Part # 8
Maan was silent from then... Meera tried to cheer him but failed when maan didn't respond to her... after leaving the house he started staying at his hospital only...
next day in the court the judge asked routine questions... and Geet replied.. in favour of Maan... the judge asked Maan too... he didn't answer anything... but sat there silently... he was completely in another world... Meera tried to distract him... maan was still in his thoughts... he didn't pay attention with the happening of the court... ( I seriously don't know the procedure of court and divorce proceedings.. so I am taking Liberty to write according to my story.. plz.. don't compare with actual procedures)
Maan came out of his revive... as Meera was calling him... Maan, plz slow down...
Maan looked at the spend and slowed down a bit...
Maan called dadi... and she answered but didn't say anything...
Maan - dadi... geet ... woh ghar aayi kya...
dadi got angry and shouted at him... - nahi... she said she will come some time later... and Maan... ab toh usse akele chod dijiye... woh toh hume bhi apni aasoon dikhana nahi chahti...
Maan - dadi... plz... aap usse phone kijiye.. waise bhi main jaa raha hoon.. aap plz... usse baat karte rahiye...
Dadi- kya baat hain maan...
Maan - dadi... mujhe geet ka letter mila... aur usme...hamari engagement ring hain... bina diamond ke...
dadi - kya...
Maan - haa, dadi... mujhe darr hai ki geet ne kuch...
dadi - nahi.. nahi... woh aisa nahi karsakti...
Maan - isliye dadi... aap plz usse baat karte rahiye... main phunch raha hoon...
dadi - lekin kaha... kya aapko pata hai. woh kaha hain...
Maan - haa... aap plz jaldi kijiye... and he said the address... and ended the call...
In less than five minutes... he reaches the park.. he didn't even cared to park the car or off the engine... he pressed the brakes and left the car as it is...
Meera was shocked to see his eagerness... she parked the car and went in search of him...
she saw him searching for her shouting her name... he ran towards the other end ... but couldn't find her there... he pushed his hair back and again started to look for her.. geeettt... every minuted he is loosing is taking geet nearer to the death... he was scared even to think in those lines...
Meera came in search of him and saw dadi... at the same time maan also came there form other end and rushed to dadi...
he held dadi by her hands and asked.. dadi... geet kaha hain... mujhe usse dekhna hain...
dadi - hum nahi batayen ge maan... hume pata hain woh kaha hain ... par hum aapko nahi batayenge ki woh kaha hain...
maan - dadi... aap kyun nahi samajh rahi hain... mujhe darr lagraha hain dadi... plz batahi ye... woh kuch karna le...
dadi - toh Karne dijiye maan... aapne ne woh Haq Kho diya hain... aapne khud usse talak diya hain... toh usse Marne dijiye... agar ek doctor ki tarah baat karr rahe hain toh ... aise toh hazaron log marjaate hain... aap ko kyun padi hain uss pagal ladki ki...
maan shouted... dadi... aap geet ke baare mein aise kaise baat karsakte hain... agar geet ko kuch hogaya toh... mera kya... main kaise jiyunga uske bina... nahi dadi... plz aap batayiye... mujhe usse bacha a hain kaise bhi... dadi... plz.. dadi... maan was literally begging her... but she didn't move...
dadi - I don't understand u at all maan... ek taraf aap kehte hai ki aap Meera se pyaar karte hain... aur doosri taraf geet ke bina jina nahi chahte... aap ko khud pata nahi hain ki aapko kya chahiye... waise bhi ab koi faayda nahi hain maan... jo aapka darr tha woh sach hain...
maan looked terrified... dadi...no... plz... kehdijiye ki yeh jhoot hain... geet theek hain.. usse kuch nahi hua...
dadi - kash hum aise keh sakte maan... par aisa nahi hain.. geet ne woh diamond...
maan feel on the ground on his knees... nooo... plz geet aisa mat karo... mujhe chodke ke mat jao... main mar jaoongi geet... tumhare bina... he cried taking her name ...
dadi - ab rone se kya faayda maan... yeh sab aapko pehle socha chahiye tha... aapke paas bohut sare mauka the ... par aapne khud apni zindagi barbad ki aur saath saath geet ki bhi...
dadi - jab maine aapse shaadi ki baat ki toh aapne khud geet ko chuna... phir kyun kiya aapne yeh sab... tab aapko iss Meera ki yaad nahi aayi... kyun maan kyun...
maan slowly got up and said... mujhe ab samajh mein aaraha hain dadi...love is not what you feel for a person that you can spend ur entire life with ...but love is what you feel for a person without whom you cannot live...mujhe hamesha lagta tha ki main Meera ke saath zindagi guzaar sakta hoon... pehle bhi yehi lagta tha... collage mein... aur jab woh wapas aayi toh mujhe guilt hua ki maine usse bohut aasani se bhul gaya... par geet ki baat hi Alag hain... aaj samajh mein aaya ki main geet ke bagair jeena hi nahi chahta... yeh pyar hain dadi... shayad maine pyar kiya... nahi...shayad nahi... Maine pyaar kiya hai ... woh bhi Sirf geet se... meri zindagi mein uske alawa kisi se pyar nahi karsakta main... main Sirf aur Sirf... Geet ka Maan hoon... He shouted...GEET KA MAAN HOON ...aur kuch nahi... lekin main yeh baat samajhne mein bohut deti kardi dadi... bohut der...
Meera thought... yeh maan kya kehrahi hain...
Dadi - haa aapne sach mein der kardi maan... bohut... aapko sympathy aur pyaar mein farkh karna nahi aaya... theek hain maanlete hain ki aapne ne farkh nahi kiya... but divorce... aapne iss ki baat kaise maan liya maan... jaha se Meera aayi hain waha yeh bohut common baat hogi... par hamare Yaha ... zindagi bikhar jaati hain...aur geet jaisi ladki ke liye woh maut se kam nahi hain... kyun kiya aapne woh sab... aapne Meera ke baare mein toh socha... aur Geet ko toh bilkul bhul gaye...jisne aap ke saath phere liye... aur har woh vachan Nibhaya ... jisne aapki zindagi ko khushiyon se bhar diya... aapne usko itni takleef di...
Maan - haa dadi.. aap theek kehrahi hain... mujhe Meera se Sirf sympathy thi...jab Meera mujhe chodke gayi toh mujhe gussa aaya tha lekin itni takleef nahi hui... aur Geet ko khone ka khayal bhi mujhse sehen nahi horaha hai... aur Geet ko maine bohut takleef pohunchayi hain... he said crying... aap plz mujhe geet ke paas jaane dijiye... main usse kuch nahi hone doonga...
dadi - main aap pe kaise Bharosa karoon maan... aapke ne ek baar meri bachi ka dil tod diya hain... main aap pe kaise dobara yakeen karke uske paas bhejun...
Maan - main jaanta hoon dadi... aap sach kehrahi hain... par yeh bhi sach hain ki Sirf main hi hoon usse bacha sakta hoon... woh meri awaz sunegi toh zaroor wapas aajayegi dadi... kahi se bhi...
dadi - I don't want to agree but what you said is truth maan... woh Sirf aur Sirf aapki awaz se hi wapas a sakti hain...
maan - main promise karta hoon dadi... meri iss harkat ka jo bhi saza aap aur geet dena chahte hain woh main bhugat ne ke liye tayyar hoon... plz.. aap ek baar mujhe geet se Milne dijiye... uske baad main aapse kuch nahi maangunga ...
Meera interrupted.. maan... yeh tum kya keh rahe ho... tum mujhse pyar karte ho... tum aise kaise kehsakte ho...
maan didn't bother to listen to Meera... he contiuned to persuade dadi...
maan - dadi... mujh pe ek baar Bharosa kijiye dadi... main aapka Bharosa nahi todunga iss baar... apni jaan dedunga aisa hua toh... plz.. dadi... mujhe ek mauka chahiye bas... apni galati... sudharne ke liye... ek mauka...
Meera tried to interrupt ... but dadi silenced her by showing her hand... hum aap se baad mein baat karenge... abhi aap chup rahiye... yeh hamare Ghar ka maamla hai aur Bahar walonka dakhal andazi hum bikul bardaash nahi karenge... samjhi aap... dadi said sternly showing her big eyes...
dadi - theek hain maan... hum aapko ek mauka zaroor dena chahenge... par aapko meri ek baat manni hogi...
maan - aapki haraz baatein Manzoor hain dadi... mujhe bas geet se milna hain...
dadi - theek hain... toh jayiye... and she told where geet is...
dadi turns to Meera... and said... ab toh aapko samajh aagaya hoga ki aapki kya Jagah hain maan ki zindagi mein...
Meera - you can't do this to me... main maan se pyaar karti hoon... geet se bhi zyaada...
dadi laughed... what a joke... tum khud se pyar Karti ho... Sirf khud se... aur kisi aur se nahi... agar maan se sach mein pyar karti toh usse chodke jaati hi nahi... aur jab tumhare papa ne tumse kuch Maanta toh unhe chodke aagayi... yeh hain tumhara pyaar...
Meera - aap mere baare mein kuch nahi jaanti... toh
dadi - aur mujhe jaana bhi nahi hain... aaj se maan ki zindagi ga hospital mein koi Jagah nahi hain...
Meera - main waha Kaam karti hoon .. aap aise kaise karsakte hain...
dadi - officially nahi... kyun uske liye hamara sign zaroori hain... jaha tak hume yaad hain humne aapke appointment letter par sigh nahi kiya... humne kuch waqt ke liye hospital ko nazarandaz kiya... ab aur nahi... hum aapko aise isliye jaane deraha hain kyun ki kabhi maan aapke dost the... warna agar koi hamare pariwar ki khushiyon ke beech mein aayega hum unhe kabhi aise nahi jaane dete...and now get lost...
dadi turned and left from there leaving Meera with nothing...
Meera sat there remembering everything she did... she did everything to win her love back... even after knowing how much maan loves geet... she did this... just to get maan back... she didn't want anything but maan... now he also left her nowhere... he chose his family over his first love...
maan ran towards geet... and saw her sitting on the floor leaning on one pillar staring nothing in particular... maans breadth stopped seeing her like that... he ran and thumped beside her jerking her... geet was startled with sudden jerk.. she turned and saw maan with love in his eyes... ... maan was little eased to see her alright... geet slowly lifted her hand to touch him as she considered it a dream and he would vanish with her touch... maan felt like dying... seeing her like that... when she touched him and he didn't vanish... geet moved away from him and stood up wondering why is he there... in front of her... she wiped her tears and asked... Maan ji... aap Yaha...
maan stared at her and said... kya tum mujhe maaf karke ek mauka dogi geet... main tumhe isbaar niraash nahi karunga... main mar ... geet didn't let him complete his words.. she kept her palm on his lips and nodded a no... aisi baat bhul ke bhi mat karna...
maan caught her plan and asked... meri baat ka Jawab nahi diya geet...
geet - geet ka Wajid hi maan hain... to woh na kaise kahegi maan... mujhe Sirf aur Sirf aapka pyaar chahiye ... aur kuch nahi...
maan hugged her and said... I LOVE YOU GEET... I REALLY LOVE YOU...
maan - mujhe pata hain maine tumhe bohut takleef di hain... par main tumhari zindagi ab khushiyon se bharna chahta hoon... kya tum mujhse phir se shaadi karogi... abhi ussi waqt...
maan then remembered the missing diamond and said.. Geet chalo hospital chalte hain... tumhara operation karna padega...
Geet was confused... hospital... mera operation... par kyun...
maan - main jaanta hoon maine galati ki hain par iski itni badi SAZA mat do mujhe.. jaldi se hospital chalo... and held her hand dragged her towards the exit...
Geet was trying to stop but maan was not listening to him... she atleast pulled her hand and stooped... maan turned around and said.. Geet jaldi chalo... kyun zid karr rahi ho...
Geet - ji.. pehle aap,yeh batayiye ki kyun jana hain hospital... mujhe kya hua hain...
maan - kya hua hain... tumne toh diamond khaliya haina... dadi ne kaha... mujhe letter ke saath bina diamond ke ring bhi mila... yeh dekho... and he showed her the ring...
Geet - maine diamond khaya... yeh kab hua... aur yeh ring toh dadi ne liya tha kal mujse... mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aaraha hain...
and they heard dadi's voice... woh hum batate hain... hum ne hi woh ring cover mein Dala... Geet ke letter ke saath... ab kya kare aap ko Zor ka jhatka dena tha... isliye yeh kiya.. aur is ring ka diamond hamare paas hi hain...
maan understood that it was dadi's plan... and he hugged her... thanks dadi... aap yeh nahi karti toh mujhe kabhi samajh mein nahi aata ki mujhe kya chahiye... har pal Marta raha jab se iss ring ko dekha bina diamond ke...
when Maan left her... dadi patted his cheeks... and said... humne toh aapki aankhon mein geet ke liye pyaar bohut pehle hi dekh liya tha... aur apni dil ki baat aap khud nahi samajh paaye...
Maan - an geet ka yeh ring main pehnunga... mujhe meri iss harkat ki yaad dilaya rahega... aur mujhe har pal yaad dilaya ga ki mujhe Geet ko Sirf aur Sirf khushiyan hi deni hogi... and he wore that ring on his last finger...
dadi - chahiye ab ghar chalte hain...
maan - aise nahi dadi... holding geet's hand .. divorce toh hogaya haina dadi ... toh shaadi toh zaroor kardi padegi na...
Geet looked at maan with tears
dadi - ... uski zaroorat nahi hain maan... kyun ki divorce hua hi nahi... aap ne judge ke sawal ka Jawab nahi diya... aur aapki halat dekh kar unhone kaha ki jab tak aap apni mooh se nahi kahenge woh divorce grant nahi karenge... to unhone next date diya hain... kyun Meera ne aapko bataya nahi...
Maan - nahi... she said divorce is granted... maan was shocked to know... and once again Meera's nature came in front of his eyes...
dadi - yeh sach hain geet... divorce nahi hua... aap aaj bhi maan ki patni hi hain... aur hamesha rahengi...
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thank you friends... for the likes and comments... I will really miss writing this...😳
this is a telugu film... srivari priyuralu... means... husband's lover... a weird name right... although the story is about the village girl, they kept this title... I still don't understand that... he he... I have made many changes... the hero actually bonds with his first love physically and the heroine see them like that... I didn't do this because... it doesn't go with our MSK... I want him to be Geet's only... so I changed here... and then... the climax scene... where the hero denies divorce dramatically... but by then the heroine consumes the diamond powder... ( again I had a doubt... how is diamond powdered... that too with a paper weight... as diamond is one of the hardest thing... chalo chodo...films mein kuch bhi hota hain...) and the lover operates on her and leaves from there... and this doesn't go with her character... so I changed this also... hope u liked my changes...
the artists did a wonderful job... amani and priya Raman as village girl and the doctor respectively did an amazing job... and hero's mother by Sarada... she was splendid...👏
and regarding geet... she is from a small village where in she has seen much more ... like physically abusing... having affairs in front of their wives... and children too... and many more.. so when maan came and said sorry... she easily melted as she wants only his love... when she is getting that... she doesn't think about anything else...
Tata bye bye... HS ke thread pe milte hain... jald hi...
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