NiBir Two shots : Reconciliation

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Posted: 10 years ago
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when i was sitting and dreaming about NiBir suddenly something stuck in my mind! How will kabir console Nisha?

first of all iam sorry for my bad hindi bcz i hail from Tamilnadu sorry if any spelling of hindi is wrong

During the Holi celebration a big fight broke between viraj and Kabir .. viraj punched on kabirs face! & kabir puched him back on his face! viraj was talking bad about nisha & about kabir's family before kabir could explode nisha comes inbetween and stops them from fighting after everything is over nisha takes kabir's hand & leave the place

In the car:

Kabir suggest to drive the car and nisha sits beside him & cousins behind.. when none of the cousins notice kabir puts his hands on nisha's hand and looks at her .. nisha slowly turns and look at him but she is still mad at kabir for picking up fight with viraj and sad at other side of how viraj insulted her .. they both share a eyelock & suddenly nisha remembers kabir punching on viraj's face so she forcefully takes her hands away from kabirs & look away the window.

Gangwal house:
Nisha,Kabir & cousins enter the house silently so that they wont hint dadaji what happened in the function. Kabir is still mad when he enters Ramesh asks how was the party .. kabir said party was good in a sad tone and moves away hesitatedly.all the cousins including dolly,sumit,aman & umesh give a tensed look
nisha follows kabir unnoticed by cousins and her family

In Nisha's room

kabir goes to nisha's balcony and stand there holding the grill for grip.nisha comes there & before nisha could put her hands on kabirs shoulders kabir swirls around angryly and says

Kabir: mein uski muh tod kar haat me dedeti .. tu ne rok liya
nisha: tu pagal...hai..
kabir: tune dekha nai o kaise tumse kande tarekase baat ke
nisha: ..Kabir..
kabir: aur .. aur.. mere kandan ke bararemein.. meri mom ke baremein...
nisha: mein samaj sakte hoon.. par kunda karti karne ke kay zaroorat te?
kabir: mere bare mein kuch b kahe tho b mein sanhan sakti hoon.. par..par tumhare baremein isa bola mein..
nisha: mere baremein koi koi kuch b bole tho tumhara kay farak padta hai?
kabir holds nisha's shoulders tightly & says farak padta hai! kyun ke tum..mere..
nisha: mein tera kay?
kabir:..
nisha: silenly.. mein tea kay kabir?
kabir see tensed & sarrow faced nisha & suddenly cools down and make her sit in the bed

down in the hall:

kirti tells umesh,aman,dolly & sumit what happened in the festival & dolly decides to go & talk to nishu about it along with aman ... kirti says she also wants to accompany them.

Nisha's room:

kabir is now bit chilled & decides to 1st pacify nisha so he takes out his phone from his pocket & puts a melody number which has only instrumental music & then bends down to take nisha's hands.. he pulls nisha near him and says ( menwhile dolly,aman & kirti comes to the room seeing nisha & kabir intimate decides to stay near the door & watch what is happening) [they speak as they dance]
kabir: iam so sorry nisha sari galti mere hai, mein viraj singh rathore ko punch nai marna chaye ta
nisha: isme tere koi galti nai hai kabir .. viraj sir nai he tume pehele mara tha
kabir: nai yar muje apni guse ko contro karna chaye tha
[kabir swirls nisha]( kabir pulls nisha closer, his head close to nisha's)

nisha: try to cheerup kabir- aur kitne marks lagane hai?
kabir: trying make nisha laugh .. tumhe pata hai jab viraj singh rathore nay mujey tapad mara tho mujey blkul dard nai huva
nisha: acha? esa kyun?
kabir: kyun ke mujey adadse page
nisha: kaise?
kabir: tumhe yaad hai hotel mai tum glass vase say mere sar poda mein nei tho 2 din kilye ice raka tabi swelling kam nai hua
nisha try to leave kabir but kabir pulls her closely
kair: aur yaad hai doosre bar jab tum .. tumhare chappel se mara? yeh deko mere gal par abhi be tumhare joothe ke nishan hai😆
now nisha is furious & wants kabir to let go her hands but kabir holds more tightly and continous

kabir: (holds nisha hands from the back and pull her from the back & they dance in the back)aur..aur..aur.. tume yaad hai jab tumhare papa bhabiji say bacha kar yahan laye ta tab be tum muje tapad mara... doctor nein kaha puri body part mein yahi mere gal par he gehari chot huva aur usiki wajjase doc ne itna bada injection lagaya

nisha got irritated but also couldnt control her laughter so she laughs heartly & let go off kair's hands.
nisha tries to leave but kabir pulls her hand from the back & says;

kabiryou know what if you would have vsr what you feel everything would have been alright since you are keeping it in your heart you are unable to move on . sahi ya galt ja kar use ane feelings ke bare mein boldo phir sare problems teek hojyga.

they decide to leave the room when they go near the door they see dolly,aman & kirti laughing & also suprised .. nisha blushes & leaves the room

sorry or my bad language actually ive 2 stories in my mind will update tomo how nisha will console kabir.

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Jeeya_Angel thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice thought preethi. hope that something similar happens.not keeping high expectations but fingerz crossed.i just wanted them to move away from zat mela now back to the house
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Preeti can you please write it in English,
I dont know Hindi , i can partially understand, I hope many are here like me, it would be helpful for ppl like me.. Thanks in advance.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice scene Preethi ! 👍🏼 Can totally imagine it esp Kabir telling her about all the times she hit him! 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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LOVED IT preethi !!!! That dance ☺️❤️ the way kabir kept saying about all the times that Nisha beat him up while dancing with her🤣👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb preets.. Loved it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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pri you just made my day, such a romantic 2shot. i wish we get to see some cute scenes like this soon.
can't wait to read the second part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nisja blushing for kabir god knows wo din kab ayega...awesome work Preeti...loved it...the dancing part was so cute...I want to see them dance on a slow number now..haha...anyways waiting for the second part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazinnnggg...pls pm me when you update...i am a huge fan of mishkat! and i read all the nibir stories of the forum! -Nikhad
Edited by yudigirl - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice story...nisha and kabir's nok jhok is great and the dancing seen was amazing literally imagine it...pls continue soon
...love mishkat as kabir...nibir rocks...

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