MaNan FF - Realization of Love UPDT (part 12 pg40) Final Part

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Chapter-1

A wedding function is going on. a couple is taking sath pheres. The dulha applies sindoor and puts mangalsutra around the girls neck.
pandit- vivah sampan hua , ajse ap dono pati patni ha
the couple gets up and takes ashirwad from an old lady sitting on a wheelchair. the boy hugs two boys while two girls were standing, their hands crossed around there chest. The boys take dulha with them , the old lady asks some of the girls to take the bride to her room.
scene shifts to the boys and girls.. one of the boys start speaking
boy=guys. lets just end this silence. ab shadi hogayi ha... toa. we have to except it.
girl=cabir, its not that easy.. i mean how can you say ke main accept karlu ke mera boyfriend aj kisi aurse shadi karke betha ha...
c=aliya please calm down.. tumhe sab pata ha aur phir bhi tum...
al=kya samjhu main?? aur kyu samjhu ?? samajhna manik ko chahiye jo mere wish ke against jakar uss nandini se shadi karli
c=aliya please calm down.. please ! mukti kuch bolna isko
mu=aliya dekh hum sab jante ha ke jo hua
a=tumlog kuch nahi jante cause its me who have lost manik not you all
m=just shut up guys..
manik stood up, he was frustrated and stressed.
m=please.. just stop it.
d=manik tu shant hoja.
m=kaise druv ?? yeh sab..
c=manik please... aliya please just calm down manik ki problem samajhne ki koshish toa karo
mukti=guys.. lets just leave these alone. hum bahar jate ha.
cabir=lets go
cabir, mukti, druv leave the room.
m=aliya.. please listen to me
a=kya suno manik??? aur kyu ?? you say you love me..
manik=yes i do.
aliya=agar mujhse pyar karte ho then nandini se kyu shadi ki ??
m=aliya as if you dont know...
a=manik please.. i cant stand that girl with you. i cant even imagine
m=ssshhh.. just ssh. aliya , i love you . More than you do me. aur maine yeh shadi sirf aur sirf dadi ke wajase ki ha, dadi ki kasam. but you dont worry... main dadi ko mana lunga. aur sirf 6 months..
a=why 6 months ???
m=because, divorce keliye apply 6 months se pehle nahi karsakta. aur in 6 months me ma usse itna pareshan karunga, itna torture karunga ke woh khud bhag jayegi aur dadi ko bhi samajh ajayega ke mere lie sirf tum perfect ho.. aur koi nahi
a=are you sure manik??
m=you trust me ???
a=yes
m=to bass... ab tum ghar jaw and just remember i love you
a=i love you too...
manik and aliya hug eachother.
m(in his mind)= nandini murthy.. welcome to hell

so guys this was the beginning of my new ff. after ages i started to write. hope you all like it. if you like it press like for pm and more updates

characters :
MANIK MANHOTRA :
The coolest business man of mumbai. achieved success at an early age. Only son of his parents who died in a car accident. manik took over the business and right now he is a young talented rich person of mumbai city. his name is enough for his identity. his passion is music. Manik's life means his Dadi, he would die but never disobey her. Loves her like anything. His love of life is Aliya, with whom he is in a relationship for 3 years. his life is his friends, Cabir, mukti and his brotherly friend druv who understands him more than himself.

NANDINI MURTHY:
a sweet , adorable funloving girl who came to mumbai with her brother for his treatment. they grew in an orphanage of pune. nandinis brother rishab cant say or hear anything. so she came to mumbai for his treatment. For their earnings first nandini used to teach in a school and later on for higher salary she began to work in manik's office as his secretary. one day she went to maniks house for some official work and then his dadi liked her very much as she took good care of her in absence of manik. for this manik is very much grateful to her

INDEX
chapter 1-page 1
chapter 2- page 2
chapter 3- page 4
chapter 4 & 5- page 6
chapter 6- page 10
chapter 7-page 12
chapter 8- page 15
chapter 9- page 21
chapter 10- page 27
chapter 11-page 34
chapter 12 (final)=page 40
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mehjaben_nahin thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its kind of kumkum bhagya ok seems interesting cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good start
Nice concept... quite interesting
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aminahin

its kind of kumkum bhagya ok seems interesting cont soon


Umm.. not really actually. what i have thought is different from it. :) but yes may b you found similarities between these two
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Starting like kumkumbhagya...let's see I know u will turn it in good way..waiting for update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved it
its like kumkum bhagya
But its too good
Cont soon
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Originally posted by: MaNan_KaShian


Umm.. not really actually. what i have thought is different from it. :) but yes may b you found similarities between these two

thnk god plz penned it differently it will be interesting to read well m sending u buddy req do pm me whnevr u update 😊
Edited by aminahin - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey nice concept.
Keep writing.

Waiting for next part.
👏

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chapter:2
nandini was sitting with dadi in her room. dadi gave her a bangle
da=yeh manik ki mom ka ha, abse tumhara
n=dadi.. please ma yeh nahi le sakti. ap janti ha yeh shadi..
da=ha janti hu, ke yeh shadi se tum khush nahi ho, manik khush nahi ha. par ma yeh janti hu ke tum usse khush rakh sakti ho
n=nahi dadi, humare beech koi pyar nahi ha. yeh shadi sirf ap ki khwahish ke mutabik hui ha. manik aliya ko chahte ha.
da=nandini, bachpan se manik mere pass raha ha, humesha uski har dil ki baat usne mujhse kaha ha. bina kahe uski man ki baat ma humesha samajh jati thi.. kyuki uska maan uski akhome jhalakta tha. woh apni bato se sabko gumrah karsakta tha..par uski akhen... woh kabhi jhut nahi bol pati thi., aur jab woh kehta ha ke woh aliya ko chahta ha uski akhome mujhe sacchai nahi nazar ati...
n=par dadi.. ma
da=dekho beta ma nahi kehti ke tumhe usse pyar karna chahiye, par jis vishwas se tumne usse shadi ki ha, is rishtey ke khatir, is bandhan ke khatir ek mauka do khudko, is rishte ko aur manik ko. kyuki mujhe pura yakeen ha ke tum mere manik ke liye ekdam sahi ladki ho. ab jaw apne kamreme aur ghabrana mat main tumhare sath hu
n=ji dadi, ap sojayiye .
nandini comes to her room which is actually manik's room. but from now on its her and manik's room. she walks upto the dresser and starts taking off her jewelery. dadi's words were running through her mind
FLASHBACK
m=how dare you?? tumhari himmat kaisi hui dadi se kehne ki tum iss shadi keliye tayyar ho?? i mean.. tum meri P.A .. you know that ke main kisi aur se pyar karta hu.. then???
n=sir .. im sorry par apko mujhse shadi karni ha.. apki dadi ne mujhe kasam aur wasta dia ha .. main unhe mana nahi karpayi..
m=listen meri dadi ko blame mat karo, woh toa bohot innocent ha. tum apni baat kyu nahi karti ke tumhe lalaj hogaya ha...kaho kitna paisa chahiye
n=bass kijiye sir... mujhe apki daulat ki koi shokh nahi ha
m=just stop your nonsense and acting... let me just warn you ke is shadi keliye haa kehkar tumne apni life ki sabse bari mistake karli ha.. and i'll make sure you do regret about your own decision
FLASHBACK ENDS
nandini's thoughts end when she heard the door being slammed hard. she looked through the mirror . it was manik with an angry look towards her. nandini turned around and faced him. manik walked up to the bed and took a pillow from there and throwed it on the floor. then he walked up to nandini and holded her arm tightly and dragged her towards the pillow and pushed her on the floor.
n=ouucchh...
m=this is your place ms murthy... aur ajse tum yahi par pari rahogi.yeh shadi kitni bari bhul thi yeh tumhe ab pata chalega... aur ha main ek bar dus bar dohrata nahi hu... mujhse dur raho, meri zindagi se aur meri cheeso se bhi samjhi???

Manik switched the lights off and lied down on the bed leaving a hurt nandini alone. Nandini arranged the pillow and lied down on the floor.

N(in mind)=yeh shadi mane apni wajase nahi ki ha, rishab ki wajase ki ha. Im sorry sir, par apki dadi ne mujhe rishab ki kasam di thi jisse ma nahi tor sakti thi, ap chahiye mane ya na mane, main har wo kasam nibhaungi jo humne phere lete waqt lie the,

M(in mind)=ill make sure ke tumhari life hell banjaye, just wait and watch. Before 6 months youll leave this house. I will make sure without hurting dadi, I can throw you out of my life...

Next morning.

Nandini came out of the washroom after taking a bath. She went upto the mirror and put sindoor in her forehead. While putting sindoor she looked at sleeping manik through the mirror. He was sleeping like a child. His each and every word was echoing in her ears. She heard the knock on the door and opened it.

N=dadi app... good morning

Da=sorry beta, disturb kia subhah

N=nahi dadi, ma bahar anehi wali thi.. ap mujhe awaj dedeti ma ajati...

Da=are koi bat nahi. Ma toa tum dono keliye coffee layi thi. Manik uth gaya??

N=nahi soraha ha..

Da=theek ha usse jaga do... usko late horaha ha.. office keliye aur tum dono ready hokar niche ajaw nashte keliye

N=jee dadi

Nandini took the tray of coffee and closed the door. When she turned she saw manik going inside the washroom throwing a glare over her. Nandini kept his coffee beside the bed table and went downstairs to make breakfast

After sometime manik came downstairs and walked up to dining table . nandini was serving breakfast to dadi.

M=morning dadi, main office jaraha hu

Da=are manik, rukh ja, nashta karle

M=dadi um not hungry.. badme khalunga

Da=are par...

M=dadi um getting late meeting ha meri.

Da=accha theek ha. Toa nandini ko lekar jaa

M=what? Why??

Da=what kyu??? Yeh bhi tere office me kam karti ha na, toa alag alag kyu jawge??? Ajse tum dono sath jawge aur sath office se wapas aoge.. okay??

Manan looked at eachother. Manik didn't say anything just took blessings and left the house.

Da=ja beta..

Na=jee dadi, ap apna khayal rakhiyega.

Nandini went out and saw manik was already sitting inside the car. She opened the door and sat inside. Manik started to drive and took the opposite direction of the office route. Nandini was confused but manik wasn't ready to answer her any of the questions. After sometime manik stopped the car and got down from the car and dragged nandini out of the car

N=manik..yeh aap

M=dadi ki wajase tumhe sath leke ana parega..par ab yahase tumhara mera rasta alag ha..tum office kaise aogi, yeh tumhara headache ha mera nahi...

N=par..yaha toa koi auto taxi nahi milti...aur office ka time

M=that's your business... I wanna see u on time in office ms murthy. Aur ha yaad rakhna um your boss..not ur so called husband

Nandini had tears in her eyes.manik sat in the car and drove from there. Nandini was standing alone there wiping her tears.

N=ab ma yahase kaise jau office. Yaha se office ka rasta ekdam ulta ha..koi transport bhi nahi ha..

Nandini began to walk and walk but there was no sign of any auto or taxi. After walking for one hour she got an auto for the office

Nandini reached the office at 10.30. everybody was looking at her . she went to her cabin which was connected to maniks cabin. She reported manik

N=sir..

M=ms murthy, u realized that u have office. Mujhe toa laga ke aap ne khudke time table bana lia ha..

N=sir app,

M=apki neend khul gayi toa jayiye aur jo files mane apko check karneko kaha tha jake lekar ayiye ... half an hour me meeting ha I need to present those..

N=sir.. wo.. files..

M=kya hua??? Complete nahi hue??

N=sir..kal shadi thi..toa office nahi ayi... pending ha

M=that's none of my business.. shadi apki thi meri nahi... so yeh sab excuse nahi chalega aur ha apko bata du agar chutti leni thi u shud have given an application. Apko pata ha na begar application ke ekdin ki absence me do din ki salary kat jati ha...so um sorry. Nothing to do..

Nandini was thinking how can he be so much cruel to her. Manik gave a smirk and came infront of her

M=its just the beginning.. wait and watch... what I do to you

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No manik very much cruel to nandini...please jaldi jaldi make realize them true love..dadi words awesome..u written so well..thank u for PM me..please update it fast

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