can leave all this.. I can take care from here on."

Roshni looks at him questiongly.

"But Sir, the plan was-" started the waiter.

"The plan has changed. You can leave now." he said politely.

The waiter leaves along with the other staff members who were onboard.

"What are you doing Siddharth?" she asks him scared about being alone in the cruise.

Siddharth walks towards the engine and starts it.

"Do you even know how this works?" she murmurs.

"Yes! I had one in London too, now stop being so scared and come here."

She goes near him; he closes her eyes with his hands and tells her to enjoy the beauty of their ambiance. Siddharth rides a bit further onto the sea and then stops the cruise. Meanwhile Roshni just takes in the natural aura and beauty of the sea; she had never travelled so further in it.

"Aren't you hungry anymore?" he teased and takes her to the kitchen.

"Will we have food here?" she asks as she had seen a table up at the deck.

"I thought I could cook and we could eat together here itself? Will it be less romantic?" he asks with a pout.

"No.. No.. Siddharth. It will be perfect." she replied caressing his face.

They make noodles together while Siddharth tries to get naughty with her. After having dinner they come up at the deck and sit down looking at the sky.

"It is so serene out here, so peaceful. I love it. Can we come here, again?" she asked him.

"Yes, offcourse baby. We can come here as much as you like!" he said and opens a bottle of champagne. He pours it down in two glasses and hands her one.

"Alcohol? Again? You know Siddharth I don't like - " she gets interrupted as he kissed her on her lips. He breaks the small kiss and she looks at him in surprise,

"Siddha-" again Siddharth kisses her to make her quiet. She breaks off the kiss and before she could say anything he replied,

"We can continue this all night long baby, I don't mind it at all!" he winked at her. Roshni rolls her eyes and smacks him.

"It's champagne. I wanted to make a toast, thodi si peene se kuch nahi hoga!" he makes her get up.

"To our marriage, which I think is happening what 3 times?" he asked her.

"Yes!!" she laughed.

"To our Forever and Always" she winked at him.

They drink down at one toss. Siddharth takes the glasses and keeps them on the table. He switches on the music system, and takes her hand.

"May I have a dance with you?" he asked. Roshni grins and pulls him closer to her.

[ Here the song is from the movie Ek Villain; Humdard - Arijit Singh ]

Pal, do pal, ki hi kyun hai zindagi

Iss, pyar, ko hai sadiyaan kaafi nahi

Toh khuda se maang lun

Mohalat main ik nayi

Rehna hai bas yahaan

Ab door tujhse jaana nahi

He places her hands on his shoulder and takes her by her waist. She wraps her hands around his neck and come close to him. They sway as the music takes its tempo. He breathes in her scent and caresses her hair with his cheeks as she closes her eyes.

Jo tu mera humdard hai

Jo tu mera humdard hai

Suhaana har dard hai

Jo tu mera humdard hai

He steps backwards and twirls her around. She places her hand at the back and twirls while looking at him intensely. He pulls her back to him and their bodies collide with each other. He rubs his nose on her cheeks which makes her laugh and she pushes him away to get off his hold.

Teri muskurahatein hain taaqat meri

Mujhko inhi se ummeed mili

Chaahe kare koi sitam ye jahaan

Inme hi hai sadaa hifaazat meri

Zindagani badi khoobsurat hui

Jannat ab aur kya hogi kahin

He catches hold of the loose end of her saree and pulls her closer to him with it. She finally leans on to his chest and the closeness increases her heart beats. She turns around and hugs him tightly. He enwraps her in his hold and kisses her hair. She traces her hand up towards his neck.

Jo tu mera Humdard hai

Jo tu mera Humdard hai

Suhaana har dard hai

Jo tu mera Humdard hai

He trails his kisses down the length of her hair to her ears. She closes her eyes to savor the moment and digs her nail on his shirt pulling him closer to her. He removes her hair from the back and keeps it at one side of her shoulder at front and bends down to kiss her bare neck. She suddenly gets conscious and loosens her grip on him to move back.

Teri dhadkano se hai zindagi meri

Khwahishein teri ab duaaein meri

Kitna anokha bandhan hai ye

Teri meri jaan jo ek hui

Lotunga yahaan tere paas main haan

Waada hai mera mar bhi jaaun kahin

He grins and cups her face from both her cheeks and lingers his fingers on her lips to feel her soft skin. She hits his hands which make him laugh and he twirls her again to dip her. He leans towards her and whispers in her ears,

"I love you SO much."

He pulls her back up into his arms and she whispered in his ears,

"I love you, Siddharth."

Jo tu mera humdard hai

Jo tu mera humdard hai

Suhaana har dard hai

Jo tu mera humdard hai

They move like one along the rhythm of the song, she raises her hands and fondles his cheeks. He keeps his hands on top of hers so that she could not take it back while pulling her closer by her waist. He kisses her palm and trails the kisses up her arms. She grabs his shoulder by her other hand to lean on him as she felt dizzy with each of his kisses. He turns her around and kisses her neck as she gasped for breath. She could feel his warm breath on her ears and could sense his heart beat rising. He turns her face towards him with his hands and leans to kiss her lips when his phone buzzed.

Instantly, they break apart and Siddharth looks up at the sky,

"WHHHYYY!! If this is Sasumom calling I will not leave her now!!" he yells loudly in frustration.

Roshni breaks down in hysterics seeing him like that. He takes out his phone and sees the caller ID - "Sasumom"


So, here was the DATE-DANCE update that most of you wanted.. donno whether it was up to the mark 😛 More than dance i made them romance 😆 Anyway, looking forward to reading your comments which encourages me A LOT. 😃

Part 25 -->

Edited by skinnypal - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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YES I M FIRST!!😉
my favourite song n fav couple u made the dance so nice..thanks it was my wish too..
then the fake anger by siddharth n thereafter Roshni's trick super.
Terrific update😃
Edited by Starsfireflies - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic update...im in love with this entire tale that I read it regularly over and over again...im actually stalking this story...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Starsfireflies

res

unres
YES I M FIRST!!😉
my favourite song n fav couple u made the dance so nice..thanks it was my wish too..
then the fake anger by siddharth n thereafter Roshni's trick super.
Terrific update😃


Ohh is it your fav song? 😲 Waah! I like the song too, had to put this one, my title is based on this song how could i not? 😉 Thank you so much!! 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
i will read your story from the start as i need to catch up with it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: stephie34

Fantastic update...im in love with this entire tale that I read it regularly over and over again...im actually stalking this story...😆


Aww you read it again n again? 😳
Wow. Thank you So much, i will take it as a compliment only 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: .chandni.

i will read your story from the start as i need to catch up with it


Lol. Take your time!! Too many parts.. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
first of all😡😡 this sasu mom having no work huh??? always disturbing SidNi romance😡
It went with a perfect flow but she spoilt everything😭😭😡

now coming to update... It's a super-duper-romantic-awestruck-dreamy update of SidNi☺️😳 Wish they could go alone somewhere like this so that they have no tension and always happy😃
BTW, how Sid's mobile got signal in between the sea😆😆 Also, I wanna give one suggestion to SidNi😕 Frm next time, whenever they met na, ask them to switch off their mobile😕😕

It's very perfect update Pallavi👏👏 I luved it when Sid teasing her showing fake angry and Roshni is also not less😆

thanks for PM.. take care🤗
Edited by madhuharini - 10 years ago

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