AsYa (KaBhi) SS Our Hearts Are Connected (chaper 1- updated pg 14)

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: PrettYSmile
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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: sasir
Nice
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Felt bad for zoya
Plz continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: zoya6
Awesome plot, loved it!!

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: Chahanya

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Posted: 10 years ago

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PROLOGUE

It was a beautiful bright day..the colour of the sky was blue and the yellow sun with orange shading was just looking amazing, the birds were chirping and flying in sync in the blue sky, a beautiful, chubby 16 year old girl was witnessing these things sitting near the lake with a diary in her hand scribling something in her diary, she had beautiful brown eyes but her eyes were moist they were full of tears...

Girl- every time I tried my best ashu, I tried to become your friend but I failed I don't know what was my mistake to bear hatred only, every time you said you hate me I ignored it thinking maybe one day you'd say something that would make me happy, but I was wrong that day you insulted me a lot, ashu you broke me beyond repair, I have always loved you and now I'm going far away from your life hope you have a blessfull life, where ever I will go I will always pray for your well being I don't know if I'll be able to hate you or not but I know one thing I will never come to you... if you're in my destiny and if our hearts are connected then He (god) will bring us together...

Same girl was walking inside her house with luggage in her left hand and a purse in her right hand the only difference was she was a grown up woman

Girl- finally I'm back home (she said with a big smile displaying her cute dimples)

A handsome guy was watching her from a lil distance he was totally mesmerized by her beauty

Girl- *whispered* ashu

The guy smiled and walked towards her..but she ignored him and walked passed him she went inside without even looking back at him, he was shock the girl who used to run around him for every small thing today she ignored him...

He didn't know why but it did prick his heart...

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Awesome Prologue Dear👏😊

Asad is a jerk to always hurt Zoya😡

Now his ego is hurt wen she ignored him🥱. But dis is only d start, Asad. U have a to bear for ur misdeeds n insults to Zoya😆.

Now, Asad has to feel d same pain or worse n he is no one to feel jealous of Zoya wid another man wen he always hurt her n wants her only cuz she has a perfect figure now😡