Shayad .. Maine pyaar kiya...... last part / pg 53

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Hello friends... * waving my hand*... 😃 how are you all... i am totally enjoying here in Detroit... the snow in the first day and now the sun in cool breeze...


can anyone forget maaneet and gf... no... not me atleast...😛... I am imagining the here in every place I have seen...😉😆... I know I am a gone case...😳...


so even here our maaneet didn't leave me... so I was writing something on our fav couple... I couldn't stop myself...


no.. no... don't jump into conclusions that I will add those places in my story... nothing of that sort is happening.. this story is purely normal.. just like my other stories...😆


The title... is ... Shayad... Maine pyaar kiya... the story is almost complete... I just need to write the climax... so I am daring to post this one... will update daily probably...😳... I will try to wrap it up in less than five parts... hope I can stick on that...😆



and don't throw Chappal and rotten eggs at me after reading the first part...



Index


part 1 - page 1 ( below )...

part 2 - Page 7 Click Here

part 3 - page 15 Click Here

part 4 - page 22 Click Here

part 5 - page 28 Click Here

part 6 - page 35 Click Here

part 7 - page 44 Click Here

last part - page 53 Click Here


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PART # 1



Today... he got what he wanted... he is free now.. divorced from his wife... Geet... now he can marry Meera, his first love... without any problems... but...Meera came beside him and slowly pressed his hand...

Meera - it's over Maan... let's move from here... but I am very happy today... the biggest obstacle in our way has been removed... we can lead our lives as we want...

when she got no reply from Maan.. she saw him... he is sitting like a statue in his place... it looked like he didn't hear Meera's words... she sighed and called him once again... Maan... this time a little loud...

MAAN then came out of his thoughts... he looked at Geet's side... which is empty... he looked around for her... Meera knew it and said... she left maan... forever... Maan looked at Meera for the first time after the judgement and Meera could read his eyes.. she knew this would pain him.. but didn't knew the extent... but she said.. let's go...

Maan got up without saying any thing... he looked around for his dadi... who was with geet all the time... and found her talking to their lawyer... Geet's lawyer... he could see she handed a cover to the lawyer and said something... the lawyer nodded and they both left...

Maan took a deep breadth and walked slowly out of the court... he saw his dadi getting into the car... as she sat and closed the door their eyes met... Maan couldn't see into her eyes... he looked away and Savitri Devi's car left from there... it's has been months his dadi talked to him... she stopped talking when she came to know about his deed... him divorcing geet... and from then she talked only when it's needed and only about the proceedings... he sighed... he thought he knew his dadi... but he couldn't believe when she stopped talking to him ... he never expected this reaction from her... he thought he could convince her...about the divorce and marrying Meera... he even said if she wanted she can give the whole property to geet... after divorce... but she didn't say anything... she supported geet in every possible way... he knew this would be tough.. indeed very tough for geet... but she will eventually move on... it will be easy for her to forget him as theirs is not a love marriage... she will forget him when she will find her true love...

Maan was brought back when he heard his name being called... he looked in the direction... Geet's lawyer came and said... Mr. Khurana ... this is for you... Geet ji ki dadi ji ne yeh diya aapke liye... he handed a cover to him and left... Maan saw the cover, then he heard Meera saying...


Meera - Geet ki dadi... Maan looked at her... Meera again said... I don't understand Maan... why ur dadi is being so stubborn... why can't she see .. you don't love her and you don't want her... and you are not the first one getting divorce... this is no crime... can't she see... we love each other ... since collage...


Maan ignored her comment and opened the cover... there is a paper folded... he opened it and he recognized the hand writing ... it's geet's... he eyes ran along with words...



Maan ji...


main kuch aur likhna chahti thi ... par aapne woh Haq mujhse cheen liye.. isliye Sirf... Maan ji likh rahi hoon...


yeh mera pehla khat hain aapke naam aur aakhri bhi... maine yeh kabhi nahi socha tha ki ek aisa din bhi aayega meri zindagi mein...


aaj aapko jo chahiye woh milgaya... aap khush honge iss waqt... aur aapko mera khat padhna bhi acha nahi lagraha hoga... par aakhri baar mere liye do minute nikal lijiye ga...


main jaa rahi hoon Maan ji ... ab aapke saamne yeh geet kabhi nahi aayegi... iss zindagi toh mein nahi... jaate jaate aapko kuch dena tha...


main bhi na kitni pagal thi na Maan ji... jab aapne talak ke kagzat par sign Karne k kaha... maine yeh poocha ki kya main apna mangalsutre pehen sakti hoon talak ke baad bhi... tab yeh nahi jaanti thi... mujhe iski zaroorat hi nahi hogi mujhe ...


kal raat jo bhi hua... uske liye mujhe maaf kardijiye... unpadh gawar samajh karr... woh meri aakhri koshish thi aapko apne paas rakhna ke liye... main bhi kitni pagal thi... aapko samajh hi nahi paayi... mujhe laga main woh sab karungi toh aap mere paas wapas aajayene... main bhul gayi.. ki pyar ki naam ki bhi koi cheez hoti hain... aur aapko mujhse pyaar nahi hai ...


ab in batonka koi matlab nahi hain... main jaa rahi hoon... hamesha ke liye... dadi ka khayal rakhiyega... main jaanti hoon... woh aapki dadi hain... aur aap unse bohut pyar karte hain... par unhone mere liye jo kuch bhi kiya uske liye main kabhi bhi unhe nahi bhool sakti hoon... unhe mera aakri Pranam dediyega... unhe main alvida nahi kehsaki...


main jaise aayi hoon waise hi jaa rahi hoon... main kuch nahi laayi... aur nahi kuch lekar jaa rahi hoon... mujhe aapke paise nahi chahiye Maan ji... jab aap hi nahi hai toh main inn kagaz ke tukdon Ka kya karungi... bas ek cheez lejarahi hoon apne saath... uske liye mujhe maaf kardijiye ga... main usse chod nahi sakti... aapki pehli nishani hain... aur uske bina main jaa bhi nahi sakti...


mera magalsutre ... nahi mera nahi... aapka diya hua magalsutre aapko jaldi hi miljaayega...


aapke do minute liye shukriya ...


Geet ( Yaha bhi kuch likhna chahti thi... phir yaad aaya ki mera Haq nahi hain.. isliye kuch nahi likhi)


Alvida... hamesha ke liye...



precap - their first meet.


Edited by -indu- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So touchy update yaar 😭 . A confused soul punishing a love. Very emotional but very intriguing. Awesome start. Continue soon dear.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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interesting start. Maan though wanted divorce but doesn't seem happy. waiting to read more and thx for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for new story
Nice update
Feeling bad for geet
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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now maan not happy with divorce
he is lost some where
meera is looking so happy
and geet wat nishani
she talking about
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So tounching story dear,
maan in his confusion,
punishing his love ,his geet,
bt he is sad also ,
the letter ws written very nicely ,
waiting for next update ,
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Posted: 10 years ago
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plz geet ko kuch nehi hona chahiye...

awesome starting...


loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely story...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very sad start... Maan blind to let her go.. Meera sounds selfish and insensitive to others.. Can't wait for story to progress... Pls cont soon.
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Congratzs... Awesome start.. Interestng continue soon

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