Rishabala Os: Eternally Yours Forever

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Hey Guys! I'm back with an Os. Actually this is a sequel to My previous Os : Eternally Yours.
I'm back after my exams. I had put a discontinue note in my SS : Vampire's Love story. Many of you want me to restart it. Yes I would restart it if I change my mind or else I don't know. Sorry about it!

Now coming to this story. As I already told you this is a sequel to my os: Eternally Yours. I won't tell much about it. I want you all to truthfully put your views about this story in your comments.
Last but not the least. 'Criticism is most welcome from everyone!'😆



Rishabala Os:Eternally Yours Forever


[Rk's POV]

Oh God!!! Why don't you just kill me for marrying Madhu. Okay now before you ask why you should kill me let me tell you. I'm so fed up with Madhu and her over night cravings. She wants mango in pineapple season, she wants ice cream at 3 in the morning and what not. I feel like screaming like a maniac and running to the hills. But I can't do that can I? I love her god and she has been the best ever thing ever happened to me. You know god when I suddenly proposed her five years ago in the college corridor she was confused, surprised, shocked and what not...and then she accepted my proposal. After I proposed her the first question she asked me was how did you love me? I started laughing at her question. I just answered to her that Love just happens and there you go after that she kept mum but you can't excpect Madhu to be mum can you. Now you see god I was the College Heart throb that time and girls very sticking around me like hell but I never gave a damn a about them! The only girl who caught my attention was my sister's best friend...well God you got it right. It was my Madhu. She was a crazy innocent girl and her craziness and her innocence just captured my heart. The first time when I bumped into her was like as if I bumped into an angel. Her sweet doe caramel eyes which reflects innocence and her face which was dances with expressions just the same way like it used to when I first met her. From then onwards something changed in my heart ...I fell in love. That to love at first sight. I always used to keep a watch on her when she was in college and when she was not watching me I used to admire her like hell. Never did I think that I would go propose her but I did. After our college we both decided to tell our love to our parents and I was scared whether they wouldn't accept us but there you go once more I was wrong they accepted us whole heartedly and after two years we were married. Well god did I ever tell you I was Madhu's senior. May be I forgot by the who cares we are in love and now we are married that's all it matters. By the way God did I tell you that My Madhu is pregnant and she is in her last week I forgot and did I ever tell you that Madhu has weird cravings. Again I forgot. By the way wait I minute I was telling you to kill me for marrying Madhu right and I was complaining to you about her cravings and by the way that was how I started a conversation with you right! God now don't kill me you understand for marrying Madhu. I love her and she loves me so spare me and she is carrying our Lovely baby Don't kill me Okay!!! It just escaped out of my mouth. And I forgot did I tell you that I and Madhu fight like hell on the baby's gender. Oh I didn't. When I and Madhu found out that Madhu was pregnant. I told her that I wanted a beautiful baby girl like her but you see god wife's are always there oppose what husband's say. The same thing happened she told she wants a baby boy and there you go we both argued and argued until Madhu gave up and started to burst into tears. Well you see god I gave up and said I also wanted a baby boy. There you go and she gave 1000 volt smile which made me kiss her senseless but still I wanted a baby girl but I never said to her after that because I'm worried she will start crying again. God you have not done justice to me. Now see God even if husband's cry like wife's will they get their things done like wife's do? No!!! Not at all!!! I tried crying once and I failed. Madhu thought that something fell into my eyes and started clearing it. When I told her that I was trying to cry she started laughing and I was down to earth embarrassed. Okay God don't you think I'm eating your head. Okay bye then. See you.

God sorry I'm back again. Actually God you see Madhu has gone to labour. She is in the OT( Operation Theatre). I'm shit scared hearing her screaming like this. God I want Madhu and my baby safe you understand! If anything happens to them then you see what I will do! Well sorry god you see God I'm very much insecure about both of them. I hope you don't mind. Now I think I have to go because the nurse has come out from the OT holding my baby. Wait a minute it's not a baby. It's babies. The Nurse comes near and tells " Congratulations Mr. Kundra. You are a proud father of a baby boy and a baby girl. Both are twins." As she hands over my babies. I'm getting too emotional I think. "Thank you . Can I know how Madhu is?" I asked her. "Don't worry Mr. Kundra she is fine and we are shifting her to the post labour ward". She said and went.

After they shifted Madhu to the ward. I went in and saw her. She was weak yet beautiful. I handed our Prince to her and I had our Princess in my hand. "Rk Thank you so much for such beautiful babies" said Madhu with tears in her eyes. "Madhu you shouldn't thank me I should thank you for such beautiful babies in our life" I said as I kissed her forehead. "Rk have you thought any name for our kids" asked Madhu smiling happily. "I have Madhu now enough of talking take rest you look so weak" I said. "You are acting so bossy Rk that near our kids" complained Madhu pouting. "I'm sorry baby." I said. " Rk I have thought a name for our kids. Please can I tell" asked Madhu with her innocent eyes and do you think I would refuse. I told her to proceed and she told " Rishi and Rishika" "Madhu don't you think you are naming both of them after me. I think we should do it like this you name our Prince and I will name our Princess" I told sweetly. "Go away Rk . I want to name both of them." Madhu started arguing. God Again I think we are going to argue on this. But before you go away I will tell you. Though we argue , fight and what not we still love each other like hell! I thank you whole heartedly for making Madhu Eternally Mine Forever'. By the way also thank you for Our Symbol of Love. Sayonara!

[God's POV]

Oh heavenly lord. Wait a minute I'm only the Lord...God...whatever and why am I telling this to myself. Rk you made me confuse myself. Okay forget it! Whatever it is may you and your family be always blessed.

Now to people who all are reading this. If you want to know about what happened to Madhu's diary. Well actually Diary is happy with his girlfriend Pink Diary and they are going to get married. Okay everyone here is goodbye from me. Sayonara!


THE END

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madhurish thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Oh god...shri what a cute story...
Oh god... Rk is so crazy...
Oh god... I dont think madhu would have shown this much tantrum or crankiness than rk...
Oh god... He & his "i forgot again"
Oh god... Rk is such a nautanki... He started praying to kill him but then he changed his mind saying its just the slip of the tongue...
Oh god... He is funny... I love him...
Oh god... Rishbala were blessed with a baby boy & a baby girl...
Oh god... I loved the name madhu has chosen for their kid taking after rk...
Oh god... Thank u so much for writing this beautiful story & for the pm...
Oh god... I m first to comment...
Oh god... I love u my baby sis...

Edited by madhurish - 10 years ago
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Awesome os
Edited by v.p.joshi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this was so cuteee
rk talking to god anf getting confused it between couldnt stop laughing !!!!
Awesome os
thanks for pm
Edited by AzraZaidi - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Poor god ,
I loved rk's pov .;)
superb os !!!!
Edited by mskfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update shri kutty
More than rk i feel bad for god 😆
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😆 God damn! It was crazyyy. Though the diary version was crazier! 😉 I was laughing and laughing like hell back then. Well, RK can't compete with his biwi in field of craziness 🤣 but I love him too..for being such a sweet pampering hubby. ❤️ he even tried to use his biwi's medicine to get what he wants! 😆 but dude, we, women expertise in this area..its only our territory 😃 you can't trespass here. Even God doesn't want that!! Well, he's not so partial either so granted both RK & Madhu's wishes. Gave them a twin. 😛 Loved the last para from God's pov. He also enlightened us on diary's whereabouts. 😆
Thanks for pm Shriya.. 😳
Edited by Miss_uliuli - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome OS
Oh god this Rk is after God
He is so crazy and lovely
I think he got his craziness from Madhu

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey i loved this OS awesomely written dear 👏
Thanks for pm sis !! 🤗
wow i remember those cute diaries lols 😆
aww My RM got twins babies 😛
both of their wishes got fulfilled of baby girl and boy😉
ha ha still arguing they both so sweet 😆
loving each other so much forever eternally ahaan
😳❤️

Edited by -ChitraRocking- - 10 years ago
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wow such a cute story
😊👏u wrote god's pov lol 😊

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