Ishra FF: She Is A Business Woman -- Note on Page 97!... - Page 10

Hey Friends!!!

Hope you all remember.. This is a story written by my friend Ambreen... I am posting this story on behalf of her... As she doesn't uses IF... Do read it Friends...

As I have told you all in the earlier update it is bit inconvenient for me to post from the mobile... So I will post the updates in the continuation...

I am really excited to post the fifth part... As I have got so many requests for posting the fifth part soon... So I am posting it bit earlier... Thanks a lot friends for the requests..

Here it goes friends...

Part 5(A)--------

The next day the big party was arranged...ishita wanted to dress up indian...so she went shopping to find the perfect outfit...she went with shravu and mihika...mihika was a good dresser like her...but Ishita wasn't good in party wear...Ishtia wanted to wear something green,, but mihika bought blue...shravu wanted something... he kept arguing with mihika...mihika refused to buy him anything... but Ishita never said no to him so she picked up a toy for him which was expensive...mihika asked why?? ...she didn't answer...ishita got a call so she left the shop...they were in the mall...shravu followed her out... mihika was at the shop...same way the Bhallas had come to shop ...Mrs bhalla had bought something and kept it in the bag...but later she couldn't find it...she started to get fuzzy...she was walking with her head in the bag...shravu was running round and round of ishita while she was talking on the phone...she stopped him as he will get dizzy... As Mrs Bhalla was walking she bumped into ishita...her(Mrs. Bhalla's) things fell down ...Ishtia immediately went to pick it up as she was younger...

Ishita- i am sorry auntiji

Toshijii - tu maafi kyon maang rahi hai putr ...menu dekh kar chalna tha!

Ishita took everything and gave it to her...Raman wasn't there with them ...ishita went back in ...the bhallas had finished shopping.. So Raman came to pick them up...

Toshiji- kitni achi ladki hai!...meri galti thi aur usne maafi maangi!

Simmi- haan mumiji-

Raman- kya hua?

Simmi- mummiji ne galti se ek ladki ko takkar maar diya!

Toshiji- haan putr,,,,aur usne mere saare samaan utha kar diye...tu jaanta hai use!

Raman- acha?

Toshiji- haan,...hamaare ghar ke upar hi rehti hai...arey wahi jo us din puja par aayi,...woh white suit pehen kar...Aur ruhi ko bhi train kar rahi hai...waise badi pyaari bachi hai!...dono behenein badi pyaari hain!

Raman- oh ishita?

Simmi - haan wahi!...waise kaam kya karti hai woh?""...padi likhi lagti hai!...

Toshiji- mujhe lagta hai ki shaadi shuda hai...hamesha woh bache ke saath rehti hai

Raman- kaun sharavan?...woh uska niece hai!...aur woh business karti hai...,mere jaise!...bahut smart hai!...she is single!

Simmi- arey tujhe itna kaise pata?

Raman-zyaada ched mat...mein uske saath business karta hoon...aur use Ms. Ishita bulate hain!...Toh obviously single hai!!

Toshiji- eh?...kuwaari hai??...

Raman- haan,...abh chalein??

Toshiji- haan gaadi nikal...lekin itni soni kudi nu koi ghar pe bithakar rakta hai?

Simmi- haan ma!
Toshiji- jab woh puja ke liye aayi toh mein toh use dekhti rahi...,

Simmi- aur nahi toh kya mumiji...,.woh white suit uspe kinna changa lag raha tha!...mein toh puchne waali thi ki usne woh kahan se khareeda...uske baad pata chala ki woh mamuli suit hai lekin uspe utna acha lag raha tha...

Toshiji- bhagawan ne itna changa banaya hai usse!

They reach home...mihir comes in the evening .,..,,he is all dressed up...he asks even them to get ready...Raman wears a black suit...and a golden tie...mihir helps him and fixes his dress properly...he was looking like a trophy!...any one would want to have him...all the bhallas get ready...simmi wears an amazing pink suit...and mrs bhalla a red,...the whole bhallas were looked stunning...

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Part 5(B)---------

Ishita got shravu dressed ...then she selected amma a saree...and then moved on to appa ...she fixed his tie...he didn't know to put it on...then went to vandu akka's room ...they said they are not coming...so she asked mihika to get dressed...mihika got beautifully dressed in blue saree...she picked up some jewellery...and started to try it on...and finally all got dressed except ishita!...she was the one who had to get ready but she was involved with everyone else...at last she went to change...she first took jewellery matching to her dress then she started to wear the saree...

She came out wearing a green net saree with black border...she wore some black jewellery ...and her hair looked gorgeous ...there coudn't be anything more perfect with her...the whole family stared at her...

Amma- ayio ishu!...kitni pyaari lag rahi hai!

Mihika- omg akka!...u look awesome!...agar aapke paas ek date hota toh u will look amazing,,,,

Ishita- haina date!...my appa is my date today!...She went near appa...

Ishita- amma if u don't mind i would like to click some pics with ur husband...

She gave her camera to mihika...she loved appa so much... She started taking pics with appa...

Ishita- mihika ...i am already a princess...cause my father is the king!...i don't need a prince...

They leave for the party,...ishita drove...she got down and helped amma to get down...the bhallas were at the entrance they had just got there...ishtia went and checked in...

The party had started...mr chudda and raman stood together...ishita saw them and went to join them...raman was shocked to see her that pretty...

Mr chudda- u look beautiful tonight Ms. Ishita...

Ishita- thank u sir...

Raman liked it so much...the bhallas saw her and went to her...she said namaste...mrs bhalla couldn't stop praising her beauty...she went on and on,...at one point ishita felt weird ...so she made an excuse and left...

A dance was announced...so she took appa and danced with her...Raman danced with rinki and then simmi...but the partners had to be exchanged at one point...so next she went to mr chudda...mihika had come to rman...and after the next spin she went to mihir...and mihika went to mr chudda...and at last finally ishita came to Raman...and then everyone bowed...raman held ishita's hand...she didn't notice even he didn't ...but the one person who did notice was Mrs. Bhalla!...she thought the couple looked amazing...

After all that they took some pictures ...the media asked to take pictures as all had come to one platform,...it was a group,...and the group shortened and shortened ...at last Raman and Ishita were there...they didn't want to take a pic ...so they left the platform but mrs bhalla forced them to stand together for one pic...so to respect her ishita stood for this pic...after the last pic...they had to go to eat...

Ishita had to eat with the business people ...and after her dinner she came to check the iyers if they ate...even Raman was eating with the partners...mrs bhalla's table was next to iyers...she saw how polite she was...

After some time shravu started getting sleepy but ishita couldn't leave so she asked everyone to go home with shravu because it might get late...and on the other side simmi had to leave to take care of ruhi and ananya...ruhi hadn't come...so she left with mr and mrs bhalla...

It was getting really late and party was still continuing with awards...Ishita won a award for the best hard working of the year...and also for the best at progressing of the year...which was given to the person who made good decisions for the firm,...,and Raman got the best senior manager...

It was about 12...mihika had taken the car...ishita was worried so she tried to call her driver...but he didn't pick up...she stood there calling to mihika...mihika was sleeping so she couldn't hear the call...even simmi had taken his car so Raman called his driver...his driver came...Raman and mihir sat in the car...Raman sat at back seat and mihir in front seat...he saw ishita at one corner...they lived in the same apartment so he offered go help...

Do read the third part downwards

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Raman- ishita...need a ride?

Ishita- yeah sure thnx...

Raman- come in...

Ishita got in ...they sat next to each other still near to the window near them...the middle seat was empty...mrs bhalla was scared so she was waiting for raman to come home...she saw his car coming in ...the door opened they got down from either side...mrs bhalla felt tingly!...as any mother she wanted her son to get married and settle down!!...

Ishita- thanks for the ride raman!

Raman- no its fine...mein toh waise bhi yahin aane waale tha!...haha

The joke was funny because they live together in an apartment...she smiled...and turned to leave inside...mihir got down from the car...

Mihir- bhai...i am gonna stay here tonight!...i am too tired..

Raman- haan aaja!

Mihir- thank u bhai...

Mihir was too tired but Raman wasn't ...they both walk on where mrs bhalla was eagerly waiting to police rman!...

Mihir went to Raman's room and lied on the bed...he slept in a second...Raman went to his room and opened his cup board...he removed his coat...Mrs bhalla walks in...

Toshijii - toh kaisi thi party?

Raman- kaisi thi matlab?...aap bhi aaye the na?

Toshijii- lekin mere jaane ke baad kya hua?

Raman- prizes diye gaye!

Toshijii - arey wah!...aur kuch hua?

Raman- aur kya?

Toshijii- matlab...party mein itni khubsurat ladkiyan thi toh unke saath kuch,...

Raman- haan...ek ladki bahut achi lagi toh meine shaadi kar li usse!

Toshijii - gussa kyon ho raha hai?

Raman- toh kya karoon?...aap sirf do ghante ke pehle nikle na?...toh itni jaldi kya ho jayega?...aur waise aap soye kyon nahi?

Toshijii - woh tere aane ka intezaar kar rahi thi!

Raman- kya zaroorat hai!...aap jaake so jao...mujhe bhi neend aa rahi hai!

Toshijii- theek hai!

She thought something was going on between them...or atleast she wanted something to happen...she goes to sleep...

On the other hand ishtia comes home really tired...she changes into night cloths ...all were sleeping...she goes to bed...

Completed Part 5

Sorry for the errors.. . I tried to proof read Ambreen's update... Still there might be errors...

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Hey Friends!!

As per so many requests... I habe posted the fifth part today..

Hope you all will read it

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TamannaSethi(Guri)
(Ambreen's Story)

😉Waiting and super exited for part 5 update soon ji 😊

Originally posted by: 12Singmeenu

😉Waiting and super exited for part 5 update soon ji😊

After reading all the comments here... I am too excited to post part 5... 😆
Thanks jii
Will try to update soonish.. 😊

Super update I could imagine ramans reaction do tell ur friend she is an amazing writer 😛 waiting for next part 😳

Awesome update

super...

Good update, Please continue soon