Cliche Attempt || MaNan SS (ch. 3, pg. 15) - Page 10

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Posted: 10 years ago
#91
amazing... loved it..
pls continue soon...

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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
A very good and different story
Please update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
hehhe
yhis is surely not the case of love at first site
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing! Plz continue waiting for ur next update and plz could write from Manik's point of view...i want to to know whats
going through Arogant Maniks head.
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Fabulous updates..
I am liking this different Manik and Nandu..
Nandu can't stop thinking about him..
Continue Soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: iwantitall

Suhaaa. Reserved! 🤓

-

EDIT. SHEDIT. 🤔

Well, that was quiet something. I read through the SS taking in both of their faces, imagining them in my head, and it was so simple.

You wrote of them with such sync with how i imagine them.

Nandini stalked him on facebook, insta? Hahaha. That is so legit.
Its practically a daily job of every girl in louuuve. ☺️
(I know, because been there done that 🤣 )

And the coffee shop romance? Soo cutee.
I get this feeling like this is going to be a little like that movie, you've got mail.

The cuteness in that moviee is just unbeatable man. 🤪

So, now, when are you updating nexxt suhaaa 😎
Sooo abrupt that ending. Need to read more. You must update.

RIGHT NOW! 🤓

Ohhh and i hope it goes without saying, PM me when youu pleasee!

Lovee
Sindhyaa

PS: Now go unres both your comments, like righhttt awaaay!


Sindhyaaa
I hate you because you disappeared and that too when I update </3
m hert breks

Originally posted by: xxDaydreameRxx

Oh my god, this is sooo cute!! please do continuee :)


Thank you! Updating in a while, hope you like :)

Originally posted by: Muggle_Diaries

Hello,

I just loved the story so far. Superb.

The writing: Very smooth. Flow is nice and you don't have to make an effort to read it.

The dialogue: Witty, interesting and not boring. The banter between Manik and Nandini, Nandini and Navya were well done. I specially liked below conversations:

"And just who are you?"

"Manik Malhotra," he stated with pride.

This summed up Manik to me. Arrogant, thinks the world is at his feet and everyone should cater to him.

"Vain much?"

"Very much," he corrected

Super play of words... 😊

Story and Characters: Very interesting so far. You kept the essence of Manik and Nandini, yet giving a new makeover. I just loved the way they met and Nandini's obsession with him.

I really enjoyed reading it.. please do continue. I want to know what happens next.

Please PM me if you can. 😊


Love

MD



Thank you so much for those words! The praises mean a lot. Although I'm, like, super late at updating. Someone clap for me 🤔
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Posted: 10 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: Arshirox97

Loving the ss!!!! A different and a very nice concept!! Plz accept my buddy request! Do you send pms??


Thank you so much! I usually don't because people might get annoyed xD But I'll try.

Originally posted by: .Username.

This is just adorable. I cant wait to read more!! Continue soon :)


Well, if you can call this 'soon' 🤔

Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa

Hey Suha!
You planning on ever continuing this? Coz this is magical stuff girl.

I'm hoping you simply forgot. If that's the case, here's me reminding you 🤗

Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa

We've never talked but

I'm gonna PM you if you don't reply to this. I hate unfinished stories. Especially when I like 'em this much
Also because I myself can never finish any😆


I know, I'm so magical 😎 And I hate unfinished stories too, the irony!

Originally posted by: aavani

wow finally the second part...thanks a lot for updating...i was eagerly waiting for this...update was awsome...loved it...especially the last part...and coffee romance and soul mate...interesting...pls pls continue soon...take care...😊

pls pm if u can...


Aw, thank you so much! Will definitely try to PM.


This is anything but 'soon', hope you like nonetheless.

Originally posted by: nur.dola

hey reallly..u need to post part 3..its really interesting...i loved it...so much...different story..


Different? Really? Thank you :D I'll post it in a while, hope you like.

Originally posted by: moonlight2630

Awesome update live it

Plz update soon waiting for next update.


Well, I'm updating now :p It's anything but 'soon' I guess.

Originally posted by: aairahahmad

Its awesome as in really wala awesome..
u write so well..its like i am reading some romantic novel with just as much amount of details needed as u hv written it down.. not too lng neither too short...n i think its amazing...
cn u pls write it down pretty soon n complete it.. its making me impateint..
k btw thanx 4 such a beautiful piece of writing... 😊 😊 😊

Originally posted by: aairahahmad

DISSAPOINTED..,LIKE SERIOUSLY...
after writing so beautifully u r asking about our dissapointment...
girl u really understimate ur writing skills...but dont worry i wont no...actually i cant do that...
its very good...
pls do cntinue soon... 😊


You're a sweetheart, really. Thank you so much! Updating now, hope you like.
Edited by TheShipWeirdo - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: stephyjohn

Please update fast

😊


Updating now :)

Originally posted by: AARMAY1

amazing... loved it..
pls continue soon...


Thank you :) Updating in a while.


Thank you!


Updating :)

Originally posted by: chair1992

A very good and different story

Please update


Really now? Thank you so much!

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

hehhe

yhis is surely not the case of love at first site
please do continue
bye sumi


Posting the next chapter soon, hope you like.

Originally posted by: shahz

Amazing! Plz continue waiting for ur next update and plz could write from Manik's point of view...i want to to know whats
going through Arogant Maniks head.


Thank you! Although I don't think I'll include his POV since this is first-person and I dislike POV changes in first-person. Hope you understand :)

Originally posted by: KaShforever06

Fabulous updates..

I am liking this different Manik and Nandu..
Nandu can't stop thinking about him..
Continue Soon


Aw, thank you! Updating :)

Originally posted by: nits_viratholic

Awww... this is super cute..


Thank you so much!
Edited by TheShipWeirdo - 10 years ago
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Chapter Three

"He isn't that bad, you know," I said to her on the other line, causing her to groan.

"Is this about that Manik again?" Navya asked me.

"Well, yes. I met him again today."

"In that same coffee shop?" she enquired.

"... Yes?"

"You need to stop going there!"

"Hey, they serve good coffee!" I defended.

"Really? So you're telling me you actually tried their coffee?"

"Um... well..." I stuttered, a bit embarrassed to have been caught, "not really but... I could tell!"

"Tell how? Did that Manik tell you?"

"Why do you refer to him as that Manik'? It's very rude," I said, somewhat annoyed.

"Woah!" she sounded shocked. "Are you actually standing up for him? Nandini, are you alright?"

I bit my lip, "yeah, I am. Just... he's not too bad. He was actually nice today. Well, I wouldn't say nice but he wasn't... he was less rude."

"Do you... do you like this guy or something?" she cautiously asked.

"NO!" I said almost immediately. "I don't, I really don't. I'm just saying... he's not that bad. It's just... aghh forget it." I plopped backwards on my bed, closing my eyes. This Manik Malhotra was not good for my health. Maybe I was obsessing over him a bit too much.

"Right. If that's the case, then promise me something?" she sounded hopeful.

"Depends, what?"

"Don't go to that coffee shop again, please."

"Navya..."

"I really don't like the sound of this guy!" she admitted. "Just don't, please. For my sake."

"For your sake," I smiled.

- x -

Okay, so I was sorry. I shouldn't have made fake promises, that's so not me. I just can't help it though! Aiyappa, forgive me, and please make sure Navya forgives me too.

Taking a deep breath, I stepped through those doors, and was somewhat disappointed to not find him there at our usual table.

Wait... our usual table? Navya was right, this Manik is driving me nuts.

I still walked over, and ordered that same coffee I knew I wouldn't ever finish. I guess I waited for about ten minutes or so, and that was bizarre. All this for a guy I don't even like!

I was almost expecting him to not show up. Why would he? This wasn't any date. But he surprised me, and he came. The minute he walked in through those doors he had his eyes on our usual table', and broke into a smile when he spotted me. I don't know why it made my heart flutter.

- x -

A/N: Dedicated to Bushra because yes, I write this for her. Annd this is super short but I'll update 'soon' (PROMISE!)

Edited by TheShipWeirdo - 10 years ago
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YOU UPDATED????!!!!!
😲


Such a fortunately coincidental RES.😎


Edited by Ribelle_IshRa - 10 years ago

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