manan os m never leaving u again........

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was having my lunch when this idea poped in my head ...hope u like it
it starts from yesterdays episode after talking manik and nyonika's talking
part 1
it was 7:00 pm and nandini was not home yet cahchi was so worried she was not answering her phone also ... at last chachi called navya
navya and cabir were having their usual fights allya,mukti and druv were also there when navya's phone stared ringing
navya: wait ... chachi ka phone
cabir also stoped and everyone paid attention to navya...
chachi: hi navya is nandni there with u she have not reached home and her phone is also switched off...
navya was shocked
flash back
she and nandini were leaving the college when suddenly she got a message from pandit ji asking nandini to come and see him regarding her class ...
nandu: navya u go i'll talk t pandit ji and will go home
navya: no i'll wait for u here u go
nandu: no navya u go and take rest u r not feeling well also plzzz i'll be going home after meeting pandit ji
navya : ok take care bye.

present

navya: han...han.han chachi nandini is with me( fab4 shocked and looked at navya why is she lying) sorry her phone battery died thats why she didn't called u she is in the washroom she asked me to inform u but i forgot m sorry chachi
chachi: its ok i was just worried ok ... bye take care and ask nandini to call me when she gets free

navya cuts the call and stays silent...
cabir: ohhh helo madhubala speak up why u lied nandini is not with u right.
mukti: then where is nadini
alya: don't tell me she's with amnik again
druv: stop it guys let her speak...
navya tell them the whole story ...
druv: but why didn't she reached home then .i hope she is ok
navya: lets go to the college and check
mukti: ya lets go
cabir: let me call manik...
manik was sitting in his room playing his broken guitar ...suddenly his phone started ringing ... but he didn't payed any attention to it ...it kept ringing finally manik got annoyed and picked up the phone...
manik: cabir if i am not picking up the phone means m busy right... whats the problem now tell me
cabir: manik wo...wo
manik(angry): what wo wo speak up cabir
cabir: manik wo nandini is missing...(he tell him about navya and nandini's last conversation)
manik went all blank...
cabir: manik we r going to the college u reach there
manik took his car key's ... he was driving like crazy ...he remembered how he behaved with nandini her tears ... her pain ... there breakup
fab4 and navya reached at college gate they were about to go in when manik also reached there
manik: where's she...
navya: don''t know she told me she will go back home after meeting pandit ji but she didn't ...
manik: r u crazy why did u left her alone
fab 4 were surprised with his behavior he told them that no more nandini and now so much care for her

manik went to the watch man...
manik: is there anyone still in the college ...
watchman: (hesitating) no...no..no.sir one is there
manik knew something was wrong he held the watchman by his neck
manik: u better tell me the truth before i kill u
watch: sir ...sir actually that new pandit ji is still here he asked me to keep the gates open...
all of them got shocked they knew that something is wrong here ...
on there side nandini was hiding at the terrace crying her sleeves were torn ...

flash back
nandini reached to pandit ji's office the whole college was empty everyone went back home...
she knocked the door
nandu: may i come in
pandit ji: with a smile yes u may...come have a seat...
nandini came in and sat down ...
pandit ji :nandini do u know u r a very brilliant student ... i mean ur voice ,ur knowledge about music ...
he started walking to wards nandini came and stood behind her ... nandini felt a little uncomfortable ...

pandit ji: and top of that nandini u r very beautiful also ...
( nadu felt strange she knew something is not right when she noticed closely ...she found that pandit is drunk )
nadu's prov: Omg he is drunk i have to go from here
she stood up ans started to leave ... pandit held her by her wrist and pushed her back on her chair ...
nandu : let me go someone help...

pandit: tststststttssttstst...ohhh poor nandini no one is gona help u cause no one is here everyone went back home ... and that lover boy of ur ...wht's his manik ... he is also not coming to save u ...
nandini tried to push him but he held her back and tore her sleeve and scratched her arms he tried to kiss her nandini was screaming but there was no one around she tried to push him but he was to big for her ... suddenly she saw a vase on the table ... she held in and smashed it on his head he moved back for sec he slapped her across the face ...nandini fell back but she again gather the courage and hit him harder this time he fell back she pushed him and ran out ... she ran but the door was locked from outside she saw the stairs to the terrace and ran up ...
present
pandit got up and went out he saw the door to terrace open
pandit: run nandini run no one gona save u today...

manik was running and shouting nandinis name ...the rest were doing the same they were checked alll the classes ...but couldn't find her...
mukti: guys i think she is not here lets check some where else ...
all off them were about to leave when they heard girl screaming for help...
manik at the very moment recognized the voice ...his heart started sinking with fear
manik:nan...nan...nandini...
manik and the rest started running towards the terrace

... manik pushed the door open and the sight infront of him killed him there was his precious nandu and that filthy pandit forcing himself on her ... manik went near him and pushed him off her
navya ,mukti and alya went near nandini she was crying badly navya gave her scarf to her to cover her self ...
druv called the police
manik started punching him ... he was hitting him so hard ... pandit's face was bleeding
manik: how dare u touch her... how dare u ... how dare u even put ur... evil eye on her... i'll u...i'll kill u
mean time nandini fainted ...
navya : nandini ...
cabir and druv stoped manik ... but he was not ready to let him go...
the police also came there
cabir: manik police will handle him ... we have to save nandini ...
when manik heard her name he left him and turned back and saw nandini fainted...
he gave pandit the last puch and ran u nandini ...
he took he in his arms and started running towards his car...
cabir: manik we can not take her to the hospital like this the will ask a lot of questions...
mukti: lets take her to maniks house ...nyokia is also not it town so it will be ok...
mukti and cabir in front manik took nandinis head in his lap and sat at the back the rest wre in alya's car ...
manik(crying): m sorry... m sorry ...
mukti and cabir were socked they never saw manik crying before...
on the way mukti called the doctor and asked him to reach at manik's place ...
they reached ... manik took nandini to his room and laid her on the bed
took her hand and sat beside her
and sat beside her the doctor came and checked her...
doctor asked all of them to come out
doc: there r no severe injuries she fainted because of shock ... m giving so medicine just give it regularly to her just make sure she don't stress much...

the doctor left they were all outside when they heard nandini screaming manik and all rushed in the saw nandini sitting on the floor near the bed covering her face with her hands ...
condition killed manik everyone was shocked to see nandini like this...

manik went near and touched nandini's shoulder she stoped screaming and looked at manik with ... the scared eyes..
nandu:(crying) manik he ... he ...
manik : (hugged nandini) its ok ... its ok he is not coming back he is gone
nandu held manik tightly on his jacket : plzzz don't leave again manik ...
manik: m here nandu

manik made nandini lay down on the bed she put her head on manik's chest still holding his jacket fearing that he will leave
fab4 and navya and navya decided to stay there
fab4 took 1 pillow each and settled on the floor navya on the couch...
nandu: u wil not leave right ...
manik: m never leaving u again nandini .

to be cont...

this is my 1st os ever hope u guys like it do read and comment

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kresham thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ohh God this was too scary for me...i dont like this kind of scenes but with somuch of courage i completed ...u have written nicely
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: kresham

Ohh God this was too scary for me...i dont like this kind of scenes but with somuch of courage i completed ...u have written nicely




really sorry for that 😆 just couldn't help after yesterday's episode the way pandit ji was looking at nandu but promise next part will be a happy ending
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Afrais but awesome in same time
Keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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u hav written it very nicely..cud actually feel evrythin happnin infront of my eyes..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome dear.
I luved it.
Plz continue soon.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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waoo this was amazingg,,, i got soo scaared ,,, but well written each and every word expresses the emotions 👏

continue soon


thanks for the PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik the hero..came on time
update soon

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