AKDHA FF -My baby's daddy ...plz read note on Pg 151

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Hello all

I am starting a new FF----this will be a short one maybe 15 or less chapters


Character Sketch : the usual akdha combo

Jalal is 24 yrs old arrogant business tycoon

Rukiaya : Jalal's wife ..a beautiful model ...angelic outside and a devil inside

Bakshi: Jalal's sister

Mirza: Jalal's brother

Jodha : Bakshi's best friend

Salim: Jodha's little son

HB: Jalal's mother

Abdul: Jalal's best friend and lawyer

Surya: Jodha's college friend

Maina: Jodha's mother

Bharmal: Jodha's mother

Rest will add as the story progresses



Chapter 1: Page 5: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4349312&TPN=5

Chapter 2: Page 6: https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4349312&TPN=12

Chapter 3 Page 20 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4349312&TPN=20

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Chapter 9 Page 83 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4349312&TPN=83

Chapter 10 Page 101 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4349312&TPN=101

Chapter 12 Page 136 https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=4349312&TPN=136


chapter 1 TZR

As she laid back, she felt more and more contractions, they seemed to get quicker and longer, she felt her insides tearing apart...tears rolling down her cheek, she grabs the side rails..."Honey is there someone we can call to come and be with you?" she hears the nurse's voice in the background, she begins to sob...the nurse looks at her sadly... "don't worry, I'll be a call away, if you need anything just use the buzzer" handing her the call light "it will go on for another 2 to 3 hours, you are half way there now" she nods and winces in pain as another contraction hits...the nurse runs her hand around feeling her large belly "this is going to be a large baby...do you know if it is a boy or girl?" the nurse asks ... "I really did not want to know...I don't really care as long as I have a healthy baby" she sighs...The nurse pats her on her shoulder saying "its ok, I love to see parents faces when I announce the sex of the baby" she sees Jo's face suddenly sadden and exclaims "Oh! I'm sorry, are you a single parent?"...Jo closes her eyes, tears continue rolling down, "it's okay...the baby dad and I are not in contact...it will be easier that way" she gets hit with another wave of pain...she had watched the Lamaze video a hundred times over and nothing prepared her for this...she was beginning to freak out, she was in LABOR, she was all alone, no one to hold her hand, no nervous husband, father, mother, boyfriend, sister, brother to pace back and forth anxiously like she had seen in the movies...she had only two friends and they were busy with final exams, she did not want to disturb them...everyone in her class including the teachers looked at her with sympathy, they all avoided her like a plague, she did not want any pity from anyone... After she had gone through counseling sessions, she had decided on her own that she would have the baby ...she refused to have an abortion and refused to give it up for adoption



😊😛😉

So what do you think????

I need your input...Thanks in advance for your comments and likes

I will continue with the spontaneous desire as well...

I gave up the historical romance I was planning in my head as I did not get much response


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Savi.23 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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plzz continue soon dr...can't wait much time..awesome teaser and congrats for the new story..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congo prema for new story .rukkaiya is jalals wife and jodha in labour pain.
interesting update soon thanks for pm dear 😊
Edited by avika444 - 10 years ago
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Congo on new story...omg i totally love dis story...plzz continue soon ;)
#with_love_bubbles <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congo for the new story di.awesome story loved it.please chappy one update soon.i love your desire chappy so much please update soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo songo prema...
omg ..jalal is married to rukka
and Jo is preggy ..
what happened in the past ...
Feeling bad for Jo ...
plz continue soon ...
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ja diched jo... married ruku...
poor jo...
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continue soon...
this one also & spontaneous desire also
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wow dear , nice concept nd interesting teaser .

plz continue it. update chpt 1 soon.really excited to know about all the past joja .

plz update it soon nd pm me
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Congo on new story ... awesome concept

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