~Akdha FF~ Unconditional Love chapter 5 updated pg 98 - Page 8

Created

Last reply

Replies

752

Views

84.9k

Users

88

Likes

879

Frequent Posters

...Anushka... thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#71
And yes! Congrats for being a senior member! Finally free to post as much as you want😉
avika444 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 10 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: arushibisht

<font size="6" color="#9933cc">Finally a senior member
</font>

<font size="6" color="#9933cc">Yeh!!! No restrictions... On posts...</font>

congratulations arushi
paridhiloveu thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#73
Di plzz pm me when u will update chapters
...Arushi... thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...

it contains 150 pages.. you should create a new thread when pages reach 150.. Though if you dont create..it may go on and on and sometime maybe moderator will come and close this thread.. so better to create thread 2 after thread 1 reaches 150 pages..😃

thanks a lot anu dear...😊
...Arushi... thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#75

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

Di plzz pm me when u will update chapters

if u call me di then i will not pm u call me arushi or aru which ever u like😆 send me buddies request i will pm u
...Arushi... thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: ...Anushka...

And yes! Congrats for being a senior member! Finally free to post as much as you want😉

tha... Anu dear
I love u😳
I will miss u... When will u come back???
...Arushi... thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: avika444

congratulations arushi

thanks Avika dear for ur lovely wishes...😳
...Arushi... thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#78

Thank you guys for the likes and appreciation... It really means a lot to me... Keep encouraging me ...So, that I can keep going...

I am dedicating this chapter to my dear Bhavini di ... because of her only I am on Indian forums and able to write... CHAPTER- 1

Banner credit Taniroyal

I just hate him...

Mumbai

"I just hate him... he has made my life hell..." said Jodha (crying while sitting in the garden of Khan mansion)

When she was talking to her Kanha and cursing her husband ,a servant comes and serve her orange juice.

"Juice ma'am" said the servant politely

"I don't want "said Jodha angrily

"But ma'am Jalal sir has said that it is mandatory for you to drink this as doctor has adviced this to you..." said the servant hoping at least now his job would be done...

(Jodha is having weakness and all thanks to her stubbornness... she had not been taking proper meals since she came to Mumbai and the reason for this was the same Jalal...)

"No means no can't you hear??? Just leave... "Said Jodha fuming in anger

"But ma'am..."

Now Jodha lost her temper and she threw away the glass of juice with such a force that it hit the wall and shattered into no. of pieces and she then shouted at the servant and ask him to leave. And he obeyed her and left.

A pair of eyes was watching all this... (He is none other than our beloved Jalal)

He saw Jodha all with involuntary tears rolling down her cheeks and she was sobbing while talking to her Kanha (while looking up in the sky) she looks more pale and weak. The Jodha he saw for the first time had a glow on her face and a different shine in her eyes .She was so divine, pure, innocent and beautiful that anyone would have fallen for her. But now she had puffed eyes due to continues crying plus all her glow has been lost somewhere. She doesn't look the same as she used to look before.

Jalal snapped out of his thoughts and sat beside her...

"Jodha" said Jalal softly

Jodha Suddenly burst in bitter and harsh tone "it's all because of you Jallad (cruel) (She calls him by this name only and by now he has stop minding it) you have shattered all my dreams... You are the sole reason for all my problems... now I can't even go to Bangaluru(Bangalore) ... to the best law college of India. I even cleared the entrance test ...I really worked hard for it day and night...Why you live in Mumbai ha...?? Why can't you be living in Bangaluru (Bangalore)??? Tell me...??? (While holding his collar... then she suddenly realized that what she is up to ... and control herself and leave his collar...) It would have been much better if you would have not came into my life ... I would have been peacefully studying in Bangaluru(Bangalore)."

"But you can study here ... that too... in the best college of Mumbai. You must be thankful to me ... I am the trustee of the college so you can get admission easily (a winning ad wince smile crept on his face) said Jalal to stop this drama of hers (though he too... hates her but still tears in her eyes always pricks his heart though she was not at all his kind of girl, she was so different...but still something was there in her which attracts him each time which he also don't know. He can't see pain on her face not even a stress of line on her forehead he feels only he has a right to trouble and tease her no one else...)

But Jodha is Jodha stubborn as always.

"I will get admission on merit basis not on the basis of your money, so you can save it for yourself .I am not that dumb as you think so, maybe you need it for completing your M.B.A...now you have not left any other option for me ,I had to join a college in Mumbai itself..."

Now the fresh uninvited tears started rolling down her eyes and she got up to move but as soon as she stepped down the swing. In her frustration she didn't notice that in haste she just stepped on the broken pieces of glass which she only threw a few minutes ago...

"Aaa...aaa..." Jodha screamed

"Jodha... Yeh! Kya kiya... (What have you done..?) Alas Jalal

Precap- Jalal takes Jodha hospital...

And Rukiya's entry... (She is same as she is in the serial... I know you all hate her even I do... but please bear her for a while ...)

So, guys tell me how was it??? If you like it... then please hit the "Like button" it will encourage me to write further...and please do share your views regarding the chapter through

Your precious comments...Suggestion and criticism are also welcome.

No one will say anything about the length of the chapter I wrote in just 2 hours... Because I promised Arunima... So, You all can thanks her For that... PLUS I GAVE A OS also yesterday...Next chapter will be quite long... and it will be posted on 19th march .No one will ask before that... as this day is a special one... ;)

Regards

Arushi😳

Next Chapter

Edited by ...Arushi... - 9 years ago
Devilicious_ME thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#79
Lol me first 😆
Edited by -RuthShalini- - 10 years ago
Devilicious_ME thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#80
Res
I know what is on 19 ;-)

Related Topics

Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: So-So

14 days ago

Akdha SS - Where Passions Collide - Update Part 2 27/07/2025 Akdha SS - Where Passions Collide - Update Part 2 27/07/2025

Part 1 Two Worlds Here she was. Jodha Shekhawat stood in front of the gleaming glass and steel headquarters of Khan Engineering in Agra. The...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee

5 months ago

Akdha OS : Ehsaas

Ehsaas The night unfurled its velvety embrace over the grand city of Agra... The towering walls of the Mughal palace stood bathed in moonlight,...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: nushhkiee

23 days ago

Akdha OS - Under This Concrete Sky - 13/07/2025

And Then He Looked At Her...... The first time Jodha Sharma stepped into Skyline Infrastructures, she was soaked in the scent of wet earth and...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: MideOfTheShadow

1 months ago

ishq-e-sultaana (akdha ss/ff)

synopsis when he brought Amer's rose into his harem, she was meant to be a testament to his conquest. when she agreed to marry him, it was with...

Expand ▼
Jodha Akbar Thumbnail

Posted by: talesmith

1 months ago

AKDHA FF - MYRIAD SHADES OF LOVE & WAR

Hi all! Some of you may know me already or maybe not - I had posted a modern OS named Serendipity on this forum some months ago. Here again with...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".