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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Are yar kithni time ho Gaya ab tho update kar dey plzzz😭

Ps Ek ek update ki kimath tum kya jano😆


Jii janti hu.. Zyada time ho gya h...

Sorry for keeping you waiting...

Ek update ki keemat m bhi janti hu... 😆 😆

Kl pakka... Promise...
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Posted: 10 years ago
It is such an awesome story...
I rad all the parts in one go...
Really brilliant..👏👏
Please pm me the next part..😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Kit is said that intiizar ka fal meetha hotha hai par ithna bhi kya intiizar 😭khi hum sab ko diabetics na ho jaye waiting for ur update😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: VENBA

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">It is such an awesome story...</font>

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">I rad all the parts in one go...</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Really brilliant..👏👏</font>
<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Please pm me the next part..😊😊</font>


Thanks VENBA

Sure will pm you dear
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

Kit is said that intiizar ka fal meetha hotha hai par ithna bhi kya intiizar😭khi hum sab ko diabetics na ho jaye waiting for ur update😉😆


Heheheh... 😆

Nhi hogi diabetics 😉

Wait fir tonight please...

As promised I will update today only..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Pravalli

Waiting...waiting...waiting...waiting...waiting...waiting...waiting...waiting...waiting..waiting...

Please update yarr



Sorrry Pravalli for keep you waiting

I am writing the 6th part.. As I do make some changes in Ambreen's update...

Will update by tonight...
Edited by TamannaSethi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry Friends!!

For keeping you all waiting

I promise I will update both the stories..

She is a Business Woman and TB by tonight...

Sorry Friends..

Hope you all will understand..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey Friends!!!

Hope you all remember.. This is a story written by my friend Ambreen... I am posting this story on behalf of her... As she doesn't uses IF... Do read it Friends...

Sorry the delayed update... Sorry for keep you all waiting...

Part 6 will also in the continuation.. It will be having two parts..

Here it goes...

Part 6 (A) - - - - -

The next day was the famous sports day of sharavn and ruhi...ishita got up and dressed sharavan...she had to go to work...but he wanted her to come... She didn't tell him that she couldn't make it...so she tried to butter him up...she made him his favourite breakfast...she even made chocolate milk...she then gave her phone to him to play... Mihika and Vandita both got up by that time... both of them understood that she was trying on sharavan to forgive her for not coming...that poor boy had no idea...

Vandu- yeh kya ho raha hai?

Sharvu- kya ho raha hai matlab?...ishita chitti mujhe healthy breakfast khila rahi hai ...bcuz she wants to see me win!...( ishu didn't say anything)

Vandu- oh haan...ishita jaa rahi hai na tumhaare saath!...

Vandita was smirking!...she knew that she can't come...even mihika was enjoying poor ishu's condition...the little boy was not aware that his inspiration was not coming even after all the practice...Ishita thought of saying the truth but she couldn't... She left the dining table...mihika came to mock her...

Mihika- aaka!...abh kya karoge?...aapka pyaara shravu ground mein aapka raah dekhta rahega lekin aap nahi aaoge!..,.toh bechara ko kaisa lagega?

Ishu- zyaada sata mat!...bechara shravu... M bol bhi nahi paa rahi hoon ki mein nahi aa sakti!...shit!...kya karoon mihika!

Mihika- aap thode der ke liye aa jao!...

Ishu- aaj bahut kaam hai!...

Just then shravu came near them...

Shravu - chitti mein school jaa raha hoon!...ruhi ke saath!...bye...mein aapko school mein milunga...

Ishu- come...mein tumhe neeche tak chod dungi!...

She goes down...just then Raman comes with ruhi...shravu was going with them...

Ishu- good morning...

Raman - good morning...

Ruhi- good morning aunty!

Ishu- aaj aapka sports day haina...ruhi aap ache se karna !...all the best...

Rman- ruhi beta thank u bolo ishita ko!

Ruhi- thank u ishita aunty !

Ishita bends down to kiss shravan and then also kisses ruhi,... Raman smiles seeing her sweet gesture ...Ishita then leaves for the car with guilt in her,...shravan goes to school thinking that her ishita chitti is gonna come,...Raman takes the kids to school ...he drops both and gets down of the car...

Raman- ruhi, sharavn acha perform karna !

Ruhi- aap aaoge na?

Raman- nahi...
Ruhi- please!...shravan ki ishita chitti aa rahi hai!!

Raman - kya ishita aa rahi hai?

Shravan - haan uncle!

Raman- acha...ok bye...all the best!!!

Raman was surprised to hear how she will come ...he knew that she is gonna be busy as they had a new peoject...he didn't know how she will manage!!...he goes to his office...

Mihir comes in with some files...

Mihir- bhai...woh NRC wala project 50%final ho gaya kya?...mera matlab hai agreement ban gaya ?

Raman- nahi... Mr. chudda ne kaha ki papers tayyar kar dengein lekin abhi tak mujhe mila nahi!

Mihir- ho sakta hai woh busy hai,...baad mein puch lena!

Raman- hmmm...mmm...( her receptionist walks in)

Recep- sir...aapse milne Mr. chudda ke office se koi aaya hai!

Raman - send them in!...

Mihir- yehi hoga!...

Ishita walks in...the office...

Raman- aao baitho!

Ishu- thank u...( sits down)... Mr. Raman woh ... Mr. chudda thode se busy hai toh woh agreement mein lekar aayi hoon!...

Raman- yeah no problem...
Ishu- here are the documents ...check kar lijiye and then sign...( he checks them)

Raman- yeh kisne file kiya hai?

Ishu- meine!...kyon koi prob hai?

Raman- nahi...koi prob nahi hai is liye puch raha hoon!

He signs the papers...she gets up to leave ...

Raman- ishita...

Ishu- hmm...

Raman- tum woh shravan ke sports day pe jaa rahi ho?

Ishu- nahi...

Raman- lekin woh keh raha tha ki tum aaogi!

Ishu- haan...woh meine use bataya nahi ki mein nahi aa sakti!

Raman- oh acha...bye...

Ishu- bye...

Ishita leaves for her office...she gets super busy with files etc...she is totally fixed in her computer...just then vandu akka calls...

Vandu- hello ishu...tu nahi aa sakti kya?...shravu ka race shuru hone waala hai!

Ishu- nahi akka!...

Vandu - kuch karna...

Ishu- i dont know i will try...

She gets up to ask Mr. chuda for some time...she goes into his office even he is really busy...he doesn't even look at her...

Ishu- sir...can i take off for some time?

Mr. chudda- i am sorry Ms. ishita!...aaj bahut kaam hai...lekin aap off kyon lena chahti hai?

Ishu- woh mera niece ka competition hai..,,and he wants meto be there...but its ok sir...

She turns to leave Mr. chudda calls her so again she turns...

Mr. Chudda- Ms. Ishita... lunch ke break ke baad aap 30 min off le sakti hai!...mein isliye bol raha hoon ki aapne kabhi aise nahi maanga!... And I am sure he is special to u

Ishu- thank u so much sir...

She leaves from there...on the other side sharvu gets cranky...he feels horrible...he doesn't want to play,...mihika and vandita try to cheer him but he needs her...ruhi and shravan change into their sports uniform...ishita reaches there...she sees Raman had come...he was with both the kids...he was giving tips to shravan on football... Ishita was glad... At least some one was there with shravu who he liked!... She came near them...

Ishu- hi ...i am here...

Shravu- aap itna late kyon aayi?

Ishu- shoo shoorrry!...She kissed him tightly...

Shravu- choda sab dekh rahe hai!

Ishu- acha!...lo aur karti hoon...

She grabbed his cheeks and kissed him a lot just to annoy him... Raman laughed ...so did ruhi...the whole bhalla's had come to support ruhi... Mrs. Bhalla saw Raman smiling at Ishu...it wasn't like it seemed but she wanted it to be...

The race had begun...it was separate for boys and girls...first it was sharavu's... Shravan ran really fast and won the race...then it was girls where Ruhi had come second...

Do read the second part downwards

Sorry for the errors.. . I tried to proof read Ambreen's update... Still there might be errors...

Hope you all will like it!! Need your feedback friends... Do like and post your valuable comments!!

Buddy me for the pm...
Edited by TamannaSethi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Here comes the continued part...

Part 6 (B) -------

Then moving on where it was football...shravan got ready and went to play...ishita was cheering for him so much...shravan was very good he took the ball near the goal but a big boy of the other team pushed him...shravan fell...he got back ache...his knees were bleeding ...ishita was freaking out...she felt so bad...it was clear that the boy pushed him...she went near the school sports teacher and complained...but he ignored ishita...she got furious

Teacher- bache ko kuch hua toh nahi na?...toh aap itna gussa kyon kar rahi ho?

Ishu- arey!...gussa kyon matlab?...uske pair se khoon nikal raha hai!

Teacher- woh khel toh raha haina?

Ishu- haan woh brave is liye...it was clear ki uss bade bache ne dhakka maara shravu ko!

Teacher- agar aapka "shravu" itna nazuk hai toh ghar pe bithaye na!

Ishu- aap aise kaise bol sakte ho?...u r his teacher aapko zarra se bhi sharam nahi hai??...

Teacher- madam woh ek ladka hai!...iss umar mein bache girte padte hai!

Ishu- agar sharvu khud girta toh mein kuch nahi kehti!

Raman was seeing this argument...the teacher was being a jack ass...he gets angry ...how can he talk to a women like that! He goes to talk...

Raman- excuse me!...aap aise baat kaise kar sakte hai?

Teacher- aap kaun ?...iss madam ke boy friend ?...aap ko inhe impress karna hai toh kuch aur tareeke use kijiye!...iss mein mujhe laane ki kya zaroorat hai?

He was implying that Raman was taking her side to impress her...he thought Ishita was dating Raman or Raman wanted her...it was something both couldn't tolerate,...

Ishita in a second slapped him...for talking like that...she then left that place...she went to shravan and pulled him out of the game...she asked him not to play...the only reason he played was because his favourite Ishita chitti was watching...she took the first aid kit in her car and wipped the blood off...shravu was feeling pain...it was hurting even ishita...she then wanted to speak to the principal of the school...the matter was urgent so the principal had assembled all... Ishita, shravan, Raman, the sports teacher and the big boy!

Princi- kahiye Ms. Ishita aapko kya kehna hai?

Ishu- sir jab ,...sharavan game khel raha tha toh is ladke ne use dhakka jaan muj ke diya...aur shravan ke paiir par chot lag gayi...aur jab mein shravu ke teacher ke paas yeh baat kehne lagi toh unhone bahut hi galat tareeke se baat ki!...jiske karan meine unpe haath uthata...i am sorry lekin unhone jaise baat ki mujhe bilkul acha nahi laga!...i am a respected business woman... iss tarah koi bhi mere se baat karega toh mein yehi karungi!

Princi- aapko kyon lagta hai ki uss ladke me dhakka maara?

Ishu- it was obvious sir...ask shravan...shravan batao!...that boy pushed u na?
He was silent ...didnt say anything ...she forced him...

Prinici- aap uss bache ko force kyon kar rahi hai?

Ishu- i am not forcing !...he is quite because he is scared!...shravan bolo!!...open ur mouth!

Shravu- haan...woh ladka hamesha mujhe tang karta hai!...aur aaj bhi usne mujhe push kiya!

Ishu- aapne sun liya?

Princi- ok Ms. Ishita ...mein uss bache se baat karunga!...aur jahan tak teacher ki baat hai ...i will sort it out...i am sorry on his behalf!

Ishu- thank u!!...

They all leave only the sports teacher is there...the princi shouts for behaving rude with the parents ...the teacher comes out and sees Raman and Ishita together...actually she was thanking Raman for taking her side that's it!...he again goes to them...

Teacher- sahi hai!...aap bade log sab kuch karte ho!...aur hum kuch bol bhi nahi sakte!...aur aap bade ghar ki ladkiyan ka bhi acha hai!...sab kuch karti hai lekin maane ke liye tayyar nahi hai,,,,waise aap ko dekh kar he bol sakta hoon ki aap dono ke beech kuch hai!

Raman- Ishita tum sab ko lekar ghar jao!

Ishita leaves with everyone...rman removes his coat and takes off his glasses and beats him!...he trashes him so much...making him blue and black!...he then warns him not to talk like that...he leaves for his office...

On the other hand she drops everyone home...she comes in late...the meeting with a client already started... Raman was also there...the meeting was scheduled later but it had been preponed ...she didn't know... Since she dropped everyone home she was late... Mr. chudda didn't like it...she never was sloppy ...

Mr chudda- ishita woh files ready hai?

Ishita- eh,,,,

Raman- mr chudda...its ok...files were asked to be submitted later...so that's why they must be not ready its ok...koi naat nahi...

Ishita- actually woh files ...i mean that they are ready only aapke sign ki zaroorat nai!...
She gets the files,,...and gives to mr chudda for signing ...

The meeting was really small...it was like a settlement talk...everyone came out...

Ishita- i am sorry i was late...

Mr chudda- no problem,...u finished the work ...that's enough ...

It was time to go so ishita left for home...she was feeling bad for the way that stupid teacher talked...she changed and went near the window..she stood there for two reasons...when she was happy or sad...now she was sad...everyone at that age started noticing thar she was single ...or that she should be involved with a guy... Just then amma came into the room...

Ishita- amma...mujhe shaadi karni hai!!

Amma- ayyo ,...tum sach keh rahi ho???

Ishtia- haan...amma...mere umar ke sab ladlkiyan shaadi shuda hai ya phir date kar rahi hai!...i think its time!

Amma- ishita bahut acha socha tumne!...mein broker se bolti hoon!...

Ishita again looked outside the window...ruhi has pulled Raman outside...she was bored so she wanted to play with him as sharavan slept...he just sat on the bench...she sat on her lap...he wanted to take rest...he showed her some pics in his phone...then he looked up for a second...he saw ishita even she saw him ...both smiled at each other...just then Mrs. Bhalla called them for dinner...she saw Raman was busy looking up...so she silently went inside with ruhi...then even Raman came to have dinner...

Mrs bhalla- yahan kyon aaya hai?

Raman- eh?...aapne dinner pe bulaya !

Mrs bhalla- nahi tu jaa bahar baith!
Raman- kya?...,mujhe ghar se bhaga rahe ho?

Simmi- woh kuch nahi hai bhai!...mumiji ko lagta hai ki tumhaare aur uss ladki Ishita jo upar rehti hai ke beech mein kuch chal raha hai!

Raman - kya?

Simmi- aur yeh chahti hai ki woh ladki iss ghar ki bahu bane!

Raman- aap pagal ho!

He goes to his room without eating ...he switches off the light!...,and goes to bed...he thinks about Mrs bhalla...and her dream of making ishita and him married...first he laughs at the idea!...then for a second he thinks of her ...not like the business women...but like a girl and a wife...he remembers the white suit...the green saree...the love for kids...and the fact that people keep thinking they are a couple...he tries not to stretch too much!...other wise he will fall in Love with her...

On the other side ishita had agreed to marry ...she wants a person who understands her ,..she thinks that no one can understand her when her soulmate was living down stairs...even she goes to sleep...

Completed Part 6...

Sorry for the errors.. . I tried to proof read Ambreen's update... Still there might be errors...

Hope you all will like it!! Need your feedback friends... Do like and post your valuable comments!!

Buddy me for the pm...
Edited by TamannaSethi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 3 updated above on Page no 21...

Hope you all will like it...

Do like and give your valuable comments...

Thanks,

TamannaSethi(Guri)
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Edited by TamannaSethi - 10 years ago

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