Hey guys,
This is my 1st ever attempt to write anything! My hindi isnt great infact it isnt even good, so people can bear with me or help me out, it would be awesome.
Warning: For mature audiances only, containes sexual references.
Part 1-8 Page 1
Part 9 Page 8
Part 10 Page 12
Part 11 Page 15
Part 12 Page 16
Part 13 page 19
Part 14 page 19
Part 15 page 21
Part 16 Page 23
part 17 page 26
End Page 27
this is the 1st part, if you guys like it I will continue.
Shiv drops Gauri at home, on the way he tells her how he was in love with Ipshit but she was a gold digger
Gauri is sad that Ipshit refused Shiv's proposal.
Shiv sees that Guari's house is very small, he refuses Gauri's invitation to come in. He says he will be back tomorrow to pick her up and tells her to pack her bags for the whole weekend.
Gauri enters her lonely house, and sinks into deep thought.
should I continue??
comments and critics are welcome!
sorry guys the preview on the first page was part 1. 😕
Part 2:
*Flash back*
Shiv was beaming on about Ipshit to his mother and saying she was going to love her daughter in law, he saw his mothers spirit lift. Shiv was hoping that this would make his mother want to live again. His mother had sank into depression after mr kapoor (shiv's dad) was murdered. He was going to propose to ipshit that day, he was so sure she was going to say yes, this would be the happiest day of his life. He hadn't told his mother anything about Ipshit in detail. All she knew was that shiv had found the love of his life. He wanted to surprise her. He wanted to his mother to see the well composed nature of ipshit, her elegance.
He proposed to Ipshit with all the glamour a girl could ever ask for, but Ipshit laughed and said I cant marry you, I only dated you to get a bit publicity to boost my career. Besides your mother is sick, I cant handle old people. Eeek. Lets wait sometime shal we? until im ready. Preferbly when your mothers dead, she said to herself.
Shiv was heartbroken, then he confinded in Gauri, a girl he had randomly bumped into at the office. She was very bubbly and always happy. Kind of like the sun, giving roshni where she went. They had become friends but never close friends. They would talk about random nothings but nothing personal except that day. There was something about her. something special.
That day he asked her the unthinkable, to pretend to be his girlfriend for his mothers sake. At first she was hesitant but after she heard this would decide life or death for his mother she accepted.
*Flash back ends*
Critizm is welcome, I'd like to know how I can improve my writing. Any tips will be appreciated esp from kat 😃 and other FF writers (coz they are brilliant) 😃
Random comments are also welcome so i know how im going and if i shud continue.
Part 3
Thanks for the comments guys. i appreciate it😃😃 Keep them comming, makes me feel special😆😆. A special thank you to *MAD*. Thanks for your PM. Let me know what you think!!!
Gauri comes out of her thoughts and wonders what kind of person could use Shiv, he was so sweet and caring not to mention hot as hell. God some people are stupid! She had it all and threw it away.
Tomorrow she was going to meet Shiv's mother, and stay with them for the weekend, she was nervous as if she really was going to meet her mother in law. Gauri never had a mother, she was an orphan. Snapping out of thoughts, she decides to pack her bag and then go to bed after tea. Afterall she was going to need all her energy lying!
Sat morning:
Gauri heard the horn toot in her drive way. She looked at her watch (9am), Shiv as usual was on time. She walked towards the 4 wheel drive, opened the door and threw her bag in the back seat and planted her bottom in the front. Shiv watched her, fascinated in the way she did things. Not elegant at all. A complete opposite of Ipshitta.
Shiv, "challein"
Gauri, "nahi, xmas ki wait kar lete hain"
Shiv let a soft laugh. He stole a glance at Gauri, her hair was straight, jet black. She wore a lime green salwaar kameez. He noticed she never wore make-up. Not many girls in this day and age went even to the market with out make-up. She had confidence and flare. Shiv liked it.
Shiv hoped that his mother and Gauri would get along, it was so important. After his dad, he only had his mother. He was so engrossed in his thoughts that he didn't realize that they had arrived home.
Gauri had been quiet during the whole ride, Shivs face was tensed, his handsome features looked worried, so she didn't speak just incase she interrupted his private thoughts. When the car stopped, Gauri looked up at the house; it was amazing, simply breathtaking. It was modern and huge! Wow… ipshitta would die if she saw this. Oh well Ipshitta's loss her gain, Gauri grinned at the thought.
Gauri and Shiv were about to enter when a middle aged woman appeared at the door with aarti. Shiv explained that this was Shyla his chachi who is widowed.
Shyla, "rokh jao, mujhe arti karne dhou. Bhahoo pehli baar humare ghar mein aie hain."
Gauri was so taken aback by the friendliness of this woman, how great would it be if all this was for real?
Gauri kneeled down to touch her feet, both Shiv and shyla were surprised. Shyla tried to stop Gauri but Gauri replied, you're my elder and I'm giving you respect, plz don't stop me.
Shyla, "Shiv tumhari pasand bhohut achi hai. Khoobsorat bhi. Bhagwhan tumhe hamesha kush rakhe"
Gauri smiled and followed Shiv into his mothers room. She was dressed in white, looking pale and staring into the corner of the room.
Shiv, "maa"
Vidya (the dadi in the show, is Shivs Mother), looks back and sees her son, she was so proud of him. He took care her, refused to give up on her. He held the family together. His fathers murder was a shock to them all but Vidya couldn't help feel sadness at her husbands passing. She was angry at him (her husband) for doing this to her and the family. She was tired and wanted this life to end. Then she saw this girl standing next to Shiv, she was shorter than Shiv by a bit, her black eyes focused on Vidya. Her nervous smile. The way she fiddled with her dupatta in the silence. Vidya automatically smiled at this girl who looked much like a angel.
Shiv: omg, maa is smiling!
Gauri went to vidya and touched her feet, and his mother actually spoke, "jeete rai, angel"
Gauri, "jee mera naam Gauri hai"
Vidya, "lekin tum meri angel ho"
Gauri, "teek hai, I am mumma ki angel"
Shiv and Vidya were surprised when Gauri called her mumma.
Gauri realized what she had said and quickly asked if it ok for her to call vidya mumma. Vidya replied of course it is angel. Tum mere beeta ka pyaar ho, meri bahoo ho. tum nahi kaho gi tu aur kaun bole ga?
Gauri felt bad betraying vidya like that but what could she do? Vidya had to get better and how can she say no to Shiv? -–wait a minute, why cant she—
Vidya got up form her chair and gave arshiwaad to Gauri. Gauri imagined that if her mum was alive she would be much like Vidya.
That afternoon, vidya introduced Gauri to everyone. Everyone being the extended family. There was Samar and kaya (Shyla Chachis son and daughter in law), and their son aman (who was 4 years old). There was palak, Shivs sister.
Everyone immediately liked Gauri. Shiv watched everyone getting attached to Gauri. He too thought how would it be if this was for real, with his love?
All day passed with Gauri chatting to everyone esp vidya.
At night when vidya was ready to go to bed, Gauri came in with her medicine and massaged vidya's legs and back. Vidya was so glad that her bahoo was so nice and bubly, she had everyone laughing. Vidya herself had laughed after ages. Gauri had done jadoo on everyone. They already loved her.
When vidya fell asleep, Gauri tip toed out of the room and shut the door quietly behind her. Just as she turned around she bumped into Shiv who was in his boxers and a white singlet. His muscles aching to be touched, wait a minute, his muscles aching to be touched or am I aching to touch them? Oh shut up Gauri. This is neither the time or the place to drool!
Shiv : what r u doing? And why are you looking at me like that? Gauri explained that she was in Vidya's room, she purposly sisnt mention why her eyes popping out of her eyes. Gee he was hot. Shiv was so happy his mother liked her bahoo. He led Gauri into her room to thank her for what she was doing and gave her a red box, Gauri opened it and in it was the most gorgeous necklace she had ever seen. It was silver with a diamond studded on the shape of the letter S, it was beautiful.
Gauri: yeh?
Shiv: hain, hum engaged hone wale hain, tumhare paas kuch to chahiye.
Gauri, "lekin ye to asli hai"
Shiv, laughs, "tum kya chati ho, mein apni Gauri ko nakli doon?"
After some debate Gauri agreed to wear but only if Shiv promised to take it back when it was all over. Shiv didn't like the feeling of the word "over."
Shiv: goodnight Gauri, see in you in the morning.
Gauri: night.
Both Gauri and Shiv retired in their beds. Thinking about each other and the game they were playing for the sake of his mother. Were new relations going to form? Or old ones broken? What about Shivs broken heart? What about Gauri?
sorry its boring right now! but S&G parts will come up soon. oh and i was wondering how adult can we go with our FF's?😳😳
Part 4
Knock on the door.
Kaya: Gauri?
Gauri: huh
Kaya: breakfast is ready
Gauri: opens the door and asks if mumma has had breakfast.
Kaya: nahi…mumma never eats breakfast and trials off not wanting to explain everything.
Gauri: could you please put some breakfast for mumma on a plate and I will see if mumma will eat today. btw, what is for breakfast?
Kaya: paneer wale parandhe, Shiv ke favorite.
Hearing the name of her breakfast made her mouth water. She quickly had a shower, changed in her blue salwar kammeez. Picked up a plate and checked the contents of her mother in laws breakfast. The plate had 1 pp, 1 bowl of yoghurt and some achar.
Shalz put 4 more pp on the plate and headed towards mummas room.
She found mumma and Shiv chatting, the delicious smell made them look and up.
Gauri: good morning mumma and Shiv
Both replied. Gauri touched mummas feet.
Gauri: "breakfast kha leje plz"
Vidya: "nahi, main breakfast nahi karti"
Gauri: "kyon?"
Vidya, "baas maan nahi karta aaj kal."
Gauri with out thinking replied, "aap breakfast nahi karogi tu aapne grandchilden ke saath kaise khelogi? You want grandchildren don't you?" realizing what she had just said, she went red as a tomato.
Vidya: ok babba, I'll eat breakfast
Gauri sat down next to Shiv feeling rather stupid at what she had just said. Shiv himself couldn't stop grinning, Gauri was great. Hmmm kids, not a bad idea. Neither is making them, ehehe…
Gauri started to feed mumma slowly. One bite mumma, one bite Guri. After a while vidya made Gauri feed shiv as well. Both Shiv and Gauri felt embarrassed. Vidya laughed out loud at their behavior. Come on, you two are so embarrassed at feeding each other, how will you make me grandchildren?
Shiv: well that's rather easy. Give me some time with Gauri alone and you will get not one but a few!
He gave Gauri a rather seductive look.
Gauri: he did not just look at me like that! Stop it, im going to start purring! Puurrrr… stop thinking!
Rest of the day went fine. Gauri took vidya for a walk. They talked. had fun. And most importantly, vidya had colour return to her for the first time after Mr Kapoors death. It was time to go home. Gauri had so much fun with everyone that time flew by, she felt sad leaving this house which was filled by people who genuinely loved and cared.
Vidya noticed this on Gauri's face and said, " beta don't worry soon tumhari shaadi ho jaigi aur tumko kabhi bhi yeh ghaar nahi chodna paredga."
Gauri: your wrong mumma, meri shaddi nahi hogi nah hi yeh ghar mera hoga, meri kismet mei to sirf dard hai.
Shiv nudged Gauri to get going, after saying their goodbyes, Shiv pressed the accelerator and started their journey back to the city.
Shiv noticed that Gauri was quieter than usual, maybe she was tired after all, she have to act all weekend. He cursed himself for putting her into this position.
Shiv, " u kno tumhe yeh saab karne ki zarrorat nahi hai"
Gauri, "kya"
Shiv, "you know being incredibly nice, I realize we have to make my mum happy but you don't have to go that far."
Gauri, "lol, Shiv yeh natak nahi hai, I dont mind doing these things. I love your mother, she is a great human being. I was just feeling bad coz we are deceiving everyone
Shiv: I know, but right now her health is more important.
Gauri: which is why I won't say anything to jeopardize it.
Gauri thanked Shiv for understanding and for being a good friend.
They reached Gauris small house, Gauri once again asked if Shiv wanted to come and he again declined politely. Shiv said he would call Gauri on her cell sometime during the week.
Gauri proceeded towards her house. She looked at her walls, no photos on walls, no motherly smell, nothing, it just felt like a house not a home. She smiled thinking about Shivs home. It had everything a home should be. Elders to give blessings, good family and was the prince of the house Shiv…perfect.
Monday came and the day was going slowly, after looking at the clock every minute, it was lunch time finally! Gauri quickly got up form her desk and made her way towards the door. She worked for Shiv's company but never told him, she was scared, he would think that she was a gold digger. It wasn't Shivs fault he didn't know despite being in the same building. 1) he traveled a lot 2) god knows how many employees he has and 3) he was in the top floor and Gauri in the 5th.
Gauri rushed towards the lift and as she ran in she bumped into non other than Shiv! Any other day shiv would be surprised but not today, he had done some research on her and found out she worked in this building as assistant lawyer. She had a law degree so she sifted through agreements and such.
Gauri started apologizing profusely! Until she realized it was Shiv. She stuttered, " oh, hi, er, sorry, hai ram, hi?" Shiv laughed at her innocence. Gauri felt her colour changing from caramel to complete redness!
Shiv: don't worry, its alright. Going to lunch?
Gauri: still bright red answered yeah and you?
Shiv: yes, lets have lunch together
Gauri: sure. Where?
Shiv: where else? our dhabba! Lol
They often went to the dhabba when they had lunch before, it was the best place. The food was delicious! Way better than the posh restaurants and affordable.
Gauri ran to their normal seat where kaka greeted them and took their order. Mango archar, yoghurt, dhal for Shiv and matar paneer for Gauri.
They got their food, Gauri as usual dug in laughing away with kaka. Shiv remembered when he bought Ipshitta. She was so grossed out, she held her nose, spoke poorly to the workers and basically kicked up a stink and made Shiv take her to the finest restaurant! Shiv admired the simplicity in Gauri. She was so nice to every one.
Shiv realized he was just looking at Gauri and not eating, he quickly broke his roti before Gauri realized she had an admirer, he dipped it into the dhal and spat it out immediately! Omg kaka yeh to bohut mirchy hai!
Kaka appologised for mixing up the order and went to get another bowl.
Shiv: don't worry about it, ill just eat with Gauri.
Kaka: beta im sorry
Shiv: its ok! Mistakes happen, this mistake is welcome, food tastes good when Gauri feeds it.
Shiv: *clears his throat* wont you feed me?
Gauri: dropped her broken roti and stammered.
Shiv: kyon? Kya hua? Why are you acting like you have never done it before? Maa ke samne tu mind nahi kya
Gauri: blushed and broke another piece dipped it into her curry and feed it to Shiv hesitantly.
A worker who had befriended Ipshitta at the office saw this and immediately rang her.
Shiv sat in his office chair thinking about Monday. It was Friday now, the day had been going incredibly slow. He wanted to see Gauri again but had been busy. He missed her laughter, her blushing. Thank god his mother insisted he bring her over on tonight. He couldn't wait till 5pm so he could see her again, so he could kick back relax and not be judged, talk freely about anything and everything. Shiv leaned back on his chair, he smiled at the thought of Gauri. She was a good no… a great friend. He was lucky.
thanks for comments, keep them comming😃 and thanks for advising me (KAT). Is this ok? slow enough or is too slow? If anyone has any suggestions regarding the story line they are welcome as well.
oh and im sorry for the yellow background with the writing, i have no idea how it happened! im still trying to master the art of windows 2007 edition of word😆😆 😆
THANKS!!!!
Part 5
As soon as the clock struck 5pm, Shiv ran out of his office, he had never left his office at 5 before, always stayed late doing this and that. He finally got won to the 5th floor, saw Gauri and dragged her out while everyone looked on. Maya stood there completely shocked. Did Shiv just grab Gauri's hand in public?! He never did PDA. She grabbed her ph and dialed Ipshittas number.
Gauri: what happened?
Shiv: mom wants to see you tonight, so we have to go
Gauri: but…
Shiv: but what?
Gauri: never mind, can I get changed?
At the thought of Gauri changing sent Shiv's temp to a whopping 100 degrees… oh yeah sure but make it quick!
Gauri: smiled, thank you sir. Is mumma ok?
Shiv? yes, maa just missed you
Gauri: and you?
Shiv: thought Gauri was joking so he said, yes I miss my baby.
Gauri realized he was playing, also she played along, awww baby, mujhe bhi kuch kuch hota hai jab mein tumhe nahi milti. She looked him in the eye as she spoke. Meri dhadkan teez hojati hai, mere ang ang tarfta hai tujhe milne keliye.
They were looking into each others eyes. Shiv was totally lost for a second. Then a screeching voice bought him back to earth.
Ipshitta: oh Shiv darling how are you? Fancy seeing you here.
Shiv feeling rather uncomfortable replied, ah yeah I was just about to leave.
Ipshitta: why don't we grab a cup of coffee hmm??
Gauri: felt like a fly in the wall, Ipshitta didn't even acknowledge she was standing right next to Shiv.
Shiv: actually vho… mein shiv was lost for words. His anger was building inside of him. How dare she come here and act as if nothing had happened. How dare she ignore Gauri.
Gauri: actually we were headed out, so maybe another time.
Ipshitta (hissing): I wasn't talking to you, mind you own business.
Before Gauri had the chance to open her mouth, Shiv replied: I am her business.
Ipshitta: darling, you shouldn't give your Personal Assisants so much attention. It gets to these 3rd class girls.
Now Gauri's temper was rising, who F*** does she think she is?
Shiv: actually Gauri is the richest girl on the planet.
Gauri: I am?
Ipshitta: oh really? How come I have never seen her before.
Shiv: You will now.
Shiv, you being rude! Introduce us na cooed Gauri.
Shiv: good idea, Gauri this is Ipshitta, and ipshitta this is Gauri my Fiance'
Ipshitta's mouth dropped open. No words came to her. her brain buzzed around.
Gauri: honey, you might want pick your jaw from the ground.
Ipshitta: oh congratz. Would you look at the time, I must leave. See you later shiv, giving gauri a cold stare.
Gauri was about to burst into violent laughter when she noticed that Shiv was looking at Ipshitta walking away. She felt sorry for him. She wasn't sure why he even fell for ipshitta. she's a skinny little cow.
Gauri asked Shiv in almost a whisper: your still in love with her?
Shiv looked down and didn't reply. He felt angry, betrayed and used. How could she do this to him? It didn't matter now.
Shiv was quiet in the trip to her house and then the ride to his house as well. Gauris mind was in over-drive. She was cursing Ipshitta so much, she was so sure her head was letting out steam.
Shiv: Gauri, gauri , gauri?!!!!!
Gauri: stupid cow!
Shiv: what? Why am I a cow?
Gauri: no not you
Shiv: who then?
Gauri: no one. I was just talking to one of my many invisible friends
Shiv knew all to well Gauri meant ipshitta. why is Gauri giving ipshitta so much importance? Could she be jealous? No, gauri just thinks of me as a friend. Doesn't she?
Gauri stood in the middle of the lounge at Shiv's place, where every one had crowded around them, hugging Gauri. Gauri touched mummas feet as usual. She blessed her.
Mumma: kaiso ho?
Shiv: mein teekh hoon maa, soobha to baat hoi thi.
Mumma: beefkoof, mein tujse nahi baat kar rahi thi, mein to apni bahoo se pooch rahi thi.
Gauri: mein teekh hoon, aur aap kase hain?
Mumma: pehle se bohut achi, kya hai ki mujhe apne grandchildren ke saath kelna hai.
Gauri and Shiv both blushed this time.
As the night progressed, Gauri learnt that mumma had made a immense improvement in her health. Gauri ended up spending the weekend with the family.
Part 6
2 months had gone past, and Vidya had started to wonder when Gauri and Shiv would officially be engaged.
That Friday night it was as usual, Shiv would take Gauri to his house to spend the weekend with his mother. She had come really close to everyone.
Gauri rushed to pack her bags, she looked forward to the weekend, it was her favorite time. She had a blast with everyone.
As Shiv drove into his house, the house decorated elaborately, lights everywhere. Just then Samar appeared and asked Shiv and Gauri to meet mumma at the guest house. They walked toward the house in a hurry wondering what the occasion was. When they got there they found mumma eagerly waiting for them, she wouldn't answer any questions and just ushered Shiv into a room and ordered him to change and also Gauri into a separate room so she could change as well.
Shiv changed/showered first, he looked handsome in a red and black sherwani. Then Gauri stepped in wearing a matching lengha. It was adorned in silver. She looked beautiful. Her hair bounced in her shoulders with a slight curl in it. Shiv was lost for words. He had never seen such beauty. His heart beat quickened. His hands went moist. His mouth dry, who ever that got Gauri would be a lucky guy he thought to himself.
Mumma: Challo
Shiv: kaha?
Mumma: ghar
Gauri: lekin mumma, kya occasion hai?
Mumma: angel, hurry up. Abhi pata lag jai ga.
They reached the Kapoor house and as the three walked in, the room went silent, all eyes were on Gauri and Shiv. Mumma got Gauri and Shiv to sit in a red velvet chair and handed a ring to Shiv.
Shiv: mumma?
Vidya: beefkof! Angel ki ungli mein pehna!
Then it finally hit them that mumma had slyly arranged this party so Shiv and Gauri could be engaged. It was a shock. He never knew his mother had it in her.
Mumma nudged Shiv and he looked into Gauri eyes, his lips automatically curved upwards into a smile and slipped the ring on her finger. Gauri hands were shaking as she put the ring on Shivs finger. Today she declared that he was hers, nothing could be further from the truth. She felt tears prickling but she smiled and closed her eyes and silently ordered her tears to wait until she was alone.
Every one clapped and wished them the very best and like any other Indian occasion loud music was played and the guests danced.
Everyone forced Shiv and Gauri to get up and dance (ghoomar).
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
ghoomar ghoomar ghoomar - 3
ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke
le gaya dil mera dilbar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
pehle mere dil ko dhadkaaya
chori se phir mera chain churaya
pehle mere dil ko dhadkaaya
chori se phir mera chain churaya
ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke
le gaya dil mera dilbar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
aankhen mili banke haseen aaisa laga saansen ruki
mujhko nahi kuchh bhi pata kaise chala yeh silsila
tere jaadu ka kamaal behki behki teri chaal
usko naa mera khayal kar gaya mera aaisa haal
ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke
le gaya dil mera dilbar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
ghoomar ghoomar ghoomar
ghoomar ghoomar ghoomar
jhul gaya ab yeh chil man
badhne lagi dil ki lagan
kuchh toh mujhe hone laga
mera sukoon khone laga
sochu ??? ka jawaab
jaagu saari saari raat
mere deewane jasbaat aaye uske khayalaat
ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke
le gaya dil mera dilbar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
pehle mere dil ko dhadkaaya
chori se phir mera chain churaya
ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke ghoom ghoom ke
le gaya dil mera dilbar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar re ghoomar
At the end of the song every one hugged, including SA, when they realized they were in each others arms they quickly let go only to be bumped by someone into each other again, their eyes locked, breathing quickened, heart beat racing. Their romantic moment was disturbed by Palak.
Palak: you guys look to cute together!
Shiv: acha? Vho Ram tumko deekh raha hai.
Palak: blushing…
Gauri: punchs Shiv, tum bhi nah! Apni sister ko embarrass kar dya.
Then comes Samar: haha, dekha Shiv, humari bhabhi to tume abhi se maarna shuru kar dya.
Everyone laughs.
Mumma joins them: meri bahoo ko koi tangh to nahi kar raha?
Gauri: no mumma, aapki bahoo kush hai
Samar: huh kush to hogi, deekha nahi ajay jo kaisai maar rahi thi
Shiv: aisi baat nahi main abhi bhi control mein hoon.
Palak: acha? Prove it, bhabhi ko kaho sub ke samne kiss kare
Mumma: hai, tere ko sharam nahi!
Samar: yes, that's right… prove it
Pretty soon everyone was there asking Shiv to prove he was in charge.
Shiv getting carried away says to Gauri: kiss me
Gauri: going red again, nahi, saab ke samne nahi
Samar: private mein baad meh kar lena but right now Shiv teri issit ka sawal hai.
Shiv: come on, kya mere liya itna bhi kar nahi sakti he whispers close to her ear. She feels his warm breath on her, which sends an alarming yet pleasurable shiver down her spin. She opens her eyes, plants a big one on Shiv's cheek.
Everyone cheers.
Gauri goes even redder and runs away but Shiv catches her hand and pulls her towards him, they are so close she can feel the strong muscles in his body against her tiny back. He says my turn and gives her a kiss on the neck… everyone cheered even louder!!
Ipshitta was shocked! She just saw Shiv kiss Gauri in front of everyone. He refused to show any PDA with her…jealousy steamed within her. She had been invited to the party by Samar and Kaya. They were friends with Shashank who Ipshitta was dating right now. She had tried to call Shiv a number of times but he never took her calls. Time for a new plan of action, she thought. Split them up.
Ipshitta: oh congrats Shiv and Gauri
S&G in unison replied thanks.
Just then Kaya walks up to the three: hey guys, this is ipshitta Shashanks girlfriend
Ipshitta: oh we know each other already, we go way back. Before Gauri he was dating me
Kaya: oh? He never mentioned anything, sly dog
Ipshitta: I guess he didn't want to share me with anyone.
Gauri: or he thought you weren't good enough
Shiv: it was nothing like that.
Shashank approached the group and introduced himself as head of an advertising company.
So this is your fianc. You're very beautiful. He grabbed gauri's hand and kissed it in front of everyone.
Gauri: thanks snatching her hand away. She didn't like the way he had touched her. His eyes were creepy.
Shiv: how dare you touch my fianc in front of me?! Shiv clenched his jaw. She is indeed. He put his arm around her as if he was building a barrier around her.
Ipshitta: oh we must get together sometime. How about lunch tomorrow? A double date?
Gauri: I'm sorry we can't. We have plans.
Shiv: we have plans?
Shashank: that's sad, we could have had a great time.
Shiv: she will have a great time without you as well. After all I will be with her.
S&P: well we must leave.
Gauri: it was a pleasure meeting you.
Shashank: the pleasure is all mine, she said while he looked her.
Shiv was so sure that there was a double meaning to his words. Alright then, bye!
Ipshitta: bye.
Gauri: she was being a little too friendly and you a little jealous.
Shiv: me jealous? Never
Gauri: looked like it. You didn't like him kissing me, did you?
Shiv: you're my fianc; I'm the only guy who should be kissing you.
Gauri: acha? She raised one eyebrow and folded her arms
Shiv: I mean that's what other people would think, so you know I have to act as if it bothered me. Why did it bother me?
Gauri: uh huh… Samar isn't there something different about Shiv?
Samar who had heard the two said: yeah, bhai is a little green
Gauri: HAH
Shiv: What? It's nothing like that. You both have gone mad.
Gauri was standing on the terrace, the moon was out and there were so many stars in the sky.
Shiv: ah, beautiful night isn't it?
Gauri: yeah. It's amazing, this game has gone too far
Shiv: what do you mean? What are you saying
Gauri: I think we need to tell mumma the truth…
Part 7
The next morning it was all over the news that the most eligible bachelor in the world bachelor was engaged.
Mumma woke up with a enormous smile on her face, her dream was coming true and the wedding would take place in a months time. Plenty of time to prepare for the wedding. So much work had to be done. Just then Gauri walked in with breakfast.
Gauri:morning mumma
Vidya: morning angel
Gauri: yeh aapki breakfast
Vidya: thank you, acha, zara ajay ko wake kar do na please. vho abhi takh tumhare sapne dekh raha hoga
Shalz: mumma aap bhi nah
Vidya: kya hoya? You are such a bubbly person yet you blush so easily, chalo koi baat nahi, haak banta hai, shadi jo hone wali hai
Gauri: actually I wanted to talk to you about something.
Vidya: ok, but 1st wake Shiv up
Gauri: but… we are faking it! There is no wedding!
Vidya: angel, do it already.
Gauri: okay I will go wake Shiv up, you eat your breakfast and no teasing warna no grandchildren lol
Vidya laughing… we will see.
In Shiv's room:
This was the first time Gauri had gone into Shivs bedroom. It was messy. Typical she thought, though the room was spectacular. The whole room had a very warm feeling to it, with beige tones running through. Gauri walked towards the bed. Just as she was about to wake Shiv he turned around and grabbed her hand thinking it was his badmaash nephew. Samar's son was 4 years old. He with some force threw Gauri on to the bed and then tackled her.
Shiv: wow yeh Aman has gotten a little heavy today. Then he realized exactly who he was on top of. Gauri lay there with bewilderment wondering what was going on.
She looked so hot with her wet hair he thought, how he would love to just push it out of her face so he could see the beauty of her dazzling eyes, her luscious lips, her cute dimples. Just then Aman came in screaming chachu chachu then he stopped, chachu aap kya kar rahe ho? Shiv tried getting of Gauri but fell back on top of her, then Aman decided to yell. Chachu!!! Mujhe bhu khelna hai! Shiv once again tried to get up and this time put some extra effort into it and managed to get of her. Gauri sat up slowly and saw the blankets fall of Shivs body. He had a 6 pack and you could see each individual muscle rippling as he moved. Shiv noticed Gauri's was staring; he smiles to himself and put on a t-shirt.
Aman: kya chachi kabhi apne chachu ku swim karte nahi dekha? Jo aab itna deekh raho ho.
Gauri: choop badmaash. Meh kaha deekh rahi thi.
Aman: vaisi chachu aap chachi ke upar kyon the?
Gauri: we were seeing who was heavier and Shiv is definitely heavier than me.
Aman: I know, chachu is fat, mere saath bhi aisa hi karte hai.
Gauri: laughed, yeah your chachu is soo fat
Shiv was relieved that Gauri had managed to keep the little one quiet other ways every one would have known.
Gauri: ok you play with chachu and I will get some breakfast.
Aman: I have eaten already.
Just then Samar knocks on the door and comes in
Samar: Aman come, you mother wants to dress properly, get out of your pj's
Aman: ok dad and runs off
Gauri: hi Sam
Samar: hi bhabhi, what you doing?
Gauri: running a marathon lol, what does it look like?
Samar: ouch, smart woman, tumara sarcasm nahi jaiga
Gauri: innocent look, what sarcasm??
Shiv: to yaar, whats the plan today?
Samar: I thought we could all just have a picnic, what do you guys think?
Shiv: that's a brilliant idea, I will go shower and then we can all get ready
Samar walks towards the door and as he is about to exit, he turns around and says bhabhi vaise aapko bhi mere saath chalna chahiye
Gauri: kyun?
Samar: loog kya bolege, ke shaadi se pehle hi apne fianc ke kamre meh
Gauri: gets up form Shivs bed, voh mein, mumma neh bheja tha Shiv ko….
Samar interrupts: gotcha! Nice blush btw.
Gauri runs after him cursing him all the way down the corridor.
Shiv had been thinking about Gauri had said last night. Their engagement was all over the news. If they told mumma the truth, surely her health would suffer, but what about Gauri? She had a life to get back to. Shiv was a mess. He had no idea what he was going to do. After sorting his thoughts out, he finally made a decision. He walked out of his room to tell all.
Part 8
Once again everyone was in the lounge waiting for vidya.
Vidya: darlings, the wedding date was been set for September the 30th.
Shiv: what, that's early, we can't maa. It's too soon
Vidya: beta you gave me a daughter, I just want her to live here so the wedding has to happen in a hurry. Angel saved me from sinking deep into depression! I want to live again, I want to see little grandchildren running around, I want to see Gauri taking over the house. I want… couldn't finish her sentence and ended up in tears.
Shiv looked pleadingly at Gauri.
Gauri: ok, maa. September it is.
Vidya: thanks beta.
Every one was given tasks to do and vidya expected them to be done on time with perfection. Her sons wedding could not have any flaws.
S & G were sent to do some shopping. There had been an awkward silence between the two. Their pretence had gone too far.
Shiv: if I ask you for something, will you give it to, without asking any questions?
Gauri: anything.
Shiv: marry me
Gauri: what?
Shiv: I said no questions
Gauri was so surprised but she knew he was only doing it for his mother's sake. Gauri was also attached to vidya. She didn't want to hurt her so she replied yes.
Shiv: I asked you coz we have become good friends, and I know you care about my family and not my money. I trust you. Even if there is no love between us, we can still base this relationship on friendship and trust.
Gauri: was saddened, she knew there was no love form Shiv's side, but she loved him so much. She fell for him ages ago but didn't realize it until her engagement.
Your right we can. As friends we can.
After some time Gauri found her stomach grumbling. Shiv, im hungry
Shiv: me too. Let's have lunch in the foodcourt
GAuri: mmm, food.
Just as Gauri sat down with her meatballs subway and Shiv with his big mac. Ipshitta spotted them and made a beeline for them.
Ipshitta: hello she drooled
Shiv/Gauri: hi
Ipshitta: Dear me, you two don't look happy, trouble in paradise?
Gauri: was oozing with anger, excuse me I have to go to the bathroom
Ipshitta: oh me too, I will accompany you
Gauri: it's ok, I'm a big girl, I can go toilet myself
Ipshitta ignored Gauri comment and went with her anyway.
In the public toilets.
Ipshitta: so you think Shiv loves you?
gauri: ignored her and washed her face
Ipshitta: I think he still loves me, 'Im tall, gorgeous, your nothing special.
Gauri: you know im sick of you talking to me and turning up to places where your not invited to. If you don't leave me and my fianc alone, I will grace your face with my fist. With that Gauri turned around and left, leaving a terrified Ipshitta behind.
Shiv: is everything ok
Gauri: oh yeah, it is now, she smiled like the devil
Shiv: you have a beautiful smile
Gauri: you just noticed? Lol
Shiv: no I noticed it a long time ago. Hurry up and eat before the witch comes back and bothers us.
Their day was rather tiring. At the end of the day they had just managed to buy cloths for the servants.
Gauri sank into her nice hot bath thinking now her wedding was convenient . Her father had chucked her out when he learnt she was a girl not a boy like he wanted. She grew up in an orphanage where she studied and worked hard so she could have a better future. She remembered her dad had come back to get her when she was 15. Gauri was ecstatic that her family had come back. After a few days she realized it was because her late mother had deposited some money in her acc and dad needed her to get it out. She was so heartbroken that she ran away back to her orphanage. One day a guy at the orphanage even tried to rape her. But she got away from him. Thank god he had been kicked out when Gauri told the managers what he had done. This is why she had a wall surrounding her. No one ever saw her cry. She kept her fears hidden deep within.
This family had given her love and happiness. Something she always craved for. The least she could do was give something back. Make her mumma happy by marrying Shiv.
Just then she heard a knock from the door, she got up thinking it was Kaya who had come to give her some vanilla scented bath balls. As she opened the door, she froze. Shiv stood in front of her.
Shiv's breath was taken away, Gauri was wearing nothing but a two piece small bikini covered in bubbles. His heart skipped a beat as he tried to turn around but his feet refused.
Gauri: she came back to her senses and quickly closed the door. She ran back into the tub and sank down as low as she could.
After some time she came out fully dresses and avoided Shiv's eyes.
Vidya had gone to an old ladies function so it was only the youngsters left at home.
Palak decided that they would all hop into the huge spa with jet lights. Gauri protested but no one listened to her. Shiv immediately thought about Gauri in her bikini and smiled and thought, Palak your great.
Shiv went away and got changed into his boardies, he went to the spa room and found Gauri already in it. As he entered, he heard someone close and lock the door behind him.
Gauri: quickly getting up again, Palak? Open the damn door. I thought you said ladies and gents will be in different spa's.
Palak: did I? oops I meant you and Shiv are going to be in one spa and everyone else in the other. Have fun!
Gauri once again realized she was out of the water in her bikini.
She sank back down whilst going red all over.
Shiv: mmm hehe all to myself…yum "I'm sorry, I didn't realize this was there plan" tho I like it
Gauri: its ok, nothing we can do until they unlock the door.
Shiv: sits in the spa opposite Gauri. This is a good view.
Gauri: erm.. think's to herself, hmm damn that's a nice body.
Shiv: thanks
Gauri: huh what for?
Shiv: you just said I had a damn nice body, your is pretty hot too *wink*
Gauri: ah er … goes really red.
Gauri: haha, you look really pretty blushing but I can tell your uncomfortable with me sitting right in front of you with a full view so ill move next you.
Gauri: thanks …wait, what's worse having Shiv right next to me or sittng opposite me
Shiv: what did you say to Ipshitta? She hasn't called once today.
Gauri: ab yeh Ishitta beech me kyon aa gai—oh nothing.
Shiv: yeah right. You must have threatened her.
Gauri: looks down trying to avoid Shiv's gaze
Shiv: omg, you did ahaha, what did you say
Gauri: no ,no nothing.
Shiv: acha chalo mat bathao, as long she is of my back.
A minute or two of silence
Shiv: vho tumhare string
Gauri: what string?
Shiv: your bikini strings are untied so your bikini will fall off
Gauri: quickly holds her blue bikinis strings and tries to tie them together tightly
Shiv: here let me
Gauri: no its ok ill do it
Shiv: come on shalz, we're going to be married soon.
Gauri: oh hain. Ok but don't you dare look
Shiv: lol no I wont
He instructs G to sit in front of him, while he ties her strings.
As soon as he is finshed, G tries to get up and move but Shiv holds her back. He bends his head down and kisses her neck. G closes her eyes. The touch of his lips on her neck sends her into a world of pleasure. His hands move down her arms while he searches for more flesh on her neck. Shiv didn't know what was happening to him. He was getting lost in her scent. She smelt of a mixture of berries. Her neck tasted so delicious. He wanted to eat her all. He wanted more of her. He turned her around without much effort. She was willing just as much as he. His lips came crashing down on hers. He was so hungry that his tongue lashed into her mouth wanting more. She matched his passion. Gauri's hands digging into his muscles. G wanted to stop but couldn't. It felt right, it felt good. Shiv's hands started wondering around and soon found the clip of her bikini just as he was about to do undo it the door flew open. S and G bolted out of each others arms, not liking the intrusion.
Samar: oh shit we came in the wrong time, looks like things were heating up
Kaya: get out of the way , sorry guys but vidya aunt is here.
Shiv: cursed the timing of his friends and reluctantly got out.
G waited for everyone to leave and then got out. She wondered what had gotten over her. She had never even kissed a guy a before. She wondered what Shiv would think of her? What happened to Shiv? Was he attracted her? Or was it just lust at the moment?
While Shiv dressed himself into his PJ's he wondered what had gotten into him. He had never lost control, but today he wanted G, and if the door hadn't opened who knows what he would have done. He smiled thinking about G innocent kiss at first, something must have happened to her too, he thought. There was something different with G. He was worried what would G think of him. He had taken advantage of the situation.
The following morning was a bit more relaxed. Kaya and the gang had already gone out to attend to some personal business. Vidya wanted some more time in bed as yesterday had tired her out, so it was only shiv and G at the breakfast table.
Both avoided each others gaze. Shiv couldn't stop thinking about G. Not only did she have a marvelous attitude but a sexy body too. G on the other hand was embarrassed and didn't know how to begin a conversation. Shiv broke the silence: vho…I'm sorry for what happened yesterday, I don't know what came over me
G: oh… aah
Shiv: it wont happen again I promise.
G: was saddened that last night meant nothing to Shiv. "it's ok"
With that she got up and left to do her share of duties.
Sorry for late update! Very busy with Uni.
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