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Posted: 10 years ago
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heyyy guys
Dis is Radhika
n ya dis story is nt mine😆
i m jst posting it on ma friendz behalf ie LuvArsha4ever aka Maithili
Do give it a try
she is an amazing writer n yuss d story is really intere
sting
😃
Here u go

Hey guyzz!!! This is LuvArsha4ever ! and this is my 1st ever writing!!!!! I've never written ANYTHING till now. So plz if u can give try , do it !Embarrassed
(note:there won't be any character sketch bcoz my characters are not trustable to any kind of continues behavior. In short my characters are messed up and can change there behavior at any given time!!😛)

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The One With New F.R.I.E.N.D.S


It was Rey's 1st day in St.Louis college. He had just entered the college n already girls were staring at him. He noticed that and obviously being THE HUNK in his previous college , this sight was no new to him. But he chose to ignore because he didn't want to be known as The New Guy Who Just Flirts!! As he was walking through Atrium he bumped into someone , a female someone. He looked up helping her with picking up books and saw a cute girl clad in simple legging and kurti.
Rey: I'm sorry, mera dhyaan nahi tha.
Girl: It's ok. Hota hai...
Rey: Waise my name is Rey and tum ...?
Girl: Oh mera naam Neha hai . (AN: Lol gotcha i know aapko Kria lagi hogi😆)
Rey: Oh nice to meet u.
Neha: ummm tum college mai naye ho kya ?
R: haan par tumhe kaise pta ?
N: Guessed it. Kyunki iss college ke log itne jaldi friends nahi banate , unhe to bilkul bhi nahi jinse wo takrake mile ho! (giggles)
They talk for a while and then Neha starts to show him different classes and stuff. As they were passing a guy comes from behind and taps o Neha's head.
Neha: Oye Swayam ! Piche se kyu var karra hai ? Himmat hai toh samne aa.
Swayam: Miss drama queen apne yeh dramey bandh kar ! (he notices Rey and comes near Neha n whispers in her ear) yeh kaun hai? Kahi yeh tumhe follow toh nahi karra na ? Tum kehti ho to mai Bharat ko bula lu ?
N: Oho mere superman bas! Yeh koi stalker nahi mera new friend hai.
S: Oh I'm so sorry !! (shakes hand with Rey) I'm swayam
R: im rey
Swayam joins them and tells Rey about diff. things n college. As they pass by rehearsal hall they hear loud cheering. Neha and Swayam seem indifferent, but Rey gets curious. He tries to see through but fails because of the crowd on the door of RH blocking the view.
R: What's going on ? Yeh log toh aise chilla rahe hai jaise Shakti Mohan aa gayi ho.
S: Shakti Mohan toh nahi par...waisa hi kuch samajh lo.
R: Yeh riddles mai kyu baatein karra hai ? thik se samjha na!!
(swayam looks at Neha as if asking for permission)
N: Tell him I don't care ! (and she leaves stoping her feet on ground)
S: (sighs) ha toh mai bata raha tha ... Waha andar hai hamare college ki D3 gang.
R: D3 gang ?
S: D3 stands for Dedication and Dream of Dance, hamare college ka sabse popular dance group. In short college ka exclusive popular bunch.
R: Par usse Neha ko kya problem hai ? Woh toh jealous types ki nahi lagti
''Aur mai hu bhi nahi'' says Neha popping out of nowhere.person pe uskii gaadi atak jayegi.
So basically iss group mai 4 log hai. Shivam,Vicky,Kria aur Sharon (glares at swayam while saying the last name, Swayam rolls his eyes)
N: Aur yeh sab ke sab khadoos. Dancers acche hai par log ? No bloody way ! Sab khadoos, self centered, dad ke paiso pe jeene wale brats ! Kria n Sharon- college ke so called queen bees. Unke life mai style aur status ke siva kisi aur cheez ko importance nahi hai.
S: Objection ma'am ! Un dono ke life mein sabse zyada importance Dance ko hai ! (says while making a face)
N: Ha ha wo bhi!! par logo ka kya ? dance ko bhagwan maan ke phir logo ko kachre jaisa treak karke kuch nahi milta. Now Shivam n Vicky- college ki kuch ladkiyo ne bhaav kya de diye sabko apni personal property samajhne lag gaye, bas use and throw !! (she keeps bad mouthing about D3 gang then rey says stopping her)
R: ok ok calm down ! Mujhe samajh mein aa gaya ! Woh aise log hai jinse mujhe door rehna chahiye ! I get it ! now take a chill pill and let's go to canteen !
N: okay ! but plz unse door rehna !
R: Alright meri maa ! mai door rahunga
(neha hits him on shoulder playfully and three of them hav a group hug anmd head towards the canteen)


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Precap :

Kria: Plz yeh kisi ko mat batana !
Rey: Alright, par ek condition pe !'' reys says while coming closer to her...so that he could hear her heartbeats running fast because of the proximity they were sharing


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I know this was crappy ! that's why I gave a precap Wink I might post the
second part right after this so stay tuned coz there's ALOT to come !😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oyeee maithili
u never told me u r so amazing writer
acha thik hai agar regular updates mile toh maaf kar dungi😆
n abt d story
it wsss sooo short
bt as i said d story is reallyyy interesting n specially after d precap😆
nwww upadte soon


love
radz

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Baatcutter-

oyeee maithili
u never told me u r so amazing writer
acha thik hai agar regular updates mile toh maaf kar dungi😆
n abt d story
it wsss sooo short
bt as i said d story is reallyyy interesting n specially after d precap😆
nwww upadte soon


love
radz

Thankzz Radhika !! N srry muze bhi nhi pta tha i could write n yes regular updates milenge ... Bcoz i owe u BIG TIME🤗. Aapke bina ye possible nhi tha (i know thoda cheesy hai but deal with it😆)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice start. Waiting for kriyaansh meet.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LuvArsha4ever

Thankzz Radhika !! N srry muze bhi nhi pta tha i could write n yes regular updates milenge ... Bcoz i owe u BIG TIME🤗. Aapke bina ye possible nhi tha (i know thoda cheesy hai but deal with it😆)


Dost ko gali -_-
Chal is baar thik hai
Bt next tym no thakz n no sorry get that?
n yippeee regular updates😃
hmm u r filmy ha
dnt worry me too 😆
n ya pmz bheje ki nai?


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Baatcutter-


Dost ko gali -_-
Chal is baar thik hai
Bt next tym no thakz n no sorry get that?
n yippeee regular updates😃
hmm u r filmy ha
dnt worry me too 😆
n ya pmz bheje ki nai?



Obvio pms bheje hai 😃...

n dnt wrry ab srry, thnks, etc. nhi bolungi ...

luv uhhh 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: star94

Nice start. Waiting for kriyaansh meet.


thanxxx n ya KR meet is on the way so stay tuned ! 😃😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'll surely update 2mrrw 😃

sowwie 😔
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Posted: 10 years ago
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IN JUST LOVED THIS CONCEPT KR FF IT IS AWESOME AND FABULOUS...
FINALLY NEHA AND SWAYAN TOLD ABOUT D3 GANG AND EEPS THERE IS A LOT OF
TURN ON TO CAME... DO CONTINUE SOON
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry bcoz of some technical reasons I still can't post the FF😒 but i've next 2 parts to my lovely friend Radz🤗. She will post it asap. Sorry again n plzz don't hate me😭

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