Cliche Attempt || MaNan SS (ch. 3, pg. 15)

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Bushra Iqbal

@Sanely_Insane

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

RES
Edit: Aww, she couldn't stop herself from going back to their usual place. The only place where she can see him. ^.^
AAAND he came. He spotted their usual table and he smiled. Super adorable. <3

Although this is short but I'm going to bed with a smile. Yay. Next time longer update and soon!

ITS DEDICATED TO ME! 😳

Edited by Sanely_Insane - 10 years ago

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Suha

@TheShipWeirdo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Originally posted by: Ribelle_IshRa
YOU UPDATED????!!!!!
😲

Such a fortunately coincidental RES.😎

YOU KNOW.

BECAUSE I UPDATED AFTER SOOO LONG.

I THINK I DESERVE AN UNRES.

😡😡😡

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Suha

@TheShipWeirdo

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Originally posted by: Sanely_Insane
RES

Dedication bhi diya 😭

Ab agar aapne unres nahi kiya toh 😭

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Jyotika95

@Jyotika95

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#104

Res🤣

Unres. I know I'm very nice.

This is the super adorable SS I've ever read.😳

Okay, I reread the last update and I want to say how cute was it when Manik tells her you've a funny face and you make funny expressions and she gets embaressed and leaves and he asks him do yo have a habit of leaving your coffee unfinished, and then she turns and tells him her name, "Nandini , my name is Nandini" and then she smiles.

I love this. <3

Though the update is super short , but its adorable.

Nandini defending Manik in front of Navya, and making fake promise to Navya because she can't stop herself from wanting to meet hin again. O and their usual table. <3 and Manik comes just to see her there. <3

I believe your promise is not fake like Nandini's, I've hope. :D

Edited by Jyotika95 - 10 years ago

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Firebolt

@Firebolt

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#105

RES

THIS WAS THE FIRST STORY I READ ON THE KYY FORUM... AND THAT WAS YOU? Then I expected the entire forum to have good stories like this and well... 😆

KAY I'LL UNRES LIKE L8R OKAY.

And you'll dedicate it to Bushy but not me rite.lyk.k

Edited by Firebolt - 10 years ago

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Suha

@TheShipWeirdo

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: Firebolt
RES
THIS WAS THE FIRST STORY I READ ON THE KYY FORUM... AND THAT WAS YOU? Then I expected the entire forum to have good stories like this and well... 😆

KAY I'LL UNRES LIKE L8R OKAY.

And you'll dedicate it to Bushy but not me rite.lyk.k

FIRST STORY REALLY SHRIYA THAT'S LIKE MAKKHAN-ING TO THE CORE

n i thot u no lyk it so 😭

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M R

@rubys07

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#107

Res.

Of course you love Bushy. I mean, she is your goddamned better half u should dedicate EVERYEFFINGTHING to her.

ILYSM I CAN'T FIND THE WORDS TO UNRES SO I WONT EVEN TRY. EVER :'))

UNRES COZ I'M AWESOME AND YOU OWE ME FOREVER😎

First things first.

I HATE YOU. LEGIT.

Second.

Don't you dare bribe me with KFC. I maybe a foodie but I'm no bhukkad. I have kilo bhar ka saalf-raspakt

Third.

I HATE YOU. For different reasons this time.

I want to drool over Manik but I don't even KNOW whether he is a bad boy or not. I have a strict bad-boys-only policy when it comes to drooling over fictional characters. Why you no give character sketch?😭 How am I supposed to drool over him now? Pliss tell me he is a bad boy don't brek ma hert pls ya🥺

Fourth.

I don't like coffee shop romances and hopeless romantic people bore me tbh. But your writing is so brilliant I can't help but ADORE the idea. And I always look forward to good AU stuff, be it VMs or FFs. I feel it takes a certain amount of creativity and imagination to write or create something totally unfamiliar using the familiar names and characters (I wish I could write something AU but I'm hopeless🥺) Plus you gave Navya some brains (or so it seems tho the Hashad quotient is till there) which is a job in itself so well done.

And Manik's smile. And smugness. And smirk. AND DID I MENTION HIS SMILE. UFFF BUOYYY O_____O

Umm but I still hate you. And no need to update soon. Take as much time as you want coz I've got exams to attend. If you decide to update while I'm studying my ass off to survive the exams, well, this be the only unres you're ever gonna get from me Kay.

But of course. Since you've got a long line of dedication to attend to. Whatever.

p.s. No lollipop dedications pliss😳 You've already makkhaned Zee and Jags. I SAW.

Edited by rubys07 - 10 years ago

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Niya

@N_Niya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#108

Bacchi!.. teko nai lagta tune apna pet name kuch zyada hi seriously lelia?! 😳

itna chhotu sa baccha update!!! 🤔

🥱

[Nice] 🥱

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Witcher

@Witcher

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#109

I am really excited for the next part

Manan on coffee "date" well its a date they just don't know it

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Suha

@TheShipWeirdo

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#110

Originally posted by: Sanely_Insane
RES
Edit: Aww, she couldn't stop herself from going back to their usual place. The only place where she can see him. ^.^
AAAND he came. He spotted their usual table and he smiled. Super adorable. <3

Although this is short but I'm going to bed with a smile. Yay. Next time longer update and soon!

ITS DEDICATED TO ME! 😳

My favorite (WHERE'S THAT WA KA BLUSH EMOTE WHEN YOU NEED IT 😡)

and ofc its dedicated to you i only write this for you <33 (not even makkhan-ing)

you bug me = i update soon