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Originally posted by: ArunimaJA

oh! Thxsss preet di love you for that...give me a hug 🤗
Thxss fr helping this pagal... 😉


Aww you r most welcome dear🤗
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Originally posted by: justlovetv

Preet!🤗

Hi Samy🤗
I totally loved this update! It was a continuation of the previous one, and these two are getting adorable with each chapter
Awww thanks dear😳😳

Another very beautiful portion was when the both of them reminisced about their old times together; like how Jalal asked her when she started liking him😳 And she also innocently revealed how hurt and depressed she was when he stopped talking to her😳

Jodha finally revealed that she realised her love for him when he told her about the USA trip😳
Yes that whole night was revelation night😳😳😳

And finally, whatever happens, happens for the best, it is said. The same thing happened for these two; I can't imagine the pain and sadness they would have to go through if that phone call didn't happen!
That would've been very very sad

I loved the beautiful games they played; imagining each other together.

And their hug😳.
😃😃
Phone par hi aisa hai toh reality mein kaisa hoga?
Reality mein kaisa hoga jaanne ke liye thodi prateeksha karni padegi😆😆

God showed Jalal the right path! And led her to Jodha!

And they did speak the entire night😲😳. Thank God Maina didn't see them😆
Hehe yes thank god for saving them from Maina😆

They waited the entire day; I can imagine the anxiety and restlessness they must have had to talk and converse with each other😳

The gajar halwa😳, loved how Jalal teased her there😉. And then she finally told him how she would drink his leftover coffee😳. He was so moved and deeply touched by her love; he must be feeling truly lucky!😳
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And then the beautiful forehead kiss and hug through the phone😳Absolutely loved the way Jalal pulled the blanket to make her sleep beside him😳 He wanted to feel cozy and comfortable!😳
Hmm

The thing I love the most about this story is its simplicity; no complicated events, no villlains (as of now atleast😆), no drama. Just plain pure love between two normal people
Aww Thanks a lot dear and @ underline😆😆

I read updates regularly but unres my comments late
Chalo der aaye durust aaye😳😆
But don't worry, I love each and every update you give!
Aww thanks dear🤗

Update soon!
Updating today😳

Loads of love!🤗
Preet❤️🤗

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"What???? Open your blanket, what for??" She replied shockingly.


"Umm coz I am getting cold without you here...every night when you come and hug me, only then I feel warm" He mischievously said.


"What!!! Main kya heater huin???" (What!!! Am I a heater??) chuckled Jodha.


"Hmmm yes, you're my very own personal heater!! I feel cold until you come and hug me every night." He whispered sensually.


Jodha smiled shyly and fell silent.


Chapter 28


The nightly rendezvous continued!!


Dreamy days always passed in a flick. Both of them felt like six days passed in just few seconds. They came to know so much about each other. Their likes, dislikes, family, etc. It had become their routine to talk every night after everybody went to sleep. They had decided not to talk during the day so no one notices them on phone too much and gets suspicious in any way.


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Jodha was studying as her mind drifted to one of their conversations from the night before "My father passed away years ago when I was in class 11. I miss him a lot!! Being the youngest in the family I have always been the most pampered one, specially by him."


Jalaal was also thinking about Jodha, she got so sad hearing about my father and when I asked about her father she almost cried and revealed "My father also passed away, but I was much younger...I was in class 2 only!!" Then sadly she added "I don't remember him much, only a few things. But I do remember that day when he..." She almost choked...


"Heeyy don't cry please, I understand your pain but this is God's will and we can't do anything" Jalaal tried to console her.


They had both lost their fathers and both their mothers worked hard to survive. Infact that was one of the reasons why Jalaal started working right out of college so he could become independent and support his family.



At night on phone


"Jo hang up the phone and make your phone's ringer volume very low, I will call you back in a minute" Jalaal said in an instructive tone.


"Uhhh okay" replied Jodha confused. 'What happened to him?? No hello no hi!!!! Maybe someone was nearby and he couldn't talk' thought Jodha trying to guess the reason behind this sudden order.


As soon as she kept the phone back after turning the ringer low, Jalaal called back.


Jodha quickly picked the phone and asked curiously "Hi! Is everything okay?? What happened?? Why did you ask me to hang up??"


Jalaal replied calmly "Because I realized that you have been calling me every night and..."


"So??" asked Jodha cutting him off in between.


"So when the phone bill comes you could get in trouble" explained Jalaal. "We have to be very careful about all these things. Our future depends on how we handle things right now. Now is not the right time to reveal our love to anyone." Then Jalaal sadly added "I don't want you getting in any trouble while I am thousands of miles away."


Hearing his well matured and wise thinking, it some what bothered Jodha. She didn't want to come back to reality so soon. Her ears echoed constantly with one sentence again and again... While I am away'... Reality of the life was scratching her peaceful dreamy mind and heart constantly... and the only thing she could think about was How will I stay without you???'


"But how will I stay without you???" she blurted out before she could stop herself. Then she asked "Do you really have to go?? I mean I know you have to go but...it's...it's just that... I... I will miss you a lot" Jodha sadly voiced her feelings.


"I will miss you too, more than you can imagine. But now it's even more important for me to go. Earlier I was worried thinking if I would ever see you again or not...but now I think it's good that I'm going because..." Jodha interrupted before Jalaal could continue "What do you mean??" questioned Jodha. Then sadly she asked "You want to go away from me??"


"Nooo I don't, but right now we can't tell your family about us...you are too young to get married right now." Then in low tone he added "If we say anything now it might get taken in a wrong way. Plus right now I'm not even employed. But once I'm settled and have a good job, that too in US, it will be a big point in our favour when we do talk to your family. This gap will help us... people will forget the fact that I'm your teacher, I'm hoping that after some time it won't matter, the only thing that worries me is our age difference...but one thing is sure that to be together we will not hurt anyone's feelings."


"Yes, I want both our families to agree happily for our marriage" Jodha added.


"My family won't have any problem...they will be happy with the fact that finally I agreed to get married" he replied amused. Then with worry he added "I don't know how we will make your family agree...but don't worry we will think of something, for now we need to keep our feelings between us" concluded Jalaal.


"Hmmm" whispered Jodha.


"Hey!!! Don't worry too much...everything will be fine, it will all work out. I'm sure God will help us...he has gotten us this far...he will surely help us in future too. Have faith!!" Jalaal tried to comfort her, even though he himself was feeling the same. "And till I'm here we will talk everyday, also meet in school and tuition...spend as much time as we can with each other."


"Hmmm!! Do you know when you have to go?? I mean any date fixed yet??" Jodha asked in low tone.


"No date has been fixed yet but they are looking for ticket for sometime at the end of next month" revealed Jalaal.


"We only have a month???" asked Jodha as tears fell from her eyes.


Silence prevailed, they both fell quite. Both were sad, a couple minutes later Jalaal heard Jodha's soft sobs and it broke his heart, he too had unshed tears in his eyes. 'I have to make her strong because if she keeps crying like this how will I be able to go??' he thought.


"Jo" composing himself he called softly.


"Hmmm" replied Jodha as she couldn't say anything else through her sobs.


"Jaan, please don't cry... I will come back soon and take you with me. But till then you have to be strong...How will I go if you cry like this??" He said in serious tone


Jodha stayed quiet but started wiping her tears.


When Jodha didn't respond... He lovingly said to cheer her up "Jaan, I'm not there so please wipe your tears for me... I would have done it myself if I was there" his concern touched her heart.


Jodha smiled hearing him and wiping the remaining tears she said "I'm fine, I'm not crying... I mean not anymore."

'I shouldn't cry in front of him...he gets sad too...from now on I'll just stay happy in front of him' decided Jodha.


"Good" said Jalaal happily. "Drink some water, do you have water with you??" Jalaal asked concernedly.


"Yes I have, don't worry I'm fine" said Jodha smilingly hearing his concern.


"Okay now it's getting late so you go and turn the lights off first, then we'll talk."


"Okay wait, I'll just come" said Jodha and kept the phone on hold and went to turn off the lights while Jalaal waited.


"I'm back, lights off" declared Jodha.


"Hmmm now come inside my blanket" he whispered sweetly.


"Okay, I'm here...happy now??" Giggled Jodha.


"Yes very happy. So what were you studying today??" He casually asked her.


"I was doing accounts test paper, have to finish it before tuition on Monday" told Jodha.


"Okay!! By the way it's been a week today since we are together" He sounded more desperate than he intended to.


"Hmmm I know" replied Jodha excitedly.


"And tomorrow is New Year's Eve, what's your plan for tomorrow??" Jalaal asked curiously.


"I want to start my New Year with you, I want to wish you Happy New Year before anyone else and then I'll go inside and wish everyone. Usually every year we all watch programs on TV, wish each other and then sleep but tomorrow I'll just study like everyday...then later I'll call you, and after wishing you I'll go inside and wish everyone."


"Seems like you have given it a lot of thought and planned everything in advance" teased Jalaal.


"Of course, this is our first new year together" replied Jodha.


"Yes it is and I want a gift from you..."


"Gift?? What can I possibly give you on phone??" Jodha asked confusingly.


Hint of smile smeared on his face... "I have something in mind that you can give on phone too, but first you promise me that you won't say no..." He said mysteriously.


"Aap aisa kya maangne wale ho??" (What exactly do you have in mind??) Jodha asked skeptically.


"Don't worry, I'm not asking something that you can't give!!" Jalaal replied impassively.


Her eyes sparkled in unknown excitement and at the same time she felt nervous... She worriedly thought hope he doesn't ask for a kiss or something, anything else I'll do...'


"So you promise??" Jalaal asked again.


"Uhhh do I have a choice??" Jodha meekly replied.


"It's not a big deal, I just want you to wish me New Year calling me Jalaal, that's all" said Jalaal making it sound like it's the easiest thing to do.


"Ohhh that's it... I thought you'd ask for...never mind" Jodha said heaving a sigh of relief. She felt relieved thinking he didn't ask for a kiss or something, But then suddenly she started panicking again when she realized what he was asking. "On second thoughts it is a difficult thing to do."


"No it's not, all you need to say is HAPPY NEW YEAR JALAAL, what's difficult in that??? It's just four simple words" Jalaal asked perplexed.


"Okay okay I will try..." replied Jodha.

'Well atleast he didn't ask for a kiss like I feared, so that's some consolation and he is right it's not that big a deal. Maybe I'll say something else too which he does want to hear but isn't expecting...he'll get even more happier.' Jodha patted herself on the back for her plan and smiled mischieviously.


"By the way what did you think I was gonna ask??" Jalaal naughtily asked having a clear idea of what she could've thought.


"Uhhh nothing... I didn't think of anything" Jodha very innocently replied. To change the topic Jodha quickly said " You called me JAAN earlier!!"


Jalaal smiled and replied "Yes I did and you noticed??"


"Of course I noticed, how can I not..."


"Hmmm I called you Jaan because that's what you are, MY JAAN" he said lovingly.


"Really!!" Jodha asked dreamily.


"Yes Jaan, really!!" Jalaal said lovingly.


"So New year's plan is fixed...have you made any other plans??" Jalaal teased.


"Ya I have lots of plans, that's what I do all day...make plans..." laughed Jodha.


Jalaal also softly chuckled hearing her reply.


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This past week brought them much closer, talking to each other every night helped them open up with each other, specially Jodha. She is still very shy but at least on phone she had become quite comfortable with him.



31st December

Last day of the year. Both Jodha and Jalaal were happy with how this year their relationship took a beautiful and unexpected turn, even though initially they went through some ups and downs but by the end of the year they revealed their feelings to each other and now both were excited to begin their new journey with each other and enter the new year together.


Jodha practiced and prepared all day to call him by his name. She was feeling nervous, anxious, happy, excited...all at the same time.


'I am already having a hard time thinking how I will give him his gift and on top I got another brilliant idea to torture myself with the surprise gift that I thought of to give him. God only knows how I will do this!! I hope I can pull this off.' Jodha thought worriedly.


After dinner Jodha went to her room to study. She looked at the phone and smiled remembering how she managed to move the phone to her room. "Mumma it's only me at home all day and I'm usually sitting in the balcony studying under the sun so whenever the phone rings I have to run all the way inside to pick it up, why not just leave the phone in my room!!"

Thank god Mumma agreed without giving it much thought. Lucky me!! I just hope that she doesn't change her mind and take the phone back inside, at least until the end of the month before he leaves. Suddenly she felt sad remembering that he will be leaving soon...'Who knows when we will meet again?? When we will tell everyone about us?? How everyone will react?? Will Mumma agree?? No no don't think like that, of course she'll agree, we have to make her agree...the only question is how long will she take to agree?? God please make her agree in as less time as possible.' She prayed silently.


She looked at the watch and it was almost time for her to call him. Her heart beats started beating faster as she braced herself for the gift he asked for and also the surprise she'd planned for him. With each passing second her nervousness was increasing but at the same time she was very excited for her plan. Finally she decided to call him as she knew he must be eagerly waiting for her call.


She gave him a missed call on his mobile as usual and then waited for his call. And as expected he called her right back.


Taking a deep breath she picked up the phone on second bell, "Hello" she cooed softly.


"Hi Jaan!!" he replied lovingly.


She replied hesitantly..."Hi!!" Everytime he calls her Jaan, her heart skips few beats and her mind freezes for a few seconds.


"So, ready to start the new year with me?? Not much time left..." He asked in exciting tone.


"Yes" She replied nervously.


He reminded her "Will I get the gift I want??"


"Maybe" Jodha teased.


"Maybe?? Nooo, I want my gift..." He replied insistive tone.


Jodha laughed hearing his tone. "Okay okay you will get your gift. But before that I wanted to tell you that after wishing you I will go inside and wish everyone and then come back in maybe 15-20 mins or so and call you back...okay??" She explained her plan sweetly.


"Okay sure, no problem!" Jalal casually replied.


'Hopefully I'll give you your surprise gift as well...' thought Jodha.


"Hellooo where are you lost?? What happened?? Is everything okay??" Jalaal worriedly asked.


"Yes yes everything is fine...you worry too much. I was just getting ready to wish you. Only 2 mins left now..." Jodha told excitedly.


"Hmmm I am very eagerly waiting for my gift."


"I know..." laughed Jodha. 'Hopefully you will like your surprise gift too.'


"Okay 15 secs left...Lets start the countdown... 10


9


8


7


6


5


4


3


2


"HAPPY NEW YEAR" whispered Jodha excitedly.


"Happy New Year Jaan muaaahh. Par mera gift kahan gaya??" (But, where is my gift??) Jalaal asked disappointingly.


"Mil jayega mil jayega, thoda intezaar karo... Intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai" (You will get it soon, have patience...) She chuckled softly after hearing his disappointed tone.


"Okay now I'm gonna go inside and wish everyone and then I'll call you back..." said Jodha.


"Arre par mera gift..." (Ohh but what about my gift...) asked Jalaal impatiently.


"Ya ya I meant after giving you your gift I'll go inside..." Smiled Jodha at his impatience. "By the way I have a surprise gift for you as well."


"A surprise gift...wow what is it??"


"You'll know soon. Okay, here comes your gift...and surprise gift as well..." She paused, took a deep breath and quickly said "I LOVE YOU JALAAL" and closed her eyes and continued "Uhhh I will call you later" and swiftly hung up without even waiting for his reply.


As soon as Jalaal heard her confession he just froze, he was just too surprised, happy, ecstatic, on cloud nine...he never expected her surprise gift to be I Love You...he always thought she will take a very long time to openly accept her feelings and confess like this but he was in no hurry..."We have our whole life together" he had thought earlier. "She can say it whenever she wants and feels comfortable to say it. It's not like I don't already know... I know she loves me a lot. So I'll give her all the time she needs." No doubt he was eager to hear those three words from her but at the same time he didn't wanna push her, hence he decided to wait for her to say it whenever she wanted. But this surprise of hers just blew him away. 'And now I have to wait till she calls back... I know she felt shy that's why she hung up but I don't want to wait... I want to hear those three words again and again...until now I was patiently waiting to hear these magical words from her, even though I already knew how she feels about me but after hearing her say it I feel like hearing it over and over again' thought Jalaal as he tucked his palm under his chin and waited eagerly for her call.


Jodha on the other hand was still sitting in her room trying to calm her excited nerves and repeating to herself to make herself believe "I said it...I said it... I really did...Oh my God finally I said it..."

'He must be happy' she thought as she imagined him smiling in happiness.


"Okay now go inside before anyone comes and finds you smiling crazily all by yourself." After taking a few deep breaths to calm herself she got out of her room and headed inside.


As she entered the room she wished everyone excitedly "Happy New Year" and then hugged her mother, sister, brother.


"You are still awake... I thought you fell asleep that's why you didn't come to see the countdown for new year" said Sukanya as she hugged Jodha.


"Ya I know I missed it, I lost track of time, just now I saw the time and came inside" told Jodha.


"It's okay you didn't miss much, anyway they do the same every year...nothing new" consoled Sukanya.


"Hmmm that's true. Anyway I'm tired now, I'll go and sleep. Good night everyone" and saying that Jodha left to go back to her room.


After reaching her room she locked the door from inside, turned the lights off and once inside her blanket she pulled the phone inside to call Jalaal.


Remembering how she said I Love You and hung up immediately, without even waiting for his reaction...Jodha started blushing and smiling. 'He must be waiting for my call, it's been more than 15 minutes... I should call' thought Jodha. Then picking up the phone she dialed his number.


Jalaal was getting restless with each passing second...the wait was killing him, he was too eager to talk to Jodha and more than talk he wanted to hear those magical words from Jodha again. "Where are you Jodha??" he mumbled as he looked at the time on his mobile "It's been way more than 10-15 minutes, come fast Jodha..." Just as he finished his sentence he heard his phone ring. "Jodha's missed call, she's back" he grinned wide and picking up his phone he quickly dialed Jodha's number.


Jodha picked up the phone in first ring but didn't say anything...


"Hello...Hello..." Jalaal said impatiently.


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Here's the lyrics of the song playing in the background with translation.


Kab tak chup baithe ab to kuch hai bolna
(We've been silent for so long, now there is something to say)

Kuch tum bolo kuch hum bole o dholna
(You say something, I'll say something, oh sweetheart)

Kab tak chup baithe ab to kuch hai bolna
(We've been silent for so long, now there is something to say)

Kuch tum bolo kuch hum bole o dholna
(You say something, I'll say something, oh sweetheart)

Kab tak chup baithe ab to kuch hai bolna
(We've been silent for so long, now there is something to say)

Kuch tum bolo kuch hum bole o dholna
(You say something, I'll say something, oh sweetheart)

Mar jaana tha yeh bhed nahin tha kholna
(I was going to die and still not reveal this secret)

O dholna
(Oh sweetheart)

O dholna
(Oh sweetheart)

Kab tak chup baithe ab to kuch hai bolna
(We've been silent for so long, now there is something to say)

Kuch tum bolo kuch hum bole o dholna
(You say something, I'll say something, oh sweetheart)

Do chaar kadam pe tum the, do chaar kadam pe hum the - 2
(You were two-four steps away, I was two-four steps away)

Do chaar kadam yeh lekin sau milon se kya kam the
(But were these two-four steps any less than a hundred miles?)

Phir uspe kadam kadam pe dil ka dolna
(Then upon that, the heart's dancing with each step)

Haye dolna
(Oh its dancing)

O dholna
(Oh sweetheart)

Kab tak chup baithe ab to kuch hai bolna
(We've been silent for so long, now there is something to say)

Kuch tum bolo kuch hum bole o dholna
(You say something, I'll say something, oh sweetheart)

Kab tak chup baithe ab to kuch hai bolna
(We've been silent for so long, now there is something to say)

Kuch tum bolo kuch hum bole o dholna
(You say something, I'll say something, oh sweetheart)

Lo jeet gaye tum humse, hum haar gaye is dil se - 2
(Look, you have won over me, I have lost to this heart)

Aaya hai aaj labon pe yeh pyaar badi mushkil se
(Today this love has come to my lips with much difficulty)

Is pyaar mein humko paagal na kar chhodna
(In this love don't leave making me crazy like this)

Na chhodna, o dholna
(Don't leave me, oh sweetheart)

Kab tak chup baithe ab to kuch hai bolna
(We've been silent for so long, now there is something to say)

Kuch tum bolo kuch hum bole o dholna
(You say something, I'll say something, oh sweetheart)

Kab tak chup baithe ab to kuch hai bolna
(We've been silent for so long, now there is something to say)

Kuch tum bolo kuch hum bole o dholna
(You say something, I'll say something, oh sweetheart)

Mar jaana tha yeh bhed nahin tha kholna
(I was going to die and still not reveal this secret)

O dholna
(Oh sweetheart)

O dholna
(Oh sweetheart)

Kab tak chup baithe ab to kuch hai bolna
(We've been silent for so long, now there is something to say)

Kuch tum bolo kuch hum bole o dholna
(You say something, I'll say something, oh sweetheart)


Hope u all liked and enjoyed the chapter!!
Don't forget to like and comment😳
Love Preet❤️
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today i am first 🥳
it's awesome update preet dee. 👏
i loved it so much.😳
love you dee 🤗such nice update.😊
i think now in your story long distance relation ship start. after jalal going USA.😉
he is such caring boyfriend.😳 i like it when he told he realized that jodha have been calling him every night and when the phone bill comes she could get in trouble😊
and jodha's love confessions to jalal it's superb
now i waiting for jalal react on phone when he call her.😉
update soon dee.😊
thanks to pm me.😉

Edited by cuty1997 - 10 years ago
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Preet di it's awesome...wow
thanks for the pm
continue soon
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Lovely cute romantic sweet Superbb chappy loved it
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preet di!!!
lovely update!!!
at last jodha voiced her feelings!!!
the surprise gift was awesome!!!
such a cute and sweet update!!!!
thanks for the pm di!!!
update soon!!!!
will be waiting for your pm!!!
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wow dr..awesome chapter... UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON UPDATE SOON and tks for the pm dr...

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