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Posted: 10 years ago
Armu 😆 Geet is so funny.
Awesome update Sanskruti. Thanks for PM and sorry for commenting late
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update.
Thanks for the PM & thanks for this long update.
ohh, specially loved the Geetanjali part.
& imagining a blushing Aham & Hot Sharmajee coming out after taking bath only in towel.
& its not at all confusing for me to understand the flashback & present.
U managed it brillaintly.
nicely written,great going.waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Aartii26

Armu 😆 Geet is so funny.
Awesome update Sanskruti. Thanks for PM and sorry for commenting late



hehe yup shes funny😆😛
Its my pleasure to spam ur inbox Aarti😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sania_58

Beautiful update.

Thanks😊

Thanks for the PM & thanks for this long update.
ohh, specially loved the Geetanjali part.
& imagining a blushing Aham & Hot Sharmajee coming out after taking bath only in towel.

😆 Hmm that Bathroom part knocked me after I posted update here... It was nt included in the Rough update😛

& its not at all confusing for me to understand the flashback & present.
U managed it brillaintly.

Thankyu😃🤗
nicely written,great going.waiting for the next part.

yup I think we will manage next part soon😛



Thanks for ur comments Madhu😊

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: yoga123

Interesting update...

Thankyu 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
okay guys good news mayb we will b updating this soon though no guarantee u see😆


@Sonatia: u havent unresed yet!
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Posted: 10 years ago









"No not that green syrup ... Its taste is worse that worst!!", Amanyata said squeezing her nostrils and eyes shut in refusal
"Stop refusing like a kid!", a voice came into the hospital room that immediately lit up Amanyatas eyes with a glint!
"Well I envy you Dhruv... You bring out that in her eyes that even thousand Armaans would not!", Armaan said and pouted his face as he entered the room and kissed Amanyatas cheek, "Well I am jealous now!!", said the man envious as Amanyata to returned the kiss on his forehead!
"Stop Dhruv! let her rest.", said another voice entering
"Maa I got Bua after so long!" Dhruv said as he came down of the hospital bed and in a hurry gave a jerk to Amanyatas hand to which the the needle of saline bottle was pierced resulting blood oozing out and some blood in the pipe back causing mild pain! Rutuja rushed to get the nurse immediately but instead brought a doctor who was on the Special Room visit!
"I was about to contact you personally Miss Rutuja Shah, as you didn't reply to the message that the cheque you deposited last got bounced and as per hospital rules we wont be able to keep Miss Amanyata Banerjee if you don't pay the dues all I can do because you are our old and regular visitor is that we can move her to the general ward for few days if you promise us too pay till the end of this week!", said the doctor as if he banged a verbal notice on them
"I didn't get any such message...!" Rutuja frowned
"Hold on! I remember that day in hurry I gave Mausi's contact number...", Armaan recalled and "Ofcourse she did not bother to inform us as matter is concerned with Sona!" Rutuja completed him in enough angry tone
"Get the matter solved instead of this verbal bashing!", said the other lady
"Oh yes Bhabhi I will immediately call Mr. Iyer to get my cheque book"... He said removing his mobile, "Interested in helping me?", he questioned Rutuja and both moved out of the room

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"How was your tour Bhabhi?", Amanyata asked to start a conversation
"Hmm similar to other trips...I really would have skipped this if it wasn't for a noble cause!"
"Bhabhi I am not complaining!...", Amanyata said as she understood her facial expressions!

Amanyata studied her Bhabhi carefully, her eyes scanned her bhabhi's eyes...they seemed to be sleep driven for days! Worry, Pain, Stress she could fine all in those twin pair! Her bhabhi the biggest support of her when her Mother went mysteriously missing when she was in her high school! She was Amanyata's Brothers best friend since childhood later became his better half and a sweet addition in her small family! She was Amanyata's strength, her trust, her Mom, her Dad everything and... and later her brother too when she lost her brother on 26/11/2008 yes the worst Mumbai attack which laid down the streams of blood! She recalled her Bhabhi's face when her brother called them late night as he was abut to go to the place where his duties lie...his voice was commanding, firm that was the last time he spoke to all and the next very day they got the news from the constables that ACP Ajay Banerjee is no more between us! She was broken the loss of her childhood love, her soulmate was intolerable, unaffordable to her but yet Amanyata could sense the tears of pride in her eyes when she saw her husband's body covered with Indian National flag!. She recovered solely for Amanyata and Dhruv, she didn't allow Dhruv to mature before his age as it usually happens to children without a father! She passed in all her responsibilities as a Mom as well as dad!

"What happened Sona?", her bhabhi asked her breaking her thoughts
"Nothing!", she said controlling her tears as she didn't want to hurt the lady before her!


***To Be Continued***

This is the one of the most difficult update for me to pen till date! Sam just asked me giving the outline how she wanted the update to be as she could not manage it!
I dont really know how did I link 26/11 here, It was not decided earlier Its the day I dread the most...I can never forget...and I don't want to go in details as well🤢... My hands were literally shaking while typing the last part as it was running in my mind! So I decided to stop it there and it turned out to be a small update really very Sorry! All I want to say is I am able to write this just because of those Mumbai police who rushed to our help that night!! A tribute to them with a salute!⭐️


~Sans



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Edited by .Sanskruti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chap 4 updated!! all thanks to my skin rashes nd fever I could manage it😛 bt still my legs are shaking after writing this
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely...the description all throughout was very nice!

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