ArShi FF: Sex between Hearts - Thread 6 - Page 79

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice teaser
But why Abhay is angry with Arnav ?
Can't wait to find out
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Posted: 10 years ago
I felt equally bad for khushi and her parents. Reality bites. Glad Arnav is there to help khushi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi dear, you are not updating today😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi toxic can't believe this time I'm first for the first time. It's an impossible task I must tell u because of ur followers. I'm honoured to read ur stories.coming to the update.. Now this is called an update.. Kya toxic naam ke sath updates ka size bhi change kar diya. Ek toh weekly upper se apke standard ke hissab se choti. But this is truely magical. Loved this side of arnev. Totally charge up to go any leanth for his lady love. Father son's interaction is suparb. In the end father is able to join the dots.he can see arnev's anguish.Arnev is trying his best to keep her out from troma. Now waiting for next...
Edited by 9351594004 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Unres..

Stalking paid off...I hope everything is ok in your end.

Arnav is was cute and adorable in this update. He went out of his way to save Khushi, even making deal with bitch doctor. He fought with his cool dad for Khushi, by now Abhay would have understood like Gayatri what kind of place Khushi has in Arnav's Heart. Please let the divorce happen quickly, even like Arnav we hate Khushi being called Mrs.Mehta. Too good that the jerk's lawyers is squeezing every rupee out that miser jerk.

So cute, Arnav gave her personal phone and Dick's hell...LOL. Arnav is flirtexting Khushi, Poor Khushi is all flustered. She is also getting technology lessons from her lavvu. Lavvu is little jalan about Arnav.

I hope jerk goes to jail soon, Don't want to talk about him anymore. Bitch doctor's punishment is awaiting from Arnav in the real world. Jail is too easy for her.


Akka, meeku Manmadha nama Ugadi Subhakankshalu.
Edited by Pinky.Raizada - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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dont know what to say Di... such an amazing update... the way Arnav is fighting for his Khushi, trying to protect her from further pain, determined to provide her the justice she deserves, and every emotion he's been going through... wow Diii, beautifully portrayed... A.M.A.Z.I.N.G...

nd the fight between father-son... well, isse fight bhi nahi kaha jata... but the face off... two intelligent people, both right from their POV... and at the end of it Arnav's frustration, almost requesting his dad... and finally his dad realized what Khushi actually meant for his son...

also his helpless nod when his dad addressed Khushi as Mrs. Mehta... my heart goes for Arnav Di... he can fight the world, but how can he fight his own dad... but i'm positive Abhay too will react the way Gayatri did... wisely...

Poor Khushi... her blind trust to her husband landed her to this helpless situaltion now... no wonder that Mehta Jerk was gloating so much... no Di, i m not blaming Khushi... at all... she believed in her husband, gave her 100% in that relationship, trust included... this is not her fault in any way...

but Arnav has to try the hardest now to help her... battle against a lot... go through so many complicated angles... all of this must be so frustrating for him... poor man even has to skip the chance of taking to Khushi...
nd his earlier messages to her... sooo cute... u always know how to blend light moments in serious updates... hai naa Di... this is sooo adorable... it not only brought smile to Khushi's face, but to ours too... loved it to core...

also Lavanya-Khushi interaction is really sweet... the jealousy of seeing your best friend getting another friend, yet be happy for her... so real, nd so beautiful... wow...


i'm really short of words Diii, dont know what to say and how to say... my simple words cant be enough to describe how amazing a writer you are Di, but you toh already know that naa... so i'm skipping that part...
waiting for next week already...

Edited by nishu_shorna - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
I hope everything is good at ur end.. :)
N update was superb as always , the
way u showed every emotion is highly
applauded... :) 👏 keep it up!!⭐️
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Wow, wow simply wow..fully enjoyed khushi desperation and lavanya's jealousy..khushi's desperation to see the message from arnav and lavanya's jealousy over khushi's full trust on arnav..one time this khushi makes us to believe that she is not naive but strong headed lady and one moment she made us to think is she the one who took gr8 step to punish that kameena? So strong at the same time so innocent..she is thinking abt what arnav will do now as he handed her his personal phone to her ..at last when they opened the inbox , hush so many messages that too from ladies 😳 aren't all the messages from us the "toxic lovers" ? 😉 😆 😳 ..nice common sense there of lavanya 👏 lets start from bottom as the first message should be from him..what the! Hilarious name..like seriously Dick's hell? Any particular reason behind the name toxic loveji? Just curious..but i have a question here deepthi..now he handed over his mobile to khushi what abt the incoming calls he used to get daily? Will she answer all those calls? Because not to forget he is a doctor and moreover a famous gynac in the town. Loved the way lavanya left that spot slowly without disturbing khushi..i was smiling throught the messages she read..and in the first message itself he showed so much caring..he started the so easily..wow first its sunshine and afterwards scratching that sleepy head..and lol hot man in the world out there one second i believed with khushi that is he waiting there outside? And then ok he is refering to sun 😉 rofling 🤣 or seriously is he indirectly referring to himself? ..and finally the teaserwala part came..and the heated argument between father and son..o god i was speechless..happily grinningwala update completely turned in to serious one. Both are correct in their stance..and gayatri's situation here whether to take her husband's side or son's? Poor her..loved arnav how he does not want to bring khushi in this case with very valid reason..having her signitures on all abortion papers that kameena winning case chances are high..so the only easiest way remaining here is to fight the case by luring that kameeni deshmukh..good thought of arnav there.. and finally abhay connected all the dots and runs his mind to know his son's heart.. Superb update dear..now he came to know abt arnav and the reason behind his heart restlessness very eager to know what will he do next? Because his last thinking abt khushi a married woman and now a divorcee, we cant take it lightly..enjoyed whole update deepthi..lastly wish happy ugadi to you and your family:) hope every thing is fine at ur end now..thank you for this power packed update..love you a lot 😳
Edited by GuruDeep246 - 10 years ago

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