ZaYa FF:A Darker Shade Of Black (CH:8-PG:12)

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KitkitMkb

@KitkitMkb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

It's getting addictive please do continue soon ! It' s one of our best story and I like how you bring her past between her present to make us realize how difficult is it for her . Take care girl !

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Nazzz16

@Nazzz16

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Nice part !!!
Aliya's past is sooo bad :(
Feeling so bad for her ...
Continue asap...
Waiting to read more !!

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Zainedil

@Zainedil

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#83

I don't know if I have ever commented before
But I have read this story and I loved all the updates
Very realistic scenes n love the feel, hope Aaliya gets all the love tht she deserves n zain hope a proposal brews up in Shimla
Keep updating
Sim

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LoveBeintehaa

@LoveBeintehaa

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#84

Oh, poor Aaliya she didn't deserved that... Very good, but emotional chapter ):

Thnx for d update and cont. Soon :)

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nashfa

@nashfa

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#85

Read all the chapters

All the chapters were awesome

continue soon

Riya

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AnnRosewood

@AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

Awww,Sunidhi,thank you so much for the dedication,made me feel special.. :*

Now coming to the update,you are already a fantastic writer and never ever doubt yourself.

Osman and Surraiya,were totally like you know,the knid of parents,who are always busy matchmaking..but the scene was so strikingly sweet and cute..and then Barkat came out with the secrets of Aaliya's past..and the love they have for Aaliya is indeed rare,and they accepted her for who she is rather than what her past had done to her..it was a beautiful portrayal ,and am curious for the shimla trip !

Love

Ann