akdha os~His true love~updated

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hey guys..this is the os i presented for the os compition..i thought to post it as a new thread..so here is the story..please leave your comments and like..I'm very sory for the mistakes.. 😃


<font size="4">Today is the most important day of jodha's life.like every girls she too waited for today.but,she couldn't understand her feelings.
"what happen to me..today is my wedding..but i feel something wrong..oh jodha..just relax..you overthink..now go and ready.."she thought to herself.
yes,she is going to marry because of her parents.also she too didn't reject the proposal.but she don't have any feelings toward the groom.also she dont have a boyfriend.she don't know much about him.even she didn't have interest about it.she is only 21 years old.she want to enjoy her life as a girls.with her best friend.normaly the bride is eagerly wait for her groom.but jodha,she is waiting for him.he is none other than jalal.her best childhood friend.but will he come?will he come to wish her.?will he come to bless her for happy married life?how could he do this.how could he see his dreamgirl marry someone else.how could he see his love marry someone else.how can he bear it.she is his one and only true love of his life.she is the his reason to live.yes,he is a son of a biggest businessmen.he have every thing without someone's love.his parents live in their business world.from childhood,they didnt have the time for their son.he felt loneliness of his life.but after met jodha,he laughed his heartout,cried his heartout,studied,travelled with her.they met in their prymery class.from then they did everything together.she was the light of his darck life.she was the reason behind his smile.also now,she is the reason but not for his smile,for his hot tears,for his pain.he cried,he cried his heartout,not only today,he cried from that day,the day when he heared about her marriage with someone else.he wanted to say to her about his feelings for her.but he didn't have a sthrenge to do that.he feared about her rejection.so now,he took a desision,its not to propose her but to say goodbye to her.not only to her,to the whole world.he stood up from the corner of the room and went near the dresser.he opened the locker and took a little bottle which is filled with sleeping phills.he was about to put them to his mouth but his phone inturrupt.he knew the caller.yes, she is waiting for him.but what to do.how can he go there.today is the first day he is going to lie her.also he wanted to hear her sweet voice for the last time of his life.so he disided to answer to the call.he took a long breath.
"h..hello.."he tried his best to hide his pain.
"jalal..what are you doing..don't you come..please come fast..I'm waiting for you.."she almost shouted at him.
"s..sorry..jodha..i..I'll not come today.."
hearing this jodha's eyes widened due to the shock.
"what..jalal..are drunk..please its not a joke ok.."
"no..no jodha..i can't come today..because..because im not well..i..i have fever..plzz..try to understand jo.."he somehow controlled his voice.
"ok..then I'll not go out from this room ok.."he shut his eyes tightly and bit his lowr lip tightly to hold his pain.
"please jo..try to understand.."he pleaded.
"ok..then I'll never talk to you..ok..bye"
this made his heart like a shattered vase.but still he controlled his voice.
"please jo..don't do this to me..please promise me..promise me that you will never angry with me..please jo.."this time his voice is sheken.he can't speek further.
after hear his voice jodha's heart shatterd.she worriedly asked
"jalal..are you ok na.."but she didnt get any reply from him.she again asked but he didnt reply.her heart felt unknown fear about him.without wasting any second she ran out from the room.everyone who came to the wedding shockingly watching her running out toward the car.her mother and sister to followed her shouting to her but she didn't stoped nor looked at them.she immediatly setteled herself in the car and drove fast to jalal's house.she very well knew that something wrong with jalal.she prayed to god for him every second.her cheek wet with tears.otherhand jalal is crying his heart out.he don't have any hopes to live.he felt like lost his everything.he took his phone and looked at its wallpaper.it is jodha's beautyful photo.he immediatly stood up and went near to the dresser.he took the bottle of sleeping phills and again looked at the photo.then he loudly said while crying
"i love you jodha..i don't want to live without you..if i didnt do this i will die from burst my heart.i cant bear this pain anymore..please dont angry with me..i love you more than anything...i love you.."saying this he was about to put them to his mouth but someone frocbly grabed it from his hand threw it on the ground.he shocked and looked at the person.he could see jodha with pool of tears.
"j..jodha..how did you come in?"
"why..don't you know that i have extra key of your room.."
her cheek and eyes are completly red due to the cry and anger.she grabed his coler and shook him shouting at him between her sob
"how dare you..you told na..that you love me..huh..u told na that you love me more than anything..ha..then how did u even think to do something like this..ha..answer me jalal..if i didn't come on time..what will happend..what will happen to me..did you want to hurt me..ha.."
"no..no..i can't hurt you...never.."he whispered.his cheek wet with tears.
"then..why did you think to leave me..ha..why.."
"because i can't hold this pain anymore...how can i see u with someone else..you are my love..how can i bear it..you are the only one who understand me more..you are the only one who gave love to me..i dont want lonliness again in my life.."he yelld.but his voice is sheken.
jodha lovingly looked at him and cupped his face from both of her hand and asked
"but..why didn't you tell me..about your feelings...ha.."he lawerd his head and said in law tone.
"i..i feared..i feared about your rejection.."jodha smiled through her tears and kissed hardly on his forehead.then ruffled his hair and said
"how can i reject my jalal.."he surprisingly looked at her and asked
"do you love me.."she blinked her teary eyes and nodded her head say to yes.then a wide smile flashed on his lip through his tears.she took him to her embrace.he cried his heartout.not for pain or hurt.but for happiness.she closed her eyes for feel his touch.
"i love you soo much jalal..i never tried to accpt this but today when i saw u try to leave me forever..i realized that you are the most important..and preciouse person in my life.."hearing this he broke the hug and cupped her face.
"i love you too..you are my life..you are he shine of my life.."they shared an eyelock and jodha immediatly hugged him very tightly.he kissed her head.finaly he won his true love...</font>
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