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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello guys...in mood of writing a new story ...hope u like it !!!!!love u guyzzz...

In this story I made the characters ooltha ...
MANIK MALHOTHRA:-a rich boy but very innocent and sweet...will help anyone who is close to his heart... Loves his best friend mom and dad...his bff is cabir ...he never fell in love with a girl as he didn't find a right girl still :)
NANDINI MURTHY:-a rich girl ...yet completely opposite of manik likes to bully people ...but can't see them getting overly hurt...whole college guys are ready to die for her...a hot ...cute...and bubbly girl...she to never fell in love with any guy as she thought love is a waste of time...her best friend is navya...and she has lost her parents at a very young age...her weak point is her young bro...she loves him a loot and cannot lose him...
NAVYA NAVELI:-a crazy girl ...who loves wearing funky clothes...and loves nandini and her girl gang a lot...a big time flirty ...there is a rumour that she is dating the school hero harshad saxena...a hotty...but they both are rarely seen tgthr
CABIR DHAWAN:-a idiotic guy...maniks best friend...a big time flirty...and loves making videos and uploading them
DHRUV VEDANT :- A quiet boy ...has a huge crush on the girl gangs aliya ...but never expressed it...
ALIYA SAXENA:-a barbie doll in the SPACE college ...very cute ...loves all the branded products...loves her girl gang A lot...has a huge crush on dhruv...but Neva expressed it...
MUKTHI VARDHAN:-a girly girl ...who likes wearing jeans and kurti most of the time...many boys have crush on her...but very strong in her life no boy dares coming near her ...
Fab 5:-best band consists of nandini...dhruv...aliya...mukthi..and navya...

That's all for the character sketch guys :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow nandu in maniks place
plzz continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow..
Suoerb.. Manik n nandu exchange places..
Lol
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Looking forward for ur story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hehe..mukti wearing kurti and jeans n nandu bully..it's gonna be fun
great concept..
plz cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So here's the CHAPTER 1:-

In canteen:-
Mukthi ...dhruv and aaliya all were sitting and chitchatting ...in the middle table as usual ...while manik ...cabir and their new friend abhimanyu were all sitting in the corner table...suddenly navya comes yelling and running...she aas wearing a black and white chotu dress...she yelled "yeahhh aaj woh raghav nahi aaai hum khub enjoy karenge 😊suddenly in happiness she didn't notice the chair in front of hair ...and she trips she was about to fall while cabir runs and catches her waist and they both look at each others eyes going to their dream world...cabir ki mind mein "kis taraf hai aasman "song was going...while in navyas head "ye kya museebat hai "song was playing...suddenly they both break their eyelock due to a loud laughter it was MANIK he was laughing like hell seeing cabir and navya...watching manik mukti loses her patience 😡 and gets up and asks him watz ua problem dude usse jaane kyun nahi deta ...problem kya hai...mere best friend pe koi nahi hasega...seeing this manik bent his head ...abhi gt up and shouted back at mukti...baby swetie pie chill we laughed at cabir k not at navya...mukti slaps him* how dare u call me like that u jerk ...while manik lost his patience and was abt to slap mukti while someone holds his wrists tightly...

It was nandini ...he turned at looked at her...he was so lost in her ...her beautiful doe eyes...her pink lips...her smooth skin...she was perfect ...he felt like lookin at this beauty all day long...suddenly he came to his senses ...nandini gives him a hint by shaking her head in a no manner warning him...though he was a little darpok in gals matter...he didn't want to disagree to this beauty's warning ...then all the fab 5 went from there...

They all went to the Audi while nandini was very angry ...she started playing the guitar very fast ...the string made a cut in her hand ...she moaned all her friends came to her aid ...kya huva???navya askd...she told nothing I'm fine...then she went to the sick room ...as she entered the lights went out ...the power had gone ...someone got scared and came to the sick room and locked themselves ...nandini shouted "kaun ho tum lock kyu kiya...???..suddenly the lights appear ...they both were like o shit not again...he replied I came here bczz he showed his blazer had torn a little bit...nandini started laughing ...😳 tum isliye yaha aaye ho ...tum nahi jaante torn clothes are fashion nowadays and she started laughing again...he stared at her and seeing her laughing he just gave a smile...she caught him staring then ...he sees her wound he makes her sit I'n the couch and band aided her ...nandini felt a shock due to his touch ...she never felt this way bfre ...😛 she got up and was abt to go while she tripped and abt to fall while this time he didn't allow he held her waist ...she was wearing a crop top and jeans she had left hr silky hair ...and wore light peach makeup ...her soft kamar had sme aasar on him he felt to kiss her looking at her..then she ran away from there telling thanks 😊


That's it how was it guys???
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Posted: 10 years ago
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1st part updated please read guys and give my story some comments
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Cute start... can't wait for more

Loved Cavya & the little MANAN moment... time he was there for the hurt finger , yay!😆

Looking forward to seeing more...😊
Edited by RomComFan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Total opposite.. Loved it..continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice concept
Loved it😊
Continue soon

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