*Of Dark Classrooms and Empty Hallways* - Page 2

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Wonderful story.

Loved the way this is written and the switches between the characters...just superb.

Glad to see such great writers in this forum. Love to read more from you.

Take care...

Love

MD

Thank you! I'm glad you liked my way of writing. I had fun with this one, really. And yes, there are excellent writers here with such interesting stories. Hope to see more activity in this forum with such a lively and youthful show.

Originally posted by: minga

i read it all in one go. brilliant

Thank you! I know it was a bit long but I just like writing long stories. I love detailing and with this one I had 7 characters to cover so...😆

Originally posted by: LoonyLuna

This story was so well written.I loved the dialogues.You included Krisann and Utkarsh scene!You know I have this feeling that Utkarsh and Krisann will end up together on the show.😆

I was laughing so hard while reading Charlie's pov.Thank you including such entertaining CharNiti conversations.🤗

Please PM me when you will write something...😊

Thanks! I feel like I improve the more I write, you know. I hope I did with this one. It was different with the switches of the characters and scenes and detailing on their thoughts then switching to what they say. It was a good experience.

Yes, the minute I saw the train scene when Krissan grabs Utkarsh's outstretched hand and his W*F? look at her, 😆 I just looked forward to their scenes. They would make a cute and comical pair.

And what can I say about Charlie and Niti, they are just too funny and adorable. 😳 I love a show where each character has their own stories and can be comical and cute too, even Parth.

I just love how everyone throws one liners at each other like how Utkarsh and Niti's comment on Parth and Siyali's seriousness without hesitating. It just comes out naturally which makes it all the more hilarious.

Will definitely PM you when I post my next work. Look forward to it!

Originally posted by: Maiya.

Thank you! I know it was a bit long but I just like writing long stories. I love detailing and with this one I had 7 characters to cover so...😆

ill be honest i very rarely read any ff because i have no time but once i read the first paragraph i just kept on going. I like it detailed. it a super piece of work.

Originally posted by: minga

ill be honest i very rarely read any ff because i have no time but once i read the first paragraph i just kept on going. I like it detailed. it a super piece of work.

Thanks. I understand the thing about FFs too. I just can't keep up with so many so I choose to stick to one shots. If done well, they can be very entertaining!

hey nice post. keep writing n plz write sumthng for vibharth if u get time plz 😊

Originally posted by: snehaHCAPK

hey nice post. keep writing n plz write sumthng for vibharth if u get time plz 😊