IshRa TS - Its a plan!!!! Completed Updtd Pg.5 12th May '15

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This is a Three Shot based on the current track. Decided to pen this as I am unable to sit through the drama that is unfolding on screen.My story picks up from the scene where Raman kicks Ishita out of the house.Unlike the characters in the show , the characters in this story are capable of introspecting and taking informed decisions although they may have acted impulsively in certain situations.With this I proceed to the first chapter.
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Index:
Chapter 1 - Pg.1
Chapter 2 - Pg.2
Chapter 3 & 4 - Pg.3
Chapter 5 (Last) - Pg.5

Chapter - 1


Ishita closed the door to her room with a loud bang and locked the door , not wanting to talk to Amma, Appa, Mihika or to anybody for that matter. She fished out her phone from her purse , her fingers still shaking with anger and typed in a message furiously and hit the send button. She wheeled herself to the bed ,lifted herself up balancing on her good leg and fell on the bed.Clutching her phone in one hand she closed her eyes , took a few deep breaths and tried to calm herself.

Raman was seated in the living room of the Bhalla house with Simmi & Toshi ji towering over , desperately trying to drive some sense into him.Senior Bhalla was too angry to speak. He chose to make just one statement "I am ashamed to call you my son " and retired to his room.Raman had a dead expression on his face as though he wasn't catching a word of what Simmi & and his mom were saying.He heard his phone beep but chose to ignore it. When he realised they had stopped speaking , he turned to them and said " Ho gaya tum sab ka, ab main jaaoon??".He then quickly made his way up the stairs to his bedroom. As soon as he was inside he locked the door and pulled out his phone.The text message from his madrasan was loud and clear "CALL ME RIGHT NOW".

Without wasting any time he dialled her number. Ishita picked up the call at the first ring itself and thundered "How dare you shout at me like that ?? Is this the way to speak to your wife? This was not part of our script Raman." Raman cringed on the other end but tried to pacify her "Ishita Ishita , pls gussa mat ho yaar..woh toda realistic lag ne ke liye mujhe aisa kar na pada."
"But this is too much Raman. I agree according to our plan you were to ask me to leave and go back to my house.But how dare you say " Dafa ho jao" and you were literally barking "OUT OUT". Aisa koyi kar ta hai kya? I am so pissed at you right now..i will wring your neck if you come anywhere near me".
Raman felt helpless " Ishita pls meri baat suno..you know very well I didn't mean any of that..aur sab ke samne toh main hi villain ban gaya..Do you know what Papa told me ? He said " I am ashamed to call you my son." Do you know how that made me feel? Pls yaar Ishita ab tum bhi naraz ho jaogi toh humara plan ka kya hoga? We need to get Rinki and Mihir back together right?"
Hearing this Ishita mellowed down a little but remained silent.Raman could hear her breathing hard through the phone and he thought to him self " baap re , socha nahi that Madrasan itna gussa karegi". He spoke to her again in a very soft voice " hey Ishita , pls calm down yaar , sorry sorry hazaar baar sorry. Kaan pakadu? Wahan aake tumhare fractured pair pakadun? Maan jao na pls"..She was forced to smile hearing that.She spoke now , the tone of her voice still edgy." Aage ka plan bataon Raman , kya karna hai?".
Raman thanked his stars and replied "Now we wait .Rinki has the whole night to herself to think and introspect. I know what we are trying to do here is not something great. We are trying to sort of guilt trip both Mihir & Rinki ..trying to make it look like they are the reason why we have had this huge show down.But if Rinki decides to give her relationship just one more chance ..even if it is just to pacify us or save our relationship..that is more than enough.I have known Mihir for the longest time , he will make it work ..he genuinely cares for Rinki."
Ishita listened to him patiently and said." I hope it works Raman."
"It has to Ishita..let's wait for tomorrow morning". An awkward silence crept up between them now, like suddenly they had nothing to say but at the same time neither of them wanting to hang up.Raman was the first to break the silence " Ishita..."
"Hmmm?"
"Gussa ho abhi bhi?"
"No Raman I am not "
"Theek hai toh apna khayal rakhna. Davayi time pe lena.Adi aur Ruhi ko kuch bata nahi sakte abhi..but you are just a door away..they can come and see you anytime."
"Thats fine Raman ..I am just going to tell them that Amma needs my help on something and I need to stay back. Aap bhi apna khayal rakhiyega " As an after thought she added " Don't miss me too much " a smile playing on her lips now." I most definitely will . Bye Ishita " he said before hanging up surprising her.
Raman started pacing his room , hoping all this won't back fire. Just then he heard a knock on the door. It turned out to be Rinky wanting to have a word with him. He maintained his angry expression ,left the door open but did not invite her inside. She looked deeply troubled.
"Bhai. Yeh kya tha? Aap Ishita bhabhi ko kyun blame kar rahe ho? Bhaabhi ne mujhe shaadi kar ne ke liye force nahi kiya that. Aap bhi the wahan pe. Bhaabhi ne suggest kiya , Mihir ne maan liya, aur kisi ne bhi na nahin bola tha..phir isme bhaabhi ki kya galati hai?"

"Uski vakaalat kar ne aayi ho toh, pls don't waste your time Rinky." Raman spit back.

"Theekh hai Bhai, par atleast mere aur Mihir ke rishte bare main toh baat kar sakti hoon na aapse?"
Raman sat down on the couch and motioned her to sit.
"Kya aapko lagta hai ki mera gussa kar na unreasonable hai?" She asked him.
"Nahee..tumhara gussa kar na unreasonable nahi hai.par tum ne yeh baat Mihir se discuss ki?"
"I know Bhai I have realised that I should have discussed this with Mihir before taking such a decision. Par Bhai main bohat zyada insecure feel kar rahi thi..on the day of my wedding when I found out that Nikhil is a cheat , mujhe bohat bura laga..I wasn't in love with him but I had started dreaming of a life with him.Aur phir meri shaadi Mihir se ho gayi..I know Mihir is a very good guy and he has done a lot of things to make me feel comfortable given the circumstances in which we got married. But when I heard him say Mihika's name repeatedly ..when he said he should have trusted Mihika ..isn't it the same as saying he shouldn't have married me..? Something snapped inside me hearing that .Why doesn't anybody want me for my sake? My first instinct was to just pack up and come here and i did that..and now all I am saying is that I need some time to think".

It pained Raman to see her like this. He kept his hand on hers reassuringly and said " I am glad you are thinking this through and I want you to know that all of us want to see you happy and we will stand by you whatever your decision is " While saying this last sentence he hoped that she takes the right decision.
Rinki continued " But Bhai why are you being so unreasonable with bhaabhi? Pata hai Mihir called me on his way back home ..usko bhi bohat bura lag raha hai bhabhi ke liye". Raman rejoiced inwardly seeing a flicker of hope..he hoped they kept talking ..even if it's about him and Ishita..
Feining anger again " beta tum apne aur Mihir ke rishte ke bare mein socho..tumhare bhabhi ke bare mein main koyi baat nahi kar na chahta".
Sensing this is going no where Rinky decided to leave but Raman's state of mind perplexed her...she just couldn't understand his anger..
Although she was still pissed at Mihir she couldn't stop herself from calling him and telling him how thick headed her Bhai is..they started talking...

Thanks for reading. Flash back on hatching of the plan and Raman sneaking into Ishita 's bedroom in the night coming up in Chapter 2.
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😛Great start continue soon 😛
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Ver well written. I liked Ishu blasting Raman very much for a change.
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A really beautiful start dear...
loved raman ishita's plan n then their lil fight...
awe bechara ravan kumar waqai ravan ban gaya...ghar walon ki nazron main...
rinki surly has realized her mistake...
n mihir will now b more attentive to her...
do cont soon...waiting
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Good start! Can't wait for some of their secret meetings!
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hey dear...
please update this :)...
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I am back with the second chapter of this TS. I had to cook up a justification for this plan which looks ridiculous in spite of my best efforts.I can still live with this botched up plan, but can't accept Ishita going back to Raman after the way the he treated her if it was for real.

Also , my respect to all the writers on this forum who portray physical intimacy well. I just realized how tough it is !!!

Please read and share your comments.

Chapter -2

Ishita tried to relax and get some sleep .The party and the drama that ensued had left her drained. Mihika had wanted to sleep in her room thinking she might need something in the night. But she wanted to be alone as Raman had texted her that he will be calling in sometime to update her about something. She hoped it was some kind of good news.

She thought about how upset her Amma and Appa were. Usually ,whenever there was an issue between their families or between Raman and herself,they always sat and discussed the matter trying to understand everybody's view point .But this time around , they were silent . And their silence worried her.

Adi and Ruhi had come to meet her after her phone conversation with Raman. She had managed to cook up some excuse to convince Ruhi that her Ishima needed to stay with her Paatti for a couple of days. While Ruhi had bought it , Adi did not look all too convinced. Thankfully, the kids had not witnessed the ugly exchange between her and Raman and the way he had asked her to get lost.

She couldn't help but actually feel guilty for what happened. After all she was the one who suggested Mihir for Rinki. She knew Mihir would not do anything deliberately to hurt Rinki. But she also knew that Mihika's truth would have hurt him and made him feel very guilty. It was an extremely delicate situation where everyone was right in their own way . She prayed to her Murugan that their plan should not backfire.

It had all been Raman's plan. They were on their way back from the reunion party when Raman got a call from a very distressed Mummy ji who had overheard Rinki talking to Mihika. Mummy ji had filled them in on everything right from Mihir coming home drunk , saying Mihika's name , expressing his regret for not trusting Mihika..and Rinki's final revelation that she has come back home for good as she thinks Mihir is still not over Mihika. They had stopped on the way and immediately called Mihir to hear his side of the story . He was quick to admit his mistake but revealed that Rinki had not discussed any of this with him and that he was under the impression that she will be returning to his place in a few days' time. Mihir was distraught. He promised to do everything in his powers to get Rinki back. He was ready to do his part to make this marriage work. They asked Mihir to come over to their place as this needed to be discussed and sorted at the earliest . Raman however was a step ahead in his thinking and knowing his sister ,he doubted whether she would be convinced. He had told her that if Rinki doesn't get convinced then , he is going to pull this stunt of blaming her for all this and will ask her to go back to her place. She was skeptical at first but agreed halfheartedly . They did not have time to discuss and argue on this as they were already home by now and could hear Rinki still having a go at Mihika. All their efforts to pacify Rinki had further escalated the issue and Mihir was the last person she wanted to see now. That's when Raman had started shouting at her, putting all the blame on her. He had gone overboard with his act and made her forget that it was actually a plan.

With all these thoughts occupying her mind now, she waited for Raman's call. She grew restless with each passing second. As disturbed as she was, she couldn't help but think about his promise to her earlier this evening about putting her happiness before everything else. She smiled to herself thinking that now a days he was being quiet vocal about his feelings for her and he did not let go of any opportunity to flirt with her. Her trail of thoughts broke when she heard " Madrasan !"

She opened her eyes with a jerk and looked around her room . She was positive that she heard Raman call her. For a second she thought she was dreaming and chided herself. Just then she heard it again, "Ishita yaar ..khidki kholo... jaldi" .. followed by soft tapping on the window. She couldn't believe it . She wanted to see it to believe it. As much as she wanted to , she knew she couldn't jump off her bed. She got herself onto the wheel chair carefully and wheeled herself to the window on the far end of the room. She pushed the curtains aside and lo and behold there he was, frantically motioning at her to open the window . She did and he climbed into her room. She gaped at him, her mouth open.

"Mooh band karo apna, pehli baar dekh rahi ho kya mujhe?" he grumbled .

"Aise aadhi raat ko mere bedroom ke khidkhi se andar aate hue pehli baar hi dekh rahi rahoo. " she gave it back to him and he couldn't help but smile.

"What is wrong with you Raman ? Aap kuch kar ne se pehle sochte nahi hai kya ? Aap toh call kar ne wale the na? Aapko aise aate hue kisi ne dek liya toh? Yeh achchi baat hai .. pehel biwi ko ghar se nikalo , aur phir aadhi raat ko uske kamre mein ghus jaao. And this could really jeopardize our plan .. you know that right ?".

He replied in an irritated tone " Ho gaya tumhara lecture? Ab main kuch bolu ? Kuch zaroori baat karni hai tum se " . Without waiting for an invitation , he went and sat on the bed . She followed him and parked herself in front of him. "Kya hua , sab theekh toh hai na ? Kuch hua kya?". She asked him getting worried now.

"Sab theek hai..Woh Rinki aayi thi mujh se baat kar ne. She told me her decision to not go back is not final.. She admitted that she should have discussed this whole issue with Mihir and said that she just needs a little more time to think. And the best part is , she and Mihir are talking to each other even if it is to discuss the situation that I have created here."

"Oh ! That's good. Its definitely a positive sign." She perked up.

"Yes Ishita.. I am just hoping they take the right decision. Tumhari bohat vakaalat kar rahi thi Rinki. But I had to tell her off. "

"How rude Raman?"

"No Ishita . I couldn't help it. We have to put on this act just a bit longer. I know and I have a feeling this will work."

"Raman .. yeh sab baatein toh aap phone par bhi share kar sakte the. ..phir yahan aise achanak..you really didn't have to sneak into my room . Mihika is sleeping in the next room. And how sure are you that nobody saw you coming in?"

Raman closed his eyes and took a deep breath trying to control his frustration and anger. Whenever he did something to convey his feelings for her she would annoy him no end with her questions. He didn't know whether she was actually dumb or just playing dumb. Is she really not sensible enough to understand that he missed her and wanted to see her ?He looked up at her just in time to catch that naughty glint in her eyes. He didn't say anything but just kept staring at her.

"Aise ghoor kya rahe ho ? Bol do na ki aap mujhe bohat miss kar rahe the "

He thought to himself . Even in that simple black kurti and leggings and with not a trace of make up she looked as beautiful as she looked in the evening all dressed up for the party. And if she kept taunting him like that , god knows what he would end up doing. He tried to rein in his thoughts.

Not getting any response from him. She continued , " Ab bolti band ho gayi? sab ke samne toh bohat chilla rahe the... ab kya hua? Dialogue writer chuthi par ho kya?"

He glared at her now warning her with his eyes to stop. But when in lecture mode , there was no stopping Ishita. "And Raman I still can't believe it...you are the CEO of a company and look at you sneaking into my room like that ... ".

That was the last straw for Raman. He leaned forward, pulled the wheel chair between his legs , held her face and kissed her !!!! Her eyes grew wide for a second , both her hands on his shoulder clutching his shirt. He sucked and bit on her lips, relentless and demanding. She had no idea when she started responding to his kiss. She felt like she was being sucked into a whirlpool of sensations, and she was only too glad it give in to it. They broke apart a few seconds later, breathless and flushed.

His eyes were fixed on her's and she didn't know where to look. She tried to wheel back but he held on. He went closer to her , lifter her chin up with his index finger and asked in a breathless tone "Kyun madrasan... ab tumhari bolti band ho gayi kya ? Tumhara dialogue writer bhi chuthi par ho?" She smiled closing her eyes for a second still unable to look at him. He let go off her wheel chair , leaned back a little on the bed and continued to stare at her enjoying her discomfort. She turned her wheel chair around facing away from him. He was not one to give up. He got up , walked around her and shocking her again, bent down and picked her up . She tried to protest "Raman..kya kar rahe ho? No...put me down.. " .

Unmindful of her protests , he carried her to the bed and gently placed her on it. Before she could sit up properly ,he got into the bed next to her and pushed her back gently making her lie down. She opened her mouth to say something but he silenced her by placing his right index finger on her lips. He bent down and kissed her fore head . She closed her eyes , breathing in his cologne enjoying the feel of his lips on her forehead. The fingers of his right hand were now entwined with those of her left hand . He started placing light kisses on her face covering every inch. She wanted to ask him to stop , but couldn't find her voice. His lips were moving down to her neck now and she knew she had to stop him now when she was still capable of rational thinking or else it would be too late. "Raman ..please " was all she could manage. She tried to hold his face with her free right hand " Raman ...pls aise nahi... aaj nahi..". He lifted his face up, her words suddenly registering in his mind. He pulled back a little and she used this opportunity to sit up. When he sat up next to her , she took his hands in hers and said , "Raman as it is I feel guilty about the whole Rinki - Mihir situation. .. aur aise mein hum yahan..it doesn't feel right" . What she said made sense to him. He put his hand over hers immediately . " I know Ishita , this is probably not the best time..I understand... I don't know ..how I lost control like that .. lekin tum guilty kyun feel kar rahi ho ? Mihir aur Rinki ki shaadi hum sab ke aashirvaad se hui hai. And trust me , we will not have to regret this decision. We will sort this out." He pulled her close to him and held her not wanting to let go. She held his face and kissed his fore head and that earned her a cute dimpled smile from him. She smiled back at him unable to take her eyes off him , her own eyes reflecting her love for him.

" Aisa kyun ho raha hai humare saath?" He asked her .

"Kaisa?"

"When we were supposed to be spending time with each other we fought like cats and dogs. And now when we want to be together... we are supposed to be fighting."

" Haan ... toh kis ki galati hai ? aap hamesha ladte rahte hai muhj se".

"Sirf main ladta hoon?? Tum nahi ladti kya ??

"Shuruaat toh aap hi karte ho na??"

"Jhootti !! hamesh talwar uttha ke ready rahti hai lad ne ke liya...aur ab sara ilzaam mujh par !!"

"Accha ? Dekho ab kaun lad raha hai??"

"Main lad raha hoo?? Mere lad ne se problem hai... toh kuch aur karoon?? " Saying this he tightened his hold around her waist and tried to kiss her.

She pushed his face away, giggling " Raman... no !!"

"ab dekho .. mere pyaar kar ne se bhi problem hai..you are driving me crazy!"

She sensed the change in the tone of his voice. "Raman .. aapko chal na chahiye...If Amma or Mihika comes to check on me.. we are going to end up in trouble".

He did not want to argue with her this time but hugged her tight. "Ishita ..I promise you, we won't have to put on this act for too long...we will be together very soon and I dare you to try and stop me then.. " ., he said winking at her . He watched her blush in response to that.

"Goodnight Ishita "

"Goodnight Raman ...aur pls sambhal ke jaana.. and pls message once you are in your room"

She watched him climb out of the window and prayed no one saw him. 5 mins later her phone beeped. "Hey...I am in my room now.. and don't worry no one saw me.. sleep well.. don't miss me too much !"

She smiled and texted back " I miss you already !" .

Sleep evaded her for some more time.. she still felt his presence next to her..the feel of his lips on hers making her ache for more.. but before the wings of her imagination took flight she drifted off into a blissful sleep.

Ishita woke up to a beautiful morning. Memories of last night flooded her mind making her blush. Her lips were hurting slightly all thanks to her Raavan Kumar. The memory of that kiss did something to her insides and she knew she wouldn't be able to function well if she kept thinking about it. And for someone who was thrown out of her house by her own husband, she looked happy and radiant. She deliberately pushed those thoughts away from her mind and got up to face the day ahead.

She freshened up quickly , put on a sullen expression and wheeled out of her room . When she opened the front door to get the newspapers she was pleasantly surprised. Mihir and Rinki were standing at her door step looking all concerned and worried.

Thanks for reading. Please share your comments.

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Interesting.. Ishra on a mission. Looks Good!
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ishra should fake fight more 😉
continue soon pls :)
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Romantic update ...Loved it
Continue soon

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