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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: kriti094

Wow just read all the 9 chs
thank u for ur scraps
its an amazing story
i love abhini bonding n manan ke cute moments
n my manbir toh rock as always
do updt nxt part soon

Thank yu so much...
am glad ki u find it amazing..
will update soon..
Thanks for reading n commenting..😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

Love the conclusion of ur POV, glad Mainik rea;ized the reason for her behavior, lookin 4ward 2 more...

am glad ki u liked the conclusion..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aliavardan

U r amazing... Plz do continue...

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Posted: 10 years ago
heheh will get it 2morrow😆😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
read all the parts in one go..
nicely written..
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Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz

read all the parts in one go..
nicely written..
plzzz update soon

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MaNan FF : Love Keeps US Together.

~CHAPTER 10~


The saddest thing about betrayal is that it never comes from
enemies.It comes from our loved one.

Aliya has completely lost her senses.She is fuming in anger.She just went into musical campus like she is going to murder to someone.Someone saw her going and just followed her.She sat in the musical wing and the person too sat beside her.The person asks what happened ? Why are burning like fire ? Nandini..Nandini she is messing up everything.She entered Manik's life . Need to take charge on that.He asks you want me to do anything ? No .I will take care of her in my own way.After all she is a girl.A girl can handle a girl very much.A girl knows other girl weak points.I know how a girl feels.Nandini is just a mere girl .Let me handle her.The person smiled and leaned forward and kissed her.She too kissed him.She says If I need anything I will definitely ask you.Afteraall you are one I can trust so much.The person[of course he is a boy as she kissed him] anything.You can ask me anything.Am there for you all the time.Finish her chapter soon.She can be dangerous if she gets close to Manik.She smiles wickedly soon..very soon.She gets up and goes.He too gets up and goes.He sees if anyone saw or not..

Mukti !! Have you seen Aliya Dhruv asked.No yar !! Am also searching for her from past few minutes.Me too..Can't find her.Wait !! I will call her once again.Mukti called Aliya and she picked and said am coming.Mukti says to Dhruv that she is coming.Dhruv and Manik are also missing.I dont know why they are behaving weird from the morning.Yeah !! I too feel the same.Manik and Dhruv are in the office and asking for Admission book .Well they refuse to give.Manik loses his patience and shouts at him do you have any idea with whom you are talking ? Just shut your mouth and give me the admission book dammit !!Or else from tomorrow you wont be here to refuse me.The officer got scared and handover the book.They searches for Nandini and bang on !! They gets the address.They smile and asks the receptionist do you maintain present address right ? He says yeah !! As we have to send notice if anything comes up suddenly.They says thank you and copy the address and gives the book back to him and they rush out only to welcome by Mukti,ALiya and Dhruv.

Mukti says Yar !! Where were you guys ? You just disappeared suddenly ? Cabir says Yeah !! We ..we..Mukti takes care over the situation we went to office as I need some information.Aliya asks what information ? Cabir says leave all that matter and guess what ? Mukti says what ? Cabir says Raghav is leaving the college .Mukti says wow yar !! That is something great.He always eats brain with his stupid tasks.Aliya says Yeah !!Dhruv too agrees saying he and his stupid asks just waste of time.Manik says Yeah buddy !! Mukti says so its party time ! My house @ 9:00 pm.Ok ? Cabir says Yeah !1 am ready.Without Cabir party will not be like party.Mukti says Yeah !! I agree dude..without you party will be boring.Manik says Ok then .We will meet at night .Now am going home as am really very tired.Cabir says drop me .I will also take some rest as I need to enjoy my party.Mukti says Yeah !! Ok then.You guys take care of yourselves.Drive carefully.DOnt talk in middle.and She is cut off by Cabir saying Mata JI !! Got it !! Mukti playfully hits him.Dhruv also says yeah !! take care.Aliya comes and hugs Manik and says Yeah ! Take care baby.Manik says Yeah !! Thanks Aliya..He smiles.She too smiles and kisses him on the cheek and goes.

Manik and Cabir are havaing winning smiles.Finally !! They both are alone.Lets go before someone comes and stops us .Cabir says yeah !! u r right !1 They both drove to the address.Aliya is sitting and talking to herself..Poor Nandini.I pity her.How innocent she is .But she is coming in my way.I cant let that happen.Never.Sorry Nandini for giving you pain but take it darling.It's a gift from me.She smiles wickedly.Nandini is walking fto her home after buying groceries for her home.She sees some people are following her.It is night @ 7:30 pm.She increases her pace.The people too increases their pace.They shout wait !! Nandini runs as fast as she can.But boys are fast than her.They surround her.One exclaims she is so much pretty than in photo.Yeah !! everyone exclaims.We only got order to torture her.Why dont we kill her in some other way.Some thing which gives us pleasure but tortures her.Not a bad idea though !!! Nandini is feeling like helpless.The girl inside her feared her.Though she can try to protect herslef ,her mind stopped working.She pleaded them Please leave me !! Please leave me !! Please !! she was crying so badly !! One came moving towards her.Remainig catched her..Nandini tried to free herself but she failed.The man came smiling devilishly .He was about to touch her but next second he was on the ground.

How dare you even try to touch her ? Manik roared.The boys left her and attacked him.Nandini is like she is not able to understand anything.She is in a shock.She dont know how to react.Cabir and Manik kicked goons so badly.Manik grabbed one boy's collar and asked him who gave you this order ? Answer me dammit !! He said a girl told us to torture this girl.But ,we tried to...Manik kicked him before he can complete his sentence.He asked what is that girl name ? He tld I dont know.But I can recognize her.Suddenly Manik phone rings and Manik takes phone to cut the ring.It was Aliya's call.The boy sees Aliya's image on Manik's phone and he exclaims she is the one.Manik is like what the hell are you speaking ? SHe is the girl who gave us money to torture her.Manik released him in shock.He couldn't understand anything.Cabir also listened this and he is like shocked and the goons ran for saving their life.Manik dont know how to react.He saw Nandini standing lifeless.He came towards her.He tried to catch her .But Nandini feared .She said dont touch me please.Dont come near me.!! Please ! leave me.DOnt come near me.Manik's heart ached seeing her like this.Cabir too couldnt see her.Manik slowly came towards her and sais Am Manik Nandini !1 Am Manik.urs Manik.Nandini realized that it is Manik.She just hugged him.She hugged him so hard.Cabir saw them.He wiped his tears.No one knows what is going through Nandini.

Scene shifts...

Did you complete it ? Sorry sir we couldn't .Two guys came and rescued her and one guy made me to tell the name of the girl who gave me this order.WHat ? How c an you say her name.He just grabbed the gun and shot him.The boy died.Karma doesnt leave anybody.It will find its way and it will make them pay.Aliya.

My POV


No one can understand what must be going through Nandini.Aliya made to do like this.She is a girl who should understand a girl.But sometimes money,love,lust makes us to do things blindly.But what Aliya did is very wrong . Manik and Cabir are just shocked.Betrayal from their own friend.It was indeed true betrayal never comes from enemies.It comes from our loved ones.She played with Nandini feelings.Played ??maybe killed .No one knows how much time it will take for nandini to recover.Will Aliya pay for her deeds ? Will Manik and Cabir confront her ? TO know..stay tuned.

Brace yourselves for the next one.

Have a look if you are interested..:)

Next Chapter : CHAPTER 11

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SO ? I know its disturning.Well I was hell disturbed while writing something like this.Because it is my first time I wrote something like this.Am sorry if it hurted anyone's feelings.I hope you will understand and support.Do share your views.I added my POV too at the last ,not at the middle as it disturbs the flow.Dh comment and like if you like it.Please dont forget to hit like.Thank yu for those lovely comments n likes for the previous chapter.Sorry for Aliys's fans.I didnt mean to show rude,I have already planned.So going that way.Am sorry to Aliya fans


Love,
Harika..Keep smiling..It looks good on you.
Edited by ..Mellifluous.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
wohh
So much happened
Alia I wanna kill her
Aww so sweet of manik
I wish nandini will be fine
Want to know the reaction after manik got to know about alia
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
I was right Alia is a pain :(

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