THREAD 1: To Love or not to love: An ArHi FF Chp 32 - Pg 138 / Feb 14

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Hello
I have been a reader on IF for a very long time and now I am taking the next step to publishing my first very own fan fiction on my most favorite couple on Indian television - Arnav and Khushi. Although IPK has been off the screen for well over three years now, my love for the characters of Arnav and Khushi has not diminished. And it is this love that has prompted me to write this FF.

I will be posting one chapter a week to begin with - and depending on the kind of response I get, I will either up the number of posts or end my tryst with writing.

I do urge you to please comment and give me tips / pointers so that I can improve both my story and my style of writing.

I do hope you like what I have in mind!

Thank you
Shrattila
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A big THANK YOU to Nidz for this amazing banner...



Index

Chapter 1: Scroll Below

Chapter 2: Scroll Below

Chapter 3: Scroll Below

Chapter 4: Page 2

Chapter 5: Page 3

Chapter 6: Page 4

Chapter 7: Page 5

Chapter 8: Page 6

Chapter 9: Page 9

Chapter 10: Page 12

Chapter 11: Page 15

Chapter 12: Page 19

Chapter 13: Page 23

Chapter 14: Page 26

Chapter 15: Page 28

Chapter 16: Page 33

Chapter 17: Page 37

Chapter 18: Page 41

Chapter 19: Page 47

Chapter 20: Page 55

Chapter 21: Page 61

Chapter 22: Page 65

Chapter 23: Page 70

Chapter 24: Page 75

Chapter 25: Page 79

Chapter 26: Page 89

Chapter 27: Page 94

Chapter 28: Page 104

Chapter 29: Page 113

Chapter 30: Page 126

Chapter 31: Page 132

Chapter 32: Page 138

Thread 2: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/140555957

Chapter 1

"What if it had been your sister instead of mine? Would you have done the same thing to her?

"You think you are bigger than God? Well newsflash, Mr Hotshot Business Tycoon, I don't think so and I never will.

"You think there is no one to question your actions. I will question them and I will make you accountable for every tear my sister shed today. That is a promise Mr Whoever you are...I am really not interested in knowing your name."

Arnav closed his eyes in frustration. The buying of Sheesh Mahal had been an impulsive decision. The decision to organize the annual AR fashion show at Sheesh Mahal was not really the brightest moment in the career of Arnav Singh Raizada. He had done better and now, coming to think of it, the decision had caused him more harm than good.

Some random woman had walked the ramp wearing a green bridal outfit when the theme was clearly red and she had slipped and fallen right into his arms in the audience. The press was having a field day with the news. Speculations about the identity of the girl and her relationship with ASR were rife. His PR team had been working round the clock for the last 48 hours to make sure none of the fashion show pictures or footage was released to the media. They had court injunctions prohibiting newspapers and newschannels from printing and broadcasting any news in relation with the AR fashion show at Sheesh Mahal and so far they had done a pretty good job of containing the debacle.

The girl, who was responsible for ruining the fashion show was in their custody and had identified herself as Khushi Kumari Gupta. She claimed she was there to talk to her sister's fianc regarding their sudden demand for dowry but had been unable to locate him as the volunteers pushed her down the aisle. She said nothing more except she wanted to go home before it was too late and either her sister was married to the materialistic scumbag or ruined for life.

Arnav didn't believe her story. He never believed anyone. And that is precisely why Arnav Singh Raizada was running his own multibillion-dollar empire at the young age of 32.

And in the true ASR spirit he didn't believe her either. He kept her locked in his office for 48 hours while he tried to figure out whom she was and why did she ruin his fashion show. When he didn't find any dirt on her, to say that he was stumped would be an understatement. He was sure, she was lying and was not sure how she had managed to cover her tracks so well. And so he did what he did best. He baited her.

Edited by shrattila - 7 years ago
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I couldn't resist posting the next Chapter as I finished writing it last night itself. Let me know your thoughts. Please message me if you need me to PM you as and when the new chapters come up!
And your comments and feedback are always welcome!! ;)




Chapter 2

Khushi Gupta would have died of fatigue if a poor watchman who was to keep watch on her did not smuggle food and water to her from time to time. The guard was an old man who felt really sorry for her. He also somehow believed her story. He had seen a lot of life and he didn't believe that this girl could be capable of either blackmail or extortion. But he didn't dare voice his opinion. He needed the money.

However, his conscience wouldn't allow the poor girl to suffer for no fault of hers. And so he would quietly carry to her a glass of water, apiece of bread, some biscuits, a fruit whatever he could manage to get hold of and she gratefully accepted it.

For 48 hours she was alone in a room with just one window, sunlight filtering in at dawn and the reflection of the moon on the windowpanes at dusk. The room had a small bench attached to a desk that Khushi used to sit in whenever she got tired of pacing the floor. She had questions and she demanded answers.

She was also worried. Worried that her parents might be looking for her and they wouldn't know where to start. Worried that her sister might be crying her eyes out thinking something unholy had happened to her. Well, something had definitely gone wrong. And for reasons she couldn't imagine she was being held captive in a small dark room of the Sheesh Mahal.

Khushi was scared of enclosed spaces. And she was scared of the dark. She had lost her parents to a car accident at the dead of the night. Ever since the night Khushi was extremely claustrophobic. She would gasp for breath in a perfectly ventilated small room and would often have dizzy spells and faint in dark spaces. Khushi was scared. She didn't know how to deal with it. It petrified her. She held her stomach and wept. She wanted to stop the rising fear in the pit of her stomach. She needed a source of light from somewhere.

*****

Arnav Singh Raizada was watching Khushi's reactions through the camera that was installed in the room. It was meant for Arnav to know how his competitors behaved in his absence. And he used this as a tactic to break his competitors down. Whatever Arnav had been prepared to see, it had not been a girl clutching her stomach weeping profusely. For a moment, Arnav thought all this was wrong. This girl was innocent. Then the images of the fashion show flashed in front of his eyes. How she was the only one wearing a green dress in a fashion show with a theme of red. How she slipped instead of completing her walk on the ramp and how she landed straight into his arms. And Arnav flinched.

She was no nave 24-year-old girl. She was probably paid by the competition to ruin his fashion show. AR had a reputation in the market and the amount of damage control he would have to do to keep this news away from the media was bad enough. He could not allow himself to be emotionally swayed at this juncture. Clearly, whoever this girl was, she was a very good actress. She didn't deserve any sympathy. Surely, whatever was there to know he would know in the next six hours. She would tell him, he thought while he stomped away from the monitor room.

There was another person standing behind him who was observing the entire scene silently. He chose to disagree with the conclusion drawn by Arnav Singh Raizada and therefore, against his better judgment he asked security to switch on the lights in that room.

The lights came on and the weeping on the monitor reduced to spasms finally stopping within a few minutes. The other person smiled to himself. Although he might have angered Arnav, he felt good. Something told him this girl was innocent. And although he might not be able to do anything right now, he was sure going to make these 48 hours for her as bearable as possible.

Edited by shrattila - 9 years ago
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It's a new concept,you write really well,i loved it,and i think Arnav is a douchbag and i want to smash his face.😆
Keep writing i love your story,will look foward to it.😊

Edited by sadia98 - 10 years ago
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Awesome
Will he regret what he has done or not .
What will happen when he find out it was not her.
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Hello Everyone
Thank you sooo much for the likes and comments. It really made my day - I am almost smiling. Your likes and comments truly inspire me to write more.

Therefore, without further ado, presenting Chapter 3 of To Love or not to love

As usual, a humble request, please let me know what you think of it and any suggestions you might have in terms of style / content. All compliments / comments / criticisms are always welcome!

A Big Thank You to Nidz for this amazing banner!!!



Chapter 3

It had been two days since Khushi had felt the rays of the sun touch her skin. Her skin felt parched and her first encounter with broad daylight had her squinting trying to save her pupils from overexposure of light. She had been locked in a room for two days. She didn't know why. But she had tried to find out in vain. The guards didn't seem to know anything and the person behind this forced imprisonment didn't want to talk to her. Try as she might, she could not even find out the name of the person who was behind all of this, let alone his intention.

She walked out dejected. As the sun's rays hit her skin, so also realization hit her that she had been away from her family for the last two days. She didn't know what had happened there. Had her sister gotten married? Did the groom's side agree to go ahead with the wedding despite the lack of dowry? She rushed home in clothes that she had worn day and night for the last two days, her disheveled state evident to every passerby on the road.

When she reached home, she was greeted with worried faces. The wedding had fallen apart and Khushi had been missing for the last two days. Her parents didn't her know what to make of it. They had tried getting in touch with the police but the police had asked them to wait for 72 hours before they could launch a formal investigation. And so they had waited. Each minute Khushi had not turned had made them dread the outcome of the investigation even more.

And therefore when they saw Khushi at their doorstep, in a state one could barely call presentable, they didn't know whether to thank God that their daughter was alive or worry as to why she had turned up in dirty crumpled festive clothes after 48 hours.

Before they could ask Khushi spoke. "Where is Payal?"

"She has gone to the temple."

"Did she get married?", Khushi tried to give voice to her concern, dreading the answer she might get.

"She didn't. The baraat went back because we couldn't give them the dowry they were asking for."
Khushi mentally cursed herself for the loss of reputation and money that Shashi Gupta had to undergo. Before she could confess to her crimes, Shashi asked: "Where have you been the last two days?"

"Dad, I had gone to Sheesh Mahal to reason with Mayank about the entire exorbitant dowry situation. But somehow I got directed to the wrong room and ended up walking and slipping down a ramp in a fashion show. Apparently, they felt that I was sent by some spy to ruin the image of that company and so they kept me enclosed in a small dingy room for two days hoping to find out something. When they realized that I was not part of any of their rival organizations, they let me go.", she finished in one breath.

Khushi was glad she had gotten everything off her chest. She felt lighter and less guilty. Her mother gave her worried looks and asked her to go take a hot water shower. As soon as Khushi was out of sight, Shashi Gupta's dam of patience broke. "How dare they treat my daughter like that", he roared. I want to know who those filthy human beings are who are capable of torturing a 24 year old girl. If they didn't believe what she said, they could have investigated. But trying to scare her into a confession. Hasn't my Khushi already suffered enough in life for this to happen to her?"

Garima tried to placate her husband. But Shashi was beyond trying to see reason.

Unknown to them, a black Mercedes had followed Khushi all the way home and now Arnav Singh Raizada knew that for the first time in life, he had been wrong in judging someone and that the girl had indeed told him the truth. He rolled the windows of his car up and made his way back to Sheesh Mahal, his temporary headquarters in Lucknow. Although the fashion show might have turned into a debacle, AR was still launching its fall collection in Lucknow and he had plenty of work to do.

He didn't think even once about apologizing to Khushi and her parents. It was her tough luck he felt. ASR never felt guilty about any of the decisions he took.

Chapter 4: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4343261/thread-1-to-love-or-not-to-love-an-arhi-ff-chp-32-pg-138-feb-14?pn=2

Edited by shrattila - 10 years ago
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Thank you so much for reading my work!!

A special thank you to HugeArshiFan, aliahayse, sadia98, vidhichaudhury, xXShriyaXx niya55, sarita_barun, hajr and quirky_senorita for their likes and comments.
A Big Thank You to Nidz for the amazing banner.

For all others who are reading, please hit the like button if you like it or comment with some feedback. Your compliments / comments / criticisms are always welcome.

Thank you all for your time and encouragement.



Chapter 4

Someone else didn't feel it was tough luck. He genuinely felt miserable about what Ms Gupta had to face and wanted to apologize for it, although it was never his decision go ahead with the "scared confession" tactic.

With a bunch of white lilies in his hand, he got out of his white BMW and slowly made his way to the door of the Gupta household when he heard Shashi Gupta's colourful vocabulary describing the person only he could put a name to - Arnav Singh Raizada. He stopped. This was not a good time. He would come back again. Although he really wanted to say sorry, it would have to be done some other time.

*******

Khushi Kumari Gupta was gazing at the stars that hung from her ceiling. They were glow in the dark. Everytime she missed her parents, she looked at those stars. Having them in her bedroom meant she could see and talk to her parents even during the day.

She had showered and changed into a casual baby pink salwar kameez. With her damp hair dripping water, wetting the back of her kameez, she sat on her bed, absentmindedly doodling on her bedsheet with her index nail but her thoughts were running in a completely different direction.

"Amma, from up there, you know why everything happens. So tell me, why did this happen to me? What did I do? You know I feel so scared in the dark? And yet that horrible man kept me locked in a dark room for two days? Why did you let this happen Amma?"

She knew she would get no answers. She had no energy to listen. She was physically and emotionally exhausted from the events of the last 48 hours. Propped up against the headboard of her bed, Khushi fell into deep slumber.

*********

Sheesh Mahal was seeing a flurry of activities. There were lights being set up, event managers pacing up and down, shouting directions into their headphones, caterers setting up the food area, art directors doing the stage and ramp, and Lavanya Kashyap busy painting her nails for the 20th time. This time, the red apparently looked too dark.

"I don't like red anymore ASR", she chirped. "I think I am going to try teal for the party tonight. And then I might go crazy and try on a yin yang nail art with a black and white dress on the day of the show".

Arnav Singh Raizada, was busy barking instructions into his expensive Bose Bluetooth headpiece. He hardly heard what she said. Once upon a time, Lavanya Kashyap's inclusion of the words yin and yang in her sentence would have impressed Arnav. But he had gone beyond that now. He had taken all that Lavanya had to offer and now felt nothing for her anymore.

"ASR, are you listening to me", Lavanya prodded, in a gentle almost timid tone.

"No", came the clipped answer before he got on another call to bark some more at another poor unsuspecting soul on the other end of the line.

Lavanya sighed and went back to painting her nails. She was used to this by now. ASR was never interested in what she did or wanted. All he was interested in was what she could give him. In her initial days as his live-in Business Developer, Lavanya felt as if she was the center of his attention. Now he barely gave her any. The signs were clear. ASR was done with her. She could bow out on her own with her dignity intact, or ASR would end it in his own brutal way. She chose the former.

Lavanya Kashyap might have been many things, but she was no fool. She knew her time would be up one day. People like ASR never fell in love. And she preferred to still keep her self-esteem intact, whatever was left of it after being the mistress of the youngest and richest Casanova of the country for a year. She however wondered as to who would fill her shoes. A part of her almost went out to the new unknown girl, but she soon snapped out of it.

Now that ASR was done with her, she had to look for a real job. She, after all, had a mother to take care of. Better leave the country altogether, she mused, before dabbing some nail polish remover on a blob of cotton and working to remove all the colour from her freshly painted nails. Red was last season. She wondered what colour would it be this season.

Chapter 5: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/4343261/thread-1-to-love-or-not-to-love-an-arhi-ff-chp-32-pg-138-feb-14?pn=3


Edited by shrattila - 10 years ago
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I just realised it might be difficult for people to find chapters as I keep adding more and more. So I have decided to include an index on the first page of the thread. Hope that helps!
Many Thanks once again!
Edited by shrattila - 10 years ago
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This is getting really good 😳
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Awesome update.
it was superb.
Will be waiting for next.

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