NiBir SS- Waiting for You*Sonal's Concept*Updated Last chapter-page10

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Hey peeps! Nikhad here! Starting a new SS! This SS is a request from Sonu (Sonal)...the basic concept is her...she just wanted me to give it my words...So here I am...First of all THANKSSS A TOOON for giving me a brilliant concept to write on...just for you my sweetheart! :* SONAL...<3

CHAPTER 1-PAGE 1
CHAPTER 2-PAGE 4
CHAPTER 3-PAGE 7
CHAPTER 4 [LAST PART] - PAGE 10


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CHAPTER 1

Chhoti-chhoti baatein yunhi aate-jaate
Yaadein sehlaake jaati hai
Raaton ko sirhaane baasi muskaane
Mujhko sula ke jaati hai
Milna nahin hai mumkin itna bataaun lekin
Hum phir mile kyun hain
Tujhko bula naa paaun
Tujhko bhula naa paaun
Yeh silsile kyun hain

Sab kuch wahi hai, par kuchh kami hai
Teri aahatein nahin hai
Sab kuch wahi hai, par kuchh kami hai
Teri Aahatein nahin hai.. nahin hai...

The sun was going down slowly in the vertical horizon! The orange hues of the sun covered the whole sky! This was the time of each day, when a girl in her 20's felt most lonely...Everyday at that time she used to sit at the door of her balcony in the Gangwal House and looked at the infinity, totally lost in her thoughts!...Like everyday, that day she again wanted to scream out all her pains...the pain she couldn't bear...the pain which killed her everyday! Nisha closed her eyes and tears rolled down on her cheecks...an upspoken pain stabbed thousand times in her heart...She again remembered the incident which took away her smile, her life, her everything...

*Flashback*
3 months passed so fast after the wedding of NiBir...It was time to say good-bye for Kabir...Nisha knew it from the day one, but she never knew she would fall in love with this guy deeply, madly! But as always, love is always meant for the happiness of the person you love...Nisha very well knew how much Kabir craved for that one dream of him...after so many problems in his life...finally the dream of her Kabir's life was on track! Oh, wait...her Kabir?! Kabir did not belong to her...Kabir did belong to his dream only...his dream of 'London School of Dance'...Nisha controlled herself...She decided whatever they discussed last night...she will just do everything according to that...so she along with Kabir headed towards Gangwal House...
In the Ganwal house everyone was shocked when they came to know about truth...Dadaji and the elders tried to make them understand that they were officially married and they should not do this...Kabir can surely live his dream, but not alone...They can go to London together...Hearing this, Nisha's eyes did spark for a moment that day...but the very next moment she realised, Kabir did not love her nor he did want to take any responsibilities with him...Before Kabir could say anything in response to her family..Nisha uttered something which left everyone unable to speak up anything...Kabir was at a shock state too...After that no one again discussed on their marriage...Kabir filed a divorce case in the court...That day Nisha died, she died for infinite times...not physically but her soul was not more alive...She somehow tried to be strong...As she moved to Gangwal house...She used to cry alone at nights when everyone went to sleep...She used to stare at Kabir's photo in her mobile and cry her heart out...Though everyone thought Nisha and Kabir were way over, but they used to meet sometimes at a coffee shop...But nothing was like before...Don't know why Kabir could never be like before again with Nisha...This thing made Nisha feel more and more hurt...

Then oneday he left...He left without letting know anyone anything...A broken Nisha lost her last few hopes about her life..which she still used to think about untill Kabir was there...Yes, she still used to think for a miracle...She used to do all the things to stop that miracle to happen, still she herself wanted it to happen! Crazy, isn't it? But what to do, love never understands any bounds!...Viraj, his brother and his mother also did not know where he was...The Gangwal's and Viraj tried all their contacts to find him..But no, nothing happened...just nothing!

*Flashback ends*

'KABIIIRRR'- Nisha screamed clutching her dress tightly sitting on the floor,letting her agony goint out...'Why? Why did you do this to me, Kabir? Why? Oh Why?' Her words got lost in the loud screams of her crying! 'There is something...there is something I am sure which you hid from me before leaving..something what changed you totally before you left...Otherwise you won't have left like that...No, no, no you won't...But what was it Kabir?' This one thing haunted Nisha the most still after 2 years of the incident! What was the reason? She did anything wrong? Was Kabir going through some problems which he did not share with her? Nisha's head ached thinking all these again like everyday...She held her head with her two hands tightly and cried out...'Come back Kabir, where are you? At least solve the mystery...' 'Come back Kabir, come back' She kept on saying it and while crying she slowy leaned of the floor and kept crying, lying on there making the floor wet with tears...

TBC...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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heart touching one nikhad 😭
Edited by amfi123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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*touched* Please continue sooon niks
And pm me when u update please
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hayee nikhad meri jaan🤗
Thanks yaar
Nice part😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG! that did nishu say to GF?!?! where's Kabir?!?!
suspense start...nice.
upd8 soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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What a start ... 👏
Loved it sooo much...
Eagerly waiting for next part 😳
Nd thnx fr pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its awesome...just loved it... 😳
its very beautiful ...and interesting...
Continue it soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Niks touchng one yar
Loved it
Sonu nice concept
Jaldi update karna nxt part
Cant wait more to knw the mystry
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome start
nice concept
do PM me
PS:glad that u wrote something tragic😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Already aaj ka epi dekhkar ro rahi hun..aur aap dono nikhad dii and Sonal...aap lok have written meri worst fear ...i cant see nishu crying becoz of him... 😭 😭 ...

Jaldi happy waala gana ko wapas happy bana do na plsss

Very well written though

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