MG SS : DESTINY RULES pt 5 pg 47 / PM LIST + TEASER PG 52 JUN 2 - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART 1







Small droplets of sweat beads were forming on his forehead..Why did she have to come in between all his enmity he grumbled and looked at her she was all drenched in blood..his hands were  tightly pressed upon her left side of her chest..she was bleeding profusely..her breathes were getting shallow every passing minute fearing him..and his life was slipping just with her every hard coming breathe...

 

He looked at her droopy eyes..She had just closed...

 

Maan shook her vigorously ...

 

Maan: GEET!!!!!!!!!! .. Don't let them come between us geet .. I won't let anything happen t you , just don't close your eyes.. At the moment he found himself so helpless so vulnerable, his white shirt was all red she was losing her senses and he the mighty MSK cannot do anything..maan quickly yelled at the driver..

 

Maan: dammit yash cant you drive fast..  She is bleeding..Blood was coming out of her body drenching him..She was his life he knew now.. Sometimes the realization does come late and maan's eyes burned with unshed tears that were making him loose his control and sense.. He couldn't expect and think his life without her..  

 

Why is it difficult to see your love, your life going away from you..

 

Why is it so difficult to see her almost losing to the destiny, HIS CRUEL DESTINY ...

 

Maan: yash drive fast..maan patted her head..he was continuously kissing her forehead assuring her that she will be alright he won't let her go away this easily from him.. He sided her small flicks that were teasing her face..maan looked at her droopy eyes.. for the first time he saw her so close.. , all the time he was sometimes hiding himself , his feelings or sometimes he was just taking her presence for granted.. he never felt or did anything that could give her a small amount of happiness and now when she was slipping away he wanted her , just for himself..  a guilt surfaced his heart and soul , cursing him a big time but nothing can be done..  

 

She had already went unconscious... her hands were tightened she was holding him with the grip that was unbreakable..She was silently asking if he won't leave her..Will he believe her that she loved him...  they wre such the sould who never questioned each other , never said anything but the heartwarming feeling was surrounded by their  stone hearts..

 

The car halted and maan quickly scooped his injured geet in his strong arms... she was limp with his hands supporting her..maan quickly called the senior doctors to attend her..He had already informed about the emergency and doctors immediately took her to the operation theatre...

 

Maan looked the light turned red..The doctors were attending her.. He was still restless..His mind was guilty his life was fighting for her life and the reason for her this condition was him..He was responsible for her terrible condition...

 

Maan was cold he was just still and numb..He just wanted to know if she was fine..He just wanted to know if he will able to repent his deeds..He knew it's all his fault..Everything that was done was just his fate..No one was safe around him and now one more dear life was on the death bed just because of his ill fate...

 

Maan found a soothing touch on his shoulder..he just didn't react..That was just expected..he was cold hearted arrogant and selfish MAAN SINGH KHURANA that everyone says and know his life his wife geet was fighting for her life..She was struggling for her few breaths just because she wanted him safe...

 

Maan when didn't turned his friend yash turned him around but found maan's eyes his gaze fixed on the operation theatre every minute was killing every second was just appearing to swallow him in the deepest pit of the hell...

 

Yash couldn't help he knew what MSK is..but today he had seen a new MSK who was just maan ..geet ka maan ..the complain ,  the gripe that  he saw today was something he didn't even expected but what he could do when his dear friend was just gripped in the moment he  himself expressed his love to the only girl that had made him too loose himself to her ...

 

Yash : maan she will be alright ..  maan don't lose hope.. meri taaf dekho maan ..kuch nahi hoga geet ko..she is a fighter maan .. wo ye zindagi ki jung bhi jeet legi.. Bas babaji se dua maango maan...

 

Maan didn't react for a second but the next minute he was enraged..His eyes which were having silent tears till know were spitting fire...

 

Maan : yash find out who were those those people who tried to harm my geet ..kon the wo jinhoge ye harkat ki hai... And make sure they should pay ten times for what they did they should know MSK never leaves who messes with someone whose belongs to me...

 

Yash knew that what maan is saying is also right and he had to make sure that everything will sort out soon..He looked at maan before going..Though yash never wanted to leave maan here maan will be all alone... he didn't even informed daadi yet..She should be informed at the earliest...

 

Here in the operation theatre..The doctors were losing her she was still unconscious and bleeding was not stopped...

 

The doctors were panicking knowing if something happens to her then they will have to face THE MAAN SINGH KHURANA whose name is itself a terror and managing with him and his temper what would happen...

 

Doctor had successfully taken the bullets out but still due to excessive blood loss she was not responding...

 

Doctor: get the injection ready..

 

As he saw that the heart beats were dropping with her breathing ragged...

 

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So that was part 1

 

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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
awesome starting ...love it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Very emotional part. Geet badly hurt and maan is realising her value in his life n he Iove her. He ask Yash to find the culprit behind the attach to punish them.. In ot geet fighting for her life.. Hope she get well. Lovely writing... Pls cont soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
Nice concept. 
 Emotional update.
Geet is hurt  and fighting for her life. Poor maan now realised the importance of his wife.
Waiting for nxt  part. 


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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
amazing part.. loved it.. waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86
Amazing part
Geet is badly injured 
maan is not understanding her value
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Emotional update
Geet injured
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing
Geet is shot nd maan is scared.
Scared of loosing his Geet.
He now know he loves her.
She is his lyf.
Geet is being operated
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg first part is so much shocking. Geet is so much injured. Maan took her to hospital and her operation is in process.maan is blaming himself as his destiny always snatch his dear ones.maan ordered yash to find out about those people who attacked geet. Waiting for next dear