OS:FAKE NOTES (based on current track)

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Hey guyz, this is my first OS on VirTi. This OS is on the current track, I hope you guyz will like it.

*FAKE NOTES*

"Avanti goes in front of virat and confronts him by saying "How dare you, tum abhi mere family ko target kar rahe ho. Aur kitna niche giroge Virat. Tumhe khud pasand nahi hai personal jana ya koi tumhare family pe ungli uthaye, to tum mere family ko kaise target kar sakte ho. Uss din tumhara bhai sachmuch galat tha aur police station mai tha tab tum haevan (demon) ban gaye the, aur ab jab kavya ki koi galti nahi thi, to tumne use job se terminate karva diya. U r sick Virat, no wonder tumhari family tumhe kyu pyaar nahi karti hai, kyunki tum uss pyaar ke layak hi nahi ho."

Till now, virat's tolerance level has reached its peak. Avanti noticed it, but still she continues

"Aree tumhe kya pata family kya hoti hai, tumne khud kaha tha na ki tum aisa kuch karoge ki meri family mujhe support nahi karegi, yahi tum bhool kar baithe, itni badi musibat aayi hai kavya pe phir bhi meri FamiLy mujhe and kavya ko support kar rahi hai, tumhari jaisi nahi hai, jab maan kiya tab use kiya aur jab kaam nahi ho raha hai tab insult kardo aur support na karo."

Now, Virat cant handle this, he stormed towards Avanti, grabbed her by arms and shaked her force fully and said

"How dare u Avanti Bansal, Tumhari himmat kaisi hui meri FamiLy ke bare mai bolne ki, aree tumhari aukat kya hai meri FamiLy ke bare mai bolne ki, tumhe kya pata ki mere mama mami mujhse kitna pyaar karte hai"

But ignoring him she still continues

"Pyaar...??? Unhe iss shabd(word) ka matlab bhi pata hai kya, kabhi mene unhe tumhe pyaar se bulate hue nahi dekha jitni baar bhi mene dekha. Jara mere ghar aou, tab tumhe pata chalega ki FamiLy ka pyaar aur support kya hota hai."

Now Virat had enough, he shouts on Avanti

"Bas Avanti Bansal, bas. Jab tumhe koi puri baat nahi pata, to uske bare mai baat mat kiya karo. Aree tum FamiLy ke support ke bare mai baat karti ho, mai tumhe batata hu, ki asli FamiLy ka support kya hota hai. Tum keh rahi ho na ki mere mama mami mujhse pyaar nahi karte, to agar wo mujhse pyaar nahi karte, to mujh jaise murderer ko wo ghar pe nahi rakhte."

He throws Avanti on the floor, Avanti is shocked. Virat turns his back and takes support of his chair.

Avanti says "Murderer...?????"

Virat "Ha murderer, mene apne hi maa baap ka murder kiya, aur agar mama mami mujhse pyaar nahi karte to wo mujhe apne ghar nahi laate, paal pose ke bada nahi karte, mujhe padhate likhaate nahi Rajat ke saath, unka bas chale to wo mujhe ghar ka naukar banake rakhte bachpan se par unhone aisa nhi kiya." Virat's eyes brimmed with tears, he was saying all this between the sobs which didn't go unnoticed by Avanti, she was silently listening"

He continues "Ab samjha FamiLy kya hoti hai, nxt time apni ye ghatiya ungli(finger) aur apna kya naak, mere kaam mai aur meri FamiLy mai mat dalne. GET LOST...!!!!!!!!!!!!"

Avanti immediately gets up and leaves his office and straight away reaches her home.

At night she was thinking of his confession and called DJ, she told her to extract some information about Virats past and parents.

Next day at shop, DJ and Vicky arrived, Avanti asked her about Virat's info to that DJ asked Avanti as to y she is so interested in learning his past, to that Avanti replies that she wanted to beat him in everythg like in best entrepreneur competition, in business etc. So DJ narrated her the story that once during childhood, virat ne jid pakadli for a toy, his parents, went to take his toy in heavy rain and due to a high current wire his parents died. Later Virat's mama accused him for his parents death, and so that his mami, bcoz of which since childhood, Virat thinks that he killed his parents.

Avanti was shocked to hear this, and was very angry on virat's mama and mami, and was also showering bad words on them. She said

"No wonder Virat apne mama mami ko leke itna concerened kyu hai, kaise jahiil logone usse bada kiya hai"

At that time, Virat arrives in his office, DJ signal's Avanti about it. Avanti and Virat both looks at each other, and Virat's resumes to his work. DJ ask Avanti in a low tone, so that Virat doesn't hear it

"Ab tu kya karegi, abhi to tujhe uske past ke bare mai pata chal gaya"

To that Avanti replies

"Kuch nahi"

DJ "matlab, tu use apna badla nahi legi"

Avanti "No, kyunki mujhe ye sab sunke Virat ke liye bura lag raha hai, ki uski koi galti nahi hone ke bavajood, wo bohot galat impression mai jee raha hai ki usne apne mom dad ka khoon kiya hai. Iss halat mai, mai use iss baat pe kaise badla lu. Utni mai buri nahi ho sakti na, utni mai niche nahi gir sakti. Chod mai kisi aur tarike se use haraungi"

DJ "Par Avanti, pehle to tumne..."

Avanti cuts her in middle and says

"Pehle mujhe iske bare mai pata nahi tha, and mujhe nahi pata tha ki itna serious hoga ye matter. Isiliye chod. Anyways humari order ka kya hua, tayyar hui ya nahi."

DJ "Aree abhi kaha Avanti, stiching to baaki hai"

At that time Alia comes

Avanti "Thank god Alia, tum aa gayi, plzz isko stiching kar do na, abhi tak mujhe tailor nahi mila."

Alia "No problem dear."

They all starts working and they finishes with the work. Avanti tries to call jisne order liya, but his phone was cmg switched off or sometimes not reachable. She thought for a while, ki ye order fake nikla to, how she is going to pay workers of the village and also how she is going to pay the rent. Ussi waqt jisne order diya tha wo aa gaye, Avanti was relieved, she gave that order and took the money. Everyone was more than happy and was celebrating. Virat on the other hand was evilly smiling seeing them celebrate, bcoz Avanti is trapped in his plan to destroy her.

The whole day, Avanti was very happy, at evening she closed her shop and was about to leave just than she looked at Virat sitting in his office, she felt sad for him. But as soon as Virat saw her, he gave her expression stating "what", to that she him back with disgusting expression. At home, everyone was celebrating, Avanti's mom was very happy, and Kavya was relieaved that atleast iss month ke rent ka problem solved. They decided to pay the rent next day, as it was too late to wake them up. Next day, early in the morning when Avanti was getting ready to leave for shop, Police came knocking in the house. Every1 was tensed, Avanti's mom asked what happened, to that police said, that they have got information that Avanti Bansal, is supplying fake notes. Everyone was shocked including Avanti. Police told her to give some money to check it. Police checked the money and told that it was fake. Avanti was trying to explain everyone that she is being framed and she is innocent, but police arrest her and takes her to police station. Here in home, Ankit and his family keep on taunting Kavya and her mother.

DJ has made new remixes so she comes home of Avanti, there she gets to know that Avanti is arrested for supplying fake notes. She and Vicky immediately rushes to police station, Avanti is in the lock up, she sees them and gets overwhelmed. She says crying

"DJ, Vicky, mene kuch nahi, yeh log mujhe juthe ilzaam mai phasake laaye hai, mujhe nahi pata wo fake note kaha se aaye. Plzz help me, mujhe yahase bahar nikalo."

Vicky "Tum chinta mat karo, hum tumhe yahase kuch bhi karke bahar nikalenge."

DJ "Ha Avanti, tu chinta mat kar, hum kuch karte hai. Tab tak sambhal khud ko."

They leaves police station leaving behind crying Avanti. Vicky and DJ comes outside and starts thinking as to how they r going to help Avanti. At that time DJ thinks

"Vicky, shayad mujhe pata hai yeh kiska kaam hoga."

Vicky "Hmmm, shayad mujhe bhi pata."

DJ "To chale..???"

Vicky "Chalo, aaj to usne hadd hi kar di"

Both goes from police station and reaches Virat's office. Here Virat was waiting for Avanti and was smiling widely, bcoz he knows abhi tak wo dukan kyu nahi aayi. Vicky and DJ barged inside his office.

Virat "Aise kaise tum log andar aaye."

DJ "Wo sab chodo, tumharo himmat kaisi hui ye sab karne ki."

Virat "Kya bakwaas kar rahi ho."

Vicky "Bakwass ye kar rahi hai ya tum, sach bolo tumne hi Avanti ko jail bheja na fake note ke silsile mai...????"

Virat acking shocked

"Kya...!!!!!!!! Avanti jail mai, wo bhi fake notes ke silsile mai. Mujhe nahi pata tha ki Avanti itni badi jholer niklegi ki siddha fake notes ka supply karegi." and laughed

DJ " Bakwaas band karo Virat, mujhe pata hai ye tumne kiya hai aur..."

Virat cuts her in between

"Ha mene kiya hai ye sab, wo order, ye fake notes, police ko bulana, aur avanti ko arrest karwana, ye sab mene kiya hai."

DJ and Vicky was not at all surprised. Virat continues

"JO mene chaha wahi hua, ab Avanti Bansal ko pata chalega, ki Virat se panga lene kitna bhaari pad sakta hai. Waise kaisi hai wo ab, thik hai na ya ro rahi hai, are eek pic khich lete uska mai enjoy kar leta na. Koi baat nahi, mai thodi der mai jaane wala hu, live telecaste enjoy kar lunga."

DJ and Vicky was looking at him with disgust. DJ says

"Kyu kar rahe ho tum ye sab, kya milega tumhe."

Virat "Avanti Bansal ki dukaan, aur Avanti bansal mere raste se hat gayi."

DJ laughs. Virat and Vicky both are confused. DJ says

"Daro mat, mai thik hu, aise mat dekho mujhe. Mai to bas Avanti pe has rahi hu,uski stupidity pe has rahi hu, uski innocence pe has rahi hu, jo tumhe kabhi bhi life mai nahi dikh sakta virat. Mujhe to Avanti pe taras aa raha hai ki usne tuch jaise ghatiya aadmi par taras aaya." pointing at virat

Virat looked at her confused

"Kya hua, confused. Mai batati hu. Pata hai, Avanti ko tumhare mom dad ke bare mai sab pata hai."

At this Virat was shocked

"Usko kaise malum pada...??" he asked DJ.

DJ "Jab tumne Avanti ko bola ki tum ek murderer ho and apne mom dad ka khoon kar diya hai, to use raha nahi gaya aur usne mujhse kaha tumhare bare mai sari info nikalu. Mene sab kuch tumhare bare mai pata lagaya, ki tumne kaisi jiid pakdi ki tumhe toy chahiye, kaise tumhari jiid puri karne ke liye tumhare mom dad bhaari baarish mai wo toy lene gaye, aur kaise unh ek high current wire se shock laga, aur kaise tumhare mama ne tumhe ye bola ki tum iske liye responsible ho jo tum nahi the."

Virat was shocked and also angry bcoz someone else peeped in his personal life. DJ said

"Kyu, gussa aa raha hai ki mene ye sab kuch find out kiya, aree gussa to mujhe aa raha hai ki Avanti ne tujpe taras khaake uska plan drop kar diya."

Virat "Plan...???"

DJ "Ha plan, Avanti ka yeh plan tha ki tumhari history jaanke wo tumse badla legi, tumhe buri tarike se hara degi, par jab usko tumhare bare maim alum pada, tabhi usne back out kar liya ki wo itni insensitive nahi ho sakti kisike bare mai. Lekin ab mujhe uspe taras aa raha hai jisne tum jaise ghatiya aur low standard aadmi ki thodi si hi sahi par fikar hui. Tum maafi ke aur taras ke aur sabse important chiz, PYAAR ke layak nahi ho."

With this she left his office with Vicky. Virat was so shocked that he was not knowing how to react. He never thought that Avanti uske bare mai kabhi bhi aisa sochegi. Viart said in mind

" Wo chahiti to mujhe bohot hurt kar sakti thi mere past ko leke par usne aisa nhi kiya, aur tune kya kiya, jab usko sabse jyada paiso ki jarurat thi apne ghar ka rent bharne ke liye tab tune use jail mai daal diya...??? Virat tune ye aacha nahi kiya, Avanti ko tu nahi pehchan paya, use dushmani alag thi, par insaaniyat pe bhi tu bohot bada dhabba hai. U r an inhuman virat, sahi kaha DJ ne, na mai care ke layak hu, na taras ke aur PYAAR ke layak to mai kabhi nahi tha. Ab bas, Avanti ko tujhe kisi bhi haal mai bahar nikalna hai."

He thought for a while, and rushed to police station. On reaching there he saw Avanti's mom and kavya sitting there, also he saw Avanti in lock up tired of crying. He straight away went to inspector and said to release her. To that police said that she has been arrested for supplying fake note. Virat explained

"Dekhiye officer, wo actually fake notes ka jo matter hua hai, wo actually mere liye hua tha. Wo actually aaj kal ke business ke competition ki wajah se sab log ek dusre ko fake note ke accusation mai fasana chahte hai, usme se mai ek target ban gaya, lekin meri jagah Avanti ko wo fake notes mile and wo fas gayi."

Police "Aur wo call, jisne humne information di."

Virat "Wo bhi wo baaki sab ki chal hai mujhe fasane ki, Avanti galti se phas gayi. Plzz officer, use chod do, she is innocent."

All this conversation was heard by Kavya, Avanti and her mom. Kavya and her mom were happy and pleased by Virat ki wo Avanti ko chudane aya, but Avanti was blank. Avanti was released and virat thanked police officer and all of them came out. Kavya and her mom thanked virat for helping them but virat's full attention was on Avanti's reaction, he found it blank, no sign of happiness, no sadness, no anger nothing. Kavya n her mother were going tabhi Avanti said

"Ma kavya, aap aage jaiye mai aati hu, mat pucho kyu, bas jao." They both agreed. After they left, Avanti turned towards Virat.

Virat was knowing what was coming his way, and he was ready for it, but whathe saw and heard came shocking to him.

Avanti "Mil gaye thandak dil ko mujhe aise helpless dekhke, hog aye khush."

Virat was trying to apologise but Avanti continued

"Bas, abhi yeh competition barabar ka hua, mene tumhare family par ungli uthayi, to tum puri tarah se tut gaye, aur tumne mujhe ye fake notes ke silsile mai atkake mujhe tod diya. Hisaab barabar." with plain face, no sign of any emotion. Still she continued

"Ab hamari asli competition chalu hoti hai, healthy competition. But ab competition hoga, par sirf hum dono ke beech, sirf HUM DONO BEECH(stressing on word "hum dono ke bich"), koi bhi kisiki family ko bich mai nahi layega. The competition has just begun, be ready MR. VIRAT SINGH THAKUR." Saying she leaves from there.

She again turns back and says

"Abhi tak mai tooti nahi hu, Mr. Virat Thakur. Mujhe todne ke liye bohot mehnat karni padegi tumhe."

Saying so she leaves from there and Virat just stare at her retreating back, till she vanishes from there.

Huff, m done with my OS, bohot bada tha na, sorry par mujhe usse parts mai nahi likhna tha, maza kirkira ho jaata. I hope u liked it. Plz mujhe batao kaise hai, and do reply.

Thank you

Lovee

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Heyy wat a lovely os... 👍🏼
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