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Posted: 10 years ago
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Note: Hello warriors!!! this is my first piece of writing on the warrior high forum .I hope you guys will like it. 😊

Preface: Pondering Anima is a leaf from Veebha's dairy.I wrote it in Veebha's point of view .The context is it is a lunch break on a working day when she decides to pen her thoughts.😊😊


Adorn by the first herculean ray,
Stood dauntless the majestic belfry.
Coy swimming pool blue it was,
simpered kissed by the effulgent sun.
Placid wide balconies tranquil they were,
gracefully allowed a wave of clamour.
Piously reverberated the central edifice,
as the students sang in unison,
in the praise of the omnipotent person.
Drabble trabble echoed basketball court,
muscular hands shifted fickle ball in moot.
Clatter platter turned pages of text,
battling fierce complicated math conquest.
Boogle woogel effervescence burped,
against pungent smelling lab of chemicals.
A train of thoughts travelled beyond time,
enigmatic history is indeed mysterious.
Most adored saviour lunch bell rang,
notorious bunch of teens indeed sprang.
Yet amidst the vivacious milieu,
Why do I lay dubious pondering
in my Warrior High??



PS: I tried my best to think in the way Veebha would hope you guys liked it!!
Do comment and criticise!!!😊😊



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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it... 😊
Please write more such poems...

Love
MD
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Loved it... 😊

Please write more such poems...

Love
MD

I am glad you liked it ..This one reminds me of my school so wrote it ..Sure will definitely write more 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Most adored saviour lunch bell rang"
Story of my school life.😆
I love your poem.Hope we will get to read more pages from Veebha's diary.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was so relatable..
It was amazing..
We have got such talented ppl in out Warrior High family..!!
I can imagine Veebha having such thoughts..
-Prerna
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoonyLuna

"Most adored saviour lunch bell rang"

Story of my school life.😆
I love your poem.Hope we will get to read more pages from Veebha's diary.😊

Thank you ...Veebha is my favourite character and I relate to her so will surely write more about her 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: abhiyaswaron

This was so relatable..

It was amazing..
We have got such talented ppl in out Warrior High family..!!
I can imagine Veebha having such thoughts..
-Prerna

OMG I am flattered I am glad you liked it and also that I could connect to Veebha
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊

Originally posted by: snehaHCAPK

very nice keep writing..

Thank u 😊

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