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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kash!
Just a simple small word!
How simple is that to say u are not right or perfect for me? Please look at your self in the mirror once!

That's exactly when my kash grew bounds together forming something unknown in my self... was that determination or love to be loved I didn't have an idea but... Kash!

Time n again I see u achieve something n get accolades from all the near one's but alas my kash comes again...

I was so proud of you that u have achieved all that on your own hard work I literally celebrated festival on the name of ur success... log mujhe pagal kehthe the

Par wo kya samjhe k iss kash ne hume kaya kya diya... it gave me the courage to face the world... coz u will not like me timid n weak... it gave me hope to say a little bit more patience... sab apne aap thek hojayega!

Wo wakth bhi aya jab hum ne kash kehna chod diya ... coz I was too much drowned in my life n its never ending miseries but tum nahi aye ...
Na hi saat diya...

Kash I would have never met u never made an effort to know you better than what u pretend to be...

Bada asaan hota hai na to say who are u.. will u please excuse me... kab tak is my question to my patience...

Kash aap me thodi aur himmat hoti

Q aap nahi dekh paye aap muje... was it coz I was lost in the crowd or coz u were lost in the crowd!

Din kya saal guzar diye hum ne intazar k ... only in the hope ki kisi din app ki ye dill ko chu jane wali muskurahat sirf hamari hogi!

Who was the one in your arms whom u were preserving like some treasure... might be one of your world which u have built away from me...

Kash it would be in my hands to burn the very person who dared to touch you but hum bhi gila kya kare jab tum ne kuch na kaha...

Khushi bepanah hume bhi hui thi jab aap apni kamyabi k uchaiope the... par kash un chamk ti roshni me hum bhi app k saat hote...

Dill toota dard bada but I didn't loose hope coz hope was all I had in the pitiful condition of my life

Phir kahani badli! Suraj bhi uga... that day was the day one will never want to forget in one's life

Walking down the road u covered the distance between us... mere tho haat pair kaapne lage the!

Still one look at your eyes I knew it was today when someone so ordinary n not so perfect that those words reflected were to be proven wrong!

So wrong k aap khud ko bhul jao in this beautiful dream like state... wondering where this courage came from I look at you with all that I have preserved in my heart all my life...

But u time n again do the same crush me to an extent I will not exist!

Shayad uss din k hawao me hi kuch baat thi jyse meri muskan aur meri di kaha karti thi!

I took the step myself keeping all my doubts and insecurities aside... among all the crowd n people I saw u walk a little away with your cell in ur hand and the other busy in your hair as always

Aap ko bahome le k aysa laga k jannat milgai... the surprising thing of that moment was u stopped ur struggle just a moment later...

Jab aap ko Nazare churate hue dekha... tho hum ye jaan gaye k app ki bhi koi majboori hui hogi... warna aap itne bhi kamzor nahi k khud ko chuda na pao...

The darkness of the night helped us well k aap apni zindgi mujse chupalo...n mai apne ghum aap k hoto se pi jaon

We kissed promising something unknown ... something never talked about nor discussed...

Uss raat maine kash kehna chod diya!

Q k I have learned agar mujhe chand ko pana hai tho, just kash kafi nahi hoga!

Aaj hum unka aina hai jo sirf wo dek sak te hain

Aur unn ki muskurahat sirf hamari hai q ki wo ki ko apni muskan ki jhalak de wo namumkin si baat hai!






Ps . in English on page2



Hay yaar people!
This was something I started to write as the next part of my ongoing story. .. but was in two minds thinking about the readers. ..

Sab ko hindi nahi aati na... so edited😃

Upar likhe gaye mere kosish me u will all find something which most of you are very familiar with!

Yes these are few lines I've read in years being in IF from all that I've read...

My dear writer u are right wo line aap hi k ff me se hai!

Thanks again for penning down such a wonderful story!

Yaar agar tum log likhte hi nahi tho hum padte kya!

Iss kisse ka details jaan na hai tho mujhe mat pucho answers provide karungi tho jute padenge mujhe!

Next wala try will be completely in English once I promised a gift to someone. ..

And it will be called "Mote hathi n Choti chenti ki love story!"
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG !
You liked it!
Thanks you so much...😃
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Lovely OS ! 😊 well written
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Hey..
I clicked on this thread and as started reading it.. I felt as if somebody has analysed life sooo deeply and written such pure feelings.. every word that I read in ur post was sooo good.. I could feel it.. KASH sach much sirf ek shabd hai par usse unlimited dreams jod lete hain hum..
Awesome thought.. very well written.. 👏

Kash yeh zaalim judai na hoti..
Rabba tuney yeh cheez banai na hoti..
Na hum unse milte na yeh pyar hota..
Zindagi jo apni thi voh parayi na hoti..
(credits to Google)

PS; ur title made me click here coz I am a DMG vala KASH fan.. lolz.. but then after reading it I recollected the song "mujhse mohabbat ka izhaar karta.. Kash koi ladka mujhe pyar karta.."

sorry if u r not able to relate to any of the words that I have written in the comment to ur OS.. but it was just so damn good that It will be bookmarked with me for a long time now..

luv
Rucha
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Lovely OS ! 😊 well written

Thank you so much for reading!😃
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Originally posted by: frnd.of.frndz

Hey..

I clicked on this thread and as started reading it.. I felt as if somebody has analysed life sooo deeply and written such pure feelings.. every word that I read in ur post was sooo good.. I could feel it.. KASH sach much sirf ek shabd hai par usse unlimited dreams jod lete hain hum..
Awesome thought.. very well written.. 👏

Kash yeh zaalim judai na hoti..
Rabba tuney yeh cheez banai na hoti..
Na hum unse milte na yeh pyar hota..
Zindagi jo apni thi voh parayi na hoti..
(credits to Google)

PS; ur title made me click here coz I am a DMG vala KASH fan.. lolz.. but then after reading it I recollected the song "mujhse mohabbat ka izhaar karta.. Kash koi ladka mujhe pyar karta.."

sorry if u r not able to relate to any of the words that I have written in the comment to ur OS.. but it was just so damn good that It will be bookmarked with me for a long time now..

luv
Rucha


Thank you so much!😳
Aree yaar if u could relate my words n understand something which I wanted to say
tho phir tumhari baat samja na mere liye aur asan hi hoga na...

Thank you so much for dropping by my thread!🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dear girl..
I wish ..had learned Hindi..

With little Hindi... Still learning from..IF...😃
Made me understand.. Of ur OS..

When we get something... We try for bigger..than biggest..

But when love.. Someone.. Wishing it would be reciprocated...
comes determination.. Making his/her ..know me.

Soo many beautiful words.. Put together...

Sorry if its completely wrong..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: gavin14

Dear girl..

I wish ..had learned Hindi..

With little Hindi... Still learning from..IF...😃
Made me understand.. Of ur OS..

When we get something... We try for bigger..than biggest..

But when love.. Someone.. Wishing it would be reciprocated...
comes determination.. Making his/her ..know me.

Soo many beautiful words.. Put together...

Sorry if its completely wrong..


No u are not wrong!
N if u want I can translate it for you. ..
only if u want that is😳

Thanks for reading! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: spoorthi28


No u are not wrong!
N if u want I can translate it for you. ..
only if u want that is😳

Thanks for reading! 😃

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Plzz translate it..
Happy to read..

Thinking I was learning and understanding..all wrong..
Happy that I am correct..

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