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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome part
Maaneet married and Geet expecting
waiting for their love story now
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
awesome update zeba👏
but i m angry😡 ek toh inta chotu sa update diya hai upar se no pm no tag

so maaneet are happily married n waiting for new member of their life
but yeh suspense kya hai how come geet don't know when maan saw her first

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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 2

~Flashback~

Today Was the divine day and so people gathered in temple to celebrate it with Krishna-Radha.

Many Devotees Were there Singing N cherishing the Pureness Of it. Maan N his Family Too Came There but maan Was not really keen To hear it. He Was Just About To Move From That Place.

But He Was Stood Mesmerized When He heard a Sweet Melodious Voice. But he Couldn't Find Who the Young Lady was.

There Was Young Girl Sitting With many other people N singing Bhajan as she was Solely Fan of te god u say. She started To sing Her Fav bhajan Which She always Sings During Dis Divine day.

You may say people Specialliy Come To hear dis song

Geet starts Singing With her supporters

Radhe krishna ki jyoti alaukik tino

lok mein chhaaye rahi hai

bhakti vivash ek prem pujaarin

phir bhi deep jalaaye rahi hai

She started To sing these Lines With So much divinity as pureness That everyone felt So connected Towards the God.

krishna ko gokul se radhe kokrishna ko gokul se radhe kobarasaane se bulaaye rahi hai

Geet Bhagwaan Ki moorthi ke paas jaati hai aur diya jalati hai.

When She turns Maan Have a Look Of her face Which He was Trying To figure it out through the voice.

dono karo swikaar kripaa karjogan aarati gaaye rahi hai - 2bhor bhaye ti saanj dhale taksevaa kaun itane mahaamaro

when Maan Saw Geet's Face His heart skipped a beat. He actually didn't knew what had happened. He Just took His mob And Flashed A pic of hers Without anyone noticing.

Geet had made an impact on maan with her Dance n voice. God Has made Her with Care and time. This is what Maan thought at first seeing her.

Geet Now started To dance On her Own Tunes To show the Love n Pureness she has for Krishna-Radha.

snaan karaaye wo vastra odhaaye vo

bhog lagaaye wo laagat pyaaro

kabase niharat aapaki aurkabase niharat aapaki aur

She danced So Purely That everyone Was amazed. First she had such a melodious voice n now she is gracefully Dancing.

Who Knew that for Wom geet Is Dancing Are Preparing Her fate With a Person wHo is watching her without blinking the Eyes.

Ki aap hamaari aur nihaaronraadhe krishnaa hamaare dhaam kojaani vrindaawan dhaam padhaaro - 2

She ended the song with joinin her hands to near her God. She took their

Blessings. Geet Went over Back to her Place.

But on the other Side Maan Was just mesmerized with the Reality.

He for the First Time came To temple And Was Blessed On the very first time With Just An angel Infront of him Dancing n singing gracefully n melodiously.

He thanked his family To bring him here or else he would have Miss The chance to see this. To see an special person. Meanwhile Some one Called Geet n She left.

Maan before leaving with his family Wanted To see her Once But Couldn't see her.

He took her memories with him n thought to confront her once. But he couldn't forget how lovingly she laughes with all. How she carried her saree n danced. And specially her voice which made him fan of her.


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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Lovely update
Geet sing bhajan & maan mesmerize her
maan captivate with geet voice & dance
waiting for next
thanx dear for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
pehle nazar mein hi bold maan...

lovely update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
hi thanks 4 da pm n beautiful update! well written. Love at first sight 4 Maan! he fell 4 her voice n dance! Geet was singing bhajann at the mandir! Maan was bowled over! Maan takes her pic! Maan wanted 2 see her b4 her left bt she couldn't! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
lovely start maaneet r married n geet is 7 months pregnant thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
Part 2 amazing part maan fall for her in first sight she was singing bajan n dancing maan couldnt take his eyes off
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Posted: 10 years ago
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1st part was nice n cute . maaneet r married n expecting a baby soon woow !! N now maan telling their love story to baby awww !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Part 1
wow maaneet married!!
And geet is preggy
aww...maan want to narrate his 1st meeting with geet to their baby and geet

part 2
Wow maan...love at 1st sight
geet is singing and dancing gracefully!!
Geet ki har adha pe maan fida
interesting
Loved both the updates!!
Sorry for the late comments

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