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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Very interesting and heart touching concept
Thanks for the PM Nikhad
Please continue soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks everyone for loving mine and Sonu's effort so much...I am so grateful :* As always you guys seriously are amazing! Here comes the 2nd part!
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CHAPTER 2

LONDON
He put his hands on the glass window, looking at the beauty of London...but in his mind there was something else going on...something which he could never get over...something which crushed his heart everyday into million pieces...

Ghalti nahin hai teri
Ghalti nahin hai meri
Phir bhi gile kyun hain
Tujhko bulaa na paaun
Tujhko bhula na paaun
Yeh silsile kyun hain
Sab kuch wahi hai
Par kuch kami hai
Teri aahatein nahin hai

Sab kuch wahi hai, par kuch kami hai
Teri aahatein nahin hai, nahin hai hai
Teri aahatein nahin hai aahatein nahin hai
Teri aahatein nahin hai
Ohh..
Teri aahatein nahin hai, aahatein nahin hai
Teri aahatein nahin hai

Kyun... kyun nahin hai...

Kabir's eyes were filled...Why life has to be this cruel with him? He still sometime asked himself this question then he did realise that maybe he was expecting more...but yet, he could not accept it...The words echoed in his ears again,yes again!
'I am still in love with Viraj sir and we want to get married soon'
Kabir held his ears with his two hands and shook his head terribly in trying to forget the the wordings, Nisha said infront of the Gangwal family that day...Despite of all this he still failed to get over her...he went to his table and opened the drawer, looked at Nisha's photo, for a moment he thought maybe what he heard that day was wrong! Maybe there was something hidden behind it! His heart bounced with a ray of hope! But just then he remembered the crucial incident which made everything bitter for him...He looked at Nisha's photo angrily and closed the drawer making a loud sound, venting all his anger, frustation and pain out...

Sanaya was standing outside his cabin when he closed the drawer like that...she did understand what just happened...She took a deep breath and sighed...'When will this guy understand?', she said to herself and entered his cabin...
Sanaya: Kabir??
Kabir looked at Sanaya and tried to act normal, hiding all his pains..
Kabir: Hey, my beautiful partner in business!

Sanaya was Kabir's business partner...They both owned an event management company in London...Sanaya was a very cheerful and lovely human being...she was also a very good friend of Kabir and always wanted the best for him!
Sanaya: Why are you hiding, Kabir?
Kabir: *Trying to act* Hiding what?!!
Sanaya: Oh stop it Kabir, I am seeing you dying everyday since the day we met after you came to London...How long will all these go on?
Kabir: Don't know...*Blank look*
Sanaya: Look Kabir, maybe there is a misunderstanding at least once talk to her?
Kabir: No, Sanaya! How many times do I need to explain you? *angry*
Sanaya: Okay okay, calm down! If you won't do it..then just move on..why waiting for her like this?
Kabir: No one is waiting *Stern voice*
Sanaya: Okay...move on then Kabir! I will try to fix a date with Raima, the girl who proposed you last month...
Kabir: I can't do it...
Sanaya: Why?
Kabir: Can't that is it...
Sanaya: Because you still LOVE her...
Kabir looked the other way in pain...Sanaya understood his feelings...
Sanaya: Okay, by the way I forgot why I came to your cabin...I wanted to let you know that our company is arraging an international sports meet and that too next week...
Kabir: THIS EARLY?!!!
Sanaya: Yeah dude, actually this is a highly benificial contract so I couldn't let it go...don't worry we will manage...
Kabir: Hmm *he was looking at the names of the games of that sports meet and reading one name he smiled unknowingly*
Sanaya: *Noticing it* Shooting? Nisha used to be very good at it na?
Kabir: *Unknowingly* She is still good, I can bet! Actually she is the best you know!
His eyes glowed with joy while saying this but the very next moment he realised the reality and just said in a low voice, 'Let it be'...

GANGWAL HOUSE
Nisha was sitting on her bed, looking at Kabir's photo as usal...a hand touched her shoulder...she looked to that direction...
Nisha: Viraj sir?
Viraj: How many times do i need to tell you that call me Viraj...at least not as a friend than as your family, your brother-in-law *laughs*
Nisha: *smiled* I am trying!...
Viraj: Look Nisha, today I am here for a beautiful reason...please don't say no?
Nisha: What is it?
Viraj: *Shows her a form* This is a from of an international sports meet and we all want you to participate in shooting!
Nisha: No, I can't you know why!
Viraj: Please Nisha look...you...
Nisha: No, no please! *she looked down*
Viraj: At least for Kabir??
Nisha looked at him being all shocked and with questioning eyes...
Viraj: Yes, Nisha the sports meet is at London! Who knows you may get your Kabir there? Why not take a chance?

Nisha felt like her breathes got stucked, after so many days she could see a ray of hope...a hope of life! She took the form almost like grabbing it from Viraj...looked at it and nodded her head as a yes...

TBC...
Edited by Nikhad003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
wow...niks its superb...Kabira in london n Nishu gng 4 shooting competion
viraj brother in law👍🏼😆.n thnk god no Ms.Nisha from Viraj🤣
kabir n event managemnet loved sanays character...
waitng 4 the nxt part
thnx 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Aww beautiful update
Hope Nibir meet again in London and clear their misunderstandings
Thanku for the pm Nikhad

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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Amazing Nikhad 👍🏼
I am dying to know the mystery about what exactly happened...
Thanks for the PM
waiting for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Awesome. So Sanaya is Kabir's business partner. Hope SaRaj(Sanaya and Viraj) will be Instrumental in bringing NiBir back together :)
And Nishu in London. Shooting competition, And Kabir owns an event management firm- Hmm Interesting... 😉

And sorry I'm late, I Just read the 1st part now. Heartwrenching. It was really amazing :')
Continue writing. Waiting for the update😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
Wow..Nik..!!!!
Interesting story...please update soon.. can't wait.. .!!!! 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
omg nikhad buddy i just love ur writing skills
u r an amazing writer👏
and anu sanaya's character is only 4 u my phati saree😉
thanks 4 the pm nikhad and continue soon🤗
Edited by SONAL30 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Nicee
Loved it
Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Superb story..👏 I'm loving it..
Continue soon..👍🏼

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