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Posted: 10 years ago
Very sweet story!!!! Jus came across it.
Do try for an epilogue.
Maan being patient and Geet with dilemma was all nicely put.
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi jhaanvi
just read this story of urs ..
no words to describe how beautiful it was ..splendid ..i was just carried away the way u describe relation between maan and geet ...maan love her too much ready to wait for her forever ..he kept a pi to search for geet for two years ..he waited so long ..finally he won his love ..everyone at maan's family so nice .. such kind of families exist ?..
maan with all his care and love got his geet ..love the way geet finally confess her love for her hubby ..their perfect moment of them being together ..
maan too patient and geet in her confusion ..finally led to their union ..


thank u for wonderful story ..

plz put an epilogue too otherwise the story would be incomplete ...where we can have happy maneet moments..the way they now share their life and love ..abhi tak it was maan's love ..now want to see geet's love for maan


waiting for an epilogue from u ...





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|| Epilogue 1 ||

The whine of the storm had stopped and the clouds parted away. Sunlight glittered on the blanket of white snow from last night. Bright and warm sunrays passed through the glass doors of their bedroom.

Geet was wide awake and watched maan who was in deep sleep. His skin glowed as the sunrays fell on his bare chest and face. Geet smiled when maan moved away from the sunlight feeling irritation. She didn't move an inch fearing she will wake him up. After a minute geet slides up until she block the sunrays falling on maan. She adjusted a spread around her naked body leaning over him. Geet registered his every small small detail of his prominent features. His eyes, his nose, cheek bones and lips..Those lips ..she blushes remembering their last night kiss. How he devoured her lips with his and how both drowned in passion without any care in the world. Geet feather touches with her index finger over his face trailing downwards. Her silky hair fell on his chest and few over his face. Geet froze when she felt maan's hand on her bare shoulder. Maan was awake long before geet but he was pretending to be in deep sleep as his wife was busy at staring at him. He doesn't want to disturb her as she was having her heart fill and he was enjoying extra attention from his wife.

Geet embarrassed being caught by him for staring at him shamelessly and hides her face with her palms feeling shy. Maan smiles seeing her shyness, he pulls her hands away from her face "Geeet"

Geet couldn't meet his eyes has he caught her drooling on him. What will he think about me? ki kitni besharam hoon main?

Maan whispers in her ear " besharam nahi..."

Geet open's her eyes in surprise "aapko kaise..." gasping.

Maan pins her to the bed coming over her locking her hands above pillow. "Mujhe accha lagtha hain jab tum mujhe aise dekhti ho tho.."

Geet's face becomes bright red and turns her head sideways away from his intense gaze. Maan bends his head on her neck and inhales her natural scent "I love your scent..it makes me crazy for you... it's like a pheromone... god knows how I controlled myself in this past 1 and half month. Being near and not to touch you is a pure torture." He kisses her ears taking soft ear lobes in his mouth sucking lightly. geet squirmed moaning sweetly. Maan moves to her cheeks leaving wet kisses behind.

Geet moans "Maaan..what are you doing?"

Maan murmurs kissing on her chins and then sucking it " hmmm ..what do you think geet?"

Geet is finding hard to concentrate and talking "I..I ..I don't know"

Maan pulls up to look at her, asks with raised eyebrows and mischievous glint in eyes "Don't know? Oh let me show you what I am going to do..." he pulls her spread which has covered her upper body.

Geet gasps holding the spread tight " nahiii. .maaan... nahhhiii " maan tickles her. He knew geet has a weakness for tickling. He has seen her playing with Aryan, pari and prateek and when they are about to lose in game they start tickling geet.

Geet laughs when maan tickles her everywhere. Her eyes become moist laughing so hard struggling to get free while trying to catch her breath. Maan smiles seeing her laugh so hard. Her laugh is like a musical to his ears.

Geet looks at maan when he became silent "aise kya dekhrahe ho aap.." smiling

Maan pulls her above him "promise me you will always laugh like this...promise me you will always keep that sweet smile on your face...promise me geet.."

Geet hugs him by neck keeping her head on his chest listing to thumping heart beats. " you are my reason to laugh..you are my reason to smile...and you are my happiness maan. As long as you are there I will always laugh ..smile..."

Maan rolls coming above her once again "I will always be with you...in here" keeps his hand on her heart and then takes her hand keeping on his heart "and you here"

Geet kisses his tip of nose "I love you..."

Maan "Aise nahi.." bends his head taking her lips in his for a soul scorching kiss. His hand touches her every inch of her skin leaving his mark biting and kissing it to sooth.

Geet gasps when he felt him in her; it was a pure bliss. He lost in geet pouring out his love over her. He was so gentle and caring with her like she is some precious gift. Geet chants his name when she couldn't take it anymore. Maan takes geet's name when he hit the point of blissful pleasure. Geet hugs him tight feeling his force of life rushing through her veins. Maan says breathlessly "I love you.."

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Another week passed in their heaven

Geet was busy at kitchen making preparations for dinner menu. Maan walks to kitchen with a brown bag in his both hands while talking on phone.

Maan "Haaan maii..hum dono teek hain...haan maai next week hum aarahey hain ghar...lijiye aap geet se baath kijiye..." geet takes bag from his hands keeping them on kitchen wooden slab. Maan gives cell to geet who was waiting for him to hand over the call.

Geet excitedly takes cell from him"Namaste sasumai.. ghar main sabb kaise hain..." maan looks at geet with naughty glint in his eyes when he finds her dress is way too sexy for her. She wore his shirt and faded jeans shorts; It is the same short which he picked on from a mall the other day. Geet threw that short at his face when he asked her to wear it mall's changing room. Her long toned sexy legs are looking more prominent in those shorts. Maan takes one around of her whistling and comes behind putting his arms across her waist holding her stomach. Geet is still talking with sasumai, her voice trembled when maan's hand on her bare waist under the shirt. Over that he is kissing on her collarbone biting the tender skin and then soothing with wet kisses. "saaassuuu maaai mu-mu-mujhee...ja-ja-jaaana""

Sasumai "Kya huwa beta..tum aise q baat karrahi hon?"

Naintara takes phone from sasumai who stood beside sasumai and listening their conversation. "Maai mujhe bhi baat karni han apni jetaniji se..."sasumai laughs at naina.

Naina "Kya haal hain jetaniji...kaise hain honey aur moon?" in hush voice "jaada thand tho nahi lagrahi hain na? I hope devar ji aapko garam rakkhey hongey.."

Geet blushes hard but this time she didn't shutter or blabbered "Nainaaa bhaaabhi... aap bhi naa...aap hamesha meri tang keechte ho"

Naina froze hearing geet talk clearly without shuttering "Geeet... " Naina is speechless. What a change in geet

Maan whispers in geet's another ear "Naina bhaahi ki bholti bandh kardi tumne..." geet hits his arms which was on her stomach.

Aaliya comes with Aryan in her arms. She takes phone from frozen naina "hello... Maan?"

Geet "Nahi main geet hoon bhaabhi.."

Aaliya can sense a change in geet's tone "Geet...aisa kya kehdiya tumne..naina statue bangai hain...aur uski bholti bandh karwadi tumne...dev kitne saalon se try karraha tha...aaj tumne wo kardiya..."

Aryan makes fuss screaming when aaliya didn't give him phone to talk with his favorite chaachi. Before geet say anything aliya "Heyloo Aryan se baath karo.."

Aryan "Chaaaccchiii when you are coming back..I miss youuu...and your stories...are you bring me toys right? Aur haa I want girl baby to play with..." aaliya closes his mouth before he blabbers anything.

Geet coughs hearing Aryan say girl baby maan also blushes listing to aryan's demand. Jaroor hey mere dono bhabhiyon ki kehana hain.. Maan loves kids so much but not yet it's too early to talk about babies with geet. First he wants to know what geet wants.

Aaliya "Geet geet..are u there?" geet clears her throat "ji ji bhaahi.."

Aaliya "Wo Aryan aise hi""

Geet "arre kohi baat nahi bhaabhi...wo tho abhi baccha hain.."

Aaliya left a sigh "accha he bathavo hamare devar tumhari teekse khayal rakkraha hain ki nahi?"

Naina sits with aaliya feeling happy for geet and maan. Finally geet is opening up with all, she reacted to her teasing. In past she never talked back or reacted to any of her comments. Its good thing she did it at last.

Geet blushes when maan whispers "bolo bolo main kaise khayal rakkrah hun..tumhra..bolo geet..bolo bolo." He bites her ears naughtily. Geet yelps in sweet pain ahhh

Aaliya & Naina both "Geet kya huwa...tum chillai q"

Geet smiles mischievously trying to shove maan's face away from her "woh ..kuch nahi bhaahi woh ek badmaash cheeti ne kaata.."

Maan blurts out without realizing that his both bhaahi's are listening them "Mujhe cheeti kaha..aur badmaash bhi? Hhmm? "

Aaliya and naina bursts into pit of laugher and pretends they didn't hear him. Naina says "geet uss badmaash cheeti ko shahed (honey) matt do..warna aur katega...bhooka rakkho do din.. akal teekane main aajayega.."

Geet laughs at naina's comment. That's a surprise for aaliya and naina. Geet never laughed freely without any restraint like this before. They never heard her laughter nor seen her doing that often. Both sides became silent. Geet breaks the silence "Naina Bhaahi.. pari aur prateek dono teek hain na...mujhe usne baat kaewadijeyna..agar wo dono waha hain tho.."

Naina "wo dono apne papa ke saat swimming pool main hain..aaj Sunday hain na..isilye dev ne dono ko swimming lessons derahey hain.."

Aaliya becomes emotional "Geet..we can't wait to see you.. bass jaldhi ghar aajavo.."

Geet eyes moistens, she is touched with their love and affection towards her. How many families are blessed to have a bahus and bhabhi's like them.

Geet "Ji bhabhi...ji main rakkthi hun" geet cuts the call and turns around hiding her face in maan's chest hugging.

Maan pats her head gently "pagali...ghar main sabb ko miss karrahi ho? Mujhe pata hain..tum kuch bhi nahi kehti per mujhe sabb pata hain isilye maine hi ghar call kiya tha..."

Geet "I miss everyone..maan.. I want to go home"

Maan hugs her kissing her forehead "Soon ...soon geet.. par philhal mujhe kisine abhi takk honey nahi diya hain iss badmash cheeti ko..pehale mera honey do aur baad main ghar jaayengey.." says in naughty tone.

Geet pulls away from his hug looking at him in odd expression "Ek minute..." maan lets her go wondering what's that look for.

Geet brings honey bottle from fridge "hey lijiye aapke honey...jaldi khaalijiga... mujhe ghar jaana hain.." gives him the bottle innocently.

Maan looks at her dumbfounded. He hits his head with the bottle "Geeet maine he honey nahi kahatha..."

Geet asks in confusion "Tho kounsa honey chahiye aapko..." she looks around the kitchen "yaha tho sirf heyi brand ka hain..."

Maan "abhi baththa hun" he keeps the honey bottle on kitchen slab. Without warning he picks her up in arms and places her on the slab. Geet yelps when he pins her on the wooden slab swiping things on table aside.

Maan stands between her legs leaning on her. He pins her both hands above her head. Maan fans his breath on her face which makes geet to moan sweetly "iss badmash cheeti ko geet ki shahed chahiye..."

Geet closes her eyes smiling at maan, leaning back on slab. Maan bends his head to take her lips in his for a kiss. Geet circles her arms around his neck and locks her slender legs around his waist. Geet "Maaannn bedroom.." Maan lifts her up above the slab and walks to their bedroom with intension of collecting as much as honey from geet tonight.

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EPILOGUE 2 - BELOW

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|| Epilogue 2 ||

It's been a month since Geet and maan are back from honeymoon. Everyone at home is surprised to see cheerful, bubbly and happy geet. Maan's mai was in tears seeing her beta - bahu so happy together. She presents geet a khandhani paayals on satyanarayan pooja as it was a tradition in their family every newlywed couple should sit at pooja and gets a gift from mai. Even aaliya and naina got a khandhani haar aur kadi each one of them.

Geet has overcome all her fears and past torments she had to go through in her family. She is happy here; maan never let her alone for a second whenever he is at home. He took her out at family gathers and official parties proudly introducing to his friends, relatives and business associates but never let anyone come near her, uff possessive hubby and she likes that thing about him..Even she is no different than maan super possessive wifey too... He even asked her to join office with him if she likes to work. But today she receives a call from her Nandini bhabhi, her brother Jeetu's wife begging to save her from her brother and inhuman family.

Geet rushes to the hospital address which her bhabhi told on phone. She asks at the reception about the patient name Nandini Jeetu Handa. After getting the room number she didn't waste another second there fearing what might happen if she don't reach in time.

Geet bangs opens the door calling for her bhabhi "Nandini bhabhiii..."

Nandini was lying on bed in blue hospital gown crying, begging to her brother, mother and father not to kill her child.

Doctor asks who let her inside and calls for security to throw her out. Geet rushes to her bhabhi and hugs her tightly.

Nanadini cries in her arms, she is so weak and pale due to crying since how long god knows "geet meri bacchi..meri bacchi ko bachalo...hey log meri bacchi ko maarna chahate hain..."

Jeetu shouts at geet "tum..tum yaha kya karrahi hon...chali javoo yaha se... "

Geet's mother "Geet.. javo yaha se tum insab main matt pado...javo apne ghar...apne pati ke paas..."

Geet's Father " hey manoose yaha bhi aagai...jeetu dakkehy maarkey bahar nikhaal isse yaha se.."

By then security was there to drag geet out, doctor orders them to take her out.

Nandini cries "geet...geet hey log meri bacchi ko mere pate main hi maarna chahate hain...q ki iss baar bhi lakdhi nahi na isisliye...pehale do bar main chup rahi par aur nahi rehsakthi main...hey meri bhi bacchi hain..main inne maarna nahi chahathi...please meri bacchi bachalo..sirf tum meri madad karsakthi hon... meri baachi kuch huwa tho main zinda nahi rahungi geet..please mujhe iss janwaron se bachalo..."

Jeetu comes forward to hit nandini hearing her call them janwar

Geet stops him before he hit nandini. Nandini hugs geet by waist hiding her face ion her stomach fearing to get hit by jeetu.

Geet "bayya... agar bhabhi ko chuwa tho...mujhse bura kohi nahi hoga"

Doctor tells security to take her out, If she is a old geet from 3 months back, she might have not said or done anything. But this geet is confident, brave and wiser one.

Geet yells at security guards pointing at them "Heyyy kabardar ek kadam bhi aaget badaya tho...tum log janthe nahi ho ..agar ek karoch bhi mujper aaya tho anjaam accha nahi hoga.. back off..I said back off.."

A small crowd gathered outside watching them. Geet's mother comes near to geet to slap her. But someone holds her hand in mid before she hit geet.

Geet's sasumai comes infront of geet's mother "Samdanji aap hey kya karrahey hain...apni beti...hamari ghar ki lakshmi per haat utarahi thi.."

Geet was on the way to home form office and called home to inform where she is going and why. Aaliya, Naina, dev, Shiv, sasumai, papji , jia and maan everyone is standing behind geet waiting patiently for geet to talk as its time geet fight back all the jurms her family done on her and her sister and bhahi nandini.

Geet looks at them and feels proud of them. Her confidence and strength grew 1000 times more finding them at her side. Geet "Aaliya bhabhi...aap nandini bhabhi ko zara bahar lekey jahiye...uski halath bahut karaab hain.."

Jeetu "tum usse kahi nahi lejaasakthi...woh meri biwi hain...main jo chahye woh karsaktha hun uskey saath ...tum koun hoti ho mujhe rokhnewaali" he drags nandini by hair to bed again. All three hot blooded khurana men reacted immediately seeing that but geet stopped them in mid..

Geet walks to jeetu "Bayya.. aapko aurat ka matlab pata hain?" but Jeetu snide at her ignoring her. "Ek aurat kisiki beti hoti hain...ek aurat kisiki behan hoti hain.. ek aurath kisiki maa hoti hain... ek aurat kisiki biwi hoti hain.."

Geet "aapko janam deniwali ek aurat hain...apko har buri nazar se raksha karnekeliye rakhi bandewali ek aurat hain...aapki wansh aagey badanewali ek aurat hain..."

Jeetu "tum hey lecture kisi aur ko do mujhe nahi.. baba issi kahu ..yaha se jaaen keliye..warna anjaam accha nahi hoga.."

But geet continued "Bayya ittna bhi haiwaan matt bano ki aap apne ki bacchi ka katal karna chahte hain...uss masoom ki kya galthi hain...bhahi ki kya galthi hain...jo bagwaan ne diya hain usi main aapko kush hona hoga...betiyan lakshmi hoti.,..please aisa matt karoo..warna bhabhi marjaheygi.." geet holds his hand.

Jeetu pushes geet back on floor. Before she hit floor maan and dev saves her from the fall. Shiv holds jeetu's collar "Tumhari ittni jurrat hamri ghar ke beti /bahu per haat utata hain...Officer you may come in now..." shiv pushes him at police but before that maan delivers a hard pnuch at jeetu to which he falls at officer's feet. Lady SI cuffs him and tells lady constable to cuff get's mother and father.

Jeetu screams at police "kis aadhar per mujhe arrest karrehy ho..." Nandini comes with aaliya after changing "Meri complaint ke adhar per...meri do betion ko pate main hi katal karne ki hurm main aur theesri beti ko marwaane ki koshish karne keliye..sirf mujhe ya meri beti ko maarene ki koshish karne keliye nahi...jo tum long ne geet aur preeto per kitna julm kiya hain uss saare jurm keliye main gava hun...aaj tak maine sabb sehate aayi..sirf iss aas main.. ki ek din aap badaljavoge...maaji aur papaji badaljaenge..per nahi tum log insaan ke roop main haiwaan ho...agar geet samay per nahi aathi tho meri bacchi ko inn logon ne.." nandini sobs closing her mouth with dupatta.

Lady SI " chalo ..I will show you the power of a girl.. Let's go.."

Nandini hugs geet saying how thankful she is and she will always be in debt of her. Geet wipes her tears and tells her that she is always there for her if she needs anything.

Geet's Papaji Veerendar Khurana walks to geet "I am so proud of you beta.."

Everyone hugs geet telling her how brave and confidently she faced her brother, mother and father. Maan hugs her kissing her forehead "I am so proud to call you my wife geet..but don't you ever pull that stunt again the way you did with your brother...what if something happened to you.." Geet hugs him feeling so loved and touched "Jabb tak meri parivar mere saath hain mujhe kuch nahi hoga...especially aap"

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Two years later

Geet & maan blessed with two twin daughters. They name them Shakti and Yukti. Aaliya and shiv also blessed a boy again. Jia is happily married now with her husband. Nandini joined NGO and had a daughter; she named her after geet. Jeetu, geet's mother and father were sentenced 10 years prison. And everyone lived happily ever after.

|| A GIRL'S STRUGGLE IS A NEVER ENDING STORY ||

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|| Author's Note ||

Hello Readers/Writers

Here ends my journey with SHRIMATI. It's been very short but pleasant and wonderful journey so far with you all. Hope the ending is as per your liking. Thanks for being with me through out the short journey with SHRIMATI. I am humbled with your love and support along with your lovely comments and likes. I will reply to all comments some time later. Don't think I am ignoring your comments, I hardly get time to update let alone replying to your comments but once I settle with all updates will reply. Ignore the mistakes, PRESS LIKE & COMMENT.

THANK YOU ALL

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Jhaanvi

Edited by JaasChowdhray - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome
Thank u so much for the long long epilog
Specially liked epilog 1 with all the romance😳
Liked naughty maan so much

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story

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can we have a season 2 pls with age gap concept i.e. elder geet😳

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awsm eepilog..get beome so strrong and brave...lovvve maneet bonding
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It was awesome. Geet was enjoying every moment with maan. She is feeling blessed having such a caring husband and family. When she talked her in laws, she got emotional seeing their love and affection for her. Finally they were back from their honeymoon and enjoying their life with their family. Geet got so much love and care from that family which increases her confidence. When she gets to know about nandanI, she reached their to rescue her. Geet's family is really horrible. They were about to kill a unborn baby but with geet and her in law's help she saved nandini. Ending was amazing. Maneet blessed with two beautiful daughters. I loved this story very Much.

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