Jodha Akbar FF :Who loves him Most/Chapter-30B::06-06-2015 on Thread2

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❤️JODHA AKBAR :WHO LOVES HIM MOST❤️

. Hey Guys,This is my first ff.I am a silent reader of akdha ffs for many years.this storey line consept had ringing my years for a long time.so I decided to write it as an ff.this storey takes place in 21st century.I have inspired from Bhavaniji,sanvi,pari,Mrs Tokas for my ffs.this is only my work friction.I have no intention to hurt any person,religion,cast,personality for this ff.so please forgive me for my language or mistakes.hope you all would be like It
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Rajaa Sahab,Rajaa sahab...a middle aged man running towards Bhamal with worried and fearfull face.Bharmal looked at him It was Ramu Kakaa,driver of suryabhan.kya hua Ramu,Baraat itne jaldi aagaya.Subkuch Teek hai na?Kuch bhi teek nah I hai Rajaji,Ramu said sadly.kya hua Ramu tum Kuch paresaan dikh Raha hai.Rajaji Chote Sahab ye Chitti aapko dene keliye Kaha.Chitti Is wakth.Bharmal wondered.kya hai chitti mein.aap hi pad lijiye sahab,Ramu said it with fearful expression.Bharmal started to reading letter

Poojaniy Kakkasa,

" hum nahi jaanathe hai yeh Baat aapko kaise kahe,air yen padne ke baad aapke reaction kya Hogan.washable karte hai ki aap hamare jazbaaton ko samjenge.hamari aur aapke bad I beti Paridhi vivah khoshana hamare bachpan se hi tay hua tha.paranthu hame us nirnay par aapathi nahi thi jab tak hum apne "Ash"ko mili thi.u s vakth hame ehsaas hua ki hum paridhi ko sir chaahthe ho prem nahi karthi.Hum ye Baat aapko batana jaa raha that isle Pehele hi Subkuch Tay Mar liye.dono parivaar me samaan ke saamne hamre aur ash ki Milan kanji nah I hoga.keliye hum bhaag has ho.hum jaanathe hai pari hame prem karthe hai.par hame us par prem nahin.aap dono mujhe khshama kar do.hamare pass koi upaay nahi tha,isliye ye kadam udani Padi"


Suryabhan

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Paridhi's world crashing down hearing this news .she did not expect this from suryabhan.she always love him and yearned for him.suddenly some realisation passed through her.she looked into jalal's who standing opposite to her.there is no pian or sympathy in his eyes for her state.he looked her impassively.with that he avoided her walked outwards without looking her.a sudden string appeared in her heart while looking his his handsome painful face.she realized,she did a unforgivable sin.she betrayed him, broke his heart and probe for her own respect and pride.

Jalaal...she cried loudly.she runs towards him hug from his back tightly and said"hame maaf Mar dijiye jalal.hum jaanthe hai Hume aapke saath azeem gunshot kits hai.jo mafi ke laayak nahin.par Hume ab apne jalthi ka ehsaas hua.hum apne ahankar mein doobkar aapko tukara soya.ishwar ke liye hame kshama kar do,khshama do with saying she sobbed loudly..

Jalas's turned red hearing her words.Naapaak Aurat,Wrench '.tume itne himmat kaise hui hame chime ki.hame aur tumhare beech ristha kya hai.hat jayaiye hamare raasthe se.

Ristha?jalal aapke ye kya kehthe hai.aap hame prem karthe hai na?Aur aap kaha tha kki aap hame shaadi karenge
Jalal couldn't hold his anger long time,he slapped her cheecks hardly,because of hard slipping blood begin to oozing through her lips.Prem tumhareliye hamara prem us din Mara tha his din tum Mara tha jab tum tumhare ahankaar ko hamare upar chuna.Agar hum is duniya mein kisi no apne Jaan se zyaada nafrat Kate ho go tum hai.
Aur shaadi ke baat.to suniye.hum Jalalludeen Mohammed apne Khuda ke mmadam khate hai.chahe Kuch bhi ho jaye hum kabhi bhi tume shaadi nahi karenge.hamare beetch mein koi ristha nahi hai.hum hamari aakhiri saas tak tume nafrat karenge.hum kisi bhi anaad ladki ko shaadi karenge par tumhe nahin.Par tume hamse shaadi karne keliye kya majboori hai.tumne kaha tha hum tumein shaadi karne keliye laayak nahin kai,na hi hamare paas dhan hai nahi daulat ,aur kya kaha tha tum hame "womenizer".Ek khoobsoorat Rajput Royal Girl ko Ek Mammoli Mugal se Shaadi karna shoba nahi deta.
Pari left stunned hearing this.Jalal Shook her shoulders and said with violence sound.Hum sub kuch bhool denge.par kya tumhe hamari Ammijaan ko Jaan de sakthi ho .jo tumhare karan ,sirf tumhare karanse Allah ko pyara ho gaya.Uski Kabar mein one haath se mitti dalkar hum yahaa tak aaye,taki Hume tumari Shaadi ke khana khane khaa sake.esaa hi tum kaha tha,hai na?Par Khuda ne tumhe seekh di, Jiskeliye Tum Mujhe Dokha soya Usine Tumhe Dokha Diya...

Jalal Said with his thundering voice."Suno Ms Paridhi.Tumhare Dokha ko hum kanbhi nahi bholoonga.aur mein apne kasam par kayam rahenge.Aaj ke baad hamare paas dil nahi hai "Tum achi tarah jaanti hai jalal never brake his promise.with in it ,he left from there without further argument leaving Paridhi shattered behind.her heart broke into millions of piececrowd wondered hearing this, what is happening and who is this handsome' man .Bharmal Saab ke beti aur yen ladke ke beech mein kya ristha hai
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Prologue -2




Anchor Jhonson announced.Well my dear viewers,here it is 3 beautiful girls standing infront of yours.tho.one in yellow dress is Angelina Ms USA,and the last one in blue dress is Catherine,Ms England and last beauty who is in green dress is Jodha Jalalludeen Mohammed,Ms Switzerland.So.dear views what did you think from these 3 beauties ,who is going to be 'Ms World"of this Year,Have a guess.
Jodha shocked to hearing her name addressing like this.who is this Jalalludeen Mohammed ?.unke naam mere saath kaise joda.I think there may occur some misunderstanding.I.need to clarify that.She looked into.herSachin's face.who is smiling looking at her continuously.Are,Jodha confused.Sachin kyon muskurathe ho,Inhe gussa hona chahiye mere naam kisi aur ke saath jodthe sunkar.Par.inke.muh mei koi bedabaav nahi hai
By the way ,yeh front seat Sachin ko kaise Mila,yeh bahut ameer logon ki hai..Jodha totally confused..but she determined to rectify mistake.Sir ,My name is only Jodha not Jodha Jalalludeen Mohammed.hearing this anchor jhonson astonished.what ?he is not your wouldbe.?.No No,My wouldbe's name is Sachin ,the man I loves ,who is sitting infront of me at front row.other participants put their hands on.mouth hearing jodha's answer.One of them surpizefully said to Jodha Miss Jodha,do you know who is Jalalludeen Mohammed.He is recently selected most sexiest Man in the world.Owner of MGI,Second richest person in the world,young dashing.you need to thanks to.your luck which made anchor mistake ,due to this.you can make relationship with him.hearing this Jodha became damn angry .I don't mind whoever he is,I only loves Sachin .I have only wish to marry him.He is not a rich person.he is a common man.I have no interest in money or fame and I have no intention to marry Jalalludeen Mohammed.Johnson smiling widely hearing this.he asked jodha to show him Sachin.She pointed to Jalal who is smirking looked at her.Johnson chuckled,Oh I see.
Before she begin to saying anything, The anchor Jhonson announced in very loud voice.So,Ladies and gentleman.I would like to invite our chief guest to announce the name of winner.The most sexist person,Owner of MGI,King of business world and money world,charming,eye catching,daring,dashing Jalalludeen Mohammed Akbar...All are clapped hearing his name especially girls...I lovesyou Jalal..we love you,...make.me.yours ...marry me..kiss me...hug me..All girls enchanted his name..Jalal stands up shake his hands with others,adjusted his suit and walked towards the stage stylishly gazing into Jodha's eyes lovingly.She can't believe in her eyes,ears.for a moment.Her heart beat skipped.She surprised,amazed,shocked,astonished."Mere Sachin ke asali naam Jalalludeen Mohammed Akbar hai.That means Jalal...!.Par vo kyun hamse jhut Bola.Ab mein unke baare jo Kuch suna vo sab sach hai..vo yeh ek aam insaan nahi?.Phir yeh hume kyun prem kiya. ?Ktun shaadi ki mujhse ?mujh jaise ek anaadh aam ladki ho?.Sea of questions passed through jodha's mind.Jalal understood her plight..Johnson asked to Jodha with a laugh .To yeh yeh hai tumhari Sachin.'aam' insaan.he stressed on aam insaan-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------:-----------:--------------------:::------------------------------------Jalal looked into Jodha's eyes and said."l love you Jodha,more than anything,more than me ,more than my God..I am only and only yours.Jodha,felt her heart stopped pumping because of immense joy.his words touched straightly to her heart."Mein aapko bepanaah mohabbat karthi hu Sachin...na she bites her lips.Jalal.My body ,soul,breath,existance,all yours.I will love you till eternity..I know Jodha we are already living like husband and wife and we are secretly married.but I want make it officially. so,Will you marry me Ms World Jodha Jalalludeen Mohammed ?.he asked.Jodha didn't replied. instead of that she crushed her lips with his by her entire lips snd sucked it.while she doing that Jalal lifted her up in air by holding her waist and swirled wih her around.Jodha giggled and cried with happiness...roses sprinkled all over them from various sides of big stage...All are clapped seeing this
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Jalal Sir, CEO calling you into his cabinet,Ok,I will come in few seconds.jalal smiled widely.he knew that What is the purpose behind CEO Bharmal's calling.
May I come in sir,yes come in,Bharmal replied sternly without looking jalal's face.Sir,Mein apne pass hi aaraha tha .mujhe aapse ek jaroori maelstrom par Baat Kami hai.Mujhe bhi,Bharmal looked to jalal with sad face.jalal hum Baat ko aage bandana nahi chahthe,you should resign from this company immediately,otherwise our family's reputation will be spoiled.you know very well argument between you and paridhi at marriage ceremony raised a lot of questions from our relatives' mind.hum nahi jaanthe hai hum tumhare bare me usko jaawad dena hai.so if I continue to allow in my company they will be put blame on me for all things.I already shattered,I can't bear any more taunts .so jalal...koi baat nahi hai Sir,mujhe samaj saktha hum.Actually this is the same topic I need to discuss with you.here is my resignation letter,Mein apne company mein Lautenberg jaana chahtha hum.Your Company,,!.Bharmal wondered.but you are not any companie's owner.Sir By the way you cannot throw out of My company.Your company!what are you saying Jalal.this is my company and I am owner of...
Rukjaiye Bharmal ji Jalal's interfered .his tone changed into stern voice,you sold this company to MGI 3 years before.

Bharmal shocked hearing this.how ...how did you know about this.that was a secret alliance.so you are spying at me all this time?oh no..no Bharmal Ji,you are mistaken me.Without My sign How can You complete his alliance.what you mean?Are aap check kar lijiye.Us agreement par hamara sign hoga.Bharmal confused hearing this.what is jalal saying?Is deal mein iska role kya hai,Bharmal swiftly get up from chair and take agreement files from drawers.Bharmal ji Match between My sign and CEO of MGI,Kya khayal hai aapka.Bharmal match with sign of two ,he mind became blank"what?sign is matching,To CEO of MGI group is jalal hai"Sir aap Maalik...To Abdul sir Kaun hai.Ha yen hum hi hai.Abdul hamara sabse achi dosth hai.Sir l,"Hume Kuch hi samaj nahi aatha.Heh company ke Malik hai.aap hamare Malik hai sabke Malik hai.To king of business world and glamour world aap hi hai.hum sunatha ki 19 Saal me aap apne company Abdul Sir ko soumpa aur door chala gaya,Par Sabke tarah hame laga yeh ek popularity stund hai hame laga, us tarah ke insaan koi nahi hai .no apne wish aur aaram zindagi ko chodkar ek mamuli zindagi jeena chahthe hai."Sir hamein jaanthi hai hamare beti apane ahankar mein doobkar aapko dokha diya,apamaanit kiya.vo aapke saath nainsaafi kits,apki baroze ko those,aap chahthe hai to hamari aur uski zindagi ko bahut aasani se tabah kar sakthe ho.Par aap Kuch nahi kits,Kyo Sir?Bharmal asked to jalal painfully.it is clearly seeing that he is regretting in his decision.

Apne dono prashn ke javaab hai hamare pass.hum paisley almost yeh batana chahthi hum,ki"I had never interest in money or fame,I always loved a simple life,hum ek mammooli employee ke tskaleef se ghuzarna chahthi hum .isliye hum is company mein ek employee ke Fatah Jasmine kiya.sach kaha to hum bahut Kuch seekh kiya,hum yeh 3 Saal se ek asaan aur aaraam zindagi jeena,Hume buhut Sununu Mila jab tak hum aapke beti mile to Bharmal's head down hearing this,aur has hum yeh bhi chaaha hume prem karnevali ladki sirf hamein prem karna hai has naa hi hamari rasoot se.Mujhe laga aapke beti aisi tarah hai,Par hum une galat mana von hamare ghubsoorthi ko chaha,jalal ko nahi,unhe mamooli nahi banna tha.vo uski parampara aur satus ko hamare prem ke upar jagah di,hame fekh diya
And Answer to your second question,she already get her punishment from god jis suryabhan keliye vo hame choda.vohi use dokha diya.asali shiksha usko tab milega jab vo hamare asliyat to Jaan payenge.she thinks then and realize her blunder mistake.but it doesn't change anything,I will never forgive her.but I am not angry at you,You are a good person and father,every father should have a lot of expectations about her daughter's future.it is her decision she don't need me.so don't feel your self pity

Bharmal eyes got wet,a lone tear flow from his eyes"Sir you are a great man,You are very young.but aapke soch bahut unchi hai,my daughter isn't made for you.you should get most beautiful and good girl as a wife.Sir I am saying sorry once again on the behalf of me and my family for everything,mujhe aapko pahachan nahi saka
Jalal smiled with dullness.his usual glow of smile is absent,Don't call me Sir,Call me Jalal I always respected you and I do respect even now.hope we will meet again.with this jalal walked towards the cabin.Bharmal bowed his head with shame and regret.he finally to bid farewell to his office and colleagues who are with him almost 3 years

Precap:The Braking New flash in all news channel s of TV,Jalalludeen Mohammed Akbar,The Most Sexist Man,Kinng of Businesses world returned.Yes Real CEO of MGI returned.he will take over his own position from his friend Abdul.who is currently working as a temporary CEO in the absence of Jalalludeen Mohammed

Jiji,TV Dekhiye Jalal Sir news mein ,Is mein reporter khathe hai vo MGI ke Malik Hai .Par Intne bade Amir hai to,vo kyo baapusa ke company mein kaam kiya.shivani asked to Paridhi innocently Who is setting near the window as a lifeless statue
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Jalal called Abdul immediately when he reached his house.Abdul take the phone call."What happened Jalal,Rukaiyya told me that you resigned from BGI.jalal,I could understand your condition you need to talk someone,I am your best friend and you can share with me anything,Ok Abdul,soon we meet at Taj restaurant,I took an important decisions and I need to talk you about that."Ok Jalal I will reach in time".Abdul replied happily

After 2 hours,they met at restaurant.with sittting around a round chair Abdul asked.bataiye jalal kya baat karni he tume.phone me tum kaha tum kuch important decisions liya,kya hai vo...Abdul,jalal breathed for a moment and said,Abdul I have decided return to my company as CEO and start a new fresh carrier...

As soon as this heard Abdul face light up,Are I am so happy in your decision Jalal,so king of business world returning he said proudly.vaisebhi hum thakh Gaye hai tumhare CEO chair me baitkar.Hume always tumhare peeche chalna pasand kiya hai ,aage nahi.To Kal ho tumhare CEO post humse vaapas le lijiye.Jalal smiled widely at Abdul and thought"Abdul,this is the main reason you are remains my Best Reliable friend.tum binary Kuch chahe apne dost ke dan,daulat sambhalkar hame vaapas kar dete hai,fir bhi tum aaj tak hamese kuch nahi maanga.You are my true friend,who are not interested in my money and position.you always choose our friendship over them"
Kya hua jalal,kya soch kar rahe ho,jalal's thoughts intefered by Abdul.Kuch nahi...hum jaanthe jalal tum kya soch rahe ho.paridhi ke bare.hai na.No Jalal's face tightened hearing her name.absolutely not.Abdul understood he said wrong thing.I am sorry jalal I don't mean to hurt...I know Abdul,chod de yeh baat
I am thinking about something serious.I have no interest in doing business in India.So I decided to shift my all work to Switzerland.pichale 3 saal se adkhaji bhi kayi baar Europe mein business badane ka salaah di thi.But I have no interest in that time.but this is the best time to make MGI no 1 multinational company in the world.Sure I will fullfill my father's dreams soon.Sure you will,I have full belief in your intelligence and abilities.and well said jalal,it is track changing decision.go ahead,mein tumhare peeche hai.yahan se door jaana,hi tumhare liye achaa hai tumhe us buri yaadeen se chutkara milega,by the way there are a lot of clients who are waiting forward their hands to us
Ok,Abdul call media,I have to address press meating there.and I would share my all plans and history to media at Sharp 1.00pm.ok jalal I will handle it.while walking towards car Abdul thought"Jab jalal ke asliyat ko media se pata chalega tab us Paridhi ke shiksha puri Hogi.usko ab pata chalega usne kya kya khoya hai"

within minutes media hall croweded by reporters.they have not any clue about what's the purpose behind this sudden meating by MGI owner.All are anxious about that,only one thing they know that something big going to happen.suddenly A beautiful Yellow Aston Martin comes into parking area .an extra handsome young tall man with long wavy hair which tied by hairband about 6"feet height come out of from the car.he is wearing a beautiful White business suit which is very well matched to his broad well developed muscular shoulders,sculptured broad chest,broad back and well developed pectorial muscles .because of very strong muscular body structure shirt pieces at his biceps and wings are seemed to protruded outwards.he looked with his blue eyes and smiled to reporters who are rushing for taking photos of him.female reporters can't take their eyes on him .they hadn't see a man who is so sexy and so handsome at same time his features is so overpowering who can create a desire among all girls and even in men.males reporters begin to think kya "ek purush itne sundar ho bhi saktha hai"then Abdul take him to press room calling him "Sir,this way".reporters are wondered who is this young charming Guy and Owner of MGI Abdul addressed as Sir Why?
Meeting started Sir why are you called suddenly,senior reporter stood up &asked.it's not me Sir called this meeting Abdul replied suddenly looking towards Jala.Sir who is person and why are you addressed him as Sir.bcuz he is my Boss& Hair and Owner of MGI.Son of humayayun Sir,who achieved title most sexist man and most richest teenager of the world in his age 15.,whom Bill gates called king of future business world,"Jalalludeen Mohammed Akbar"
Sir Agar yeh Real owner MGI toh aap Kaun...I am a just employee of jalal Sir,Abdul replied with smiling vexpression.But one thing we don't understand Where have you been all this time?why don't we get any clue about this .Suddenly Jalal begin to speak his commanding voice.I would clear your all doubts..Jalal explained all to the media what is the reason behind his disappearence.All reporters surprised hearing this.I have been working in BGI as marketing manager around 3,years,Sir but we have a information that CEO of BGI sold his company to you 3,years before.so you are worked in your own company as a common employee without knowing anyone.?Yes,Jalal replied proudly.Sir we will bowing in front of you for your effort and great thinking,you have great vision Sir.All are clapped hearing this
All this time female reporters are captured in his spell.one of the beautiful reporter asked "Sir are you married? ,..no I am a bachelor with age 22.but why are you asked.he looked into her eyes with sexy smirk.she blushed heavily...her cheek turned to red sir I...I Just... She searched for words.Sorry I have not intension to marry anytime soon.
face of lady reporter become sad ...oh ..I see...Sir what is your future plans.well I have decided to. concentrate my future business on Europe.mainly Switzerland.So my office in Mumbai will be shifted to switzerland anytime soon.All are surprised.So Sir you are leaving India,all are asked together.Yes.but when will you return.I haven't decided yet.I will leave tomorrow morning.jalal stood up and shake his hands to all reporters.female reporters are blushed when he touched their hands they feel an electric current passed through them.So once again I am thankful all of you who are arrived here according to my invitation jalal said in calm and composed voice.hope you got a braking News.Yes Sir All reporters are replied cheerfully.
Meantime.In Bharmal's Mansions.A beautiful lady was sitting near the window looking outward with wistful,absent expression.she feels dejected,pained, her heart totally broken when jalal said he haters her with looking straight into her eyes.she was in now in dreamy state.after that hurtful incident she detached from all family members.when they show pity on her she feels suffocating inside.it always remind her painful words to her jalal.she could bear betrayal of Surya.but can't forget her jalal.The romantic moments with him.Their first hug,first kiss his mischief,their romantic kissing and cuddling sessions,her hurtful actions ,words,his pain,his swore,his hateful gaze.her smile coveted into sobs,hiccups.she hid her head to her lap and put her hand around her legs and again begin to cry bitterly
She knows that she hurt him to the core.she shouldn't have behaved his amminjaan in that manner.she didn't know that hi ammijaan is a heart patient.she totally understand because of her disrespectful words leads to his ammijaan's 3rd heart attack.because of her he lost his lovable ammijaan.she knew that how much he loved his ammijaan.while remembering his swear a current of fear pass through her entire body.she knew him more than anyone. he is the man of words.when she complained he can't touch her sexually without marriage.he give her promise.and he never brake his promise.At party night when she lost all her control he reminded her of his word.he didn't allow her lead to furthermore.she whispered with hiccups"voh hame. kabhi bhi shaadi nahi karenge.par hum kya karenge.Hume aabhaas hogaya hai.I love him most ,I can't live without him.can she meet him.can she manifold him?a chain of questions raised from her mind.her thoughts suddenly broken by shivani's voice"The Braking New flash in all news channel s of TV,Jalalludeen Mohammed Akbar,The Most Sexist Man,Kinng of Businesses world returned.Yes Real CEO of MGI returned.he will take over his own position from his friend Abdul.who is currently working as a temporary CEO in the absence of Jalalludeen Mohammed. Jiji,TV Dekhiye Jalal Sir news mein ,Is mein reporter khathe hai vo MGI ke Malik Hai .Par Intne bade Amir hai to,vo kyo baapusa ke company mein kaam kiya.shivani asked to Paridhi innocently Who is setting near the window as a lifeless statue.Mainavathi who is working in the kitchen also thinking about her daughter's life,what would be her future.she never expected things go to this level.they lost their dignity,especially her daughter's.Mainavathi angered thinking about Jalal slapping jodha,how dare he,ek mammoli mugal ne ek Rajput royal ladki ko thappad mara.kisine usko kyon nahi roka...suddenly she heard shivani's saying.Mainavathi confused and shouted. kya bhakvas karthe ho shivani.us jalal hamari company ke ek mamooli employee hai.

Nahi Maasa,Aap news dekhiye.she raised TV volume.as Soon as hearing Jalal's name Paridhi felt happy she runs towards TV room and saw news.Shivani said Maasa,hamari company Baapusa ke nahin,Jalal Sir ka hai.Usko amreeron ko jaise jeena pasand nahi tha .Isliye woh ek mamooli aadmike vesh mein apni company mein work kiya.dekhiye asali vesh mein vo kitna handsome hai.bilkul Kahna jaisa.Sab female reporters usko ghoor-ghoorkar dekh rahe the. after seeing all conference,Mainavathi feel she did the most blunder thing in her entire life.Jisko vo mamooli kaha voh Sabse Bahut Amir hai.aur jis pati ko Amir samaja unke ek employee hai CEO pad sirf naam pe..Paridhi blushed hearing shivani's first comment and feel jealous hearing second comment.but her smile vanished away in second ,he understood her plight and fall to the ground and begin cry ferociously.she totally understood his pain in eyes.when she say she is not love him just attracted towards him she called him bitch,begger,womenizer.he wanted to be loved by someone who love him as a person.this is why he never revealed his identity.how can he forgive me?I can't change past can't take my words.she feel another sting to her heart when remembed he is leaving India forever,he don't want to see my face anymore.No I wouldn't allow him to leave me alone.I will fall on his feet and plead to him to forgive me and make me his.If he didn't budge.I will kill myself in front him and prove my love.
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hey congratulations🥳thanks for the pm😊
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Awesome story yrr loved it too the core
Just fabulous
Please pm me dear plz
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Congratulations for your first story🥳
Wowww..its amazing !!
Continue soon .
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Originally posted by: _akdha.forever_

Congratulations for your first story🥳
Wowww..its amazing !!
Continue soon .
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Awesome Start👏👏👏... Loved this concept... Do pm me..😃 Congratulation on this outstanding start...😛

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Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter) Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter)

Chapter : Melodious Encounter https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/52348

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Posted by: desidillse

11 months ago

RiKara SS : Safed (chapter 7 updated)

[NOCOPY] Hello readers! I am Aditi, I have been writing stories here but this is my first short story on RiKara. Alike, you all have been...

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Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

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Posted by: Aleyamma47

1 years ago

Tu Meri Pehalwan ~ A VeeRat Tale - Chapter 15 on pg 7 Tu Meri Pehalwan ~ A VeeRat Tale - Chapter 15 on pg 7

Introduction Although the family background of this fiction is the same as of the original series, there are slight changes in the plotline....

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