Cliche Attempt || MaNan SS (ch. 3, pg. 15)

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Suha

@TheShipWeirdo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#71

Originally posted by: RomComFan
WOW! 👏👏👏
This is so good- love this AU! And you write sooo well... 😃

MANAN are so adorable... can't wait for the next update.😊

If you don't mind, can you please PM me when you next update?...pretty please?😉

Really? I doubt I write that well 😆 There are a bunch of fab writers here!

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you thought so :) I'll try to update real soon! And PMs... hm, I don't usually do it, but if you'd really like one, I'll try. No promises, sorry!

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Suha

@TheShipWeirdo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#72

Originally posted by: aishu3003
Suha🤗
Awesomee chappys⭐️⭐️
m lovingg ittt😊
continue soonish😳

Really now?! 😃 Thanks a bunch for reading! I'll try to update soon ^.^

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Shreya

@-MKB-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#73

Bacchi jaldi likh dusra part bas-_-

Coffee shop love

"i got the coffee shop love

Makes me express so many feelings

With cofee shop love, oh you got my heart racin' racin'

All my life i have searching

Oh my love where have you been ?

With that coffee shop love

Oh i cant get enough of it"

Which reminds me i have to drink coffee and you have to update bas!

And aur tariff mai karti nahi 😎

Edited by -MKB- - 10 years ago

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Suha

@TheShipWeirdo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#74

Originally posted by: -MKB-
Bacchi jaldi likh dusra part bas-_-
Coffee shop love
"i got the coffee shop love
Makes me express so many feelings
With cofee shop love, oh you got my heart racin' racin'
All my life i have searching
Oh my love where have you been ?
With that coffee shop love
Oh i cant get enough of it"

Which reminds me i have to drink coffee and you have to update bas!
And aur tariff mai karti nahi 😎

How ironic is it that I hate coffee? 😆 Yet coffee shop romance is gahhh, TOO CUTE!

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 10 years ago

#75

Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo

You bet! Ian, Damon, Delena, Defan, Datherine - just name it 😎 I'm an addict, mainly 🤪

Ah, exams are finally DONE! I'll try my best to update now ^.^ Let's just hope I don't get too lazy and actually remember :P

Hahahhahaaha me too...nythn wid Damon in it..I am a fan!!🤣🤣🤣

Well I do hope u update soon!!:P

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Suha

@TheShipWeirdo

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Posted: 10 years ago

#76

Originally posted by: -ScaredAngel-

Hahahhahaaha me too...nythn wid Damon in it..I am a fan!!🤣🤣🤣

Well I do hope u update soon!!:P

Keep 'hoping' 😆

Damon is pure love <3 I'm so crazy for this guy, I swear. More than Ian, #DamonFanForeves 😎

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WhisperOfDreams

@WhisperOfDreams

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Posted: 10 years ago

#77

Originally posted by: TheShipWeirdo

Keep 'hoping' 😆

Damon is pure love <3 I'm so crazy for this guy, I swear. More than Ian, #DamonFanForeves 😎

Hahahahha u are right...Damon fan...d guy can pul of the crazy role wid such awesomeness...!!🤣

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iwantitall

@iwantitall

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Posted: 10 years ago

#78

Suhaaa. Reserved! 🤓

EDIT. SHEDIT. 🤔

Well, that was quiet something. I read through the SS taking in both of their faces, imagining them in my head, and it was so simple.

You wrote of them with such sync with how i imagine them.

Nandini stalked him on facebook, insta? Hahaha. That is so legit.

Its practically a daily job of every girl in louuuve. ☺️

(I know, because been there done that 🤣 )

And the coffee shop romance? Soo cutee.
I get this feeling like this is going to be a little like that movie, you've got mail.

The cuteness in that moviee is just unbeatable man. 🤪

So, now, when are you updating nexxt suhaaa 😎

Sooo abrupt that ending. Need to read more. You must update.

RIGHT NOW! 🤓

Ohhh and i hope it goes without saying, PM me when youu pleasee!

Lovee

Sindhyaa

PS: Now go unres both your comments, like righhttt awaaay!

Edited by iwantitall - 10 years ago

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xxDaydreameRxx

@xxDaydreameRxx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#79

Oh my god, this is sooo cute!! please do continuee :)

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Kshithi

@Muggle_Diaries

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Posted: 10 years ago

#80

Hello,

I just loved the story so far. Superb.

The writing: Very smooth. Flow is nice and you don't have to make an effort to read it.

The dialogue: Witty, interesting and not boring. The banter between Manik and Nandini, Nandini and Navya were well done. I specially liked below conversations:

"And just who are you?"

"Manik Malhotra," he stated with pride.

This summed up Manik to me. Arrogant, thinks the world is at his feet and everyone should cater to him.

"Vain much?"

"Very much," he corrected

Super play of words... 😊

Story and Characters: Very interesting so far. You kept the essence of Manik and Nandini, yet giving a new makeover. I just loved the way they met and Nandini's obsession with him.

I really enjoyed reading it.. please do continue. I want to know what happens next.

Please PM me if you can. 😊

Love