IPKKND OS - Who's the Boss? [Romance]

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Posted: 10 years ago

#81

wonderful OS. Loved it.
Khushi is not really the innocent one now, is she?

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hiraah

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

Finally after so long I am leaving a comment! I'm so sorry!! I already read it weeks ago but was so busy I didn't have time to really sit and leave a comment that it truly deserved instead of just a quick comment.. ok now to the story,

It was fantastic! It was really very hot 😳 how did you write it? Hats off to you yaar, it was a bold piece that was executed well.

Your English was also really good. It had simple words put together to form a beautiful picture like 'dark angel' *swoon*

I must say the best part of your story was how it wasn't all about s** for arnav, instead he was captured and rendered speechless by khushi's beauty while she was in ecstasy..

I always love it when the element of love is shown and even though this was an *ahem ahem* update, it was filled with love, expression and details of perfection.

Khushi truly showed Arnav whose boss 😉 sometimes being selfish is good for you khushi! We have seen Arnav fall hard for khushi in all her avatars be it funny, determined, selfless, caring or even clumsy. But of all I think Arnav might just love her most when she is in this mood... Heheh

It was overall a fab update. ❤️

With love,

Hiraah

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