#2 - AsYa/KaBhi : A Hidden Love... CHAP.10-P.128 ! COMPLETED ! (24/12) - Page 97

very beautiful happy ending...

love it...

love bring them together...

show them new life...

Good luck to your...and take care

sad that u r going to stop writing...
i really loved reading all ur stories...

beautiful story this was!!
asya finally confessed and got together...

cute ending

wish u all the best for ur future

Chapter 6:

Omg! I am here again after so long!!!

I was waiting so much to know what happened next in this story but I never took time to read it!

Well anyway better late than never right?!

This was such a looong chapter! And now that I'm catching up again with this story again, I have to re-read it again as I have forgotten bits of it!!😆

I was so right to say in my previous comment that the dude is in big trouble! Lol🤣

But well thank god Zoya came up with this brilliant idea!

It was so cute to have AAK so confused at the beginning!😕😆

Uhh Ashu?! Really?!

It is always a bliss to know speaking a differently language isn't it ?!😉

So we can talk about the people in front of them without them understanding!😈

Love the way Asad is concerned about her but she doesn't want to hear anything about him leaving though!

And I want to say poor sink! Lol!

Zoya shouting him cause he can't repair a sink ?! 😕😆

Even the officer and policemen are exasperated of her!

And finally someone has the courage to stop her in her monologue!

Zoya is just BRILLANT!

She came up with this idea and thought of every little detail! Like the ring! I knew it would be useful!😳

And count on Asad to be angry and on Zoya to be indifferent to his anger and to try turn this in a funny thing!😆

I always loved how Zoya has a practical thinking!👏

Ok I'm missing her now!😭

Omg Omg Omg! The officers think they kissed!?☺️

Oh well ...

The question session was so cute!

It reminded me of Mr Bhatav.. Bhatav...Whatever's scenes!🤣

Its been 2-3 days only and they know so much about it other!😳

They both have fallen in love with each other but neither would tell it! So typical!🥱

But glad to see that Asad isn't going to give up on her and will do everything right to keep her!

And Zoya too doesn't want him to go!

I will never understand why you call all your writings lame or boring!?

It was an awesome part ! 👏

Like always!

Beautifully written !

Love and hugs ❤️🤗

And sorry for late and lame commenting 😔

Chapter 7:

Omg! This beginning got me so laughing! 😆

Asad and his Psycho!

Humeira too is shocked to see him here! Well who wouldn't though! 😛

But wait among all this we get Asya's hug right?!😉

Omg omg omg! How could I forget HWSC?!!?!

Humi was totally fangirling here!

And then realized Asad called her Psycho!

Love how the 2 started bickering and Zoya had to interfere!

That's so weird as it's the other way around normally!😕😆

And then the truce!

But the Psycho is intelligent!

What the! Asad know lying too!?

Aaaw! Can he be cuter than that?!

Already knowing the feelings of Zoya! And his words! *sigh*

Well hell yes he can get cuter than that!

What a cutie pie he is!

Try to get his papers in order Zoya doesn't think he is in a way using her and doubt his love for her!

Omg! HWSC is sooo sweet!

How I wish we had such comprehensive visa officers here!

All are jerks here!😡

Anyway...

Finally things are getting better for Asad!👍🏼

And we get a mitwa moment! Aaaw! And that too at the right time !☺️

"Zoya cursed inwardly, thinking that they always landed up in embarassing situations by the immigration officers" Errr ya think!?😆😆

Omg! He really called the hospital and lied?!😲

Aaaw! He so wanted her to relax and sleep! Rubbish! He wanted to have her with him!☺️

And he bets he can make her sleep!? Aaaw!

Ok so now I need a HWSC too! You know I'm insomniac too right?!😉😆

Asad indeed is a gem!

Knowing how she would feel if she woke up with him in the same bed!😳

*sigh*

You know what?!

Now I'm not at sad I am reading this now only,😆

Pissed yes🤢 but now when we all miss Asya badly😭 it feels great to read awesome stories on them!⭐️👏

Do I have to say again this was an amazing one?!

It was perfect!👏

Love it !

Love always ❤️

Your Shona! 🤗😃