SAANS[MG FF]PART2 installment...pg 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi guyz...m priya...I have read many amazing stories on maneet and thought of starting my own..I have 3 stories on going on Arsh...and now I want to write on them...I may not be good like other writers here...but I can try right...hope u all give me a chance and read this...'fingers crossed'

prologue

A girl who was crying on her fate..she was totally broken and torn from inside...and who wouldn't be...any girl on her place would have killed herself...no one could ever bear this...but she couldn't do this...she couldn't snatch someone's happiness for her own..
the girl was sitting on the floor and clutching the bed sheet hard...she was digging her nails in her fist...while trying to not make a noise while crying...


and then someone enter in her dark room...
geet puttar...an old lady called...while putting a hand on her shoulder...
geet after hearing her voice...looked up at her while her face was soaked eith tears...and wishpered..'kkkaki ma'in her broken voice...hugged her hard while sobbing very hard...
kaki-bas puttar nai...ye tera faisla tha na...to ab tu kamzor kyu par rahi hai...she said careesing geet's head..
geet-mmai jja...janti hoon...par main kya karu..mai...mai..geet was not able to complete her sentence...
kaki-mai janti hu ye assan nhi...par..tune ye rashta khud chuna hai...
geet-haan...kyuki unki khushi mai hi meri khushi hai...agar wo anayaji ke ke saath khush rahenge to mai vi unkivkhushi mai khush reh lungi...mai unke liye kuch vi kar sakti hu...kuch vi..she said with determination.
kaki ma-iske liye tune apne pati ki dusri shaadi ke liye haan kehdi...kuch nhi kaha tune kisi se...bas chup chap sab kuch seh liya...
yes today is the marriage of MAAN SINGH KHURANA with his girlfriend ANAYA MEHTA and she is GEET KHURANA his ex-wife and childhood friend...
so here is the hugeee prologue...now its up to u to like and comment


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PART ONE

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start ,
Nice prologue !!! ,
Maan is getting married with someone else:(
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting Prologue

Geet is Maan's ex wife and now he is going to marry someone else
but why what happened as Maan and Geet are also childhood friends
does he not love her

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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats! interesting prologue! update soon! Feeling 4 Geet! Maan is getting married! she is ex wife n childhood friend! Geet wants his happiness! update soon n do pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congo 4 new story nice pro feeling bad for geet cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting prolong. Maan is Geet ex n Geet ready to do anything for Maan. What happen geetmaan r childhood friends.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maan is going to marry someone else ..and geet is his ex wife. .
ye kya ho raha he.. :'(
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for new start
maan getting married to someone else ??
poor geet
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting prologue...

loved it...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Is story ki happy ending hogi na ?
Plz reply

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