yaadein : a cid fanfiction (and now chap 4 up!!!)

Chapter 1: kya tumhe yaad hai?

iss story ki shuruvaat hoti hai cid bureay mein...acp sir ne bulayi hai meeting...

ACP: aaj is meeting mein mujhe bohot zaroori do announcements karni hain...

Pehli to ye hai ki Inspector Shreya ne transfer application diya hai, jise approve bhi kar liya gaya hai (all shocked 😲, especially daya sad on hearing Shreya's name, but controls his emotions) ek mahine mein Shreya ki shaadi ho rahi hai, jiske baad wo Siddarth ke saath rehne ke liye Delhi shift ho rahi hai...

Purvi: but sir, shreya ne iss bare mein humein kuch bataya kyun nahi?

Ishita: aur wo aaj hai kahan sir?

Acp: Shreya ne tum sab ko kyun nahi bataya, yeh na mein janta hun aur na meine use pucha... Aur aaj who apni family ke saath shaadi ki kuch rasmon ke liye Delhi gayi hai...

Kher, dusri announcement yeh hai ki Shreya ko replace karne ke liye Delhi HQ ne ek bohut hi senior aur kabil officer ko humari team mein bheja hai... who officer Delhi HQ ki ek bohut hi honhar Inspector hai, aur uska naam hai...

(a young lady enters the bureau...she is tall and fair but very serious looking... she greets acp sir...abhijeet looks at daya and is shocked to see the emotions in his eyes...)

Lady: Inspector shunya reporting sir!

ACP: ye hain Inspector Shunya...Cid delhi ki ek honhar officer aur aaj se CID Mumbai ka ek hissa...aao Shunya, main tumhe sabse introduce karva deta hoon...

(and acp sir introduces everyone and she responds silently with a polite smile and curt nod...but when he introduces daya... abhijeet is shocked to see a pain and some signs of familiarity in the eyes of both...afterwards all of them get engaged as a case is reported...)

Scene: evening, CID Bureau...

(all officers have already left... only abhi, daya and acp sir are left in the bureau... duo are completing some filework...suddenly, abhijeet approaches daya...)

Daya: kya baat hai abhi? koi kaam tha kya?

Abhi: (seriously) Daya, kaun hai wo ladki?

Daya: (confused) kaun ladki abhi? (teasing) tumhe to jab dekho ladkiyan hi sujhti rehti hain... Dr. Tarika se complaint karni padegi! 😉

Abhi: (angry) dekh daya, main mazak ke mood mein nahi hoon...sach-sach bata mujhe kaun hai wo ladki?

Daya: kaun si ladki abhi? yeh kya ladki- ladki ki rat lagaye baithe ho, haan? agar meri zindagi mein koi aisi ladki hoti to tumhe na pata hota? Abhi, Shreya ke baad to...😭

Abhi: daya, main uss ladki ki baat kar raha hoon jo aaj bureau mein aayi hai, woh inspector Shunya (daya shocked and tries to deny, but abhi interrupts) jhooth mat bolna daya, teri aankhon mein pehchan ke rang dekhe the maine... (shouts) bata kaun hai wo daya? 😡

ACP: (coming out of his cabin) kya baat hai abhijeet, kyun chilla rahe ho daya pe?

Abhi: sir aap hi puchhiye na isse... aaj jo officer aayi hai na, daya janta hai use, par bata nahi raha...maine un dono ki aankhon mein signs of familiarity dekhe hain sir...ek dard dekha hai...phir kyun daya chhupa raha hai humse?

ACP: (in a strict tone) Daya, kya baat hai? kya tum sach me usse jante ho? (loudly, as daya is silent)batao daya!

Daya: (suddenly stands up and shouts) nahi...nahi janta main use...bilkul nahi jaanta...kyun aap dono pichhe pade ho mere...maine kaha na ki main use nahi janta... nahi janta... AAH!

(suddenly daya holds his head and cries out in pain...abhi and acp try to help him but he faints!)

Abhi and Acp: DAYA! 😲

Abhi:(worried) kya ho gaya achanak isse sir! main abhi paani leke aata hoon! (sprinkles water on his face...) Daya! daya! uth na yaar!

ACP: utho daya! (to abhi) lagta hai isse hospital le jaana hoga!

Abhi: main...main abhi ambulance bulata hoon sir! (and he leaves to call with moist eyes)

(both ACP and abhijeet wait for the ambulance in tension while trying continuously but unsuccessfully to make daya conscious...but both are unable to notice a pair of eyes hiding at the entry of cid bureau and observing them with tears in her eyes! 😭 as the sound of ambulance siren comes, she hastily leaves!)

kya hua hai daya ko? kya wo jaanta hai iss ladki ko? kyun ho gaya daya behosh? aur kaun hai jo chhup-chhup ke aansoon baha raha hai? janiye agle chapters main!

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Originally posted by: visrom

Sorry I didn't get the time to read the whole thing .

Just saw this.

<font size="3" face="Times New Roman">Pehli to ye hai kiInspector Shreya ne transfer application diya hai, jise approve bhi kar liya gaya hai </font>

I think I am going to like your story. Please post it fully. 😛

Chapter 2: jaan ke bhi anjaan hai...

ambulance aate hi abhijeet aur acp sir daya ko turant hospital le jate hain...pure raste daya ko uthane ki koshishen ki jaati hain par koi faida nahi hota... donon ki aankhon mein aansoon hain...on way, acp sir informs dr. salunkhe to reach XYZ hospital... hospital pahunchte hi...
abhi: doctor! arre kahan hai yeh doctor!

nurse: sir aap please dheere boliye...hosspital hai ye...aur dekhiye, vo rahe doctor sahab...

acp: shant ho jao abhijeet (to doctor) doctor sahab, dekhiye na kya ho gaya hai isse...

doctor: senior inspector daya! par ye hua kaise?

abhi: pata nahi sir...hum bas kuch savaal puch rahe the isse, aur achanak iska sar dukhne laga aur ye behosh ho gaya!

doctor: chaliye, inhe chamber mein le chalte hain...mujhe kuch tests karne honge (shouting) wardboy! inhe chamber mein lekar jao!

(to acp and abhijeet) aap dono bahar hi intezar karein...

abhi: (in tears) doctor, daya theek to ho jayega na?

doctor: himmat rakhiye senior inspector abhijeet

(about 10 minutes pass...acp sir is sitting outside the chamber on a bench with a tensed expression...abhijeet is pacing outside...meanwhile dr. salunkhe enters)

dr. s: acp, yeh sab hua kaise... aisa kya puch liya tumne mere daya bache se ki vo behosh hi ho gaya?

(acp and abhi tell him everything)

dr. s: khair, dr. ne kya kaha hai?

acp: abhi to vo kuch tests kar rahe hain... ab dekhte hain, kya kehta hai ye doctor...

(about 30 minutes pass... dr. comes outside from the chamber)

abhi: dr., kaisa hai daya ab?

dr.s : hi i'm dr. salunkhe from cid forensics... kaisa hai ab daya dr.?

dr. : dekhiye, aap sab please pehle mere saath cabin mein chaliye...

scene: inside the cabin-

dr.: inse miliye, yeh hain dr. sharma, sheher ke jaane-maane neurologist...aur ye hain mr. joshi, sheher ke mashur psychiatrist (all are tensed on hearing that)

abhi pov: psychiatrist... kya hua hai mere daya ko... kahin usse bhi us sab se to nahi guzarna padega jisse main...(shivers) nahi, aisa nahin ho sakta!

dr.: dekhiye, hum sab ne saare tests karke dekh liye hain...na inhe koi bimari hai, na hi weakness, aur na hi koi poisoning ya excessive head injury...

dr. sharma: meine khud phir se tests bhi kiye hain...koi bhi neurological samasya bhi nahi hai... (all heave a sigh of relief)

dr. joshi: humein lag raha hai ki inhe kissi baat se zabardast stress hua hai...jisse inka mind cope nahi kar paya aur yeh behosh ho gaye... (all again tensed)

achha...aap humein detail mein bataaiye, aakhir uss samay hua kya tha? (acp and abhijeet explain everything in detail)

dr. joshi: hmmm...aapki baaton se lagta hai ki ye ladki hi unke stress ka kaaran hai...aap keh rahe the na ki woh unhe jaante hain par pehchan nahi paa rahe... ho sakta hai uss ladki ka sambandh daya ke past se ho!

abhi: par aisa kaise ho sakta hai dr. sahab? agar aisa hota to daya mujhe zaroor bataata... aakhir bhai manta hai wo mujhe!

acp: abhijeet sahi keh raha hai dr. sahab... daya ke past ka koi pehlu usse chhipa hua nahi hai...

dr. joshi: hmmm...ho sakta hai ki apne past ke iss pehlu se daya jaan kar bhi anjaan ho...

dr. s : (after some thought) you mean repressed memory!

acp and abhi: KYA!

dr. joshi: i think you are right dr. salunkhe... it seems to be a case of repressed memory...(looking at the questioning faces of acp and abhijeet) main samjhata hun... in this case a person forgets all or part of his past due to a psychological trauma... uss hisse ki memory to usse hoti hai...par uska dimaag kuch aise psychological blocks bana leta hai jiske kaaran wo uss memory ko access nahi kar pata...

lagta hai ki wo ladki bhi unn repressed memories ka ek hissa hai... aaj use dekhkar senior inspector daya ke brain ne use recall karne ki koshish ki hogi...par un psychological blocks ne use kuch bhi yaad nahi aane diya hoga...bas shayad unki unconsious memory use pehchan gayi hogi... phir jab aapne unse sawaal puche to unhone brain pe zor daala hoga...par un psychological blocks ki wajah se unhe kuch bhi yaad karne mein dikkat ho rahi hogi... aur wo stress ke kaaran behosh ho gaye honge...

abhi: to ab hum kya karein doctor?

dr. joshi: abhi kuch der mein hi unhe hosh aa jaana chahiye... behtar hoga ki aap unse abhi koi bhi sawaal na karein uss ladki ko lekar...bas unhe pyar aur support dein... jaise- jaise unka brain stress se ladne ko tayaar hota jayega, shayad unhe khud sab yaad aa jayega...

haan, agar humein unhe treat karna hai to unke past ke uss pehlu ke baare mein thodi jankaari chahiye hogi... agar ho sake to aap us ladki se baat karein...shayad..

(suddenly they hear the voice of a flowerpot breaking outside the chamber... all turn around to see a person who was glancing inside and is now trying to run away... abhijeet runs after her and is finally able to catch her just outside the hospital... he turns her around to face him and is shocked)

Abhi: TUM!

Originally posted by: bluetides

I bet story is at chap 5 at FF 😆
any odds? 😛

Originally posted by: duo18rocks

yup...and chap 6 might come soon BT...but boards ne writer ko dimaag ke kisi kone mein lock kar diya hai...