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Posted: 10 years ago
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Billionaires baby sister


Hai guys after reading so many fantastic os s, ss s ffs, i think I have to give it a try to write a ff
No no no don't be afraid 😆 its not my own creativity, i just want to rewrite a novel in AKDHA version, hope you guys will enjoy.
Index :-

prologue :- page 1 & 3
Chapter 1:-page 4
Chapter 2:-page 4
Chapter3:-page 12

prologue :-

The storm raged outside, rain pelting the long windows of d large family room, making d usually cozy atmosphere cold and ominous. Occasionally the wind whipped around d corner
of d house and the eerie howl could be heard inside.
Most of her family working at various tasks around the room didn't seem to diminish the feeling of doom. Jodha was experiencing, glancing around the large room, she tried to pinpoint the problem, but nothing seemed unusual. Every one was in his or her customary place.

Her mother was sitting at the end of the sofa, cross stitching, her four old brothers were either at the dining room table doing their own home work or were lounging in a chair reading.
Jodha s father saw her taking in the scene behind the news paper. The only two missing were
the oldest children of the Singhs family. Jai, the oldest of the seven children was in his second year at Harvard and Sukanya the next oldest, was in her first year at IIT.

Refocusing on her home work, jodha bit her lower lip in concentration as she tried to figure out the algebra problem for her assignment. It was her first week of 4th grade and jodha was trying to make a good impression with her new teachers. She was the only student in her grade that was allowed to take algebra and she was determined to prove she could excel at the task. She dismissed her uneasiness, attributing it to her imagination.

The shrill ring of the telephone seemed to make everyone jump. She heard her mother s cheerful greeting as she spoke to the person at the other end of the line. Jodha sensed her mother s change in mood before she noticed the tensing of her shoulders. Her brothers were still doing their own home work, oblivious to the changed atmosphere. Jodha instinctively knew that her mother was in pain, but she didn't understand why?

Jodha stood as the phone fell out of her mother s hand, landing with a foreboding thud onto the floor. She watched as her mother s shoulders began shaking. Her hands went to cover her ears as if she could stop the agonizing information from coming. As jodha watched her mother bent over the table and an anguished wail tore out of her soul. It was as if her life were being pulled from her body.the sound was the most horrific in jodha s young life.

I think i am done guys 😆so here i am stopping, if u like this part i will update next part tomorrow. Waiting for your comments. '.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Firstly many many congraz for ur first story..
nice start..
continue soon..
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congrats... nice start ... plz continue it
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congoo on your first story dear!!
liked the prologue very much
please continue soon dear.
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congratulation dear for new story.
nice concept.
continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congo for ur first story
It's really nice
Do contand pm me pls
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Congo for the 1st story! Very beautiful story ..prolonge awesome..update sn and pm me..can u tell me that which novel it is?
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congo for ur 1st FF
nice prologue plz do cont n pm me
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congo fr ur 1st ff awsum prologue do continue soon...
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Originally posted by: prathi025

Nice start

Waiting for next


Thank you dear.

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