Arakshi FF - Forever with You - Last chapter and Epilogue 07/05

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TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 10 years ago

#551

quite meticulously composed!! 😊 it was a pleasure reading the lines.

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PoohLover

@PoohLover

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Posted: 10 years ago

#552

Heylooo heylooo 😳😳

Yayyy an update...ah am loving it totally the way they are all close knitted soo lage raho 😉😉

Getting proposed on your birthday is quite romantic nah...*imagine* 😳😳

Mandir at midnight must be sooo peaceful and awesooome especially those on hills 😃😃

Awww arjun dad is soo sweet and caring and loving towards sakshii 😃😃

Haha talking through messages when the person is next to you😆😆😆 i loove doing that 😆😆

Aww the little flashback and then sakshi hugging Senor Rawte was soo emotional and sweet 😛😛

Oye the text conversation was cherry on top 😳😳

Such an awesoome blossom update rituuu rituu...maazaa aaagaya and now i want chocolate cake 😳😳

Biiig biiig hugs 🤗🤗

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fly.high

@fly.high

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Posted: 10 years ago

#553

This story always makes me emotional...
the relationship which arjun and maai shared ws always envious but now the way Ur showing sakshi and Mr.rawte relationship is so touching ...

loved this update

continue soon

PS: missing Phir Milenge and Adi-Piya too much... :(

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#554

Aww..! Papa Rawte wished her first.. The conversation was so casual and fun. He is being partial towards her..And I'm liking it.!😃
The simplicity of the proposal enhanced its beauty..and that too on her birthday..😃
By the way loved the SMS game..specially the last bit of it..😳
"Why don't we ever get used to someone's absence even though we know they're never coming back?"
We know the answer and yet, we don't want to answer it...I really feel for Sakshi this time.

Aww..sweet surprise for a sweet girl..
Chocolate cake..😛Yummyy..!!! I ate Black forest cake today..Yet, I'm greedy now for chocolate cake..😛

Two moments which were magical for me in this part..One being, where Maai wishes her..😊Second, was when Papa Rawte wishes her and she hugs him getting emotional..😊

Your Father's presence and a feeling that he is by your side itself is just out of the world..❤️
Thank You Ritu 🤗 for creating such Father-Daughter moments in this story..I guess, this is the only story where we get F-D moments..And I LOVEEE them..🤗
I miss my Baba, but you make it a happy-wala-miss..not a sad one..🤗 *happy tears*
It was a Beautiful update.!👍🏼
Continue soon.

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sweetpari4u97

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Posted: 10 years ago

#555

awesome part.

loved the update.

cont soon.

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#556

Arjun toh mama ka beta bangaya. He wants to spend maximum time with his maa

Mr. Rawte teasing Arjun that he only thinks abt his professional life n he had totally forgot his personal life. "Mujhe thoda time chaahiye" - Ye kya Arjun apne best friend jo tumse itna pyaar karti hain usse propose karnekeliye time chaahiye tumhe? Seriously tum buddhu hi ho dil ke maamle main😆😆😆

Sakshi was overwhelmed when Mr.Rawte wished first on her birthday aur Mr.Rawte toh apne bete ko chodkar apne bahu se zyaada pyaar karnelage hain. Arjun toh hamesha se hi late lateef hain pyaar karne main. Ab birthday wish karne main bhi late? 😆😆😆

I loved the mobile conversation. Jab Arjun ne shaadi keliye poocha toh Sakshi ka reaction!!!! Wow kya moment hogi na jab jisse hum pyaar karte hain vo ye sawaal poochega ki tum mujhse shaadi karogi? Sakshi ko toh yakeen hi nahi huwa. She feared that ye lamha kahi gaayab na hojaaye

Chocolate Cake? Arjun n Mr.Rawte ne milkar Sakshi ke liye banaya? That's so sweet.😃😃😃

Happy Birthday Butterfly

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: skrafty
Res//Unres
YAY!!!!!!!!
Me first🥳🥳
Awesome update
Loved it
Loved the text convo
Arjun's proposal was so sweet and simple
Just loved it
Arjun and his Dad baked a cake for Sakshi😃
So sweet
And the last part
It was just beautiful
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon

Hehehe lately you're always the first one😃 and yeah I love it!

Thanks soo much Shravanii.. always always it means a lot🤗

Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing..
Sooo Magical Sooo Beautiful
Continue Soon
Waiting for next part
Thanks for the PM

Thanks so much Niki!!😳

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll
I suddenly drop the knife on the table and put my arms around him. "Thank you, Papa," I whisper, holding on to him as I would have once held my father
Now that is what is called as a father daughter moment.

Trust me on this one Ritu.These last lines gave me goosebumps 😳
Just before darkness falls around the room, I feel a gentle wind blow through my hair. My gaze falls upon my mother's photograph on the table and that's when I think I hear her laugh. And then, I hear a whisper, as low as the sound of a gentle breeze, "Happy Birthday, Butterfly."

I am very sorry to say but this FF is the one that makes me crazy like an emotional wreck not for the leads love story but for the leads booming relationship with the other characters.First it was Maai-Arjun & now it's Saakshi & HER Papa🤗

Tumko **Kick**

Hehe your comment made me feel warm 😳

There's more coming up..especially for you Farheen! (See I said your name😛)

Hahaha I think this story has drifted a little from the usual lovestory.. it's got a lot more and I am guessing that it's a good thing for my readers😃

Thank u soo much🤗

Originally posted by: SeharishFatima
Awsum

Thanks!😃

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Yes...I was on holiday...😃😃😃

Awesome update...
Mr Rawte was scared that his son might not propose Sakshi...😆😆😆
Yes...sometimes we need to Thank god for everything he gave us...😃😃😃
Liked text conversation...😃😃😃
Liked Arjun's simple proposal...😃😃😃
Mr Rawte & Arjun baked cake...😃😃😃
Last three words are the words that I was waiting in the whole update...😳😳😳

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Aww thank u Snehaa🤗

Hehe .. glad u liked it 😃

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#558

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali
nice update
after so long arjun got his loving and caring family back
and even sakshi got what she craved for her father in form of mr rawte
man lagtha hain senior rawte ko bhi sakshi ne bhut impress hain ki arjun ko uski
wajah se dant pahdi 😃 😆
sakshi's b'day and on that day senior wished before arjun 😉
arjun asked sakshi for marriage and she just frooze 😊
arjun is worried for her that she would miss her mom
b'day surprise was nice and it made sakshi real emotional it was first time that her papa wished her
on her b'day
thanks for pm

Thanks a lot Shefali!😳

Hope u like the next!

Originally posted by: anitasharma
Superb update
arjun's proposal was simple but cute
direct from heart
so sweet of mr. Rawte
because of him sakshi is getting a father's love
waiting for next part

Hey thank u soo much! 😳 there's more father-daughter moments coming up😃

Originally posted by: NainaSM
wowww awesome
arjun ne propose kiya
sakshi had a loving family
arakshi cute
so magical emotional lovely
continue soon

Thanks soo much Naina!😳

Originally posted by: Humzy
beautiful update
loved it
very nicely written
continue soon

Thank u so much!!😃

Originally posted by: TereLiyeMINU
quite meticulously composed!! 😊 it was a pleasure reading the lines.

Thank youuu😳

Originally posted by: PoohLover
Heylooo heylooo 😳😳

Yayyy an update...ah am loving it totally the way they are all close knitted soo lage raho😉😉

Getting proposed on your birthday is quite romantic nah...*imagine* 😳😳

Mandir at midnight must be sooo peaceful and awesooome especially those on hills 😃😃

Awww arjun dad is soo sweet and caring and loving towards sakshii 😃😃

Haha talking through messages when the person is next to you😆😆😆 i loove doing that 😆😆

Aww the little flashback and then sakshi hugging Senor Rawte was soo emotional and sweet 😛😛

Oye the text conversation was cherry on top 😳😳

Such an awesoome blossom update rituuu rituu...maazaa aaagaya and now i want chocolate cake 😳😳

Biiig biiig hugs 🤗🤗

Heyloo heyloo Bharuuu!😳 Hehehe more closeness coming up😛

Haan hainaa...😳 But mera Arjun kahan hai?🤔

Ohhh yes yess... I was imagining it .. like I said, I haven't been to a proper temple in ages.. miss the one in Delhi so much

Hehehe the texting thing.. I used to do that with my friend😛

LOOL... I want some of your Ferrero Rocher cake.. when I come visit u better make some😃

Love yaa for the comment Bharuu😳

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#559

Originally posted by: fly.high
This story always makes me emotional...
the relationship which arjun and maai shared ws always envious but now the way Ur showing sakshi and Mr.rawte relationship is so touching ...

loved this update

continue soon

PS: missing Phir Milenge and Adi-Piya too much... :(

Heyloo Birdiee🤗

Awww.. thanks.. that means a lot to me😳

Will be showing more of them too... hope you'll like it😃

And yes.. the first chapter is almost complete! Really hoping you'll like it❤️

Originally posted by: Areesha566
BEAUTIFUL

Thanks sooo much!😳

Originally posted by: Swara85
Aww..! Papa Rawte wished her first.. The conversation was so casual and fun. He is being partial towards her..And I'm liking it.!😃
The simplicity of the proposal enhanced its beauty..and that too on her birthday..😃
By the way loved the SMS game..specially the last bit of it..😳
"Why don't we ever get used to someone's absence even though we know they're never coming back?"
We know the answer and yet, we don't want to answer it...I really feel for Sakshi this time.

Aww..sweet surprise for a sweet girl..
Chocolate cake..😛Yummyy..!!! I ate Black forest cake today..Yet, I'm greedy now for chocolate cake..😛

Two moments which were magical for me in this part..One being, where Maai wishes her..😊Second, was when Papa Rawte wishes her and she hugs him getting emotional..😊

Your Father's presence and a feeling that he is by your side itself is just out of the world..❤️
Thank You Ritu 🤗 for creating such Father-Daughter moments in this story..I guess, this is the only story where we get F-D moments..And I LOVEEE them..🤗
I miss my Baba, but you make it a happy-wala-miss..not a sad one..🤗 *happy tears*
It was a Beautiful update.!👍🏼
Continue soon.

Heyloo Swara😃

Aaj kaunsa day tha? It was "Main rang sharbaton ka" day for me😛

Aww thanks so much😳😳

Yeah I know... it's so true na? Sometimes it feels unreal that they won't come back..

Hahaha .. I made brownies after I wrote this update lol😆

Thank you sooo much... glad u love them so much 😳 Aww.. yes you should remember the happy memories.. although we can't help but miss them too.

Hope you'll like the upcoming update😃

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97
awesome part.
loved the update.
cont soon.

Thanks soo much!😳

Originally posted by: Nethravathi
Arjun toh mama ka beta bangaya. He wants to spend maximum time with his maa
Mr. Rawte teasing Arjun that he only thinks abt his professional life n he had totally forgot his personal life. "Mujhe thoda time chaahiye" - Ye kya Arjun apne best friend jo tumse itna pyaar karti hain usse propose karnekeliye time chaahiye tumhe? Seriously tum buddhu hi ho dil ke maamle main😆😆😆
Sakshi was overwhelmed when Mr.Rawte wished first on her birthday aur Mr.Rawte toh apne bete ko chodkar apne bahu se zyaada pyaar karnelage hain. Arjun toh hamesha se hi late lateef hain pyaar karne main. Ab birthday wish karne main bhi late? 😆😆😆
I loved the mobile conversation. Jab Arjun ne shaadi keliye poocha toh Sakshi ka reaction!!!! Wow kya moment hogi na jab jisse hum pyaar karte hain vo ye sawaal poochega ki tum mujhse shaadi karogi?Sakshi ko toh yakeen hi nahi huwa. She feared that ye lamha kahi gaayab na hojaaye
Chocolate Cake? Arjun n Mr.Rawte ne milkar Sakshi ke liye banaya? That's so sweet.😃😃😃
Happy Birthday Butterfly

Hehehe yes ab woh hai hi aisa😛.. thanks sooo much!🤗

Hope u like the next😃😃

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 10 years ago

#560

Heylooo!🤗

Feels like I am ... no wait I actually am... updating this after an eternity! I hope it was worth the wait.. 😕 (For some reason, it was extremely difficult to put together.. so if I messed up anywhere, please don't mind).

Here's the next chapter! 😃

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Hope u liked it! And yeah... I know Arakshi were barely there in this one, but the next one will have more of them😳

Do leave your comments😳🤗

Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 10 years ago