Aham FF: Till the Day I DIE (collab with Texie)

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

guys sorry for a mistake I did😳 glad that not many read it yet😛 plzz go through it again😳 you will get the changes😊

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Awsme update as alwz
Loved it

Beautifully penned down

Wtng for next
Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling

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sadiasaba68

@sadiasaba68

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Lovely update 👏

waiting 4 the next update 😊

update soon n thanks 4 the pm dear 😃

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zebali

@zebali

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Nice job.

Banner was great.

Awesome update.

Tf pm.

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Sphinx.

@Sphinx.

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

this is a treat dearieeesss...nice update..well done..u r right..present is most imp..u r doing it great..

at first I felt little confused and discontinuity but later I involved in the story.

really very nice mausi he had..the scene wen he spoke with that girl's father was so nice..excellent..definitions for ego and compromise..

the last part wit amanyata was very touchy..nice going gilrs..noproblem we can wait till ur exams got over..but let me know when

and all the best for the exams dear..prepare well

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...Hemangi

@...Hemangi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Amazing Update Sansii 🤗

Poor Armaan...had to run away from his shy & coy geetu darling 😆
Armaan tried to recall her name ... geet...jali...Jail... god that was funny 🤣
That girl calling him Armu...😆 she was even in his room...when he just came out of the bathroom...dripping wet with only a towel wrapped around hios waist... ☺️ 😆
God...Armaan's gf was a two-timer...he gave a good tongue lashing to him & her dad at the end. Serves her right
Even Amanyata teased him Armu 😆

Even though Armaan's mausi is a nosey poker in his matters...but she cares for him that he does not reamin alone in his life & get another pain

Very nice update...& I like reading long updates 😊 & writing long updates 😆
Continue Soon 😛

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Originally posted by: Radhikerani
Great ! Loved How The Update Flowed On !

Thanks a lot Radhe😊

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: newmoon18
Awsme update as alwz
Loved it

Beautifully penned down

Wtng for next
Update soon

Love u
Keep smiling

Thanks😊

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

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+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#109

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31
this is a treat dearieeesss...nice update..well done..u r right..present is most imp..u r doing it great..
at first I felt little confused and discontinuity but later I involved in the story.
really very nice mausi he had..the scene wen he spoke with that girl's father was so nice..excellent..definitions for ego and compromise..
the last part wit amanyata was very touchy..nice going gilrs..noproblem we can wait till ur exams got over..but let me know when
and all the best for the exams dear..prepare well

Thanks dii
I know u were slightly confused! nd thats pretty obvious too darling!😊
I am glad u r moving with this ahead!😳😳
But understand dii I cant let Armi live in past...yup u will know about their story thru flashbacks nly bt still I dnt want to give flashbacks in complete updt!!! That wud make this boring!!🥱 plus think of a person daydreaming 24*7😛 that wud be funny as others r watching him😛
plus I want this story to move in preent though it will connect with past! I think the same goes with Sam too😳 as yet we havent had fights regarding the updates here😆

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Sanskruthi

@Sanskruthi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: ...Hemangi
Amazing Update Sansii 🤗

Thankewww Hemuzzz🤗

Poor Armaan...had to run away from his shy & coy geetu darling 😆
Armaan tried to recall her name ... geet...jali...Jail... god that was funny 🤣
That girl calling him Armu...😆 she was even in his room...when he just came out of the bathroom...dripping wet with only a towel wrapped around hios waist... ☺️ 😆

ohh yes u r the first nd nly person here to note this😆 looks like both of our neurons r hyperactive these days to point out such things in each others FF😉

God...Armaan's gf was a two-timer...he gave a good tongue lashing to him & her dad at the end. Serves her right
Even Amanyata teased him Armu 😆

I was imagining Sharmajee in these scenes☺️

Even though Armaan's mausi is a nosey poker in his matters...but she cares for him that he does not reamin alone in his life & get another pain

Very nice update...& I like reading long updates 😊 & writing long updates 😆

Long updates is my speciallity forgot the length of Shapit Vidya😆😉😛😳
Continue Soon 😛