NiBir SS- Waiting for You*Sonal's Concept*Updated Last chapter-page10 - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31
nice update nikhad👏
do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: SONAL30

omg nikhad buddy i just love ur writing skills

u r an amazing writer👏
and anu sanaya's character is only 4 u my phati saree😉
thanks 4 the pm nikhad and continue soon🤗

thanks a lot ji😆
u want me to get over nisha???🤣🤣🤣
i can manage both🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: anulovessarun

thanks a lot ji😆
u want me to get over nisha???🤣🤣🤣
i can manage both🤣🤣🤣

tu kitni k hai🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
aur tu meri K se kitni J hai🤣🤣🤣
no reply expected🤣🤣🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anulovessarun

aur tu meri K se kitni J hai🤣🤣🤣
no reply expected🤣🤣🤣

😡m not j m super k🤣
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
kabira is hurting😭
I like sanaya..business partner and all...and raima...well kabira is irresistable
finally...not Viraj sir...that sounds so wierd on the show..and bro-in-law...uff.
and you put my fav cupid(MMBB) back on business yayy!!
cant wait for Nibir meet😊

upd8 soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
Kabira is crying...aww...but there is no gain without pain hai na dii...loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
Awwwie people...too much blessed to have you all! Thanks a buuunch for liking mine and Sonal's work :* Here comes the 3rd part...
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CHAPTER 3

Nisha reached London...She just felt too much happy that day, She did not know why, like at first she thought maybe it was because she could see a chance to get Kabir back in her life..But she also felt something more than that...She almost felt that Kabir was somewhere near...She smiled like the sun that day while going to her hotel from airport...Nisha reached the hotel, she was getting restless with each passing moment and she did not know why...She wanted to go out badly...So she decided, she would take a shower and then she would go to the even management company to discuss about the event! ...She took a shower, came out wearing a bathrobe and unpacked her bag! She was about to pick up a dress but suddenly her eyes fall on the purple top...'Kabir used to love the colour purple on me', she thought! She felt like Kabir would be seeing her today, she herself did not know why she felt like that...she tried to control her heart but it did not pay any heed! Without thinking furthermore, she took the purple top and got ready! Little did she know that she was on her way towards the place which she was searching for last 2 years...

Nisha reached the office, she went to the reciption...They told her to go to the 9th floor for further works...She went to the 9th floor...On the other hand Kabir was also feeling too much excitement and an unknown peace inside him from the morning, he also did not know why...He was also smiling a bit too much that day, he also felt like Nisha was very near to him! He did not understand why this kind of rubbish things his heart was screaming to him and at that moment he became just too much restless...So he decided to go out of his cabin for a storll outside to check how all were working so that he could divert his mind!...

Nisha went to the reciption of the 9th floor and told them about her...The lady in the reciption asked her to wait a bit...Then she asked her...
The lady: What is your last name, Nisha mam?
Nisha: I am Mrs. Rathode!
Kabir's legs almost got stucked on the floor and he couldnot believe his ears! WHAT HE JUST HEARD?! NISHA?! THE SAME VOICE ALSO?!!! Kabir was roaming around and checking the desks of the employees when he heard it coming from the reciption...he did not know what to do...he just rushed there like there was no tomorrow...and seeing him the lady said...
The lady: *Indicating Nisha's Back* What a coincidence look mam, here comes Mr. Kabir Singh Rathode the owner of this company and he is also a Rathode!
Nisha felt like she would just fall on the floor anytime, she was trembling like anything else...WHAT SHE JUST SAID?!!! KABIR?!!! MY KABIR?!!!...All these thoughts made her feel dizzy! She slowly turned around and looked at that direction...

Both of them felt like the world had stopped...everything was blank to them..they could not believe their eyes, both of them smiled a bit seeing each other...Nisha and Kabir felt like running to each other and hugging! Nisha murmured 'Kabir' with so much emotions in her voice and tears in her eyes which rolled down on her cheecks...Kabir's eyes were filled with tears too...Nisha slowly started going towards him, Kabir was about to do the same just then he realised...'WHAT WAS THE NAME?! MRS. RATHODE? MEANS SHE IS MARRIED TO BROTHER VIRAJ?? NO, KABIR SHE WAS NEVER YOURS AND SHE CAN NEVER BE'- Kabir's mind made him realise the ugly fact! Then he remembered the cruel incident which happened 2 years back...His emotions just changed then...he could only feel agony and frustation inside him, nothing else! Suddenly from the behind Sanaya came and about to ask Kabir something when she saw Nisha there and was shocked...she was so happy that she was about to scream NISHA but before that Kabir took Sanaya in his arms and tried to show like she was someone special to her...Kabir told her, 'Sweetheart, lets go inside' and took her with him in his cabin while holding her tightly...

Nisha's face changed and her heart skipped a beat...What she just saw?? Was she dreaming?? What was that?? Kabir and that girl?? No this can't be happening...she felt like she died...she died there standing...Then she thought maybe she expected much more...Kabir never was in love with her, she was the one who broke all the rules of their contract...She ran from there crying like anything else and the lady of the reciption kept on saying...
'Mam, wait...where are you going? wait a bit mam! Your profile is almost about to appear on the screen! We can discuss then'

Kabir was all broken...He hugged Sanaya tightly when they reached his cabin and started crying his heart out...Sanaya tried to console him and asked him what was the matter? Sanaya was trying real hard to make him understand that at least once he should go and talk to Nisha but Kabir was not in his sense, he could not believe Nisha was there and he again lost her, he felt all the pains again in a new way...Whereas, Nishu went to her hotel room and dashed on the floor feeling all numb...because of her this sudden action, the glass on the side table fall down on the floor with the touch of her hand and her another hand fall on the broken pieces...Her hand started to bleed...but she could not feel anything...she cried and cried...Why was she even alive?? To witness this day for last 2 years??...Suddenly she took a decision...She decided to go back to India that day itself...She stood up, packed her bag and noticed her hand was bleeding! She put an ointment and a band-aid there from the first-aid box given by the hotel as she called for one! Just because she needed it to board on the flight!...She left the hotel for airport!

Meanwhile in the office Kabir was really getting more pissed by Sanaya's continious blabbering about talking to Nisha once so he told her the whole incident which happened in the reciption...Sanaya was feeling devastated hearing all that! She was about to say Kabir that Nisha might never did belong to him and he should forget her just then she got a call from the reciption and after hearing what the called said, she screamed 'WHAAATTT?!!!!!!'...

TBC...
Edited by Nikhad003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

My candy ...I have no words!!!!👏👏

I really want to make some burayi of u !!! But I'm not able to find a single burayi yaar !!!!
If i have to make negative comments then you have to write bad !!!!! But no you only want me to compliment u right !!!!! I LOVE U for this !!!!
This is beautiful !!!
And Sanaya , I can see her being a cupid !!! I will kill u if u make her negative!!! Anu will steal her now 😆
I am going to Kidnap u now !!! you left the story at such a hanger !!!
Kabira ...sabar kar bacchu ... Nisha is urs only 😉
Continue sooon 😉
Edited by Stella324 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
awesome update👏
sanaya the cupid
thanks a lot sonu for introducing this character just for ME😆

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