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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: uma88

Well, am back with my prediction,

Either nandu father had a hand in arnav death, maybe like he was sent by someone or he was sent to spy arnav, or my second option is, nandu father witness the murder and was threatened, not to spill anything, lets see, wil be waiting eagerly for next chapters.

If nandu is not the one, who kissed manik, after the death of their parents, who was that? Wil she make a comeback in manik life, thanks for the update and scrap dear.


Hehehe I just love reading ur comment..Predictions.ahhh I toh just love them...Lets see what happens further...😉😛😆
I hope ur eagerness remains for next updates too..
Thanks for the lovely comment...
Thanks for reading n commenting n sharing ur views..😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

JAAN TUNE DIL JIT LIYA YR

Thank yu so much😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: musicialtie

my harry potter starter... first off all a big 🤗 🤗

what an update man.. terrific... superb... impressive...

loved the way they clear out their confusion...

loved the way u penned it...

and mostly loved the kiss and sleeping one...😳. u know na i m so gutter minded when it comes to manan...😉

baki k liye scrap chk kare.

just loved...

ps- thanks for giving ArShi and MaNan in one roof...

Heheh Aashu..thank yu so much yar...
Thank yu...terrific..superb..impressive..means alot...
am glad ki u loved..
well in that case am tooo..:P :P
Heheh arshi n Manan..yeah !!!
Thanks for the lovely comment aashu..made my day u know😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Dhariya_

wow

I loved I like manan bond and the flashback was superb but why they were seprated plz clear that in some updates I am curious to know
Cont soon

Thank yu so much...
am glad ki u loved manan...
well I hope ur curiosity remains further..
will continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: nimarious

hari mind blowing update
awesome flashback...
so manik forgiven nandini?????
but what happen to Alya????
u gave long update...that too excellent...
keep going girl...
just love ur writing
plz continue soon...

Thank yu so much...
welll he had forgiven..
well aliya..lets see
am glad ki its long enough..
love my writing..aweee..Thaanks so much
will continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank yu so mcuh😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: priya_sejwal

Lovely update...

Loved the way they cleared all their issues...adorable manan
Beautifully written...Superbbb part
Thnk uh for pm
Update soon

Thank yu so much..
am glad ki u loved it...yeah !! indeed they are..
will update soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
MaNan FF : "Love Keeps US Together"

~CHAPTER 9~


A real relationship has fights,trust,faith,tears,pain,arguements, patience,jealosyand LOVE but not doubts.

They slept peacefully.But they dont have any idea what tomorrow had planned for them.

Nandini wakes up due to the phone sound.She checks her phone and sees its not her phone and sees Manik's phone on the table.She gets up from the bed without disturbing Manik's sleep and goes to take the phone.She sees that it is Aliya who is calling.Then suddenly she drops the phone on the carpet.Realization strikes her.

She is like how can I cheat Aliya.Aliya is Manik's girlfriend.How can I sleep with Manik like this ? Manik n me are no more children to sleep like this.How can I forget this damn thing yar !! HOw can I just forget it.Manik is now someone's boy friend.If Manik was my boyfriend and if he sleeps with someother girl then I will not like it definitely.No girl will like it.I know we are friends but society will not think like this na.What about mumma and papa ? WHat will they think of me ? Manik doesn't give a damn about anything.He doesn't care what the society thinks but I need to be careful na.I am cheating on Aliya directly or indirectly.Knowingly or unknowingly.Aliya will be shattered if she knows about this.She loves Manik alotI can't let their relationship break and that too because of me.I need to go before Manik wakes up because once he opens his eyes then I cant go out only.I need to go.

My POV

All the while she was crying thinking that she cheated on Aliya.How innocent she is and how understanding.She think it's a mistake and she s cheating on Aliya.Does Aliya really deserve those tears ?

Manik wakes up and finds other side of bed empty.He just couldn't believe.He got off from the bed and searched for her in the whole damn mansion.Cabir also woke up due to Manik.He asks him what happened ? Manik says Nandini is missing ? Cabir says What !! Manik says yeah !! Wait i will call her.He calls her but she doesn't pick up the phone.He tries so many times but she doesn't pick it up and finally the phone is switched off.Arghhh !! damn Nandini where are you ? I just hope you are safe !! Cabir says relax !! Lets go to her house .Manik asks if we know the address then we can go na ? If I had known it I would have gone long back.This girl na !! Cabir says we can get that from college admission book right !! chalo!! Manik checks his phone in mean time for any messages and he sees missed calls of Aliya in the morning.It strikes Manik !! Damn !! he throws the phone in frustration.Cabir asks what happened Manik ? Manik just says I hope she didnt leave thinking like that ? I just hope.Cabir says what thinking like that ? Say clearly dammit .Manik says I guess she thought she is cheating on Aliya as yesterday we slept with each other.Not like that one we just cleared our misunderstanding and she is my long lost buddy ,my childhood friend so we just slept like .U understanding na ? Cabir smiles n says yeah !! baba am understanding.Dont fear I wont think in that way.Cabir asks so ? So she thought she is cheating on aliya by sleeping with me ,so she left I guess so thats the reason as Aliya's misssed calls are there.She must have seen it n went.Damn man !! Cabir says cool down .Lets fresh up and go to college and will get her address and go to her house ok ? Manik agrees and says yeah !! better idea !! They both fresh up and goes towards the door and opens it and they get their first shock.Mukti,Aliya n Dhruv are standing.

Perfect timing !! Cabir utters in the way only Manik could hear.Manik n Cabir see each other.Silence is broken down by Dhruv.Dhruv asks what happened to yu guys ? These all bandages.Yu guys ok ? Aliya also says yes Manik !! What happened baby ? Yu are ok na ?Cabir says actually yesterday we met with an accident .Mukti says What ? But how ? Woh !! We both were talking n laughing we didnt see that that a truck was coming from front so we just lost control n we were brought taken to hospital by some people and we came home late night .So we just over slept.Manik sais their amazing car accident story.Cabir says Yeah !! aliya shouts at them can't yu be careful ? God dammit what if something happens to yu guys ?Mukti also agrees and says exactly guys and why yu didnt call us ? Dhruv also asks the same.Cabir says woh !! it happened late night.For us only it took time to digest that we met with an accident ? Yes na Manik ? Yeah yeah !! Cabir is right !! Dhruv says chalo then lets stay here only today.Its not good for yu guys to come out.Mukti says Yeah !! I too agree .Chalo yu both take rest and say did u have breakfast ? Stupid me na ? wait I will make it.Aliya syas Yeah ! I will also help .They both made their way to kitchen.Dhruv,Manik and Cabir sat on the couch.Manik n Cair are looking and manik is aying with eyes Yar !! Make some plan !! I need to meet her ASAP .Please yar !! Cabir says Yeah !! wait wait...Dhruv asks are yu both ok ? They both says yeah !! Better than never.They smile awkwardly.

Mukti says guys here is your breakfast.They both calmly have it and suddenly Manik's phone beeps.It's Nandini's message.Manik sees it but along with Manik it is seen by a pair of eyes.Manik is like really happy but just sits calmly.They go to wash their hands and Manik opens the message n reads out.
Have medicines after eating breakfast.I kept ur's n cabir's medicines outside ok ? and am good.Dont worry about me :) :)

Well Nandu I know u cant lie.I know what u r going through.He thinks to himself and Cabir n he go upstairs to have medicines.Here Aliya is the one who gets angry seeing Nandini's message.She thinks what is Manik doing with Nandini ? Why Nandini is messaging him ?.Manik tries to call Nandini but it is switched off.Fine Nandu !! Lets have it in ur way.Lets see how will yu run away from me ? U really messed up with me again.Cabir says why dont we go to college .Maybe she went to college.Manik says U r right.Lets go.Cabir n Manik make their way downstairs.Cabir says Yar !! lets go to college.Am really getting irritated staying here.I need some fresh air.Manik says Yeam !! me too.Just feeling suffocated.Lets go to college .Will feel better and no more arguements.Thats final.Well who the dare to say No to Manik Malhotra.EVeryone made their way to college.Manik n Cabir got down first n said we will back.Have some work.They both ran towards the college.Why they are behaving so weird today exclaimed Mukti.Yeah !! Dhruv says I second that.Aliya is getting suspicious about Manik.Guys I will be back soon and Aliya too went.She followed them n she saw they both are going towards medical block.Why are they going to medical block ? She follows them and she sees they are asking a boy about something and they left with disappointment.She stops the boy and asks him what they have asked ? He says Whther Nandini came to college or not ?Aliya fumes in anger.Nandini is creating problems.Need to deal with her.I need to take charge on her.I wont let Manik go out of my hands.I need to do something before its too late.

My POV

Jealousy or Doubt ? Jealousy is better than doubt.Trust should be important .Realtionships are about trust and if you have to play detective in your relationship ,then it's time to move on.Here Aliya is being a detective.Spying on Manik.She could have just asked him directly.But she didnt ? She did something which had broken their trust,which had broken their relationship.Yu know Love is weakest when there is more doubt than trust but LOVE is strongest when we learn to trust inspite doubts.Love ..Hmm Do Aliya really loves Manik ? To know what she did and what happened to their relationship and whether she loves or not ..Stay tuned...

Next Chapter : CHAPTER 10

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So ? How is it ? I know I added my POV in it .I hope u liked it n from now on I will add my POV in every update.It is like a precap to next update.SO I hope u like it .DO Share ur views n comment n like it if yu like it.I dont know how it turned out .Sorry if it sidappointed you.Will try to write better next time.Thanks for those lovely comments and likes.They just make my day.Am sorry if it is short.Next time long one Pakka.

Love,
Harika..Keep smiling.It looks good on yu
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm.. thnk u dear 4 daily update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it dear but dont make aliya vilian here everyone is doing the same ireally like her now so it's a bit difficult to digest me sorry if m hurt u but update was awesome cont soon

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