AsYa TS: Best Night Ever! Epilogue updated!

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Hey Guyz! I'm back with a TS!! I was just feeling bored at home and suddenly this idea popped into my mind. And as no one as far as I know says'Any idea write it down' , I decided to follow it! So hope u Guyz like it!

One fine evening in NYC at Zoya Farooqui's house,
Najma: Zoya come down fast! We're getting late to Susan's birthday!
Zoya: Coming!

Zoya descended down the stairs wearing an elegant red gown and a black mask. Najma wore a blue-green gown with an aqua mask.
Zoya: Where's Ayaan and Humaira? They were supposed to pick us up
Najma: They're not coming to the party!
Zoya: What? Why?
Najma: It seems that today is their first anniversary of holding each other's hands! So they're celebrating it!
Zoya laughing: How? By getting a cake which has two holding hands??
Najma: No silly.. Guess more
Zoya: Sitting under the stars on a mountain, holding hands? Pfft.. Who am I kidding?
Najma: Ugh.. That's actually what they're doing!
Zoya: Wow! Love really does change people! Who knew One day Ayaan would look at the stars?
And Zoya burst out laughing.
Zoya: I mean seriously I find this whole concept of "Love" ridiculous! Guess what I even wrote a shayari on love
Najma: Oh No!
Zoya: Arz Kya Hai?
Najma disinterestingly: Irshad
Zoya: Nahi chahiye mujhe scooter , nor bike but only car
Nahi chahiye mujhe scooter , nor bike but only car
Duniya ke sab we ridiculous thing is the so called Pyaar!
Shukriya! Shukriya!
Najma: Haww... Zoya so mean! U just see, one day u will definitely fall in love! It may even be today!
Zoya *rolls eyes* : Pfft... Yeah whatever come on let's go! Who's dropping us??

Just then the bell rings...
Najma: I'll get it
Najma opens the door to find Imran there. Imran was wearing a green tuxedo with blue shoes.
Imran: Humaira sent me to pick u Guyz up!
Najma: Ok! One second! Zoya, Imran has come to pick us up!
Zoya came to the living room with two sweaters and a pepper spray.
Najma: Sweaters??? Pepper Spray?
Zoya: Sweaters cause maybe we'll feel cold there and the pepper spray is for safety.
Najma: Ur crazy! Ok come on!

ZoNajRan left for the venue. Susan was the most popular girl in their college and today was her birthday and she had invited everyone. Zoya and Susan never got along well but still Susan invited her over to the party.
Zoya: U know guyz I seriously think Susan is plotting something against me..otherwise why would SHE invite ME for her birthday?!
Najma: Oh come on Zoe! Maybe she's taking the high road and I feel we should reach out to her!
Zoya: Pfft.. High road? Seriously Tomato! Where do u come up with all these stuff? LOL!

After a few minutes, they reach the venue.
Najma: Looks like we've reached Susan's house!
Zoya: Oh no! I guess by mistake Imran took us to Hell!
Zoya burst out laughing.
Zoya: Why aren't u Guyz laughing? It's a joke! U know hell... Susan's house...duh!
Imran: Whatever now wear ur masks
Zoya: Ugh! This whole idea of wearing a mask is so lame! It reminds me of that Fancy Dress Competition in Kindergarten where Najma dressed up as a Tomato! LOL!!
Zoya and Imran began laughing.
Najma: Ha Ha Ha! Very funny and hey I looked cute in that outfit! Hmmph..
With that Najma stomped towards the house.
ZoRan: Hey Najma! Wait up!

They wore their masks and went in. The hall was filled with people with masks. There were cardboard cut outs of Susan in every corner and pink balloons were all over the place.
Zoya: Yuck! Pink! Everywhere! Pink stinks!
Najma: I have no idea, how u being a girl can hate pink so much!
Zoya: Excuse me every girls doesn't HAVE to like PINK!
Imran: Stop fighting guys! I'm trying to figure out the people here.
Najma: They're all wearing masks Imran u Nimron! U can't!
Imran: That's why I'm trying to find out who they r! Duh!
Najma*rolls eyes*: Whatever

Just then Susan comes towards them.
Imran *dreamily* : Hi Susan! Happy Birthday!
Najma fumes with anger.
Susan: Well thank u ugh...???
Imran: It's Imran! Imran Qureshi
Susan: Yeah whatever
Najma: Happy Birthday Susan
Susan: Well thank u?? Who's this
Najma: It's Najma and this is Zoya
Najma nudged Zoya and pointed to Susan.
Zoya: Happy Birthday Kutthi, Kamini aurath
Susan: What's Kuthhi and Kamini?
Najma glares at Zoya and then turns to Susan and says : They're Hindi words for Hot and Happening Woman!
Susan: Oh well thank u Zoya!
Zoya: My pleasure!
Susan: So enjoy the party I guess.. CYL!
Susan flopped her hair and went away from there.

Zoya: Hey! How come SHE doesn't need to wear the mask
Imran: It's her party duh!
Zoya: That's why she's supposed to wear one
Imran: Her wish duh!
Najma angrily : Why do u a,ways defend her?
Imran smirks and says: Why? Jealous?
Najma: Yeah Right!
Zoya: Whatever guys I'm going to the drinks bar..
NajRan: WHAT?!? Ur going to drink alcohol??!!
Zoya: No! I want some juice! U guys speak as if alcohol is the only drink on the face of earth!
Zoya goes towards the drinks bar and asks for Mango juice.

Meanwhile in another corner of the party, Haider wearing a black tuxedo with Black shoes was talking to his BFF Asad who was wearing a red tuxedo with black shoes.
Haider: Asad! Come on Man! Be a Man and go ask a girl to dance with u!
Asad: Please! Don't involve me into this rubbish
Just then Susan comes there.
Susan: Hey handsome!
Haider: Hey!
Susan: I wasn't talking to u!
Haider: Oh sorry...
Susan: Asad why didn't u wear a mask??
Haider: He didn't feel like that's why
Susan: Did I ask U?
Haider: Umm.. No...
Susan: Anyways wait here I'll get u a mask
Asad: ok
Susan leaves to get Asad a mask.
Asad: Ugh! She is so irritating!! If she wasn't Abbu's business partner's daughter I wouldn't even look at her face! And if it wasn't for Abbu's blackmailing I wouldn't have even come here!
Haider: Chill man
Susan comes running back holding a black mask.
Susan: Here u go!
Asad: No it's ok I don't need one
Susan : Please for me!
Haider snatches it from her and says : I'll make sue he wears it!
Susan: Well at least U'll do one good thing. Oh look! Dylan's here! I'll be right back!

After a lot of persuasion, Asad finally wears the mask. Just then an announcer begins to speak.
Announcer: Attention everybody! I heartily welcome u all to Susan Ferrel's birthday bash! Now we will begin a game! Not exactly a game but a game! Oh forget it! In this game those who r wearing clothes of almost the same colour will dance together! U must be wondering that there are many ppl here wearing dresses with the same colour! Don't worry! It'll all be sorted out.

Then two ppl looking like professional wrestlers started bringing ppl wearing the same colour clothes together. NajRan was brought together and Haider was paired up with some random girl. PW1 brought Asad while PW2 brought Zoya. They paired both of them together...

2 B Continued...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Index
Part 1- above
Part 2- page 5
Epilogue - Page 11
Edited by KSGmaniac_24579 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start!
Zoya doesn't believe in love like me! Hi-five babes!
Najma so cute getting angry!
AyRa aww...
Stupid Susan flirting with Zoya's Asad
LOL Haider!
Ooh.. AsYa gonna dance!
Update soon!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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That was awesome start yaar love it plz continue soon 😃
Edited by shailu123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: RagNa294

Awesome start!

Zoya doesn't believe in love like me! Hi-five babes!
Najma so cute getting angry!
AyRa aww...
Stupid Susan flirting with Zoya's Asad
LOL Haider!
Ooh.. AsYa gonna dance!
Update soon!!!


Thanks dude!
Will update tomorrow!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A Very Good and Well Written part...
Zoya seems different her...I liked her attitude...and Shayari also..
And Susan is just a witch...though she didn't do anything scandalizing yet..
And very less of Asad..
Waiting for the night to actually start...
Continue soonish...
# I like your Siggy..
## Didn't receieved PM for this..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: MayurChan

A Very Good and Well Written part...
Zoya seems different her...I liked her attitude...and Shayari also..
And Susan is just a witch...though she didn't do anything scandalizing yet..
And very less of Asad..
Waiting for the night to actually start...
Continue soonish...
# I like your Siggy..
## Didn't receieved PM for this..


Thanks a lot dude!
And sorry for not sending the pm! I'm missing a lot of ppl! 😛
I know there was less of Asad sorry
I love this Soya too!
Will update tomorrow!
Thanks! I love my siggys too! I made them!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow interesting :)
plzz update soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ZoyaAsadKhan

wow interesting :)
plzz update soon :)


Thanks!
Will update soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shailu123

That was awesome start yaar love it plz continue soon 😃


Thanks yaar Shailu!
Will update tomorrow!

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